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hollywoodrealty
08-08-2005, 10:52 AM
alright here's the deal, come in here and take an old song, doesnt matter what it is, and flip it into your own thing, ill drop 1st............

hollywoodrealty
08-08-2005, 10:53 AM
one, two, three o clock, roam around with four glocks
five, six, at 7 o'clock, oh shit i heard 8 shots
nine, ten, eleven o clock, i seen the pheens slangen rocks
i walk around, the block, with my classic reeboks

when the clock strikes one, the pheens come
full moon spells doom in the city where im from
when the clock strikes two, police come and frisk you
you're just minding your own business and they come and diss you
when the clock strikes three, i seen these dudes trying to follow me
the belly of the beast is trying to swallow me
when the clock strikes four, you see the streets full of whores
desperate dudes, confused, opening up their car doors
when the clock strikes five, somebody commited suicide
just jumped off the 12th floor of a buildingside
when the clock strikes six, the shit gets even more sick
someone in baghdad blew himself up with dynomite sticks
when the clock strikes seven, somebody better call the revrin
this school got shot up, 10 dead, i need an excedrin
when the clock strikes eight, looks like the ambulance was too late
little timmy drowned swimming in the lake
when the clock strikes nine, the city's already full of crime
stick up kids splitten your wig over a few dimes
when the clock strikes ten, i seen this dude on heroin
he lifted up a car from all his adrenaline
when the clock strikes eleven, you think u see the gates of heaven
but then they close cuz the city's filled with dead sins
when the clock strikes twelve, your reolize your living in hell
start it all over again when u hear the 12 church bells

one, two, three o clock, roam around with four glocks
five, six, at 7 o'clock, oh shit i heard 8 shots
nine, ten, eleven o clock, i seen the pheens slangen rocks
i walk around, the block, with my black classic reeboks

martyr
08-08-2005, 11:42 AM
...i could rewrite this but thats a waste of my time of day...

hollywoodrealty
08-08-2005, 12:05 PM
martyr you are a lil biatch, i already killed u once ina battle, go take a long walk on a short peer

Knok-A-Fella
08-08-2005, 12:23 PM
u beat martyr in a battle

Bless, 1

martyr
08-08-2005, 01:31 PM
ha! dude:


YOU ARE WACK

i murdered you and two or three other cats at once... no one voted for you... there were'nt even votes in that battle... it wasn't even a battle... you kept dropping section of stupid lines after section of stupid lines and people kept stating how you we're not good at all...

martyr
08-08-2005, 02:11 PM
one, two, three o' clock, i burn hate with four glocks
five, six, seven tocks, i heard eight or more shots
nine, ten, eleven stop, now i'ma set this kid right
'cause in the next sixty minutes you're forgetting mid night

when the clock strikes one, i'm fiending ripe blood
full moon means night comes and you sleeping knifed up
when the clock ticks two, you're sucking your dick dude
you we're minding your own business as i come and diss you
the clocks hitting three, and you're still licking D
the only thing getting swallowed is you drinking seed
when the clock's ticking four, you apply lip stick galore
you're desperate dude, fuck you, you think you're a whore
when it finally reaches five, you sigh dreaming of suicide
but you're too much of a pussy and too squeemish to try
when the clock's striking six, you're not liking it
you already blew your self and now you got kinda sick
when your Timex says seven, you buy several Excederin(c)
got a head ache from reality as you cry to the reverend
when the clock stops on eight, i still got some hate
you drown in self loathing, you still cannot create
when the clock says it's nine, you stress your sex crime
dressed up like a dead dime, you sense its bed time
when the clock strikes ten, you're so fucking stupid
because people on heroin sit there so fucking useless
when the clock strikes eleven, i dissed you with faggot jokes
because really man, you're aweful and there's nothing you have to show
when the clock strikes twelve, you think you might like yourself
you need another twelve to restart; you're trife as hell

one, two, three o' clock, i burn hate with four glocks
five, six, seven tocks, i heard eight or more shots
nine, ten, eleven stop, now i'ma set this kid right
'cause in the next sixty minutes you're forgetting mid night

