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hollywoodrealty
09-16-2005, 09:03 AM
ok u know how it goes, 20 lines, 4 votes wins, who will battle me, anyone who has never battled me before?

GreenBee
09-16-2005, 10:25 AM
Im Up. Hit Em Up.

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 10:25 AM
i'll spar the 20 lines wid hollywood

hollywoodrealty
09-16-2005, 11:15 AM
how bout u 2 battle each other, winner battles me.............

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 11:16 AM
ah fuck shit i jus wanted a rematch widd u cuz i have my flow back now

GreenBee
09-16-2005, 11:24 AM
Ill Knock Both Of You Out In A 40 Line Rhyme.

Wayasay?

hollywoodrealty
09-16-2005, 11:25 AM
haha lets all just battle each other, make this every man for himself, no more then 24 lines, what do u 2 say?

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 11:25 AM
well battle hollywood nigga maybe sum uda time nah mean got a battle pending

hollywoodrealty
09-16-2005, 11:25 AM
make this the royal rumble

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 11:26 AM
fuck yeah nigga dis is y hollywood is my boi

hollywoodrealty
09-16-2005, 11:28 AM
greenbee, are u down with this, every man for himself?

GreenBee
09-16-2005, 11:30 AM
IIght ILL Shit On You Tonight Man.

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 11:50 AM
yo I'll drop it now fresh in my head shit nah mean


Yo when I pop off its like a volcanoe, that blew its top off/
This battle royal,... jus another survivor knock-off/
Im non stop,....energy focused in to one single spot/
Like tai chi an, im the chosen,"ONE", like Jet Li/
Intellectualy! My rhymes like serrosis, they make ya liver quiver/
So cold an so focused enuff, to make Dick Chaney shiver/
an shit his pants, when they connect assault an deliver/
Im lettin fake emcees know what true rhymin is like in the book the giver/
Like tha Inspetah......i set the micraphone on fire/
Mcs hoo say I dont are liers, cuz droppin against me the consequences will be dire/
I'm reckless like fire, burnin up the competition like the archangels did for our messiah/
Known ta inspire, I should go down in history books cuz i write my shit on pap-Y-RUS/
But with a changed name, Nitorious, still ill like ODB to Osi-RUS/
I'm spreadin rhymes like a virus, HIV fuckin pacs reflection/
So you know I'm perfection, I would come out on top if it were natural selection/
My structured context kills jus gutted ya both in the mid section/
An yo to end this shit, lets say I make works of art like Mozart, Amadeyus/
You two aint good enuff to my roadies let alone my dais/

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 12:15 PM
this shit is gonna b amazing

GreenBee
09-16-2005, 01:50 PM
YE Want Me To Battle Im Shakin Like A Rattle MA PeopleZ Fist Fight On The Street With Beans An
Brits So Dont Talk ISHT Choppin Beef Like Cattle Talkin Through YA Crapper This Hip Hop Son U A
Rapper Like Slim Mathers Well Im Whiter N Badder Stomp The Fuck Ya Head Make It Flatter Than
Columbus UpDating The Atlas Wet The Hell With My Piss Bielzibub At The Top A My List You A
Commodity Trick Chop You Hands Off At The Wrist Wanker Cousin Remove Two Ribs Cocksucker Fuck
Your Mother With My Thik Walt Deliver You A New Siameze Brother An Sister Who The Fucks This
Mister Pop You Like A Blister MotherFuckin Boaster Blow You Up Like Peptic Ulser Yo Styles
Fucked Like My Native Accent You Mashed Up Like Pulp Paper Shit I Kill You By Accident Stray
Thoughts Fuckin Packin This Who The Fucks Yo Daddy Bastard Kids Have Some Whizz Take A Fuckin
Release Watch Me Bail This World Out Of The Abyss I Give A Fuck If I Miss Laugh When I Fill Yo
Bitch Coverted Turnin Out Ho's Thats Really How The Game Go's Why Yo Jaw Hit The Floor That
Girl Was Always A Whore (Now Im Done Witchu) But I Give You Some More Sendin My Soul To Explore
While My Bodys In Court Jedi Mind Trick Make Null Verdict Abort This Is My Fuckin Hobby Lazy
Bastard Dont Like Sport Just Wait Til My Squad Hit New York Wipe Out Shadey Like Jews Refuse
Pork Fuck Your Dead Bolt Son ILL Run Through That Door Raid Your House And Give To The Poor
That Blue Retinal Sellout Is An Eye Sore All O Yall And More I Shit On Unsigned Hype Fuck Yo
Contracts For Life I Cant Wait Till I Die God Is Fake And Red Bull Makes You Fly We AlreadY
Doin Time With The Pigs In The Sky Fuckin Ghetto Bird Aint No Good Keepin Ma Peoples Awake
In The Hood I Was Raised A Rebel Now I Think That I Should.

