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SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
05-23-2009, 07:35 PM
Split cha riff gifted switch saddle gavel master any style
Rip you off like a bootlegger n ya rhymes are just thoughts just not sought yet/
Vet cha settle you down before I beast I reef you leaves
Thief off them chums leave you graveling like crumbs on the floor/
You ainít been swept yet just air it out like LeBron hitting that ďMiracle ShotĒ
Negro please your styles ainít even a sniffle or a sneeze I breeze through beats/
Come with whirlwinds skin you cats wit slicers before they spliced cha
I can write cha in the book or author a script/
This pen be shipping out allot cargo ever prescription written
Doctoring every angle wit measures detaining any fiends trying to scheme/

Wrote cha off like sheís a crown
My Vic be slick seen that chick
Gimme some shit
I speak on it
Never resting ma
Be on my grind day and night
Saw The Mets fight
See the Yanks bite
Write cha out my life
Didnít cha want that life?
Tried to be good
Tried to be faithful
Tried to love you
Tried to make you my wife
Tried do right by you

Donít cha shine Iíve done mine, do yours
Score of fruits my labors be fruits picked off trees by pears in leaves/
Though cha checks bested beckets etch a sketched invested mutually suggested
Rolling dagget badger haggler arms be smacking dons thinking they charms/
Backroom, crack coons, goons be loons rudely fools get schooled
Thinking they right out the box like coco crisp spitting a lisp/
You can Wilson Fisk the thrift but cha market be closed down
Operating out of a doomsday town with masks on thinking they DOOM now/
Crafts a dash you Kim wit that ass on smash blast off NASA racketeering jacket gearing
Never steering I jarred fam farm check the barns I scar wit sinister intent/
Print cha mind leave you empty like your body up for rent
Check the parasite fire fight organs scream wit personality on MEAN/
Gang green infectious lecture the lactose closed off minds get locked jaws
When I got raw my undercoat be so dope they thought they smoked/
Jokes began running I wilded out with my nicks on cannons
Ate fifty five packets of M&Mís dead when I relapsed as a diabetic/
Making rappers look like food once I scrounge I eat you down
Watch me digest you while reading weeders after I see you they say whereas the reader/


Wrote cha off like sheís a crown
My Vic be slick seen that chick
Gimme some shit
I speak on it
Never resting ma
Be on my grind day and night
Saw The Mets fight
See the Yanks bite
Write cha out my life
Didnít cha want that life?
Tried to be good
Tried to be faithful
Tried to love you
Tried to make you my wife
Tried do right by you

White N Dangerous
05-23-2009, 08:22 PM
Split cha riff gifted switch saddle gavel master any style
Rip you off like a bootlegger n ya rhymes are just thoughts just not sought yet/
Vet cha settle you down before I beast I reef you leaves
Thief off them chums leave you graveling like crumbs on the floor/
You ainít been swept yet just air it out like LeBron hitting that ďMiracle ShotĒ
Negro please your styles ainít even a sniffle or a sneeze I breeze through beats/
Come with whirlwinds skin you cats wit slicers before they spliced cha
I can write cha in the book or author a script/
This pen be shipping out allot cargo ever prescription written
Doctoring every angle wit measures detaining any fiends trying to scheme/

Wrote cha off like sheís a crown
My Vic be slick seen that chick
Gimme some shit
I speak on it
Never resting ma
Be on my grind day and night
Saw The Mets fight
See the Yanks bite
Write cha out my life
Didnít cha want that life?
Tried to be good
Tried to be faithful
Tried to love you
Tried to make you my wife
Tried do right by you

Donít cha shine Iíve done mine, do yours
Score of fruits my labors be fruits picked off trees by pears in leaves/
Though cha checks bested beckets etch a sketched invested mutually suggested
Rolling dagget badger haggler arms be smacking dons thinking they charms/
Backroom, crack coons, goons be loons rudely fools get schooled
Thinking they right out the box like coco crisp spitting a lisp/
You can Wilson Fisk the thrift but cha market be closed down
Operating out of a doomsday town with masks on thinking they DOOM now/
Crafts a dash you Kim wit that ass on smash blast off NASA racketeering jacket gearing
Never steering I jarred fam farm check the barns I scar wit sinister intent/
Print cha mind leave you empty like your body up for rent
Check the parasite fire fight organs scream wit personality on MEAN/
Gang green infectious lecture the lactose closed off minds get locked jaws
When I got raw my undercoat be so dope they thought they smoked/
Jokes began running I wilded out with my nicks on cannons
Ate fifty five packets of M&Mís dead when I relapsed as a diabetic/
Making rappers look like food once I scrounge I eat you down
Watch me digest you while reading weeders after I see you they say whereas the reader/


Wrote cha off like sheís a crown
My Vic be slick seen that chick
Gimme some shit
I speak on it
Never resting ma
Be on my grind day and night
Saw The Mets fight
See the Yanks bite
Write cha out my life
Didnít cha want that life?
Tried to be good
Tried to be faithful
Tried to love you
Tried to make you my wife
Tried do right by you


Feelin it liked this drop esspecially tha vocab n wordplay

IMO if u followed this consist type of usage as the bar below this i think u could go far, and have serious potential, everytime u drop is more elevation so keep at it, can't wait to read da nxt shyt

Backroom, crack coons, goons be loons rudely fools get schooled
Thinking they right out the box like coco crisp spitting a lisp/

Shyt flowed and was worded ingeniously!! :clap:

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
05-23-2009, 09:02 PM
yeah MF DOOM is a big influence on me as well as Early Busta, Nas and Ghost but good look 4 the advice for me it's more of feeling rather than just like aight i gotta flow like dis man

it's like i rhyme in the momment rather you throw me a thought n i'll catch i write almost like freestyle randomly dunno

dis the line i love though

You can Wilson Fisk the thrift but cha market be closed down
Operating out of a doomsday town with masks on thinking they DOOM now/

War and Peace
05-23-2009, 09:23 PM
NASA racketeering jacket gearing
Never steering I jarred fam farm check the barns I scar wit sinister intent/
Print cha mind leave you empty like your body up for rent>>>

nice prose lord-
that sh-t was gully

yo i got 16 for you to catch a wreck-ass vibe to

i'm almost done with it, i'll fly it to you sometime tomorrow g-

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