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TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 02:20 AM
I'm bored lets do this shit mang. lol

Visionz
09-21-2005, 02:22 AM
aite man fuck it, who's droppin first?

Visionz
09-21-2005, 02:24 AM
you know ur one of the illest to battle against right?

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 02:31 AM
Lol yea we'll do 2 rounds I'll drop first.

Visionz
09-21-2005, 02:32 AM
word homie. peace

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 03:08 AM
OMFG I had a verse written out and they deleted that shit wtf....

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 03:08 AM
o well lemme start again

Visionz
09-21-2005, 03:25 AM
that fuckin' sucks dog, I'm been workin on one I can drop that shit in a minute if you rather reverse the rounds

Visionz
09-21-2005, 03:26 AM
how many bars was the one that got deleted?

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 03:37 AM
This is the Wutang Clan town, I Never let my Fans Down
Like it's summertime, creatin airwaves bitch "I AM sound"
Radio in "man down!, command all units to stand down"
This aint a fucking robbery bitch put your hands down
Aint taking no hostages, make heads dissapear like ostriches
Lyrics hit oxygen, and burst into flames like hot phosphorous
Proposterous, I remove your products from the shopping list
Even if you stood ground vs a rhinocerous you aint stoppin this
You create more shit than a black elephant, that lacks mellanin
Malevolent like a 3rd world country that nationally lacks relevance
Melon head, my four-five shells will turn your brain into gelatin
Faggot, should stay in the closet till your turn into a skeleton
Emcees learn the hard way, touch stoves and get 3rd degree burns
So sick I spit germs, epidemic imperative to determine the next term
Tek fry wigs like smoking excess sherm, I make your girls breast firm
Smack you in the head with the microphone like "Bitch its your turn"

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 03:37 AM
damn yo i posted 2 verses that got deleted, that one almost got deleted, thats 16 bars, Good Luck.

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 03:42 AM
Yo after gettin like 3 verses deleted, can we make this one round? lol

Mad tired of writing.

Visionz
09-21-2005, 03:53 AM
Lyrically, I'll pick you up with an elephant trunk
Use your head for a hammer and repeatedly slam dunk
Till your melon's just remnants of blood and brains
And leave your dentist to decide if its really ur remains
7 infinite styles displayed by the prizm
Make you wanna crawl back to zygotic cell division
I make incisions & u make decisions to wish you were never born
Palestinieans and Israelis, the way I leave you war torn
Like a Bond martini, I'll leave you shook not stirred
Hand you to Langston to give education 'bout a dream deferred
Cause this nightmare will have u leakin ur sheets 4 weeks
Spent so much on laudry you could write off the reciets
The silent predator, I murder with swords of metaphors
Compete in battle until their are no competitors
I hop out the darkness strapped with piano wire
And sufacate your ass till ur breath expires

Visionz
09-21-2005, 03:57 AM
lets just take votes on this one and then do another round tommorrow, I think each of our verses are strong enough to stand on their own, and absolutly no building cause we were writing at the same time. btw how do count bars, like how many bars is the verse I just wrote? I would consider it 8 but I'm sure we're countin different. peace

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 03:58 AM
Lol werd up thats some hot shit gawd.

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 04:00 AM
1 bar = 4 beats in a measure. its that, 1-2-3-4, in 4/4 rythm na mean.

So whatever time period that is, thats 1 bar.

2 bars = a line.

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 04:01 AM
lets just take votes on this one and then do another round tommorrow, I think each of our verses are strong enough to stand on their own, and absolutly no building cause we were writing at the same time. btw how do count bars, like how many bars is the verse I just wrote? I would consider it 8 but I'm sure we're countin different. peaceThats funny though cuz both of us used similar words lol.

Visionz
09-21-2005, 04:01 AM
cool man, funny how the elephant is in both rhymes right?

Visionz
09-21-2005, 04:02 AM
crazy then posted the same thought at the same time

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 04:03 AM
Lol we brainwashed by republicans.

Another hot battle though, we always try to kill eachother lol.

Visionz
09-21-2005, 04:06 AM
I've written about that in a thread I made. I always like battlin you, win or lose. lol respect to your lyrical prowness.

Visionz
09-21-2005, 10:01 AM
bumpin for votes-takin this one to 5.peace

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 02:18 PM
Still needs votes...

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 04:36 PM
bumpin for votes

Visionz
09-21-2005, 05:52 PM
100 views and no post? vote man!

