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KILLAH
07-27-2009, 09:28 AM
i just dod this one this morn, but i want some imput on it.. its it too hard to flow over it?? http://www.reverbnation.com/mrwestashleybeathouseproductions "LADY IN THE BLUE DRESS"

GhettoGnom
07-27-2009, 09:38 AM
This is smooth.

Nice

KILLAH
07-27-2009, 09:55 AM
thanx, man..

Boss_Digger
07-27-2009, 03:58 PM
yeah man this is chill and slightly erie, bass is a bit over kill tho, I like it tho dope shit!!!

12weLvE
07-27-2009, 04:02 PM
Sick sample. Volume wise...get those kicks up man. maybe the drums over all. i enjoyed the listen man.

PEace

Sinapse
07-28-2009, 11:07 AM
I like this, it has a nice and full feel...like the fellas said, levels and blending need lots of work, mixing is a huge part of making a good instrumental...I'd say you need a lot more chops too, the sample, tho dope, seems very loopy. To me that is lazy production that just capitalizes on a good song sampled, really good producers use lots of chops and basically reconstruct melodies - this is immediately recognizable if you know the original song.

KILLAH
07-28-2009, 12:25 PM
I like this, it has a nice and full feel...like the fellas said, levels and blending need lots of work, mixing is a huge part of making a good instrumental...I'd say you need a lot more chops too, the sample, tho dope, seems very loopy. To me that is lazy production that just capitalizes on a good song sampled, really good producers use lots of chops and basically reconstruct melodies - this is immediately recognizable if you know the original song.
thanx ill get to work on that... im growing and learning every day so just bear with me. peace

SKAMPOE
07-28-2009, 01:24 PM
peace yo, this is dope shit..

KILLAH
07-28-2009, 02:30 PM
thanx cuz, peace!

DrunkenMasta303
07-28-2009, 04:00 PM
yo this joint is perfect to smoke to!! DOPE SAMPLE, but i also agree with the gawdz about turning the drums a bit UP & using some more chops1

KILLAH
07-28-2009, 07:23 PM
thanx... thats wusup.. ima remake it soon

M.O.D.
07-28-2009, 08:19 PM
samples hot , wish u would have chopped it up a little more

KILLAH
07-28-2009, 09:14 PM
what do yall thinkl about the others on there>?