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Visionz
09-29-2005, 05:03 PM
2 verses---5 votes to win it

Visionz
09-29-2005, 05:05 PM
In a battle call this is poison like an overdose on alcohol
I just handed you 2 litres of liquor and you swallowed it all,
Not to say that it doesn't take balls, but it's called suicide if death's invovled.
Go solve a rubix cube, you'd have an easier time,
My mind remains complex like gods infinite design
You'll never catch up, like Flintstones to a porsche
I'll pass your ass waving, absolutely no remorse
My dirty flows leave you mud covered looking for a waterhose
Like a all-nude strip joint, all hoes get exposed
Humilate ur ass, now reach over & touch ur toes
I speak more wisdom in two good coughs
Your game comes up short like the barrel of a sawed-off
Yet still I shoot at point-blank range, get inside you like a hacked mainframe
You tried to rid yourself but the virus maintains,
Just like you, it remains with no brains
Really ashamed that I couldn't extend your life
The true assassin grant you a pass'inTo a brand new life
The blade is hungry, I came to feed my knife
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Visionz
09-29-2005, 05:07 PM
this is actually a continuation from a battle started earlier, this one is LL's verse

the open call/be eric unseens downfall/grab the mic and loosen my jaw/this mc be gettin quickly mauled/instead of droppin like drunks you better off gettin to flowin holmes/or get goin home/i strike the bones with a dosage of potent poems str8 off the dome/ya'll quickly get snatched like purses/doomed like curses/and burnt like churches/when ya'll get hurdled with verses/this faggots just plain dull not even mean/wouldnt shine in the commercial world not to mention the mainstream//and it's only erics lyrics that aint neva been seen/an overdose of liquor thats all that you got?/well i got twenty shots of methane ready to blow your spot/this cats ryhmes are so weak they come undone quicker than pearms/i'm sicka than germs/this battle wasnt hard but it's easily earned/i come off harder than sperm/i throw 15 rounds at your chest just to give you heartburn/
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Visionz
09-29-2005, 05:09 PM
this here is my 2nd verse

Luther Large gets detonated I just release the charge
And watch the C4 rip you like pitbulls from a junkyard
No suspense when you hopped the fence
Like Bruce Lee I swing with intense fist to quickly despense
Wack emcees who lines dont make no sense
Commerical and mainstream is the same thing
You belong to both of 'em with those fairy wings
Fruit cake trying to lift heavy weights
Had scoliosis, till I cracked your back straight
Decimate and dominate, like the Bulls in 98
You on the court is just fodder to anilihate
Aids in africa, this is evil intentions to new dimensions
Leave your whole tribe for dead with no inhibitions
Kinda like when you were drunk and your faggot man turned you to a punk
Lookin like Marcelis, just without the cuffs,
LL's in love with rednecks who like to get rough.
I'm the lion in the jungle, LL just a lil' pussy cat
I'll leave your ribs cracked with a baseball bat
Chest wheezin like you havin troublin breathin
Next time kick a rhyme that ain't so self-deceivin
You takin me is a lie you shouldn't be believin
Leads to these brutal beat downs u be receivin
That'll leave your mind changed like seasons

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-29-2005, 05:27 PM
LL ya up!!

Luther Large
09-29-2005, 06:03 PM
after this your body will be nothin but evidence/this evil resident/proven testaments/by snatchin necklaces/L cannot be knocked from the top/the only way eric smokes me is if i were a crack rock/your not even a rapper jack just a chatter box/and chatter boxes take nothin but agid losses/stay mad cautious/i'm sick of this fag talkin/naggin and still braggin about the battles that he aint even havin/this kid here is to lame/if hip hop were a bitch then you a man with no game/battlelin L is like gun fightin the man with no name/watch how this pro change/your lyrics are so lame/you couldnt write a mean verse if you did it while in pain/this is just an all out war luther be the only surviver/the only time eric spits hot is when he boils saliva/i stab darts in erics cadaver/do the math i stash i'm insane that's a certainty/crazy like a mad hatter gettin high off of mercury/get it i cant be killed/you put it on to get blown up like a kilt/and curdled like milk/no rappers can stop me i practice on hurdelin hills/

i just want to explain the mad hatter mercury line if you dont know what it meant........

hatters back a long time ago used mercury to line hats....and inhaling it made them go crazy........where do you think the alic in wonderland character came from???

^^you might of already knew that but........if you didnt there it is

arite good battle eric.........lets get votes.....peace.......and good luck

Luther Large
09-30-2005, 05:24 AM
VOTES!!!!....please

Luther Large
09-30-2005, 09:15 AM
Vote!!!!

Visionz
09-30-2005, 04:48 PM
someone has an opinion,. is it you?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-30-2005, 06:01 PM
Vote !!!

Luther Large
09-30-2005, 07:10 PM
Vote!!!!!!!

