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Visionz
09-12-2005, 05:07 PM
I got your post this mornin before I had to head off to work but had no time to post.
Let's go 2 rounds and 5 votes. I'll get back w/ you later tnght cuz I'm about to head off to school. I look forward to the challenge, you pretty fuckin tight with a pen. peace

TeknicelStylez
09-12-2005, 05:52 PM
lol iight lemme get you later, I wanted to get you last night cuz I was blasted but we'll get it in today its all good.

Visionz
09-12-2005, 10:41 PM
alright I'm bout to go get lifted right now hit you later, peace.

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 02:50 AM
Really not in the mood today you mind posting first mang? I'll respond?

Visionz
09-13-2005, 03:24 AM
Yo, teknically, what you do isn't rappin
In some corners they call it openin your mouth and crappin'
I'm looking at my kid, like sorry son' but 'shit happens'
I think its time you get flushed down the commode
When I 'Bust a Rhyme" I tend to 'Flip Mode's
And your names included in all of those 'I got in check'
Take you at any level, whether it be simple or complex
Verbal battle left you shook let a vietnam vet
Heavyly medicated just to help you forget
How I picked up the mic and smashed you
Whippin ur little ass ' like you came in after curfew
These votes ur losing are never coming back
Kind of like Bush's situation, after invading Iraq
And to top it off you both talk like a couple of retards
I'm thinking its to myself it a miracle you've made this far
So please wipe your spittle off the screen
That's not a bus window, goddamn man, ur fuckin nineteen
I'm even gonna be nice this time and allow you to grow up
That's right, no murder, just punches in the gut till you throw-up
Leave your face lying in chunks of crusted puke,
Let you off with a warings of Unseen's rebuke.

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 04:44 AM
My mans coming at me hard lol... iight bet

If this was a test for english, you'd be outta context/
I Cover the guests in gas, and ignite the whole contest/
You spit your best raps, and still couldn't light a cigarette/
High stakes, can't handle a splinter let alone a bigger bet/
Like vampires wearing crosses shot with silver in daylight/
Can't inspire to fairing losses so all you ever do is playfight/
26 you can figure this, as an emcee your pass the age limit/
Style is diminished, searching for your peak? well its finished/
Skinny as Olive Oil, battle me? You need to eat your spinach/
To you I'm royal, I command you to handle all my buisness/
Start by eliminating yourself, you didn't meet the status qou/
I'm not discriminating, 2 to 1 odds you had the saddest flow/
Sorry you had to go, I promise to make it up to you though/
I'll strap you to explosives so you'll have your chance to blow/
My kindness shows, for a weakness its not to be mistaken/
Your Forsaken, step on stage both your legs I'm breaking/
Lying on the floor shaking, I'm like "CMON YO HE'S FAKING"/
Trying to get your pity taken, just stand up and walk it off/
I wanna fight with you, you put your hands up and talk it off/
Giving off pussy smells worse than a chinese fish market/
Spitting soft so well, a curse makes you look weak hearted/
Dearly Departed, and I just got started your alrdy martyred/
Getting gassed up like I just farted face it your just retarded/
The match is handicapped get this fucking dandy slapped/
Luring in little kids in a van with that same old candy trap/
Fuckin child molestor, couldn't spit if your name was sylvester/
Just a tweety bird, I teach these nerds call me the professor/

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 04:46 AM
Good luck, lets get some votes up.

b.a.R.n.
09-13-2005, 05:00 AM
yeah you guys thats some dope shit

" I'm even gonna be nice this time and allow you to grow up
That's right, no murder, just punches in the gut till you throw-up"

and

"Style is diminished, searching for your peak? well its finished/
Skinny as Olive Oil, battle me? You need to eat your spinach"

and

"Fuckin child molestor, couldn't spit if your name was sylvester/
Just a tweety bird, I teach these nerds call me the professor"

my vote goes to TeknicelStylez

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:03 AM
Thanks for the vote B. Soon as someone drops a verse in your thread I'll vote.

