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Sicka than aidZ
09-12-2005, 05:46 PM
yo, it's 2-2........first to 5


masta, idiom, dont make this thread your homepage, just vote

Sicka than aidZ
09-12-2005, 05:47 PM
i guess tek's torn up cuz i wasnt feelin some shit he typed a few days back.../
u must always feel like shit cuz everything you've ever submitted's been wack
enter my realm an ill add u too the stack.../
of cats who tried to step to Aidz an dun got their dumb asses clapped.../
peep the forecast,..best evacuate fast.../
dont be stupid like those new orleans victims cuz u wont last a second once u in my grasp../
your lyrics aint shit while mine be more viscious than hurricane kat's aftermath.../
there aint enuf bodybags on this planet to haul out every wannabe rapper i've trashed.../
ive already sonned ya,.. stretched u out like a giraffe.../
im already done,..drenched you with ether an i've barely begun the second half.../
time to annihalate you punk, your like old news left in the past../
you see a girl pass but your 2 inch killa prolly cant even get up to half mast.../
haha,...thats cuz you luv dicks in your ass.../
viagra wont help ya cuz it's not designed to help pussys like that.../
yep,..you dickless bitch,..face the fuckin facts.../
steppin to Sicka's like throwin yourself in front of the subway cuz i leave all competition dead on the tracks...

TeknicelStylez
09-12-2005, 05:51 PM
Flow beckons your accused of correctin
No seconds for confused rhyme detectin
Observed my verse with one eye inspectin
Submerged you lacked depth perception
I lack patience for your massed education
My facts acient far surpassed regulation
Backed up like a bad case of constipation
Sick's flowlessness consists of slow shit
His broken fists persist with no hits
I equip punchlines enduring crunch time
I Eat sick dumb blind men during lunch time
Thats with the clock off Raps kick socks off
Whack kids who drop soft bootleg knock offs
Sicka spit hot that Day ... NOT *coughs*
Sicker than Aidz that sounds contageous
Figure hes gay thats how some aids hits

Read it out loud so you hear the multis!

If you don't understand something don't dismiss it, ask about it.

TeknicelStylez
09-12-2005, 05:51 PM
we 2-2, going to five votes, please explain votes.

Robert
09-12-2005, 11:41 PM
Sicka got this. While Tek had the better flow, Sicka hit him with better punches.
ive already sonned ya,.. stretched u out like a giraffe.../
im already done,..drenched you with ether an i've barely begun the second half.../
time to annihalate you punk, your like old news left in the past../
you see a girl pass but your 2 inch killa prolly cant even get up to half mast.../
classic Sicka
Vote=Sicka
peace to both

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 02:47 AM
3-2 thanx for voting.

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 10:19 AM
bumpin for votes

Idiom
09-13-2005, 05:00 PM
i'm going to say sicka as weLL
it was hard but he has me crackin up
i like the facts that he stretched his bars
yours were to compact
his were a little bit harder
but not much so nice battle

vote = aidz than sicka

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 05:24 PM
Ummm stretched bars aren't a good thing.... (netcees) w/e though

4-2

whatradio
09-13-2005, 08:49 PM
good battle. both came pretty hard imo.
Sicka had better punches, but Tek's multis were
killer. I liked the compact verse... no rambling, straight
to the point. stretched bars when used properly can
be crucial, but Sickas was too wordy. you could have
compressed a lot of those bars and relayed the same
message. only b/c of that...
my vote is for Tek

Sicka than aidZ
09-14-2005, 08:41 PM
bizump^^^^thanks for helpin out fellaz, props!

Ballad Ballistik
09-14-2005, 08:55 PM
dont be stupid like those new orleans victims cuz u wont last a second once u in my grasp../
BAD CHOICE OF WORDS THEY WERE UNFORTUNATE....NOT STUPID.....
you see a girl pass but your 2 inch killa prolly cant even get up to half mast.../
CORNY....TALKING ABOUT OTHERS DICK....
BUT OVERall FUNNY....AS HELL....
I lack patience for your massed education
My facts acient far surpassed regulation
Backed up like a bad case of constipation....
Nice lines....It came down to two styles...
But i go with Sicka....just had more flair to this v.s.

Sicka than aidZ
09-14-2005, 08:57 PM
5-2, not bad. yo, thanks for voting everyone, u too ballad. peace

arcane
09-15-2005, 09:00 AM
Whaaaaaat????!!

Teknicel won this by a mile, no offence to Sicka. Sicka didn't have one punch that made me chuckle... actually, there weren't even many punchlines. A lot of it was just filler, ie. body bags, add you to the stack, evacuate fast, etc. None of these things were said in punchlines. And the "two inch dick" and "viagra" shit - tired, exhausted, cliched, weak, obvious, unfunny, lame, juvenile, and, um, a few other things. Just my opinion.

Tek came with some pretty crazy shit considering the format - short, packed with multis and pretty slick punches:

Observed my verse with one eye inspectin/
Submerged you lacked depth perception

That's ill.

Sick's flowlessness consists of slow shit/
His broken fists persist with no hits

That's a good punch.

Ummm stretched bars aren't a good thing....And this couldn't be more true. Rambling lines show an inability to condense your words - content ends up mad diluted. Plus remember this is text... it's not to a beat so the only way to convey a sense of flow is to keep lines short, rhythmic. I couldn't believe my eyes when the dude said a stretched bar was a good thing. But don't take it from me:

"Make it brief son, half short and twice strong." - GZA

Anyway, no disrespect to Sicka intended but I don't really think it was even a contest. Peace.

TeknicelStylez
09-15-2005, 10:52 AM
Whaaaaaat????!!

Teknicel won this by a mile, no offence to Sicka. Sicka didn't have one punch that made me chuckle... actually, there weren't even many punchlines. A lot of it was just filler, ie. body bags, add you to the stack, evacuate fast, etc. None of these things were said in punchlines. And the "two inch dick" and "viagra" shit - tired, exhausted, cliched, weak, obvious, unfunny, lame, juvenile, and, um, a few other things. Just my opinion.

Tek came with some pretty crazy shit considering the format - short, packed with multis and pretty slick punches:

Observed my verse with one eye inspectin/
Submerged you lacked depth perception

That's ill.

Sick's flowlessness consists of slow shit/
His broken fists persist with no hits

That's a good punch.

And this couldn't be more true. Rambling lines show an inability to condense your words - content ends up mad diluted. Plus remember this is text... it's not to a beat so the only way to convey a sense of flow is to keep lines short, rhythmic. I couldn't believe my eyes when the dude said a stretched bar was a good thing. But don't take it from me:

"Make it brief son, half short and twice strong." - GZA

Anyway, no disrespect to Sicka intended but I don't really think it was even a contest. Peace.Thank you, someone who understands verse formatting.