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Visionz
09-30-2005, 02:00 AM
2 rounds, 5 votes needed to win

VOTING:
-"House Rules"
each vote counted will use the following categories to determine the winner.
flow
wordplay
creativity
vocabulary
punches
as long as you use these categories in your votes they will count.....

-VOTING SYSTEM
3-0=KO(Knock Out)
4-1 or first to 5=TKO (Technical Knock Out)
3-3=when tied then the maximum amount of votes is moved up to 5 the first to 5 votes under this circumstance wins by a Split Decision .....

-NO TIE VOTES!
if you cannot decide who won your vote will not count

No freepostin in any topic unless you're voting......battles that are done will be closed by admin and/or moderators

-RULES
No Sharking
No Feeding
No Recycling
Any Time Limits that are set must be agreed upon by both warriors

Visionz
09-30-2005, 03:41 AM
I flip scripts and chicks the way Vernakula change names
I'll light his ass up and watch him change names to Mary Jane
Your style is leftovers to tuppaware, easily contained
You get on mic, people turn homeless & start begging for change
You like a rich greedy person, lookin at 'em with disgust
They lookin at like you bought ur rhymes online at Rapper R' Us
You shouldn't judge just cause you can't bust
Get it like GG Allen and get crushed from the bumrush (ask me abt it if u dn't knw)
Sick & twisted, sadistically wicked, best believe the Unseen is gifted
If you're standing in my elevator, your mind gets lifted
Nakula records in the shower to water down his sound
I spit in Marianna trenches just to watch him drown
Like a nun in a monastery I ain't fuckin around
You're calling in choir boys to show how you get down
You're the scab crossing over the lines to betray the art
You're like a deceased organ donor and lost your heart
With ever exhale of rhyme I breathin out life,
In a trapped cavern I speak so that words turn to a Mag-Lite
Your style is fag-lite like a featherweight from San Francisco
You used to moonlight as a back-up dancer for Cisco
Now you purposely get arrested to get fucked in the ass w/ Crisco
Run home from parole, dress drag, then go dance to disco
I'll take you out like Cominsky park back in July of 1979
Cannibal with principles, I'd eat you if I didn't dine on swine
Instead I'll airdrop u with no parachute into a field of landmines
Good luck on blowin up, you shit on too many, the karmas finally catchin up




wew...lol.....aite man, I got an A game too.peace

Grim Reapa
09-30-2005, 10:05 AM
Yo,
ya might be a unseen ninja assasin
But your a fuckin sambo bitch, so winning this battle aint happenin
It aint in the cards for you, u aint that tough
Smoke me like mary jane nigga bet u aint ever taken a puff
Mairianas trench you aint that deep
You about as deep as a kiddy pool when a fat man leeps
Animal unchanged
I'll leave ya ass lying prone and maimed
Cause a death it was a severe lashin from ma rhymes
In mideavil fashion, he's mutilitated no head for his spine
To grow on, ya bitch battles i lose none
I aint got respect for a nigga who rhymes worse than rev run
All done, nigga i just got started
Two verses from me and ppls will call u pc retarted
Thats how ya coming off matta fack
Its concequincial that you rhyme like a blabberin fag on crack
Blah blah blah blah blah
Thats what u sayin you flip scripts so much its scary
You much be obbsesive conpulsive or u related to John Kerry
That would explain why u like dick so much
Sick quick to do it nigga u kick boots
Mood music stop acting street u listen to B2M not the roots

Ballad Ballistik
09-30-2005, 08:47 PM
MY BAD 2 VERSES

Visionz
10-02-2005, 03:45 AM
Me battlin you is like a brother playin hockey/like jaws find white people bleeding, stickin out like liberace/You tryed to top me but a pure monster rush from out the dark,And with two darts tear all ur bloody limbs apart/That's the power of the deep ol' mental trenches, where the pressure's too heavy for some bitches to benchpress/ If it just too deep maybe you should float where you swims/ I handle pressure like an octopus can tell ur not used to them/If this was a gunfight you'd be dead were you stand,premier fire power woulda split ur soul from this land/I blast two shots and you almost shot one/Hear those church bells? guess why they just rung/...I'm the demolition unit to ur barely built bricks of shit ,I press buttons to watch 'em all get lit/You preachin but I'm taking you back to school, Been a long time since kindergarten, think I should remind you of a few rules/like one, never take anyone for granted, trees is weak when they first get planted/Never know when one spring up, venus fly-trap you and snag your ass up/lesson two is your ego can get deflated like balloons, trying to define shit like your babbling to baboons/Underestimating can catch you a quick ride to the hearse, or have u hollering in the 10th octave like brainy smurf/you could be cold as ice, it's still razor-blades when I slice/Twice as nice, I'm on top of this game that we be playin, I will knock you out with no hesitating/Like a suicide jumper in front of a train station,squash you like figures from claymations/You die with me still not knowing why you like to change names, Go-go-gadet mind most things are within my range/Funny how you said, like Wu-tang, like the Gza ain't the dude's fuckin name/And your still leftovers like my couch's hidden change........................And on a final note, that last verse wasnt my A game, That was warm up before the drunk driver changed lanes/And sent you off a bridge to meet the meaning of my name.






