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SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-12-2005, 10:36 AM
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=270802 (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=270802)

I GOT SERVERAL NEW TRACKS:

NIGHTS LEAN PRODUCED BY TECHWON(NEW TRACK)
RAVEN SIGHT PRODUCED BY TECHWON(FULL VERISON)
UNDER ONE...FREESTYLE

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-12-2005, 04:05 PM
uppin

Khristo
09-13-2005, 07:18 AM
to be honist i dont like your voiuce one little bit, i know your stlyle is diffrent but its fucking annoying to listen to, what ever you do to your voiuce to make it sound gay dont do it.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-13-2005, 03:06 PM
dude get off my nuts this is my really voice yeah the only thing i did was add in a echo if you don't like my voice keep ya opinions 2 ya delf duke ya so fake its unbelievable

Heke
09-13-2005, 03:32 PM
few advices.
dont hold the mic so near to your mouth.
try to raise you voice.
sounds like you are whispering the mic is in your mouth.

another advice you are so offbeat. try to listen the beat when you rap.

I'm not trying to be insulting. peace

Khristo
09-13-2005, 04:54 PM
yo put the beats on the site to be reveiwed mann, i speak only the truth to what im thinking. Now i cant be that fake can i ? no..

Khristo
09-13-2005, 04:54 PM
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SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-13-2005, 05:45 PM
yo put the beats on the site to be reveiwed mann, i speak only the truth to what im thinking. Now i cant be that fake can i ? no..
No but if some ask u what u think and u tell me u didn't like my voice after the fact u shoulda said so before i laced the track for u and after the bs i'm just saying be real man thats it end of discussion
peace

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 06:11 PM
Your voice was bad on that beat, and your flow was off, just honest pointers. Just go back and switch your shit up na mean. Flip it to a Positive, they call the criticism constructive for a reason so you can build off it.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-13-2005, 07:47 PM
Your voice was bad on that beat, and your flow was off, just honest pointers. Just go back and switch your shit up na mean. Flip it to a Positive, they call the criticism constructive for a reason so you can build off it.
good look appriciate man just gotta keep buildin'

GuardianOne
09-14-2005, 05:33 AM
ya delf duke ya
What does that mean?

Anyway true you vocal outputs where blared, try to balance you microphone levels, or might have been the equipment you used. Cause your voice didn't come through clear on the mic.

The beat was that you who made it or that was the one with Masta Killa. Try to use you own beats, or equest someone to make one for you (especially some from your area- so you can get the proper tempo for you style on the tracks) And your flow on the mic should be how you breathe (heard it from someone-don't know what it means personally).

Peace
PS: Keep working on the tracks

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-14-2005, 07:09 AM
What does that mean?

Anyway true you vocal outputs where blared, try to balance you microphone levels, or might have been the equipment you used. Cause your voice didn't come through clear on the mic.

The beat was that you who made it or that was the one with Masta Killa. Try to use you own beats, or equest someone to make one for you (especially some from your area- so you can get the proper tempo for you style on the tracks) And your flow on the mic should be how you breathe (heard it from someone-don't know what it means personally).

Peace
PS: Keep working on the tracks
thanks son i'll take that knowledge good look

TeknicelStylez
09-14-2005, 02:52 PM
And your flow on the mic should be how you breathe (heard it from someone-don't know what it means personally).
You need to take quick breaths before you start your next line, its called breath control. You cant spit 100 words without breathing you don't got the breath for it na mean, and you cant spit alot than stop and take deep breaths, so you take little breaths between your lines.

Khristo
09-14-2005, 04:56 PM
i also think you should think about rhyming lines instead of paragraphs if you no what im sayin, it ends up sounding a bit messy, try get the rhyme or the switch on the snare as much as you can.

TeknicelStylez
09-14-2005, 06:30 PM
Lol straight emcee coachin cats on wu corps

GuardianOne
09-15-2005, 01:44 AM
Lol straight emcee coachin cats on wu corps
You know how it goes. We all have to perfect our beats and rhymes,not for ourselves but for the website, and for the industry. Sorry that sounds like politics. But when you refer someone to check wutangcorp, they can get some quality beats and verses to hear or read.

Just a thought (its not what iam thinking)

Peace
PS:Don't give the chance for others to wait for your next word whilst busting on the mic (keep the flow or tempo with the beat)

TeknicelStylez
09-15-2005, 05:33 AM
You know how it goes. We all have to perfect our beats and rhymes,not for ourselves but for the website, and for the industry. Sorry that sounds like politics. But when you refer someone to check wutangcorp, they can get some quality beats and verses to hear or read.

Just a thought (its not what iam thinking)

Peace
PS:Don't give the chance for others to wait for your next word whilst busting on the mic (keep the flow or tempo with the beat)Na most important is for yourself always mang.

And you need to have pauses once in a while it makes the flow dramatic, and it just good with breaks. You can catch your breath and you need to pause in between them long ass killer multi lines, other wise it gets monotonous na mean?

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-16-2005, 05:52 PM
You know how it goes. We all have to perfect our beats and rhymes,not for ourselves but for the website, and for the industry. Sorry that sounds like politics. But when you refer someone to check wutangcorp, they can get some quality beats and verses to hear or read.

Just a thought (its not what iam thinking)

Peace
PS:Don't give the chance for others to wait for your next word whilst busting on the mic (keep the flow or tempo with the beat)
TRUST MAN I'M CONTINUE TO DO ME REGARDLESS MAN SO GOOD LOOK 4 DA FEEDBACK

GuardianOne
09-17-2005, 01:18 AM
TRUST MAN I'M CONTINUE TO DO ME REGARDLESS MAN SO GOOD LOOK 4 DA FEEDBACK
You have a nice style, keep up the good work. (and lyrics)