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White_Mouse
05-10-2009, 01:53 PM
For anyone that knows the tape "The Writer meets The Director" here is the short follow up, only 4 cuts deep (3 songs one intro), and so far without cover art here is

"Monologues and Scripts"
http://www.sendspace.com/file/bi217n
1. Elementary
2. Construction (intr0)
3. Under Constructions
4. Venus Nights

all Beats produced by The Prime Sithesizah

Just take this as a little sampler, and be on the lookout for "The Placement Test" mixtape hosted by Ghost, and The Premier

Boss_Digger
05-10-2009, 03:23 PM
downloading now fam...........I will be back!!

12weLvE
05-10-2009, 09:59 PM
Downloading.

SKAMPOE
05-10-2009, 10:47 PM
Me3

White_Mouse
05-11-2009, 03:04 PM
With regards to Still Standing, that track has since been removed as I've been told that its use is exclusive to another project, I apologize to anyone that might have been concerned over this, my version was not mean to cause any trouble and I apologize over any hard feelings this may have caused

12weLvE
05-11-2009, 03:46 PM
Its all good. KEep doing your thing fam.

PEace

The Prime Sithesizah
05-11-2009, 08:27 PM
Uppin the project.. Props Mouse for making this possible.. The Premier in progress.. PiDeaCe..

White_Mouse
05-12-2009, 07:55 PM
WORD
bump

The Prime Sithesizah
05-15-2009, 02:25 PM
Over 130 views and no thoughts on the tape? lol BUMP BuMP BUMP..

White_Mouse
05-16-2009, 05:58 PM
I'll get links to indv tracks, feel free to review what you hear, I know the situation the removed track might have been kind of a letdown for a lot of you, but I encourage u to review the other tracks and be on the lookout for new tracks as well,
piece...

White_Mouse
05-16-2009, 07:59 PM
ELEMENTARY the single
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6011621269e3201f/

Professor Poopsnagle
05-16-2009, 08:02 PM
Not feeling it

Boss_Digger
05-17-2009, 02:53 PM
elementary: to be honest the intro sounds a bit cluttered it doesnt ease me in like i would like, once the verse section kicks in it seems to ease it self out, the twist at the end of the beat is nuts tho!!! To me that should of been the main beat as its much more hype feeling and easier on the ear. Mouse did his thing as always, in fact you seem a bit more confident on the mic and have a bigger presence on this track, you got some nice rhymes going on expresing your thoughts, and ya flow is dope

Construction (intro):erm not really sure what to make of this! Its a little bit too much for 4 track ep, its gonna get skipped and that leaves 3 tracks left, I would rather just have another proper track myself or at least a proper beat with some vocal samps going on over the top!!

Under Construction: Nice beat but............ after a while it gets a bit loopy!!! I would like to see a bit more........ well construction in it, even if it was a bit off a change up for the hook! Mouse, dope job again the hook is really nice, nice versus and the flow is there!! Again im noticing more presence on the track so props for the elevation!!!

Venus Nights: I liked the verse spots on this beat but not so much the hook if im honest, I felt the hook spot just didnt really fit "Hip Hop" as such and it just didnt work even with a good hook over the top buts thats my opinion others may vary as Im sure they will! but over all I liked the beat and who knows maybe it will grow more as time goes by! Mouse you did your thing again but this time i felt that your presence wasnt quite there as much, the beat really dominated you more than you dominated it!! But the verses was top notch so its all good in that respect!!

Overall I was a bit dissapointed its a little too short even for an ep, theres just not enough to get your teeth into and to be honest theres not really a stand out track the same as there was as on your first. To be completley frank your both two very talented guys who are capable of much better than this and that was proven on the writer meets the director. Dont get me wrong the material is good but it just doesnt have anything that draws me back in to it like "Remember the avenue" did on TWMTD and again not enough tracks is a draw back on replay value for me.

White_Mouse
05-17-2009, 05:16 PM
^ thanks for the review, In some ways the more I hear this version the more I agree with you, however I would be lying if I didn't say that the track "Still Standing" was the key piece, the ep was meant to function like a clock, with that cog missing I think the puzzle fell apart and no one will really understand what time it is so to speak, my alias speaks for itself, mosaik, some tiles are missing here and for that it's my fault for not creating a backup component, but nevertheless thank you for the review

The Prime Sithesizah
05-19-2009, 02:44 PM
Appreciate the support and feedback from everyone.. Can someone Stick this?

GameOfDeath
05-20-2009, 07:54 PM
Yo I checked the EP and the intro was disturbing compared to the smooth classic sounding hip hop. The whole package is sick. When Mouse goes on the narrative like he's talking to the girl, man that track is amazin. Deep stuff the 1 producer 1 MC combo always makes the project sound so cohesive. Really good work yall picked up where you left off. Need to get this stuff out to live crowds and radio. The jazzy crossover is working.

White_Mouse
05-21-2009, 10:46 AM
^ lol, the "intro" is supposed to go right before "Constructions", the idea is that in the samples Saten is building people, but Constructions is about building, lol yea the order of the files is screwed up I apologize for that

The Prime Sithesizah
05-26-2009, 07:52 AM
Thanks for the feedback on the EP... BiiDUMP!!

12weLvE
05-26-2009, 11:30 AM
The whole package is real nice. Picking up where you guys left off.

For some reason I dint feel like the intro was proper for the albums flow... whatever though lol.

Elementary's beat is dark but Jazzy. Mouse really held this track down, especially on the second verse about his childhood "Watching porno flicks, the same mentality" haha. Its a fun track overall. Peep this yall.

Under Contruction. The beat is nasty. Not usually a big fan of Primes grimmey beats, but here and there he lays em out. You guys are a Knock out combo. Feeling the hook. Once again the second verse is crazy. A lot of nice word play, and metaphors all over this track. Feeling the lines about the glass house and mirrors etc. Sick stuff Mouse.

Venus Nights: The drums could have came out a little more on the beat. More Jazzy stuff from Prime, always on point. All good though. Nice track, good story telling mouse... "Fuck a deli discussion, i want a happy meal, gold and arch...over the rainbow I see a ... thoughts, Give me a penny its two cents call it even." Very dope writing.

Looking foward to the next album.

PEace

White_Mouse
05-27-2009, 01:23 AM
Dope review man, working on the artwork, hoping to do some shows soon with some local cats, Nebraska yall lol

The Prime Sithesizah
05-29-2009, 12:23 PM
BUMP.. (Be on the watch for the upcoming Mouse releases).. PiiDeaCe!

White_Mouse
06-02-2009, 01:24 PM
one real quick bump