View Full Version : Mental order swords ft. P.c.p. & basement dwellaz
08-17-2009, 02:22 PM
MENTAL ORDER SWORDS FT. SKAMPOE, BRONZE FEET, MENES, ARCH ANGEL, AND JIGSAW 45
PRODUCED BY: POISON FLOWERZ!
R.I.P TO NIKLZ
08-17-2009, 05:38 PM
where the fuck is the love,lol peace to erry1 that did this...FIRE SUN!!!
08-17-2009, 07:36 PM
Shit is wicked!! Much props on this shit here... Yeeaahh!!!
08-17-2009, 07:43 PM
Beat is a li lo-fi but yall ripped it !!
08-17-2009, 08:14 PM
Word jig everybody sleepin badly today!
Peace icabod thanks for peepin!
beat is a li lo-fi but yall ripped it !!
not a lil lo-fi i only make supa lo-fi joints!
08-17-2009, 08:16 PM
peace chang for stopping by!
08-17-2009, 08:38 PM
08-17-2009, 08:55 PM
08-17-2009, 08:59 PM
this a ill joint right here , poison killin that sp . rhymes is fire no doubt , thats a nice line up u guys put together . ya'll should turn down jigsaws verse a notch , comes in a little heavy
08-17-2009, 10:03 PM
Jigs verse is a little high. I agree with m.o.d.
First the beat. Its a dope beat, but I cannot hear the drums, and that is mainly due to the mixing. Trying to balance out the vox with the beat. I like the beat dont get me wrong, but those drums should have a little more pop.
Skamp not your best stuff fam, but not bad at all.
Menes... did his usual thing.... But again Bronze showing some big improvement. Big ups yo.
Archangel who I havent heard in a minute had some real entertaining lines on there, but delivery threw me off a bit.
Jig... Verse was usual Jigsaw stuff, dope lines on there too. Vox is loud like I said.
Overall if I had to rate the track I would give it a 3/5... it wasnt bad, but it was messy. A lot of room for improvement.
PEace to all my fam.
08-17-2009, 10:32 PM
Peace all who listened and took part
Shit came out ill i thought, beat was crazy, peace to poison flowers for that.
PCP be fam so you know what it is, peace chek for noticing the growth, im working hard in the lab.
"Its how the fuck we gettin it in, SOOO VICIOUS"
08-18-2009, 01:35 AM
hahha well i love this track
08-18-2009, 07:27 AM
dope shit never the less....thanx for checkin it out yall,peace
08-18-2009, 10:17 AM
hahha well i love this track
word up same
Mental Order in EFFECT!!
08-18-2009, 03:40 PM
pretty dope track but as 12 already pointed out there a few flaws through out, everyone came with nice rhymes but the deliveries where a bit clumsy!! Skampoe had a nice verse but not the most lyrical Ive ever heard from you but it was delivered well, The bronze/menes back and forth sounds like you where both hoping on and off the same mic at the same time and thereofre sounded a bit iffy on the flow side of things but the content was good!!! Archangel was a bit off beat but had the crazy lines and the mixing through out could of been more consistant!! Jigsaw had the best overall verse I think. The beat is dope but again I agree with 12, I can bearly hear the kicks so they could be beefed up somewhat. Overall its a dope track but it could of been executed better IMO
08-18-2009, 03:55 PM
peace 7th, u already know.
08-18-2009, 10:07 PM
peace peace yall
08-19-2009, 05:51 PM
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08-20-2009, 10:45 PM
SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
08-21-2009, 01:26 AM
This was hotnesss
08-22-2009, 03:02 AM
peace to all yo this shit is bananas, i take blame for fuckin tha mix up and it will b remasted for tha final ish!!
08-22-2009, 08:25 AM
I managed to listen to 49 seconds before closing the window so thats an improvement at least.
08-22-2009, 06:32 PM
beat is dope...but a lil to clutter muffled like sound ..maybe to much lo fi
skam....the flow wasnt that great over this..i def heard a lot better from you
jig......... like was said above turn down volume...flow was good lyrics were nice
others......never heard em befor...not bad
2nd mc was a lil nicer then the 3rd
08-24-2009, 02:44 PM
peace ya'll thanx for all the feed
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