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SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
03-28-2009, 09:59 PM
Its rouge hamstring probe dome off the unleaded fuel I hold
Dead head microphone jacking breed ripping emcees apart/
The following Jones get blown off the earth my birth was a crazy turf
Girth was fisted double up the vagina waxing the scene/
Totally cool vicious sick wit it grammar got more arms than hammers
You trying my patience thinking Iím Niles from Frasier /
I got them kicks kung fu grips sideline trips be blips on my radar
Get off the see-saw I reek harder than any toxicity spit out any equity/
Iím a wrote down jotted idea smeared all over your rear view
Wit blood mixed wit oxy cotton blocking seeds by nose bleeds/
Feed cha team the muscles I relax during any tussle
Where itís mind over matter, or shall I say mind over processor/
I am a transformer transporting any Randall EL where the jokers dwell
Excel showing me the potential like the Jokai crest
Deadly beheaded melody getís played anytime Iím on deck/
Check the ref tamper pamper you dapper thinking you got Dan
I am the man multi-tasking for Fisk, Trask, and all of Marvelís Villains/
Sipping a brew by the shade masked villainess aide driven a gauge
Cum on top the chicks face like a porno-star, didnít read jar head/
Meet the beef I collaborate with when Iím getting the game fluffed out
Duffed out when Iím muffled by the time its getís shuttled and mottled/

Tripped out hop
My spits always rock
Out my dome sober
Always drunk off the hinny
Didnít get my memo penny
This is tripped out hop
Intelligently moving gracefully
This is tripped out hop
Intelligently moving gracefully

Buzzer beater rap weeder digests Iím might suggest a full court press
Testing my ways addressing them rappers when rippers come in they all get evicted/
Sick wicked lick a shot pick apart cha like auto-tuning robots
You Go-Bots are Fem-Bots when I direct them shots/
Hem you mocks docks flock timely caught when dimes get bought
They hook up the vixen sickly launch the dynamite kid off the lid/
Masked basking and robins check my heart Iím aching when Jason Todd died
Found a fly new replacement tasted off the hook laced when the case goes cold/
In motion I got my MPC rocking off the twitter when you were tweeting
I was stone cold beating up the pussy where you werenít ready/
I was heavy heady Wednesdayís end of days claim flame check the pain
Address the main of the lion now Iím roaring wit four more behind me/
Board walk times are talks blinds are faults you baulk like you couldnít start
Now your hitters got three bases stolen wit wives up they colon wit a bruised ego Nolan/


Tripped out hop
My spits always rock
Out my dome sober
Always drunk off the hinny
Didnít get my memo penny
This is tripped out hop
Intelligently moving gracefully
This is tripped out hop
Intelligently moving gracefully

adedwutang
04-01-2009, 05:09 PM
i thought the second verse was ill the only problem i got is that sometimes it sounds like you settin up for a sick bar and a rhyme scheme and u follow it until the very last word and u change it up too quick, i think it would sound better if you just kept rhymin wit the same scheme atleast for a couple bars cuz u bring the aniticipation real hard right before it, but then it just feels dissapointing cuz im expectin you to throw in a different word or somethin, i dk if that makes sense but thats how i feel
peace-

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
04-02-2009, 12:18 AM
Thanks 4 the feedback man