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SurreaL
06-17-2005, 04:42 AM
First and foremost,
The Diamond in the dirt.
Shine bright light,
like a thousand year sleep out of sight.
lift son of man from the coffin,
he get out coughin,
You vampire mother fuck's aint biting me,
you have to be on this cult shit,
before you start reciting me.
Divide in three,
triple the mind thought, I travel tremendous,
tragic loss's, I reign supreme to defend this,
Live to contend this, and I leave you in forensic's,
Biblical refrence, I stand before you in the presence.
I rain horror sorrow arrow's, that peirce the heart's of men,
do blind willing justice, repent the blight of sin.
knowlegeable factor's, cause eviormental disasters,
this meltdown reactor, impact's like a tractor.
trailing through the sun, million degree hell fury,
The spectacular highest stature, the court without a jury.
Black berreta banging, wu tang toung slanging.
snatch your flag, snatch your soul, snatch your wrist,
and shakkle your mind, this rhyme, redesign's the sign,
to heal the deaf, dumb and blind.


^^

Im a lil high, never really tried a style like that before, tell me what you think, peace.

GuardianOne
06-17-2005, 06:10 AM
We don't really want to know if you're high or not!!!!!
It seemed as if you wanted to progress on the lyrics ,but the you came back sought of holding back your context. If you can improve on that it would be different (you can be high or not). It seemed as if you were trying to say something but not really!!!!!!!!! Correct me if iam wrong?

Peace

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 06:19 AM
tsk tsk tsk......
your not that smooth!

"Divide In Three, Tripple The Mind Thought"

now lets see, lol, u can divide 6 by 3, hmm so it would be 6, no?, then tripple it, hmm 666?
im tellin you im master of this...many dont recognize that shit in mine...but i found yours...
...GET OFF THAT REEFER....there's nothing there.....don't let it grab you yo

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 06:35 AM
Refrase, My mind was divided into 3, 3 mind's = triple the mind thought.
*Edit - If you care to read what it say's, the line say's divide in three, not divide by three, read please before you spit. peace

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 06:39 AM
And to guardianone, I don't do this style to often, and I dont think I will, just doesn't really connect to many on a certain lvl, just too much jibberish the way I look at it, people get confused, ask what this and that mean's, it take's the fun out of writing it. peace.

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 06:47 AM
Refrase, My mind was divided into 3, 3 mind's = triple the mind thought.
*Edit - If you care to read what it say's, the line say's divide in three, not divide by three, read please before you spit. peace lol man..take your advise and THINK b4 you TALK, your the high one now...
ok so its a statement, divide in 3, so what.....lol....same thing..hahaha

and what 3 places was your mind..i dont get it? i dont understand that whole thing u wrote?.....stop doing so much drugs...gots u thinkin your tuff shit..

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 07:22 AM
Man shut the fuck up, I was high 5 hours ago, and for you're information, when I battled you I was high, when I rap, im usally high, and guess what, when I graduated high school *SHOCK* yeah I was high, and it's not 3 place's of mind, it mean's im 3 time's smarter, doesn't take a fucking genius to see that, stop being a dick, and im being nice right now, you should be seeing that.

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 08:53 AM
so what u liek proud for being high...i can care less...and no it doesnt take a genius to understand what u wrote...it would take a dipshit to write it, all ican see is that u think your god, when in reality u need god for killin all your braincells yo...wake up, your being a dips....enjoy saying whatever, cause i made my point....hahaha drop it SL i dont care

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 09:58 AM
Man, 1st, I don't think im god never did try to give the impression, 2nd you're a whack emcee, 3rd, go back to school, cause you can't spell or make sense for shit kid, no wonder no one like's you and rip's a hole in you're ass everytime you're around, you're sig's suck ball's, no one's going to hire a kid that can't spell and make's sig's on the net, you're a fool's tool, you cry cause you lost in a battle, grow the fuck up, and me acting tuff?, you said face to face you would make sicka look like a bitch, guess what buddy?, you're only 17 fucking year's old, sicka's 25, grow the fuck up and stop being a net gangster, stop beefing with everyone, if you're this bad with people in real life I could understand you're anger, I think you might need help or someone to talk to, you seem like a pretty mad child, hahahahaha

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:02 AM
you know what, if i cared for anything u said, u would think i would post back with a bunch of shit, ok i post back wtf u got to say now? lmao..this shits whack...

