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hollywoodrealty
09-22-2005, 01:22 PM
20 lines, 4 votes, anybody who never battled me, lets do this

Visionz
09-22-2005, 03:18 PM
if you drop I'll hit you up later tnight after I get done w/ school.peace

hollywoodrealty
09-22-2005, 06:45 PM
ill try to drop in the middle of the night when i wake up to feed my baby son, ill be all wired up after that, so look for me late night, peace

Idiom
09-22-2005, 06:47 PM
HoLLy when you're done wit that let's do one more between me and you
i went first both times so lets see how it turnes out if you went first,,

cOOl?

stay up son

Idiom

hollywoodrealty
09-23-2005, 08:54 AM
ok eric lets try and drop our verses today, and idiom, ill battle u again, but before i do that, i wanna get all my threads closed, i got 2 battles im waiting on people to vote for, and one im bout to start here with eric, so as soon as that shit is all done, ill puta thread up to battle u and ill drop 1st, peace

Visionz
09-24-2005, 07:41 PM
go head and drop man, and I'll post on here later tonight.peace

Visionz
09-24-2005, 11:37 PM
I'm in the shadows lurking w/ murderous urges
Sword be a billionaire, it can't help that it splurges
On bodies who prayin for decimation
One slice, and I'll leave you split like segregation
Initiation of brutal tatics just one of my facets
Kenyan marathon runner, toss whatever I'll outlast it
Casket is prepared, aint no sparing your life
Quarter-horse with no remorse, this is what real pain feel like
Those are forks, you just mistaked 'em for butcher knifes
You might stab w/'em but they sure don't slice
Hitori Hanzo my mind was made to be the sharpest blade
One slash and the competition Fades
To Black, I send you back, packin up with Jay-z
Retire or expire neither one really fazes me
Amazes me that you agree to such abuse
Put the white flag down, "there will be no truce"
Last words you ever heard spoken before ur untimely demise
5 billion years later and Sun, I'll still Rise
Unlike you,no-head havin Mr. Decapitated
Hand me my belt, the champ has been reinstated

Visionz
09-25-2005, 12:00 AM
say, just cause it's one round, please no building on the verse. peace

hollywoodrealty
09-25-2005, 08:28 AM
magnetic forces, i roll with 2 horses and a carraige
poetic verses kill your sole, your corpes is banished
the walking dead, you left me headless but im possesed
you got no pimp game, you couldnt get head from lettuce
you wanna take the belt from the champ, you'll feel a travesty
i got this fucken belt on lock just like chasity
you'll need an autoplasty cuz im tearing out your tissues
you'll need an autopsy, your body burnt from satanic rituals
too late to seek spiritual guidance, the violence alredy begun
one slice from the butcher knife and your fucken numb
swing it twice, red rum, you done said your last words
you cant spit on wutangcorp.com, i deleted your user name and password
you've all witnessed the massacre of eric unseen
the 1st and last 1/2 rapper slash 1/2 drag queen
when i smack you it will wake u up just like caffeine
spit bullets, the mics my glock, ill leave you rocked just like a crack pheen
the butcher is serving beef, welcome to my cuisine
killen mc's like eric unseen is my daily routene
i cant be smoke screened, i see right through the fog
i see your camaflauge, ill kill you and your entourage

hollywoodrealty
09-25-2005, 08:28 AM
ok we both did our thing and laid down some fire, now all you do your thing and vote plz, peace

TeknicelStylez
09-25-2005, 09:28 AM
Eric Unseen:

I'm in the shadows lurking w/ murderous urges
Sword be a billionaire, it can't help that it splurges
On bodies who prayin for decimation
One slice, and I'll leave you split like segregation
This is a hot opening he uses words that aren't normally rhymed.

Initiation of brutal tatics just one of my facets
Kenyan marathon runner, toss whatever I'll outlast it
Casket is prepared, aint no sparing your life
Quarter-horse with no remorse, this is what real pain feel like
Started in with some multis towards the last line, and switched up the rhyme scheme.

Those are forks, you just mistaked 'em for butcher knifes
You might stab w/'em but they sure don't slice
Hitori Hanzo my mind was made to be the sharpest blade
One slash and the competition Fades

The first 2 lines were... meh.... but you made up for them witht he last 2 lines, "Hitori Hanzo", nice reference.

To Black, I send you back, packin up with Jay-z
Retire or expire neither one really fazes me
Amazes me that you agree to such abuse
Put the white flag down, "there will be no truce"
Not much to say about these lines....

Last words you ever heard spoken before ur untimely demise
5 billion years later and Sun, I'll still Rise
Unlike you,no-head havin Mr. Decapitated
Hand me my belt, the champ has been reinstated
Hot finisher, too bad I'm the champ though ;) lol.