Visionz
09-13-2005, 05:05 AM
hey yo wait up, thought this was gonna be a 2 round bout?

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:07 AM
Damn you wanna go 2 rounds, you crazy mang I just spit like 30 bars lol....

I mean I didn't ride your verse at all....

If you wanna spit another verse go ahead, I definately aint putting in anything else today, and I aint gon wake up till like 9 p.m tommorow lol.... its up to you man.

I think this is already a legendary battle, we both got really sick verses up.

Visionz
09-13-2005, 05:17 AM
aw fuck it dawg, you right that you didn't ride the verse(except for the age jab) but I ain't sweatin it. looks like I might have to take my first defeat on this one...that was a hot ass verse. Like the Styles is diminished bar. Your shit had me laughin...What'd you think of the spittle on the screen line? That's probably my personal fav in that one. peace

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:30 AM
You had some shit in there that had me dying to hold on lemme take a look and i'll show you my favorites.

my bad for riding that part, just i had to get you back for shittin on my age lol.

I HATE DISSING OLDER EMCEES FOR BEING OLDER TOO cuz I really love you guys, lol but you had to aim at me man... LOL

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:36 AM
Yo, teknically, what you do isn't rappin
In some corners they call it openin your mouth and crappin'this shit had me laffin the first line lol

I'm looking at my kid, like sorry son' but 'shit happens'
I think its time you get flushed down the commode
When I 'Bust a Rhyme" I tend to 'Flip Mode'shot word play here man

And your names included in all of those 'I got in check'
Take you at any level, whether it be simple or complex
Verbal battle left you shook let a vietnam vet
Heavyly medicated just to help you forgetLol the casualty after war and shit... traumatizing

How I picked up the mic and smashed you
Whippin ur little ass ' like you came in after curfewThis line was demeaning lol

These votes ur losing are never coming back
Kind of like Bush's situation, after invading Iraqbush will always come back dammit! (hate that fucker

And to top it off you both talk like a couple of retards
I'm thinking its to myself it a miracle you've made this far
So please wipe your spittle off the screenThis shit made me shoot milk out my nose lol

That's not a bus window, goddamn man, ur fuckin nineteenThis is where I had to retaliate lol

I'm even gonna be nice this time and allow you to grow up
That's right, no murder, just punches in the gut till you throw-upLOL i can picture this shit had me dying too

Leave your face lying in chunks of crusted puke,
Let you off with a warings of Unseen's rebuke.Some graphic ass ending dawg....

YO you can take it, all and all I had the flow and the punchlines, you had better wordplay and humor.

If I didn't respect your verse as much as I did, I wouldn't take the time to fully analyze something that insulted me :'( lol
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Visionz
09-13-2005, 05:56 AM
I got mad respect for you myself dawg.....here I'll show your verse the same respect althou can't break it all down cuz you had too many hot lines there

If this was a test for english, you'd be outta context/
I Cover the guests in gas, and ignite the whole contest/

(that's a hard-ass line from the get-go, way to come out swingin)

26 you can figure this, as an emcee your pass the age limit/
Style is diminished, searching for your peak? well its finished/
Skinny as Olive Oil, battle me? You need to eat your spinach/
To you I'm royal, I command you to handle all my buisness/


(that had me dying and the lines are very-well connected, =(MC secret: staying connected thru a verse will make u better than %99 of the mc's on here, maybe anywhere)

Sorry you had to go, I promise to make it up to you though/
I'll strap you to explosives so you'll have your chance to blow/

(that's on some suicide-bomber shit there, nice imagery)

My kindness shows, for a weakness its not to be mistaken/
Your Forsaken, step on stage both your legs I'm breaking/
Lying on the floor shaking, I'm like "CMON YO HE'S FAKING"/

(these are nicely connected as well)

Fuckin child molestor, couldn't spit if your name was sylvester/
Just a tweety bird, I teach these nerds call me the professor/

(strong finish-way to put the last nail in the coffin) peace homie

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 10:14 AM
I always try to put an emphasis on flow, I think alot of emcees under rate that. Alot of emcees be throwin out these bars that your just like WTF how does that connect, it makes me wonder if they're even reading their verses out loud.

lets just declare both ourselves winners *D

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:26 PM
For real for real though can i get some mofuckin votes.

