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tha ZZA
06-16-2005, 06:37 PM
maintain pure awareness of self
as the embodiement of primordial wisdom
apart from mental imprints you dont even exist
my primordial purity is ineffible and inconcievable
wich means that you cant see this
supreme child with inconcievable vision
and you fall victim to the first ilnesses
caused by an imbalance of the five elements
originally bodies lost there light when i write
thus the sun and moon appearedj and unite
i elevate my current state and rise above like a lotus in the mud
my total bliss of self perfection equally limits your ryme invention

06-17-2005, 02:02 AM
Nice try, it seems for a bit you were forcing the rhymes "inconceivable" and "primodial" but it was okay!!!!!!!!!!!! Watch your context also!!!!!!!!!!