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 10:04 AM
Man I don't care if you listen or not, I know you read it all word for word, I know that shit for a fact, you read what I had to say, now im done with you, nothing more to say.

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:10 AM
do i care? huh answer me u lil pussy, do i care? huh.....your such a dickrider...tryin to put me down? try to look at my god, my god that forgives everyone, and say that shit.....u think he would care?

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:14 AM
First and foremost,
The Diamond in the dirt.
Shine bright light,
like a thousand year sleep out of sight.
lift son of man from the coffin,
he get out coughin,
You vampire mother fuck's aint biting me,
you have to be on this cult shit,
before you start reciting me.
Divide in three,
triple the mind thought, I travel tremendous,
tragic loss's, I reign supreme to defend this,
Live to contend this, and I leave you in forensic's,
Biblical refrence, I stand before you in the presence.
I rain horror sorrow arrow's, that peirce the heart's of men,
do blind willing justice, repent the blight of sin.
knowlegeable factor's, cause eviormental disasters,
this meltdown reactor, impact's like a tractor.
trailing through the sun, million degree hell fury,
The spectacular highest stature, the court without a jury.
Black berreta banging, wu tang toung slanging.
snatch your flag, snatch your soul, snatch your wrist,
and shakkle your mind, this rhyme, redesign's the sign,
to heal the deaf, dumb and blind.


^^

Im a lil high, never really tried a style like that before, tell me what you think, peace.
its fuckin trash.....wtf are u saying..explain your fuckin self...what ? wtf was taht shit? fuckin whack thats what i say....strait whack...im sorry..u sound like a confused lil pothead....go get soem pussy let out some frustration

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 10:18 AM
Man shut the fuck up, If calling you a little beef bitch cause you cry that no one like's you and jump to conclusion's that everyone is " hating " on you is considerd dick riding, you have a serious problem, look back on all the post's you've made and look how ignorant you've been, you need a firm kick in the ass kid,

do i care? huh answer me u lil pussy, do i care? huh.....your such a dickrider...tryin to put me down? try to look at my god, my god that forgives everyone, and say that shit.....u think he would care?

awwwww muffin, you getting upset? here...

http://www.alibaba.com/photo/10591244/Tissue_Box.jpg

I don't give a fuck, what you think to be honest, about you're god's, whatever the fuck you're trying to mumble, really, I don't give a fuck, this is about you being a dick to everyone, seriously, grow the fuck up and stop being a fucking prick, learn some respect.

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:19 AM
blow me...whats u gonna do about it? huh tell me that....i dont NEED SHIT from no one.....i just have no patience....fuck being mad....i dun have the time to be mad..cause all u pussys are just frontin away..thinkin u are doing damage? pfft please.....shove your keyboard up your ass cause u dont know what your saying

and yeh i might be a lil schitz....ya know a lil crazy....but thats ok...you can deal with it.....your just like all the other fucks on this board..or wanting to be...wanting to get in some1's head so u can amke them feel miserable like you...hahah i already know you.....u have no reason to be happy with your bullshit...u get what u put in....u keep actin like your fuckin funny? you'll see....and you wont like it

EDIT: SONNED! LMAO

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 10:25 AM
hahah trash huh?

let me take you down memory lane 3 hours ago

your play with words and ya rhymes are spoken for
just ask the girl on 6th steet screamin, "IM A WHORE"!
weak punchlines plus no skill, equals the phrase "i'll verbaly kill you Skale"
chain smoker, so what? i got nothing better to do except destroy my lungs
stick to the facts, your whole styles whack, your jokes are jokes, that's exact
crack, who u r to claim, when i 'rock' the mic, your exposed, fake its-snot cocaine
your lame, another dickride screamin fuck fortune and fame, oh well, guess u beat me to the 'game'
you couldnt see my mental plain, even if i stuck u in a 747 with binoculars, ah who gives a flying fuck...
that punchline killed u anyways...
your white? not even u act, u type with a slang or accent of a black, u understand? iight?
go back two lines, i just took you a self recognizing flight, don't get offended...
...about the punchline one line before this rhyme
im a lyrical acrobat, and well your shrap, one mans garbage is another tresure, to me your just trash

now thats some fucking trash, here let me also add what other's think bout you're rhyme's.......