Overall: Not a bad verse but certainly not your best, I expect more out of you, just from battling you myself and seeing you come with fire on top of fire, you never spit a weak verse at me, I expect that everytime you battle.

Holly the Butcher:

magnetic forces, i roll with 2 horses and a carraige
poetic verses kill your sole, your corpes is banished
the walking dead, you left me headless but im possesed
you got no pimp game, you couldnt get head from lettuce
Hot ass 3 line opener, its down hill from there, that lettuce line is HORRIBLE, lettuce doesn't even rhyme well with possesed. You really need to spit your verse out loud after you right it.

you wanna take the belt from the champ, you'll feel a travesty
i got this fucken belt on lock just like chasity
you'll need an autoplasty cuz im tearing out your tissues
you'll need an autopsy, your body burnt from satanic rituals

Once again the travesty and chastity decent, tissues and rituals doesn't work well.

too late to seek spiritual guidance, the violence alredy begun
one slice from the butcher knife and your fucken numb
swing it twice, red rum, you done said your last words
you cant spit on wutangcorp.com, i deleted your user name and password

I'm sensing a pattern here lol.

you've all witnessed the massacre of eric unseen
the 1st and last 1/2 rapper slash 1/2 drag queen
when i smack you it will wake u up just like caffeine
spit bullets, the mics my glock, ill leave you rocked just like a crack pheen

FINALLY SOME HOT CONTENT, this is the only up point from the first 3 bars in the verse, and probably your best lines in the whole verse, you need to come like this all the time, not just 4 lines.

the butcher is serving beef, welcome to my cuisine
killen mc's like eric unseen is my daily routene
i cant be smoke screened, i see right through the fog
i see your camaflauge, ill kill you and your entourage
Decent finisher, nothing extraordinary, but a nice way to end it.

Overall: You were really off point in this battle, I wasn't feeling your verse at all.

Vote = Eric Unseen

PEACE

GreenBee
09-25-2005, 09:45 AM
Fuck It You Two Guys Are Shit,
I Make You Both Fuckin Quit,
A Fuckin Property Retailer,
A Just Outta School Kid,
Stop Setting Up Lines,
Im Sick Of This Bull Shit,
You Lost In The Mist,
You Want Some FUCKIN Fire,
So I Come Smokin Up This,
Entire Thread And Take The Piss,
Out Of Both Of You Halfweight Steez,
Im Half Baked And Its Only Half Three,
Im Fed Up Sitting Here Smokin This Weed,
How The Fuck You Got The Balls Now Please,
With No Kneecaps Youll Be Down On Your Knees,
Who The Fuck You Say Aint Pimpin,
Im Gonna EMP Spike Both Your Machines,
You Wanted A Fire, Might Be One By Your Feet,
Could Be Crawlin In Your Window,
Droppin Mustard Gass While You Sleep,
So Dont Fuckin Be Beefin With Me,
Im A Venemous Fucker You Can Call Me GreenBee,
You Better Trust Me Motherfucker It Aint Nice To Meet Me,
Im The Type Of Person That Was Built For The Street,
If You Wanna Come On Over You'll Get Kilt In The Street,
You Fuckin Worse Than EMO's Poppin Pills In The Street,
So Watch Out, Before I Go Postal, And Make You Move House.



IIght, Shitty Shite Fuckers. Couldnt Fight...

Naw Couldnt Fight Like.

GreenBee
"Puff Puff"


Let The Fuckin Kid Win.

Innocence Vote.

You Won, Are Ya Happy,

Go Do Yo Fuckin Homework.

hollywoodrealty
09-25-2005, 10:48 AM
yo green bee, u gotta stop clogging up the thread, u do this everytime, if u wanna battle someone, call them out on a thread, in here u need to just drop a vote, and tek, u were really hard on me bro, but thats your oppinion, so far its 1-0 in favor of eric unseen, keep voting

hollywoodrealty
09-25-2005, 11:26 AM
votes

TeknicelStylez
09-25-2005, 12:50 PM
Not hard just truthful, there were times where you popped out a hot verse and I was like THATS ILL! But your verse was bad and not up to par with your usual standards so I pointed it out. I don't water things down you know?

hollywoodrealty
09-25-2005, 01:19 PM
haha naw, i get you, that is your input, i know u mean no harm, but this rhyme i wrote is one that flows better when i spit it rather then when u read it, but its all good, your vote always counts, and i appreciate you always keep it real, peace

Visionz
09-25-2005, 06:52 PM
for real Tek, appreciate the input and the vote.peace

Visionz
09-27-2005, 04:03 AM
bump bump

hollywoodrealty
09-27-2005, 06:25 AM
votesssssssss

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-27-2005, 12:52 PM
Votes Needed!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-27-2005, 08:30 PM
Votes Needed

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-28-2005, 02:27 PM
Vote!!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-29-2005, 01:30 PM
Vote Dammit!!!!

