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Xerogravity
09-23-2005, 01:16 AM
ok, i'm posting this thread to see if anybody wanna spar...i have only one request:

NO CURSING

we'll keep it simple: 16 lines...one round...then votes

any challengers?

Sicka than aidZ
09-23-2005, 01:38 AM
fuckin retarded thread!

Visionz
09-23-2005, 04:37 AM
What the fuck did you just say?
Bitch-ass wanna limit by what rules I can play
I break rules the same way I crack backs
The shit happens the first time I step up to bat
That jacket wont save you from cardiac arrest
Besides I got hollow-tips that'll go thru that vest
You try to test the limits thinkin cussing makes up for lack of skill?
Shut ur pussy ass up and swallow this fucking cyanide pill.
You don't have to cuss when you bust
But I'm a bout to bust this nut in ur face
Fuck you dog, how did my kids taste?
Word on the streets, uv got a weak stomach for vulgarity
Well I win verses w/ no cussin on a regularity
But don't tell me what the fuck I can't do
For I purposly scorch this beef stew I brew.....peace

TeknicelStylez
09-23-2005, 07:07 AM
NA I like that, thats good mang, iight if I got time later we'll do that.

Visionz
09-23-2005, 07:15 AM
I wasn't trying to battle ol' boy on that one just fuckin' with him for requesting it, I rarely if ever cuss in my rhymes anyways, except for the heavy emphasis. guess I just don't like people telling me what I can't do, lol. peace

Locust
09-23-2005, 03:28 PM
he wasn't telling you what to do^
and this is a good idea, cursing too much is wack

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09-23-2005, 03:44 PM
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Xerogravity
09-24-2005, 05:19 PM
NA I like that, thats good mang, iight if I got time later we'll do that.
aight yo, sounds coo...you want me to drop first, or do you wanna go?

holla

Xerogravity
09-24-2005, 05:30 PM
I wasn't trying to battle ol' boy on that one just fuckin' with him for requesting it, I rarely if ever cuss in my rhymes anyways, except for the heavy emphasis. guess I just don't like people telling me what I can't do, lol. peace
you dropped weakness
in mesage boards
to damage my mental?
eric unseen
couldn't keep the
attention
of a #2 pencil
i stencil words
repeated from
higher sources
not publications fool
travel on different courses
of course this
small contribution
sounds lame
from your perspective
my prime directive
spans beyond
receiving props
from message battles
to empty stages
it's outrageous
how a punk
like you
detests authority
[your]words is boring me
ignoring me
is out of the question
what the heck
i'm out
Tek Styles
start the
next session...

martyr
09-24-2005, 06:16 PM
no cursing? you sound like a converted hoe nursing
your flow worsens as you keep versing with broke wording
trying to be intellectual, divise a scheme, disect your soul
your mind is weak and text is dull, die and leave, forget your goals

of trying to be a writer and a silent freedom fighter
stop trying to be like me, you're dying to complete a cipher
your peeing puddles into your man's hands, it's no fallacy
your knees'll buckle, cause you can't stand with no gravity

Visionz
09-25-2005, 12:56 AM
noise pollution
sollution?
flip switch and rip
swing swords
can you afford
to be
head(less)?
29 but still
young and restless?
Walkin out here vestless,
Do u know who u're messin with?
The mind expands
beyond galaxies
Mess me up?
Pure fallacy
Normalacy
For you to judge
Then shove
But the image don't fit
Like OJ's glove
Acquit
But you submit
To push box buttons
I'm struttin'
You extra sweet like
chocolate muffins
Say something or
Say nothin
But you don't know me
So stop frontin,
Those aren't lines
Those are just words
But I'll ink jet
your style
And turn nouns
Into verbs
Actions observed
Plain and simple
Simply plain
Xerogravity
because you hold no weight
While I simply dont hesitate
To anihilate
Get it straight.

Xerogravity
09-25-2005, 02:19 AM
is that
the best you got
oh i forgot
that you
eric
the unseen
like your career
ended before
ya started
retarded
dialects
you spit
and expect
me to buckle
under pressure
from a lesser
contester?
that's almost funny
but not even
my shadow laughs
when my backdraft
of epitaphs
leaves ya dull
like needles
on phonographs
and photograph
the moment
minus the kodak
get off the bozak
jock rider
i bust back
and snap
between ya eyes
like pebbles
drop giants
in the arena
with an 835
as my weapon of choice
and amplify
the voice
that speaks
complicated with
clarity
and verily
tearing the
wool off
ya eyes
to reveal
this wolf in disguise

Visionz
09-25-2005, 03:59 AM
Xerogravity said:Omnipotent/yet unseen.........I know you understand the power of things that remain unseen. Besides man if you're going to build off the name don't go with the first instinct on that one because you'll say the same shit that everyone else already has, which really isn't impressive. But you got some pretty tight flow, so respect. I was just fuckin around when I wrote those earlier post but if you're still sour, just make a thread and we can battle. I'm not going to sit here going back and forth like where this shit^was headed(and besides none of this shit is personal here on my part) peace

TeknicelStylez
09-25-2005, 05:59 AM
its called bar format, use it.

Xerogravity
09-25-2005, 12:09 PM
Xerogravity said:Omnipotent/yet unseen.........I know you understand the power of things that remain unseen. Besides man if you're going to build off the name don't go with the first instinct on that one because you'll say the same shit that everyone else already has, which really isn't impressive. But you got some pretty tight flow, so respect. I was just fuckin around when I wrote those earlier post but if you're still sour, just make a thread and we can battle. I'm not going to sit here going back and forth like where this shit^was headed(and besides none of this shit is personal here on my part) peace

yo, respect to you as well...i know none of this is personal, just a chance to flex...shoot, can't take any of this personal, whether it seems that way or not, because we all trying to sharpen skills, y'know? peace.