Ballad Ballistik
09-13-2005, 05:47 PM
Both Had Great Punchlines....but I Go With Unseen On This...he Pulled His Lines Off Easlier.....but Tech Had Some Great Punches...just A Little To Forced To Get Them To Flow....no Offense.... Both Have Great Game...1 Unseen...

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:49 PM
WOW son thats like the second time niggaz remarked bout my flow, you really need to get your shit straight, I'm not big headed, I lack in alot of areas but hands down I got one of the best flows on this whole sight so.... Yall need to relax with the uneducated netcee comments.

I've been out on the street in cyphers spitting acapella, beat boxes, drummin with hands, instrumentals out boom boxes for 6 years, If theres anything I got ITS FLOW.

W/E peace good looks for voting.

Grim Reapa
09-13-2005, 05:49 PM
i vote Tek he destroyed it

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:55 PM
Peace gawd thanks for the vote, some examples would help though na mean.

Ballad Ballistik
09-13-2005, 05:58 PM
Masta Genius Were You @ ..tek ...me And Genius Got Alittle Something Started In
Calling Out Genius..thread....i Dropped Can You Tell Me What You Think....I THOUGHT ALOT OF YOUR LINES WERE GOOD...RELAX

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 06:18 PM
I'm not saying you don't, I just feel like after reading your verses you aint in a position to comment on flow, you ever recorded something ON beat before?

Sicka than aidZ
09-13-2005, 06:41 PM
i vote Tek he destroyed it
co sign......good job man, both u an idiom underestimate me. spit a hot one like the one here if we battle again(not today or right away). sicka vs tek's a waste of rhymes. u coulda done way better. peace

the luv is cool in this thread, im the only one complaining. good job u two

tek got it vote=tek........unseen said it himself, good enuf explanation for me.

peace

Sicka than aidZ
09-13-2005, 06:42 PM
Peace gawd thanks for the vote, some examples would help though na mean.
it was dope from a to z....fya!!

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 07:33 PM
Yea like I said gawd I really was not in the mood at all when I battled you.

Visionz
09-13-2005, 10:59 PM
1 to 3, this one's going to 5 votes, Somebody put'em up.peace

TeknicelStylez
09-14-2005, 01:24 PM
bumpin for votes

TeknicelStylez
09-14-2005, 06:17 PM
yo someone vote

Visionz
09-15-2005, 12:55 AM
vote.peace!!

TeknicelStylez
09-15-2005, 05:22 AM
Bump to da BUMP to da BUMP BUMP TO DA na mean...

hollywoodrealty
09-15-2005, 06:46 AM
eric u are my boy, but i gotta vote with tek on this one, but what sucks is if u thought this was gonna bea 2 verse battle, so thats not fair to u, but i cant judge based on that, i gotta vote tek on this one, but if i was u eric, id get a rematch and come with some stronger shit, ok so vote goes to tek, peace

TeknicelStylez
09-15-2005, 06:49 AM
eric u are my boy, but i gotta vote with tek on this one, but what sucks is if u thought this was gonna bea 2 verse battle, so thats not fair to u, but i cant judge based on that, i gotta vote tek on this one, but if i was u eric, id get a rematch and come with some stronger shit, ok so vote goes to tek, peaceWell it wasn't orignally agreed upon, and both emcees came hard its not like he posted some off the wall weak shit, not usual shit, and got beat.

But rematches are likely to occur in the future, its good to battle against skilled opponents.

Visionz
09-15-2005, 09:29 AM
1-4, Tek I'm gonna go head and give you the 5th. You definetly got me on this one.peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-27-2005, 05:20 PM
That a TKO by Tek since Eric conceeded defeat

Tek WINS