TeknicelStylez
09-21-2005, 06:08 PM
100 views and no post? vote man!""

Yea whats up with that... we stay voting on other peoples shit though.

Visionz
09-21-2005, 06:49 PM
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please.thank you (maybe this shit'll work)

TeknicelStylez
09-22-2005, 12:41 AM
Yo vote on this shit people wtf got 3 pages of bumps, shit is rediculous.

TeknicelStylez
09-22-2005, 02:34 AM
............................................. V O T E

hollywoodrealty
09-22-2005, 03:13 AM
i think erik's rhyme was more grimmy and murderous, both were hott ass verses but erik had one step better, peace to u both

TeknicelStylez
09-22-2005, 03:29 AM
Lol hollywood you psychopath fuck, you love them murder raps lol.

THATS NOT MY STYLE!! I humiliate instead of annhialate na mean.

Visionz
09-22-2005, 03:34 AM
that still makes 1-0 lol, I'm just glad someone posted a vote. good lookin Butcher

TeknicelStylez
09-22-2005, 03:41 AM
No doubt :P

Robert
09-22-2005, 03:56 AM
Goddamn Tek that was fucking dope, you get my vote, not that Eric was bad, far from it. here's the bits i liked:
"Radio in "man down!, command all units to stand down"
This aint a fucking robbery bitch put your hands down
Aint taking no hostages, make heads dissapear like ostriches
Lyrics hit oxygen, and burst into flames like hot phosphorous"
that is fucking good shit right there.
"Tek fry wigs like smoking excess sherm, I make your girls breast firm
Smack you in the head with the microphone like "Bitch its your turn""
and that is a fucking dope way to finish.
Best shit I seen ya write sofar, you might not be as easy to beat as I originally thought lol.
Vote=TEK

Visionz
09-22-2005, 04:01 AM
thanks for votin man, but all I can say is that if you're challenging Tek prepare to come with it. The kid don't play.

Robert
09-22-2005, 04:04 AM
thanks for votin man, but all I can say is that if you're challenging Tek prepare to come with it. The kid don't play.
Yeah I know that, his verses are always tight from what I seen, However I dont play either. LOL

GreenBee
09-22-2005, 04:20 AM
You Know It Like A Poet Tek.

Keep Yo Mac Tight.

Visionz
09-22-2005, 05:35 AM
was that a vote green bee? I think that makes it 2-1. peace

Visionz
09-22-2005, 04:47 PM
bump bump vote

Luther Large
09-22-2005, 11:23 PM
eric had an ill verse......no doubt but tek was on another level......i like how he rimed sumthin then started off the next line by using a word that rimes with the last word of the previous line..

good battle to both ya'll......but my vote is on teks part......peace

Visionz
09-22-2005, 11:35 PM
damn, I'm down 3-1, thanks for votin my man.peace

Xerogravity
09-23-2005, 12:03 AM
my vote: Tek

both verses were dope...pretty funny how you both mentioned elephants.

Visionz
09-23-2005, 03:46 AM
4-1, but damn if you thought both were dope what made you go the way u did when you voted?

tha god concept
09-23-2005, 04:01 AM
dope battle but unseens shit flowed better and was written clearer

"Till your melon's just remnants of blood and brains
And leave your dentist to decide if its really ur remains" - sick line


but tek had sum reel killer lines 2 hhhmmmm......

hard decision , i would say its a tie but that cant happen

so imma go wit unseen on this 1 sick battle tho yo ~1~

Visionz
09-23-2005, 04:08 AM
4-2, Frank Reich's on the bench warming up, thanks for votin.peace

TeknicelStylez
09-23-2005, 07:06 AM
bump for votes

G...
09-23-2005, 07:20 AM
Tek took this, just. Eric had some brutal rhymes and overall a nice rhyme scheme, but Tek's was fuckin' fire, all the 'man down' and 'stand down' type rhymes really hit hard, like I actually FELT the flow, a FLOW in a battle, that's a unique thing, but Tek pulled it off and still managed to throw some sharp punches. Great battle, PEACE to both MC's, keep doin' ya thing. ONE

TeknicelStylez
09-23-2005, 07:26 AM
Thats 5-2 good looks for voting G with a good explanation at that.

Peace to Eric for a good battle, we still got another one going ;). Niggaz like my sparring partner lol.

Visionz
09-23-2005, 04:22 PM
you would be the champ in that area. Im constantly gettin my ass kicked. lol fuck it thou man the style is dope