Man @ Armz
09-25-2005, 11:42 PM
running rhymes without gravity and frictionless
boondock pa's beatin daughter toothless
rugged raw and ruthless
jabbin dead cadavours with toothpicks
ya useless
i need proof kid
somethin i can use kid
a higher entaty sipin on juice kid
deep breath then i lose it
speed through shoeless
left dumb utter clueless
im foolish when i do this
run up and shot kids
for actin so stupid
take this knowledge and hoop it
im through kid

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-26-2005, 06:37 PM
Votes Needed

tha god concept
09-26-2005, 06:40 PM
i was feelin unseens shit a little more , good battle tho


vote - eric unseen peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-26-2005, 06:42 PM
1 vote for eric

TeknicelStylez
09-26-2005, 07:01 PM
The format of both verses was pretty annoying to read, but overall Eric took the win. He had better Punches and Word Play.

For you to judge
Then shove
But the image don't fit
Like OJ's glove
AcquitThose are some hot lines.

Ballad Ballistik
09-26-2005, 08:08 PM
funny stuff about the cussin bit and the small type had me whispering the words...
all funny...the fact that eric came back in xero format and nudged him up ...is why eric gets my votes

Undead Ninja
09-26-2005, 11:15 PM
This was a no brainer Xerogravity won this battle his rhymes made more sense and hit the guy with more blows!

Eric Unseen did have some hot rhymes but they didn't throw blows to hit Xerogravity effectively.

Its just comman sense Xerogravity won this

Eric said something like "I'll bust a nut in your face"

"Taste my kids"

his rhymes need work and so do Xerogravity's but anyone can tell that Xerogravity is just on a higher level!

Visionz
09-27-2005, 12:17 AM
thanks to everyone for votin......ninja don't think either one of these verses represent my style......I suggest you read any of my other battles or verses (I have many) cuz you don't know about the level I'm on, but thanks for votin regardless peace

hollywoodrealty
09-27-2005, 12:22 AM
ya for sure eric got this, no question, rugged and raw, vote eric

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-27-2005, 01:24 PM
4 votes for eric 1 for xero

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-27-2005, 09:29 PM
More votes needed

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-28-2005, 03:26 PM
Votes!!!

Luther Large
09-28-2005, 06:20 PM
i wasnt really feelin erics 1st verse at all.........he came really strong it was probly the best of all 4...........but gravity was more consistent and came through with 2 pretty strong verse.......


my vote=xerogravity

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-28-2005, 07:07 PM
4 to 2 eric is leading more votes!!

Xerogravity
09-28-2005, 09:30 PM
This was a no brainer Xerogravity won this battle his rhymes made more sense and hit the guy with more blows!

Eric Unseen did have some hot rhymes but they didn't throw blows to hit Xerogravity effectively.

Its just comman sense Xerogravity won this

Eric said something like "I'll bust a nut in your face"

"Taste my kids"

his rhymes need work and so do Xerogravity's but anyone can tell that Xerogravity is just on a higher level!

thanks Ninja

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-29-2005, 02:34 PM
more votes

Visionz
09-30-2005, 12:22 AM
bump

Robert
09-30-2005, 01:29 AM
I reckon Xero won this battle, liked his second verse the best, I thought he was better with the rhymes and flow, only thing i'd critique is the way you write your verse man, cut that out
vote=Xero

Visionz
09-30-2005, 01:39 AM
4-3, thanks for postin the votes.peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-30-2005, 06:37 PM
more votes

Xerogravity
09-30-2005, 08:56 PM
I reckon Xero won this battle, liked his second verse the best, I thought he was better with the rhymes and flow, only thing i'd critique is the way you write your verse man, cut that out
vote=Xero

does my
typing
pattern really
bug
you
that much?

ha ha...juss poking
humor
on you.

peace

Visionz
10-01-2005, 10:50 PM
bump, bump

Visionz
10-02-2005, 11:33 PM
if u got an oppinion then share it.vote

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-03-2005, 02:38 PM
as of Oct. 1st all votes must use the House Rules to count

VOTING:
-"House Rules"
each vote counted will use the following categories to determine the winner.
flow
wordplay
creativity
vocabulary
punches
as long as you use these categories in your votes they will count.....

-VOTING SYSTEM
3-0=KO(Knock Out)
4-1 or first to 5=TKO (Technical Knock Out)
3-3=when tied then the maximum amount of votes is moved up to 5 the first to 5 votes under this circumstance wins by a Split Decision .....

-NO TIE VOTES!
if you cannot decide who won your vote will not count

No freepostin in any topic unless you're voting......battles that are done will be closed by admin and/or moderators

-RULES
No Sharking
No Feeding
No Recycling
Any Time Limits that are set must be agreed upon by both warriors

Visionz
10-06-2005, 09:54 PM
4-3, lets get some votes in here to close this one out.cmon yall' this one is an old battle

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-10-2005, 07:20 PM
Vote Dammit!!!

Potent1
10-10-2005, 07:30 PM
Eric - funny ish dude...


flow - 9
wordplay - 8
creativity - 8
vocabulary -8
punches - 9

Xeno -

flow - 8
wordplay - 9
creativity - 8
vocabulary - 7
punches - 8


Vote = Eric Unseen