PsYkOsUs
08-08-2005, 02:19 PM
one, two, three o' clock, i burn hate with four glocks
five, six, seven tocks, i heard eight or more shots
nine, ten, eleven stop, now i'ma set this kid right
'cause in the next sixty minutes you're forgetting mid night

when the clock strikes one, i'm fiending ripe blood
full moon means night comes and you sleeping knifed up
when the clock ticks two, you're sucking your dick dude
you we're minding your own business as i come and diss you
the clocks hitting three, and you're still licking D
the only thing getting swallowed is you drinking seed
when the clock's ticking four, you apply lip stick galore
you're desperate dude, fuck you, you think you're a whore
when it finally reaches five, you sigh dreaming of suicide
but you're too much of a pussy and too squeemish to try
when the clock's striking six, you're not liking it
you already blew your self and now you got kinda sick
when your Timex says seven, you buy several Excederin(c)
got a head ache from reality as you cry to the reverend
when the clock stops on eight, i still got some hate
you drown in self loathing, you still cannot create
when the clock says it's nine, you stress your sex crime
dressed up like a dead dime, you sense its bed time
when the clock strikes ten, you're so fucking stupid
because people on heroin sit there so fucking useless
when the clock strikes eleven, i dissed you with faggot jokes
because really man, you're aweful and there's nothing you have to show
when the clock strikes twelve, you think you might like yourself
you need another twelve to restart; you're trife as hell

one, two, three o' clock, i burn hate with four glocks
five, six, seven tocks, i heard eight or more shots
nine, ten, eleven stop, now i'ma set this kid right
'cause in the next sixty minutes you're forgetting mid night

LOL, i don't think i've ever seen someone slain by their own conecpt before... martyr just raped you with your own verse...

tekunique
08-08-2005, 03:36 PM
LOL, i don't think i've ever seen someone slain by their own conecpt before... martyr just raped you with your own verse...
well something similar would be Pac dissin Biggie & Puff using the same "Get Money remix" beat.. Pac was pretty pissed to say the least in that track..LOL

hollywoodrealty
08-08-2005, 06:38 PM
ya but martyr is a bitch so how could he of killed my verse, as for psycusus, i never seen u spit one line, your like the fat kid in gym class that gets picked last you wack ass

hollywoodrealty
08-08-2005, 06:42 PM
martyr didnt even give it his own twist, he took all my words, your on my nuts likethey were made of velcrow and your a cottonball

PsYkOsUs
08-08-2005, 06:50 PM
ya but martyr is a bitch so how could he of killed my verse, as for psycusus, i never seen u spit one line, your like the fat kid in gym class that gets picked last you wack ass
LOL... you're a joke... nowhere near my level... you're brand new if you haven't seen my catalogue, son... go buy yourself another pair of reebok classics you fuckin' dork...

tekunique
08-08-2005, 07:21 PM
LOL... you're a joke... nowhere near my level... you're brand new if you haven't seen my catalogue, son... go buy yourself another pair of reebok classics you fuckin' dork... nike uptowns > rbk classics

hollywoodrealty
08-08-2005, 07:34 PM
martyr and psykosus sitting in a tree
they like golden showers, i heard martyr likes to drink the pee
they are two of the wackest mc's, they can never rap on
this track, as a matter of fact they like to play with strap on's
get clapped son, you started to get retarded with the wrong dude
ill hurt you, your both on way past your curfue
ill send you to your room with no playstation
you try to talk shit but u got verbal constipation
dont hate son, cuz im droppen hits, your sucken dicks
cut off both of your tounges cuz i heard enough of it
dumb deaf blind mute, im droppen you without a parachute
and im kicken rhymes like a pair of boots
im the sniper, when i sit i stair and shoot
your words are rubbish, ditch your ass down the garbage chute
you're both wack and cant rap, your not poetic
you want beef, well im the butcher, come get it

PsYkOsUs
08-08-2005, 07:36 PM
LOL... you're garbage...

rzarazorrzarazorsharp
08-08-2005, 07:43 PM
oh god...I've seen pskosus shit...nasty as hell...lolllll ...you don't compare man....you lose right away. And you wonder why he din't respond with a verse.

martyr
08-09-2005, 08:59 AM
martyr didnt even give it his own twist, he took all my words, your on my nuts likethey were made of velcrow and your a cottonball

...i gave it my own twist, i called you a faggot loser, which you are... by the way, that could be the start of anew in rhyming for you... that was a weak simile... keep em' coming...