Phewwww.

P.S

Im Stuck Down In A City Where I Cant Sleep, Sitting Up At The Slightest Peep, Sweat Drippin From
Me, Thoughts Boiling Over In My Head, I Need A Release Caught Up Between My Dreams And The Street
I See The Truth Reveals Diseet, Along With The Beef And The Greif, Choosin Victory Over Defeat,
Mastering My Own Beliefs, So Here I Am Trick Or Treat Shut Up Or Speak, Watch Me Sew The Seed
Reap The Whirlwind Coz We Playin For Keeps, Keepin It Neat, Makin Fakers Retreat, Like They
Scared Of Me Styles To Sweet, My Rhydas Rise To Their Feet, Now Round Up The Fleet, Half Baked
Rappers Split The Scenes, GreenP Seeking Out The Cracks, Filling In The Seems, Factions And Teams
Crews And Solitare G's Form As One Under Me, Coz We All Bleed The Same Colour See, Even The O/G's
Know Im Cool As The Cold Breeze Blow, So Im Just Lettin U Know Get Your Uniform On, Now Its Time
To Go, Its Our Time To Glow, Stand Up Let Em Know We Aint Done Yet FoSho, Like Busta We Gona Give
Ya Some Mo, We All Crashin Down Now, Shorty Split Up The Dough, Watch My Green SoulJa's Capture
The Flow, Spreading The Sound, We Need You An Mo Boycotting The Show, Kick Out Artists Who Rhymin
To Own, If Not I'LL Fight Em Alone Arming The Zone Remotley At Home, Prayin For My Brothers In The
Super Dome, Starved By A Puppet Throne, Flying In The Feds But Dont Evacuate Your Own, No Meds Or
Hospital Beds Just Left To Starve Fade Away Like Sacks Of Bones Shallow Graves Marked Unknown Names
Of Brothers That Died For The Cause Of Federal Genocide Flooded Buildings Sprayed Dead On The Side
And Now Bush Thinks The Shit Will Just Slide Brushed Under The Rug Kicked To The Side Sickened By
Your Lies Blood Suckin Parasite Two Faced Bastard Deny I Hope That You Fry Think You Should Be
Walkin The Mile Although Know Id Be Wasting Time And Still Nobody Smiles We Just Sharpen Our Styles
Im Weeping For You All Like Woman Gone Wild Cut Off And Lonley, Who Just Lost Her Only Child Now
Maternaly Moaning, With Fractured Bones Hystericaly Roaming, CNN Picked Her Up When They Turned
Golden Hour Into A Media Zone.

My Brothers You Arent Alone Cant You See. I May Be A Small Caucasian Belfast MC, But Even I
Know We Must Fight To Be Free, Until We Cypher The Key.

My Peeps If You With Me Were The Fuck You @?

Im White But Wont You Bleed With Me?
Peace/Piece

Truely Yours, CaLTiK KiLLa Bee,

GreenP/GreenBee

Ghetto_Veteran@Yahoo.com

YaHoodlum4Life.

Get Yo Mac Right.

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 01:51 PM
24 lines max mutha fucka

GreenBee
09-16-2005, 03:08 PM
Your MomA. Naw.

