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Undead Ninja
10-02-2005, 03:14 PM
50 lines max two rounds!

i'll go first



Luther large whos ein charge of your rhyming barge
I fucked ya up like a marge the miltary gave a...dishonarble discharge
You coulden't hand;e the rhymes that I spit I got spys watch ya and when you
glimp it's a hit.
I spit the Judical writ all my shit is closely knit
destroy your mother's wit have ya throwin a fit
while eatin your banna split!
Admit to this put ya ass lower and lower like an orchestra pit
My rhymes make ya submit as you commit ta tha schmidt
The oowop make ya ass drop
on a traffic cop while you do the belly flop
seen ya searchin fo men at tha bar hop
Hittin ya fuckin up ya tank top
but pressure on ya glottal stop
The Ninja keeps moving i'm a motherfuckin whizzin top
which me pop in your brain i'm insane have ya ass afriad
of the rain
As I move into the fast line
droppin on ya oil stains
I move like charles wain in a food chain
feel the disdain as ya watch me slain your jugular vein.
I'm like a whooping crane I annilated the alpine golden chain
saw ya eatin a frankfort on main fuckin your nervous vein
I'm like spiderman I kidnapped mary jane from the petersburg campaign took her to ya on the orbital plane made ya fuck a great dane
HEY!
Luther Large you are no comparision
when you were unaware knocked ya in thin air on tha
Croix De Gurresion!

Grim Reapa
10-02-2005, 03:19 PM
U Suck Coxxxx

Ballad Ballistik
10-02-2005, 03:29 PM
[QUOTE=VernaKuLa]U Suck Coxxxx[/QUOTE I FINALLY AGREE WITH YOU....

Undead Ninja
10-02-2005, 03:29 PM
so does your mother only difference is that its "MINE"!

Grim Reapa
10-02-2005, 03:47 PM
please dont humble yourself, we all know u the gayest ma fucka on this ya bitch

Undead Ninja
10-02-2005, 03:51 PM
LOL I ain't even mad at cha and I ain't the gayest Intellekt is duh!

Undead Ninja
10-03-2005, 12:38 AM
comeon man sp it your verse!

Undead Ninja
10-03-2005, 11:38 PM
Posot Your Line!

Luther Large
10-04-2005, 05:39 AM
^^^fuck you i aint postin shit man........it's over i aint facin you..........you wanna talk shit?.....i already have 3 damn battles that aint even done stupid...........i aint startin another 1 right now............i told the same thing to idiom..........and he didnt cry about it.........

so you can battle yourself now

Undead Ninja
10-04-2005, 03:11 PM
cool I win by default!

Visionz
10-05-2005, 12:04 AM
guess you gotta get'em somehow, don't think ya rhymes had anything to do with it thou, LL got a way nicer style than yours. when you makin another track for me,lol

Undead Ninja
10-05-2005, 06:05 AM
I dunno any day now!

adedwutang
10-05-2005, 10:28 PM
ur verses remind me of dipset, lot of words rhymin but when u put them together they dont make sense

"The oowop make ya ass drop
on a traffic cop while you do the belly flop
seen ya searchin fo men at tha bar hop
Hittin ya fuckin up ya tank top
but pressure on ya glottal stop"

try thinkin about wut u write next time, just a suggestion
peace

Undead Ninja
10-07-2005, 06:16 AM
oowop is slang for my favorite gun the Uzi SMG
bar hop is going from bar to bar
glottal stop is a pressur ein your stomach I believe!

Visionz
10-07-2005, 06:28 AM
and jokes aren't funny if you have to explain 'em, not to hate but that's just mc'in 101 for ya.

Undead Ninja
10-07-2005, 03:50 PM
he asked stay outta it!

Visionz
10-07-2005, 04:56 PM
ahhhhh! you sound upset!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !!!!!!!!!!