Butter
09-30-2005, 07:15 PM
Vote - Eric.

neither had really any hard punches, eric's had better structure, better punches. Luther's had nice multies but i felt he didnt really personally insult his opponent.

peace.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-30-2005, 08:06 PM
1-eric
0-LL
Keep Voting!1

TeknicelStylez
09-30-2005, 08:39 PM
Yo this was an Ill battle, Luther came fuckin destructive packed with multis to the teeth and heavy punches.

This line was real ill.

/if hip hop were a bitch then you a man with no game/battlelin L is like gun fightin the man with no name/watch how this pro change/

Got the wild west referances

And this is the punch that knocked eric out

/this is just an all out war luther be the only surviver/the only time eric spits hot is when he boils saliva/

Vote = Luther. Good battle peace..

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-30-2005, 08:48 PM
1-eric
1-LL

More Votes

Ballad Ballistik
09-30-2005, 09:07 PM
I Felt Ll Brought It From The Street ....
And Keep It Real....
Eric...responded So Damn Tightly...
This Is Tuff..eric I Like your Style....
Your Game Was On....no Doubt About It..
But Im From The Street .. And I Felt Ll....
Sorry Man...1 vote to LL...
This Is A Tough One For Me....
Damn It....

Luther Large
10-01-2005, 10:00 AM
2-1 me...i think........

VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!

Luther Large
10-01-2005, 06:54 PM
vote

Luther Large
10-02-2005, 06:24 AM
102 viewers and only 3 overall votes.......help us out ya'll........please

VOTE!!!!!

Xerogravity
10-02-2005, 06:54 AM
hmmmm, well honestly: both eric and LL's first round verses were ok...it's the second round that REALLY heated things up, and i feel that LL brought it just a slight notch higher than Eric.

good job to both y'all
my vote: Luther Large

Visionz
10-02-2005, 06:34 PM
thanks for postin yalls vote. i'm down 3-1

Luther Large
10-03-2005, 11:40 AM
votes???

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-03-2005, 01:18 PM
so far its 1-1 xeros vote does not count unless he uses the House Rules


VOTING:
-"House Rules"
each vote counted will use the following categories to determine the winner.
flow
wordplay
creativity
vocabulary
punches
as long as you use these categories in your votes they will count.....

-VOTING SYSTEM
3-0=KO(Knock Out)
4-1 or first to 5=TKO (Technical Knock Out)
3-3=when tied then the maximum amount of votes is moved up to 5 the first to 5 votes under this circumstance wins by a Split Decision .....

-NO TIE VOTES!
if you cannot decide who won your vote will not count

No freepostin in any topic unless you're voting......battles that are done will be closed by admin and/or moderators

-RULES
No Sharking
No Feeding
No Recycling
Any Time Limits that are set must be agreed upon by both warriors

Visionz
10-04-2005, 04:46 AM
voting helps

deuce Lo
10-04-2005, 07:50 PM
eric unseen LL
flow 9/10 flow 8/10 unseen
creativity 8/10 creativity9/10
rhymes 9/10 rhymes9/10
punches 8/10 punches8/10
vocab 9/10 vocab8/10

as you can see by the stats,my vote goes to eric

tha god concept
10-05-2005, 08:26 AM
eric --- LL
flow 4/5 flow 5/5

ceativity 4/5 creativity 4/5

vocab 3/5 vocab 4/5

werdplay 3/5 wrdply 4/5

punches 4/5 punches 4/5

really close battle guys , 1 of the best battles ive sene on here i thynk

vote - LL

Visionz
10-06-2005, 08:47 PM
2 up, votes need to close this one out.

Luther Large
10-10-2005, 05:04 AM
vote ya'll

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-10-2005, 04:05 PM
Vote Dammit!!!

Robert
10-11-2005, 01:35 AM
LL
flow-9/10
wordplay-8/10
creativity-8/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches-8/10

Eric
flow-8/10
wordplay-7/10
creativity-7/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches-7/10

LL 80% , Eric 72%
Dope verses, particularly LL
Vote=LL
peace

Visionz
10-11-2005, 07:11 AM
down 2-3, thanks to those posting ya votes....help close this one out

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-11-2005, 11:59 AM
LL-3
eric-2
keep voting

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 05:57 PM
votes pleeeeez

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 10:45 AM
Votes!

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 02:40 PM
Votes!

how about some votes ya'll?

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 04:36 PM
tied 3-3 any1 else

VOTING?!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-13-2005, 03:31 PM
More Votes!!!!!

Luther Large
10-13-2005, 04:56 PM
this is really annoyin

300 viewers and only 6 votes

"hey man i got these cheeseburgers man just vote and i'll suck yo dick"-M2S


VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Luther Large
10-13-2005, 05:42 PM
this is really annoyin

300 viewers and only 6 votes

"hey man i got these cheeseburgers man just vote and i'll suck yo dick"-M2S


VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Luther Large
10-13-2005, 06:15 PM
VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VOTE!!!!!!!!!