Surreal, he had some tight lines, but what made me for him over I-Legit is that Legit is hypocrytical, read the "rules" ya put.

good job legit, your getting better...i was just joking man about u getting better,vote:SL, he actually is good an is always getting better
peace, U suck legit

now you edit your ish, i can see sum more of the rhymes, but still don't think it flow clean. You have to think that for writtens the reader can't hear the flow you got in your head so that's how you gotta write. But I ain't hatin, and battlin's a lot bout put downs, so they cool from SL.
now if you still gon be whinin bout me bein a hater cuz i didn't vote for you, i just got a finger ta show you.
IF NOT, then we cool, so Peace, good battle both of ya'll

wird to 20 lines..i dont usually do this text shit..but i'm bored as fuck with a headache..so my mic prowess aint 100% for tryna record this joint i wanna drop tonight..so imma eat this kid real quick..- aimed toward's YOU!!

SurreaL took it by far... your last verse ain't even rhyme ilegit. And

robot's and shit, man, you are verbaly whack,
this verbal attack can kill you, and that's a matter of fact.

But you a waste of time, and you are wasting mine,
I feel bad dissing you, look, your another wasted line,
your skill's are a waste of rhyme, you seein the sign?
You a bitch MC, this verbal rape should be a crime.

yeah, that took it....

vote: SurreaL

haha, that was 1 battle, i've battled you 3 time's and won everytime, and everytime you would write a whack ass story, you ain't good, you're a chump emcee, eat my shit, and why do you complain everytime someone say's somthing in response to what you said, you can dish it out but can't take it back?, you're a sad excuse for a man, boy. Im done with you're pathetic ass, get a life, and stop being such a critDICK!!!!!!

P.S - you's a funny kid, go get soem pussy let out some frustration

bahahahahahahahaabahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah ahahahahahahahahaha, oh man you're fucking stupid, arn't you the kid who said he get's bitch's all the time, and old mom's and shit, but it turn's out you let the secret of being a 17 year old Virgin on metical, that's funny, I get pussy all the time, I have a steady job, a steady life and here i'll bold it A steady girlfriend to let you know, we've been dating for over 3 year's, live together, and I for one, damn sure get's pussy every night, so im not the one frustrated, pee-wee, haha, you a stupid mother fucker

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:32 AM
hahah i had some tight punchlines in there.. i love that piece...cause it was ALL TRUE..not liek u imaging all these wierd 3 place u do with your rhymes and mind..or whatever.....and plus..why post that? that wasnt a battle verse torse you? why u gettin envolved with other shit? see a dickrider...just like i knew.....dumbshit..go to hell and drop it..u cant win...never will..cause all your doing is tryin to find ways to put me down...c'mon your smarter then that..or that pot gots some circuts screwing up in there or some shit like that....cause what u saying? huh.....say it without tryin to put me down...if so now u see why i act the way i do on the net.....cause all your doing is showing me my shit..what? u think im stupid...what? lol u wanna see some others positives and try to put em down? make em negative? dude your relly arguing over nothing....hahah really...what else you got to say about me.....huh....what else..let it out....i think u need a tissue....

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:37 AM
i want this to be a classic moment...all SL is doing is talkin shit about my rhymes and tossin shit in my face...what a lil bitch..he cant even make a point

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 10:39 AM
You're.....absolutely......pathetic, learn how to spell dumbshit, and no matter what you say, you're still a dumbass and I alway's have the upper hand and you ain't got shit on me, so have fun talking to yourself, I bet you and the man in the mirror have gotten pretty close in the last couple year's, A tissue.... for me.... hahahahaha, man I might need one from laughing so hard a you're chump ass, man I don't want to even have you're name in my thread's, nothing to do with you, (actually I'm kinda embarressed to be talking to you!), so anyway's, have a good fucking life, and try not to kill yourself!! (ps I was being sarcastic, cut along the highway, not across!) now im done, oh and btw, I may smoke weed, but guess what......... Im still smarter then you, hahaha, ain't that a bitch?, bitch.