My brother didn't know who Liberace was,.........


http://www.liberace.com/images/postcard7.jpg


if you don't know, now you know

Visionz
10-02-2005, 03:57 AM
tryin to mess around with a little bit of change up in the style.....Don't want anything to influence the outcome of this before Nak has a chance to respond...so if you got any feed back for me hit me up with a pm.peace

Visionz
10-02-2005, 10:47 PM
what up man?

Grim Reapa
10-03-2005, 12:13 PM
Dont think i forgoten bout this man

been out when i get home imma try and piece a verse together

PEACE

Grim Reapa
10-04-2005, 11:18 AM
nother verse coming up soon

Visionz
10-04-2005, 07:08 PM
yo, Nak, when earlier you said you'll edit that first verse later, did you really mean completely rewrite it? lol, just checkin man. peace (it lessened that brainy smurf punch substantially)

Visionz
10-06-2005, 09:45 PM
can we wrap this one up?cmon man I know you got another verse in ya.peace

Grim Reapa
10-06-2005, 10:15 PM
just take this battle man too played out me vs. u lol sorry i cant think of anything to say

i rock peas on my head
bu don call me a p head
B'z on ma head
but dont call me a b head
Bruce Lees on ma head
but dont call me a lee head
pleez cuse me i gots ta get ma tree fed

OWNED lol jk

Visionz
10-07-2005, 06:31 AM
too played out when you made the challenge? come on man, don't bowe out the fight. If I didn't think you was going to respond I wouldn't of wasted the effort,be kinda fucked up if u didn't respond.peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-08-2005, 11:15 PM
Votes Needed

Grim Reapa
10-08-2005, 11:24 PM
2nd verse

This nigga cant even write a decent rhyme
Or drop dimes check it, we aint prehistoric times
Metaphoric, Im about to disembody ya whole verse
Its perverse, after this,'malpractice', ur gonna need more than a nurse
Ya rhymes looked a little lopsided coulda used time to rehearse
Liberace? Gay ma fucka who loves the taste of buchaucki
Exactly like you nigga cept, you down it like a hot glass of saki (eww)
This niggas disgusting, in short ma fuckin gay
Much to your dissmay I'll be walkin away with a win today
Got it? On a final note this wasn't my best ether
Cuz u battlin me is like comparing Donald to Keifer
Fuckin suck, blabin bout how ur gonna beat me
Well u can do like u do every time we battle, eat me

short but thorough respect 1

Grim Reapa
10-08-2005, 11:53 PM
vote

TeknicelStylez
10-09-2005, 08:32 AM
You got raped....

I don't even gotta explain, just read Eric's first verse.

V = Eric Unseen.

Robert
10-09-2005, 08:44 AM
I gotta say this was pretty onesided, I'd write that rating system out but it would not be a pretty site for Genius. Eric had better flow, punches and wordplay, Genius was weak on all counts (sorry man but in this case its the truth)
Vote=Eric

Visionz
10-09-2005, 02:03 PM
2-0, nice you responded thou man,peace

Grim Reapa
10-09-2005, 03:47 PM
i new i was gonna get killed but i responded right?

Visionz
10-09-2005, 04:23 PM
yes, I'm glad ya did.peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-13-2005, 04:41 PM
Vote Dammit!!!

Visionz
10-13-2005, 05:35 PM
3-0, lets keep the votes up and close this out.peace

Grim Reapa
10-13-2005, 05:38 PM
man imma give u this battle

its gonna be a KO anyways just take it 1

Visionz
10-13-2005, 06:41 PM
word homie^, close this one out Ben, its a wrap.peace to everyone for postin ya votes.peace