Luther Large
10-13-2005, 06:48 PM
VOTE!!!!!!!!!VOTE!!!!!!!!!

Luther Large
10-13-2005, 07:02 PM
VOTE!!!!!!!!!
VOTE!!!!!

Luther Large
10-13-2005, 07:23 PM
it's 4-3 in my favor can sum1 pleeeeeeeees drop a vote and help get this over with

Grim Reapa
10-13-2005, 07:46 PM
close battle

imma have to go with LL cuz his punches were hotter but dope verses from both really close battle 1

Hollow Dartz
10-13-2005, 07:48 PM
ok im feelin LL right here, he has nice delivery, unsceen shit was nice too though i cant hate.

after this your body will be nothin but evidence/this evil resident/proven testaments/by snatchin necklaces

that shit was hot

Visionz
10-13-2005, 09:31 PM
LL got this one, nice battle homie.peace

RAWHYDE
10-13-2005, 10:23 PM
v/ Luther Large

Eric's first verse was dope, but the second verse needs work. There were some nice shots at Luther, but more misses than anything, much like Luthers first verse. That is why I voted on the best two Eric's first Luthers last. check it.

Eric Unseen
In a battle call this is poison like an overdose on alcohol
I just handed you 2 litres of liquor and you swallowed it all,
Not to say that it doesn't take balls, but it's called suicide if death's invovled.
^^^ Almost eybrow raising
Go solve a rubix cube, you'd have an easier time,
My mind remains complex like gods infinite design
^^^ Nice flow, it's GOD's still good description
You'll never catch up, like Flintstones to a porsche
I'll pass your ass waving, absolutely no remorse
^^^^This was a stretch and pretty basic
My dirty flows leave you mud covered looking for a waterhose
Like a all-nude strip joint, all hoes get exposed
Humilate ur ass, now reach over & touch ur toes
^^^^This was gay, don't get offended just being honest
I speak more wisdom in two good coughs
Your game comes up short like the barrel of a sawed-off
^^^barrels of sawed-offs would've clinched this
Yet still I shoot at point-blank range, get inside you like a hacked mainframe
You tried to rid yourself but the virus maintains,
^^^^No
Just like you, it remains with no brains
Really ashamed that I couldn't extend your life
The true assassin grant you a pass'inTo a brand new life
The blade is hungry, I came to feed my knife
^^^^too many words.........again no
LUTHER

after this your body will be nothin but evidence/
this evil resident/proven testaments/by snatchin necklaces/
^^^^You must learn restraint nice multi's poor word usage remember: Proverbs 24:1-11
L cannot be knocked from the top/
the only way eric smokes me is if i were a crack rock/
^^^Basic but effective
your not even a rapper jack just a chatter box/and chatter boxes take nothin but agid losses/
stay mad cautious/i'm sick of this fag talkin/
^^^^sounds like a freestyle......If you expect to win you must stab him in the throat with the pen. You're not just displaying skillz battle him.
naggin and still braggin
about the battles that he aint even havin/
^^^more filling
this kid here is to lame/
if hip hop were a bitch then you a man with no game/
^^^^^So he couldn't get hip-hop....ok kinda basic though
battlelin L is like gun fightin the man with no name/watch how this pro change/
your lyrics are so lame/you couldnt write a mean verse if you did it while in pain/
^^^^This was a stretch, but I liked where it went
this is just an all out war luther be the only surviver/
the only time eric spits hot is when he boils saliva/
^^^^IIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL Certified DOPE
i stab darts in erics cadaver/do the math i stash i'm insane that's a certainty/
crazy like a mad hatter gettin high off of mercury/
^^^I got the Madd Hatter thing I seen it....you had me interested until do the math, after cadaver I thought you were gonna rip that shit. You went somewhere else though.
get it i cant be killed/you put it on to get blown up like a kilt/and curdled like milk/no rappers can stop me i practice on hurdelin hills/
^^^Started off aiight^^^^^^^^^^^^LOST ME^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^Nice last line.

Overall it was close, but Luther droped that CERTIFIED shit.

v/ Luther

Visionz
10-14-2005, 01:50 AM
thanks for the break down homie^I appreciate the honest response, even if LL had already taken this one when ya did lol......Ben if ya see this it's a wrap for Luther @ 6-3.peace

Luther Large
10-14-2005, 06:21 AM
damn raw hyde thats the most respectable vote ive seen on here

but yo eric dope battle it was real close maybe a rematch sumday?


peace

Visionz
10-14-2005, 06:40 AM
yeah man fo sho, yall should know I'm always ready to throw out a verse ^O^ got like 25 battles in here......gonna put most my energy into this comp for right now but when it's all done, I'm down, you have no idea how drunk, tired and stoned I was when I wrote that first verse, when I reread it, I'm thinking to myself damn, "not bad at all considering the mindstate", you def. came correct thought. peace homie