Your Bitch Can Suck My Dick.

r.e.s.p.e.c.t

GreenBee
09-16-2005, 03:10 PM
you got knocked the fuck out

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 03:12 PM
fuck your hollow ass self....most of your shit was babble neways doesn't matter size of the rhyme mutha fucka


intensity in small numbers


you got knocked the fuck out

b.i.t.c.h.

tha god concept
09-16-2005, 03:16 PM
true true greenbees shit was a tower of babble step ya game up sun

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 03:18 PM
nah i aint got a beef widd greenbee long shit i respect u for writin it but ya know jus pay attention to the guidelines......1i know u can do it much respect

hollywoodrealty
09-16-2005, 04:02 PM
i got so much work to do, got clients to handle, i wont drop till tomorow peace

Grim Reapa
09-16-2005, 04:04 PM
wut u do for a livin?

hollywoodrealty
09-17-2005, 12:20 AM
i work in real estate and also financing, among a few other side ventures, what about u

Grim Reapa
09-17-2005, 01:34 AM
i work it in manager position at multple mcdonalds make a ton of money

tha god concept
09-17-2005, 01:44 AM
werd up genius my boi ghettod D does kind the same thing and hes pullin in mad green, im a lumber yard werker goin 2 skool makin $16/hr 30 hrs a week so im ballin as best i can

tha god concept
09-17-2005, 01:45 AM
werd up on the realestae shit tho hollywoodreality im tryin 2 get in that game in a few yrs

T-ribe
09-17-2005, 01:58 AM
Yo Ol green b's shit waz horrible, not to shit on ya style but-----
Fuck it I'm shit'n on ya style because it's fuckin disgusting
I don't give a fuck where you come from if you can rhyme you can rhyme
And duk you can't ---- so I suggest you leave and never turn back
Fuckin no talent Mc

Grim Reapa
09-17-2005, 02:01 AM
werd if it were between me an him hoo would u vote for?

Visionz
09-17-2005, 02:01 AM
T-ribe, post a vote on the battle btwn me & gza, it's gonna take 5 for either one of us, the helps appreciated.peace

tha god concept
09-17-2005, 02:07 AM
green bee aint got no skill id vote 4 tha genius but im drunk as hell so fuck my vote

T-ribe
09-17-2005, 02:20 AM
Fo'sho N.G gots my vote, that shit is a fuckin land slide.
N.G you shit was on point, good verbal, good flow, ya shit was pretty mean
Word life
Solid.

hollywoodrealty
09-17-2005, 07:42 AM
ya man i gotta get paid, real estate in south florida is the shit, plus i gotta support my wife and baby, but yo check it, im not even gonna drop a rhyme in here, this green bee bitch killed it with that 80 lines of garbage, im just gonna go drop in that other thread where u challenege me nitorious g, ok peace

Dae Ja Nae
09-17-2005, 09:48 AM
GreenBee


YE Want Me To Battle Im Shakin Like A Rattle

MA PeopleZ Fist Fight On The Street With Beans An Brits

So Dont Talk ISHT ...

Choppin Beef Like Cattle Talkin Through YA This Hip Hop Son, U A Rapper?

Like Slim Mathers Well Im Whiter N Badder

Stomp Ya Fuckin Then Head Make It Flatter

Than

Columbus UpDating The Atlas

Wet The Hell With My Piss Bielzibub At The Top A My List

You’s A ...

Commodity Trick Chop You Hands Off At The Wrist Wanker Cousin Remove Two Ribs

Cocksucker

^^^(I get it ... like charles manson supposidly did ... lol ...)

Fuck Your Mother With My Think Walt Deliver You A New Siameze Brother An Sister

Who The Fucks This Mister Pop You Like A Blister

^^^ ( ahaha ... you're not a rapper, you're a POP star ... lol ... he'll pop you like a blister ... cute)

MotherFuckin Boaster Blow You Up Like Peptic Ulsers

Yo Styles Fucked Like My Native Accent, You Mashed Up Like Pulp Paper-Shit I Kill You By Accident

Stray

Thoughts Fuckin Packin This Who The Fucks Yo Daddy Bastard(<---you was kinda stretchin’ the rhyme on that one, I gotcha though, you’re sayin you’re his daddy ... owned ... lol )