Visionz
09-29-2005, 11:23 PM
someone reading this has an opinion, if its you share it, wtf

Robert
09-29-2005, 11:41 PM
Eric got this. For me neither verse really stood out but Hollywood was below his usual high standard. Eric was consistent with the punches, rhymes without being exceptional, I've seen you write better Eric, you defs one of the better emcees in here
peace
vote=eric

Visionz
09-30-2005, 12:02 AM
2-0, thanks for postin a vote.peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-30-2005, 05:36 PM
more votes lets close these battles !!!

hollywoodrealty
10-01-2005, 02:38 PM
votes plzzzzzzzzzzz

Visionz
10-02-2005, 02:29 AM
really, wtf? some one reading this has a brain. I'm sure of it

Visionz
10-02-2005, 10:32 PM
votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hollywoodrealty
10-03-2005, 03:07 AM
votes

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-03-2005, 01:22 PM
VOTING:
-"House Rules"
each vote counted will use the following categories to determine the winner.
flow
wordplay
creativity
vocabulary
punches
as long as you use these categories in your votes they will count.....

-VOTING SYSTEM
3-0=KO(Knock Out)
4-1 or first to 5=TKO (Technical Knock Out)
3-3=when tied then the maximum amount of votes is moved up to 5 the first to 5 votes under this circumstance wins by a Split Decision .....

-NO TIE VOTES!
if you cannot decide who won your vote will not count

No freepostin in any topic unless you're voting......battles that are done will be closed by admin and/or moderators

-RULES
No Sharking
No Feeding
No Recycling
Any Time Limits that are set must be agreed upon by both warriors

Visionz
10-04-2005, 01:12 AM
this is how bush got back into office, fuckin vote

Visionz
10-06-2005, 08:51 PM
2-0, on a battle that's been in here forever,post some mothafuckin votes, wtf

Visionz
10-08-2005, 12:23 AM
great,at this rate of 300 views to get 2 votes this one might be closed out by the time my grandkids graduate......seriously WTF! someone plzzzzzzz vote.

hollywoodrealty
10-08-2005, 04:55 AM
nigga's is hating, im sick and tired of waiting for votes
im like neo from matrix, got 2 gats under my trench coat

Visionz
10-08-2005, 05:00 AM
slicing throats eatin up anything like a billy goat/Lost ya cable, suckas is remote/Bush elected cuz fuckas too lazy to vote/Italian necktie, leave your tounge hangin out ya throat

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-08-2005, 10:26 PM
Vote Dammit!!!

hollywoodrealty
10-09-2005, 07:09 AM
titanic rhymes bring frantic times as i sink your boat
my lightning bolts strike you with a million volts
whatever happened to votes, its like everyone is comatose
wake you up from unconsciousness when my fist hit your nose

Robert
10-09-2005, 07:14 AM
would vote but I already have..........

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-10-2005, 04:55 PM
this is disgusting mutha fuckas are busting while everyone watching aint discussing or dropping a critique not even a vote I wanna slowly slice their throats fucking dopes tripped up and slipped on the soap I said cast a vote!! or be burned like green hotboxed and toked!!! VOTE!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-11-2005, 10:24 PM
Vote

HoLOKost
10-11-2005, 11:05 PM
Yeah eric took this one hollywood what happened u usually come with ferocity but now its verbal diareaha 1

RockD
10-12-2005, 10:29 AM
Eric .... hollywood
flow 7/10...8/10
wordplay6/10...7/10.
creativity6/10...7/10
vocabulary8/10...8/10
punches8/10...7/10

it came down to the flow for me i 'm not really big on punches but eric had tha on lock but i enjoyed holly's flow and wrd play more .

vote=hollywood

Visionz
10-12-2005, 03:42 PM
3-1, props to everyone postin a vote, lets keep 'em coming to close this one out

Visionz
10-12-2005, 04:39 PM
4-1,^thanks for that one,lets keep the votes comin and close this out.peace

Visionz
10-13-2005, 06:29 AM
this battle was finished almost 3 wks ago....somebody post ur votes and help us close this one out.peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-13-2005, 03:13 PM
More Votes!!!

Ballad Ballistik
10-13-2005, 05:28 PM
both came with some game...i felt hollywood came on slow and picked it up late...
i felt unseen started running... on this and crossed the line...
i think if hollywood started with the momentum he finished with..my vote would of been for him
my vote unseen....

Visionz
10-13-2005, 05:38 PM
5-1, it's a wrap, thanks to everyone for postin ya votes. peace