Idiom
10-07-2005, 07:12 PM
personally i think you should have battled LL but whatever.
you would have won..and undead speak of thing you know
about instead of lookin' things up....a judicial writ is a legal
document issued by a court officer... which reaLLy makes no
sense on you part in a battle? you don't issue documents
in battles you make a rhyme as you go...but whatever

wasted space

Visionz
10-08-2005, 12:58 AM
actually me and LL had a recent battle his verses in that one were pretty killa, he makes for tough competition when he's on point.peace

Luther Large
10-09-2005, 06:15 PM
personally i think you should have battled LL but whatever.
you would have won..and undead speak of thing you know
about instead of lookin' things up....a judicial writ is a legal
document issued by a court officer... which reaLLy makes no
sense on you part in a battle? you don't issue documents
in battles you make a rhyme as you go...but whatever

wasted space

what you sayin i suck son?

oDoUoSoKo
10-09-2005, 10:54 PM
how bout u face me ninja, but not here, come to the "dart board:0" and if ya wanna see it to, or battle me, come tru

Undead Ninja
10-09-2005, 10:58 PM
I'll battle you! post the verse first!

Luther Large
10-10-2005, 09:59 AM
fuck around and get touched up with lethal flows laced/plus when i say your lyrics need a brush up ayo i mean it use toothpaste/faggot emcees like this i make'em pass out/knock they lights like a black out/spittin like shit so you must of ate an ass out/you step up to get guzzeled down like a big mans dinner/i'm the super sinner/ who still kills and throws punches like a thrillas maniila/ayo i'm phat like farley but you still the "beverly hills ninja"/you must be kiddin huh?/i first came out the womb as the ace of the litter/bastards like you i'm gettin rid of like fake chinchillas/you cant stomach "chickens" so brace yourself for the last supper/i strike harder than a mike tyson punch with brass knuckles/i'm heavily impulsed leavin you dead/drop like that and get beat till you convulse stomped on the head/i wouldve tried harder to battle but your lyrics already have no pulse just like ya name said/you couldnt ryhme on the "beat" if you battled a cop on the job/i hard battle this faggot then i stop and he sobs/plus the only thing this ninja got from me was a loss/


yo bigben can you do us a favor and delete all the previous freeposts..............cuz i didnt plan on batteling ninja cuz i had mad battles goin on...........but i promised i'd drop when 1 of my battles were over................peace

VOTES!

Luther Large
10-10-2005, 01:26 PM
votes ya'll

Undead Ninja
10-10-2005, 01:40 PM
fuck it you wanna battle on your time then wanna come back cuz of the pressure fuck that shit its all over fuck it!

Luther Large
10-10-2005, 01:47 PM
votes up ya'll

Luther Large
10-10-2005, 03:49 PM
uppin 4 votes

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 07:50 AM
Votes

Visionz
10-11-2005, 08:05 AM
LL takes this one running, much more brutal and vivid with the lyrics, along w/ having much better punches.

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 09:48 AM
^^^ does that count or do we still have to use the "house rules"?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-11-2005, 01:00 PM
as long as the vote is thoroughly explained we can count it

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 01:07 PM
so.....1-0?

TeknicelStylez
10-11-2005, 01:17 PM
Undead Ninja's verse had content but it lacked form, it sounded like you had alot of ideas and alot of unique words that just didn't fit together as well as they could of. Don't try to out grow yourself slow down, take it down a notch, let yourself get better gradually. Not a bad verse though.

Luther Large, came with a good rhyme scheme, well shaped bars, adequate amount of multis, and punches that didn't hit that hard but were still placed right.

/ who still kills and throws punches like a thrillas maniila/ayo i'm phat like farley but you still the "beverly hills ninja"/
My vote = Luther Large

Undead Ninja
10-11-2005, 05:27 PM
I think playin gon the fat or phatness (slang) of Chris Farley is pretty gay LMAO but whatever nice battle!

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 05:29 PM
what ever man any1 else votin?

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 06:24 AM
Votes?

Robert
10-12-2005, 07:20 AM
LL Got this, his punches were adequate, the flow was good and the wordplay and structure was far better then Undead Ninja. However, apart from the structure of ninja's verse it was still aight, just need to think about the flow and line length, seemed like you was trying to cram alot of stuff into one line.
Vote LL
peace

Robert
10-12-2005, 07:22 AM
btw, could I have some votes for my battle with genius?

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 08:12 AM
^ yeah i'll vote on your battle soon.................that's 3-0........i think you got k.0'd

good battle peace

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 05:26 PM
nah i think it's done but thanx 4 the vote anywayz

yo plaechris could you drop a vote in me and eric unseens battle

it's been goin on 4 weeks i'd appreciate yo

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 05:32 PM
oh shit my bad didnt notice thanx then i just seen it i apreciate it still man


peace