Kids Have Some WhizzTake A Fuckin Release

Watch Me Bail This World Out Of The Abyss I Give A Fuck If IMiss Laugh When I Fill Yo

Bitch Coverted Turnin Out Ho's Thats Really How The Game Go's

^^^ ( ahaha ... I liked that one)

Why Yo Jaw Hit The Floor? That Girl Was Always A Whore

(Now Im Done Witchu) But I Give You Some More Sendin My Soul To Explore

While My Bodys In Court Jedi Mind Trick Make Null Verdict Abort, This Is My Fuckin Hobby Lazy

Bastard Dont Like Sport?

Just Wait Til My Squad Hit New York ,Wipe Out Shadey Like Jews Refuse

Pork Fuck Your Dead Bolt Son ILL Run Through That Door Raid Your House And Give To The Poor

That Blue Retinal Sellout Is An Eye Sore All O Yall And More I Shit On Unsigned Hype Fuck Yo

Contracts For Life I Cant Wait Till I Die God Is Fake And Red Bull Makes You Fly We AlreadY

Doin Time With The Pigs In TheSky Fuckin Ghetto Bird Aint No Good Keepin Ma Peoples Awake

In The Hood I Was Raised A Rebel Now I Think That I Should.

Phewwww.



LOL ... dude, you really have a lot to say don't you?

I disagree that GreenBee's flow is a bunch of babble. I think it's just that he has a lot to say ... you know, like he trys to fit a lot of words into a small space. I read it for what it was, and I think he does have skills. The problem is in his format ... IMO.

GreenBee, you need to lay your shit down so that it's easy to follow, and so that it flows. That way, people can really see your punches, metaphors and word play, rather than huge run on sentences.

IMO, this shit was hot. It's a combination of comedy, disses and awareness. I liked it alot.

I'm not droppin' a vote ... I'm just trying to shine some light on my man's flow so that hopefully more people will see it. I know it's a battle and all, but I think there's still room to give some helpful pointers.

Peace
???

GreenBee
09-17-2005, 11:09 AM
Dogg, Whats Goin On. Im Tryin Stop Sokin This Fuckin Cannabis. I Got Yon 14 Inch Scar

Grim Reapa
09-17-2005, 11:10 AM
humble urself i fuckin destroyed u nigga....

ur shit was terrible

GreenBee
09-17-2005, 11:10 AM
Dogg, Whats Goin On. Im Tryin Stop Somokin This Fuckin Cannabis. I Got Yon 14 Inch Scar On My Chest. I Mean It Peoples We Godda Fix This Fuckin World Before I Die An Shit. I Am Built For This Shit.

We All Are.

You People Dont Recognise What Power You Hold Within The Wu.
You Dont See The Backup You Have From Labels Like ViperRecords.

Indeed I Can Say I Am A Veteran SoulJa But The Physical War On My Island Is Over.

P.S

All My Rhymes Get Recorded Ghetto Style @ Home.

And HipHop Gives Me The Will To Live.

If It Werent For People Like Meth (AKA) Big Cliff, RedMan, All You Fuckers In The Clan. Not To Mention Jon And Immortal Technique.

All My Doggs Thats Gone, Pac, Pun, K0, JMJ All You Fuckers Man.
I Can Say With A Straight Face I Wouldnt Be Alive Now If It Wasnt For All Yo Flow.

I Know Dey Watchin Over Me.

I Got A Lil Bit Of All Of You In My Heart.

Piece/Peace

GreenP/GreenB

hollywoodrealty
09-17-2005, 02:44 PM
ok as far as what da jae nae said, maybe he isnt as bad as we say, but still, i wasnt feeling his verse, but ill tell u what, i read some shit green bee wrote, nota rhyme but just some thoughts on his mind, and i defenently feel his approuch on life, but anyways ill battle u green bee, just set up a thread, peace

GreenBee
09-19-2005, 09:58 AM
Thats My Trainin Partner Right There. I Drop New Thred Tonight.

hollywoodrealty
09-19-2005, 11:27 AM
ok lets do this