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thatKid
05-14-2009, 09:43 PM
yo, I'm the best, running over fakes in a big rig
too deadly, plus I'm so sick even Jesus dig it
now watch a tyrant deliver before you bite it
rhymes so nice, you forgetting who the mightiest
and know that the punches blow up like anger
now this a banger, how you beef hard when I ate ya
plus you ain't real, I can prove you right like a bad joke
and I ain't stooping lower, metas gripping like a choke

AcidPhosphate69
05-14-2009, 10:10 PM
A little weak, yes. Couple good lil' ideas but it could use some work. Keep writing.