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TeknicelStylez
10-01-2005, 09:37 AM
RULES

12 lines
2 rounds
No bar riding
No bar stretching
No hate votes
All votes must be Thoroughly explained

You can drop first I just dropped a verse like 10 minutes ago.

Ironlungz
10-01-2005, 10:15 AM
aiit, cool... here goes

Battlin teknicel stylez is like stealin a nickel from a child
the way i fuck this boy over is like i'm a lyrical pedophile
i need no guile, i'm straight spittin sickness never defeat
you shud just "witness the fitness", never compete
never beat me if you never cheat, levelled with my feet
at the drop of a beat, fuck it i go acapella and still own you
this round i take off some meat, you get killed in round 2
so no votes need to be thoroughly explained in here
cus the votes i'll be the only one who remain to hear
you'll be in to much pain to care, i'll have sprained your ear
you're droppin tears in fear, but don't worry i'll do it fast
poke ya lungs, slit ya vocal chords and put ya tongue in a cast

TeknicelStylez
10-01-2005, 10:59 AM
Fuck that this is a battle, live ammunition, not a rehersal
First time Iron heard rap was in a mcdonalds commercial
Ever since than he was destined to be a clown emcee
He spits with words that lessen till they sound empty
My verse be plenty I'll murder you son don't tempt me
I'm thirsty for blood and your weak flow can't quench me
Your Iron lungs is retirin my hollow tips got em collapsin
When firing guns aspiring kids swallow clips witout askin
I live Hip Hop I'm not rappin for you this is just fashion
Lyrics sound rationed, Your styles is lackin, passion
Drop the microphone and pick up a fuckin ice cream cone
Mr. Softee, xylophones only way you can exceed my tone

TeknicelStylez
10-01-2005, 11:00 AM
Yo 1 round homie, I'm mad tired I'm just gonna go to sleep.

Koolish
10-02-2005, 01:06 AM
teknickel for sure. he stayed on point.

shit ok ok, iron lungs wasn't strong, it flowed alright, but the metaphors and a lot of the punch lines weren't working, it wasn't good.

tecknickel kept attacking and didn't stop, at the end of every line was something good and it over powered the other rhyme.

yeah and proof, why are you just gonna look at this, tell someone they voted wrong, and not say shit about the battle?

100pr00f
10-02-2005, 01:23 AM
All votes must be Thoroughly explained

TeknicelStylez
10-02-2005, 09:53 AM
you couldve throoughly explained a vote while you were postin that proof :P

Ironlungz
10-02-2005, 12:08 PM
post "votes needed" in title teknicel....
peace

TeknicelStylez
10-02-2005, 10:20 PM
votes,

Visionz
10-02-2005, 10:57 PM
tek got this one, harder punches and consistent thru-out the verse. iron lungs opening and ending lines were pretty strong but not too much in the middle

TeknicelStylez
10-03-2005, 04:00 AM
Thanks for voting.

hollywoodrealty
10-03-2005, 04:49 AM
i vote for tek too, his rhymes were on point, flowed nicely, didnt use your average every day words, i vote tek

tha god concept
10-03-2005, 04:53 AM
tek threw down hard on this 1

easily took this battle cause his flow was nyce and had dope punches

vote tek

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-03-2005, 01:52 PM
UMMMMMMMM.....
all these votes have not been counted due to the fact no one used the house rules on voting....

Here are the rules...they are also posted in the Liquid Swords Sticky Thread

VOTING:
-"House Rules"
each vote counted will use the following categories to determine the winner.
flow
wordplay
creativity
vocabulary
punches
as long as you use these categories in your votes they will count.....

-VOTING SYSTEM
3-0=KO(Knock Out)
4-1 or first to 5=TKO (Technical Knock Out)
3-3=when tied then the maximum amount of votes is moved up to 5 the first to 5 votes under this circumstance wins by a Split Decision .....

-NO TIE VOTES!
if you cannot decide who won, your vote will not count

No freepostin in any topic unless you're voting......battles that are done will be closed by admin and/or moderators

-RULES
No Sharking
No Feeding
No Recycling
Any Time Limits that are set must be agreed upon by both warriors


Thank you and keep voting!

TeknicelStylez
10-04-2005, 02:00 PM
Re-vote....

Fantastic... as if getting 2 line votes wasn't already a bitch.

Visionz
10-05-2005, 12:29 AM
IronLung

flow-4
wordplay-4
creativity-4
vocabulary-5...opening line saved this from being lower
punches-4.....Not trying to be harsh but simple rhymes and simple concepts thru-out,

Tek

flow-8, good rhythym w/ the words
wordplay-7-pretty straight foward in ya lines..swallow w/out askin' nice1
creativity-7-again straight foward
vocabulary-9- put together some multi-syables thru out the verse
punches-8-liked the opening and ending especially


IronLung obviously outmatched in this one, might wanna size your opponent before battlin, Tek took this one runnin.peace

Ironlungz
10-05-2005, 02:33 AM
dat cool, i'm outta practice...
peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-10-2005, 07:07 PM
iron-0
tek-2

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 06:33 PM
Tek Lungz

flw:7/10 6/10
pl's:7/10 5/10
crea7/10 5/10
wp:8/10 6.5/10
vocab:7/10 5/10


vote=tek

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-12-2005, 07:22 PM
tek-4
iron-0