Oh and I made my point a long.... long time ago, why you think so many ppl don't take you're shit kid, cause I told them not to, cause you ain't shit.

im done, MADE MY MOTHER FUCKING POINT.

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:45 AM
ok man i know it all...the thing is..u cant point the finger at me....without pointing it torse yourself first...its all you..u cant flip shit....

' im embarrased talkin to', i would figure so cause your so fuckin stupid....
'learn to spell' wtf was that? really what u tryin to do? shut up with that comical elementry shit....for real.....make a point......fuck it how i fuckin spell, type whatever....it doesnt matter does it? lol........man i can type....FYI im tired been up all night..its fuckin 8:38am.....and well u got sonned.....peace Sw33t Slut and go talk so more shit to yourself in ya mind in 3 different fuckin mind states for all i care..im out....

I-Legit
06-17-2005, 10:47 AM
You're.....absolutely......pathetic, learn how to spell dumbshit, and no matter what you say, you're still a dumbass and I alway's have the upper hand and you ain't got shit on me, so have fun talking to yourself, I bet you and the man in the mirror have gotten pretty close in the last couple year's, A tissue.... for me.... hahahahaha, man I might need one from laughing so hard a you're chump ass, man I don't want to even have you're name in my thread's, nothing to do with you, (actually I'm kinda embarressed to be talking to you!), so anyway's, have a good fucking life, and try not to kill yourself!! (ps I was being sarcastic, cut along the highway, not across!) now im done, oh and btw, I may smoke weed, but guess what......... Im still smarter then you, hahaha, ain't that a bitch?, bitch.


Oh and I made my point a long.... long time ago, why you think so many ppl don't take you're shit kid, cause I told them not to, cause you ain't shit.

im done, MADE MY MOTHER FUCKING POINT. what? who cares..not me...as long they dont like me..and all i have to do is keep lettin em see themselves and follow my footsteps on what i say....im the better and stronger person...pffft....your weak

lol and only in a country where MJ can get away with pedophilia can u say you possibly have any power over me

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 10:51 AM
haha I got sonned?, ok let me try to show you're dumb fucking brain what i've been trying to say in 5 quick word's........ YOU'RE A DUMB FUCKING ASSHOLE!, you are so ignorant to other people it's not even funny, comical shit about you not being able to spell, it's not comical, it's down right fucking sad, you're saying im a dumbass with all the pot I smoke?, dude, you can't even make a proper sentence, you're a fucking idiot man, you can't understand the point I was trying to make, kid I made it clear within the past 3 page's, you're a dick, no one like's you, grow up, stop beefin, if you can't get the message, then maybe not being able to spell is you're only problem.

SurreaL
06-17-2005, 10:56 AM
Man you're fucking retarded, ok enough with you're stupid ass, get the point, I don't think anyone would want to follow in you're footstep's, then we would have a world of un-employed loser's who sit in there room all day making sig's and criticizing other's, you're a 17 year old little punk that need's a good ass kicking, now im really done with you, you're a waste of time.

kell16
06-17-2005, 11:41 AM
tsk tsk tsk......
your not that smooth!

"Divide In Three, Tripple The Mind Thought"

now lets see, lol, u can divide 6 by 3, hmm so it would be 6, no?, then tripple it, hmm 666?
im tellin you im master of this...many dont recognize that shit in mine...but i found yours...
...GET OFF THAT REEFER....there's nothing there.....don't let it grab you yo
why this cat netridin you???

SHRAP
06-17-2005, 10:25 PM
holy fuck 7th, and u wonder why people dont fuckin like you. u just started beef with somebody who done nothin but be respectful to you. if i recall correctly u doin that to so many people is what caused me to start dissin you in the first place. fucking shit, go get a hooker or something

GuardianOne
06-18-2005, 04:19 AM
"A discussion of which has been spoken before, people will test what stand for, but simply in society just cannot have a normal stance, although they may not know the real history and understand, yet should not be troubled, if bothered ones bound to have some regrets, and can't accept, cause of a age old stereo type mind, many have their own explanations, but everyone should remain with them, social as with nature, and amongst of all things subjected to other ways, each adopt with gracing harmony".