hollywoodrealty
08-12-2005, 09:56 PM
ancient prophesies,
said manhood would take arms against fury
the grand jury
passed the death sentence
ill use some pass interference
to make a disappearance
bcuz my 3rd eye shines like a pyramid
with no eye lid,
never closen, always open
opposite of narcoleptic
talk sick like a septic
lyrical pyromaniac,
cranuim crack
from the x, rated pornographic
microphone mechanic
maniacal
diabolical super heavy weight moven through the night, just like traffic
spreaden, all across the planet

Father N Dangerous
08-13-2005, 03:02 AM
i liked this whole verse, keep it up, and keep spittin

GuardianOne
08-13-2005, 04:44 AM
Short and quite distorted. But it had a kind of flow to it , just can't place it at this moment. But keep posting. Want to check more of your verses.

Peace

hollywoodrealty
08-13-2005, 07:52 AM
i use brainwashing, coercion and corporal mortification
to force upon u my education
my words connect like the stars constellations
add it up, its my calculations
no variations, I tell the same story of guts and glory
pinned down like Christ, bloody and gory
fury and anger, off the hook like a coat hanger
i hold a secret that puts my life in danger
it"s like a dagger in the heart, a beggar in the dark streets
walken around pale with cold feet
barefoot i roam across god's canvas
a vagabond keeping the balance of the earth"s axis
swing axes, chop wood, create a burning fire
sing passages of common good with a learning desire
i speak about the Holy Grail, it"s surely real
hidden by the lurches in churches who try to conceal
the heavenly secrets sold for gold and power
divine intervention, I plant seeds that grows the flower
the flower gives u the power to decepher misconceptions
created by man who planned to ruin mankind with deception
but u gotta read between the lines to make a connection
the omen will open your eyes with a sense of recollection
the reflection will surely change your views of resurrection
finally giving u a sense of direction

hollywoodrealty
08-13-2005, 08:25 PM
can anyone give me some feedback on this, good or bad

hollywoodrealty
08-13-2005, 08:35 PM
thanks for the comments, ya guardian, it does have kinda a crazy twist to the rhyme, but when u spit it, it all comes together nicely, thanks u for the comments, plz tell me waht u think about the other rhyme i wrote recently, beggar in the streets

martyr
08-14-2005, 01:50 AM
...i'll get back to you on this...

GuardianOne
08-14-2005, 04:23 AM
Umm!!!!
You seem to use a lot of explanations, not that most don't but the way you use it is too predictable. The verse is nice what kills it is when you try and explain giving it meaning, you have a good style, just by reading the verse others can tell you have a good style but its the way you put it accross or maybe it this verse. But it was a nice verse. Thje start seemed to be a bit confused (maybe to much explanations-first lines but as it progresses your style becomes apparent). But all in all you have a good style. Nice verse.

Peace
PS: When people notice the problem with your verse, then they can realize how good your verse is, or can be!!!!!!!!!!!

martyr
08-14-2005, 12:05 PM
...the flow was on point except for the "...flower/" line and "...decepetion/" lines messed it up... i liked the first two lines, the "...gutsy and glory/...bloody and gory/" lines... then the last part about resurection... the first part you rhymed words that simply rhymed "-ation" after the first two lines, you should concentrate on your multi syllable rhyme schemes because you got the flow and subject matter... don't force them out, just count the syllables... de-cep-tion, the-set-ting, pre-wed-ding, co-llec-ting... ext. ect... keep writing...

hollywoodrealty
08-14-2005, 09:08 PM
thanks everyone for your comments, special thanks to martyr, anyone else got something good or bad to tell me

Dae Ja Nae
08-15-2005, 12:55 AM
I rather enjoyed it. I love the art of story telling through rhyme. I'm also feeling your sense of spirituality. It kind of reminded me of how I started out :). Keep it up, and ...

Peace

hollywoodrealty
08-15-2005, 03:33 AM
thanks dae, i was kinda hoping i would get a comment from u bcuz u are lyrically gifted, thanks for the words

hollywoodrealty
08-17-2005, 10:55 AM
i know its tough trying to remake a classic, but im taking a shot at it, tell me what you think..........



i aint falling down, this aint no london bridge
im str8 chillen like some pizza thats inside your fridge
im inside your head, i control the image
taken over your thoughts, its the mental pillage
your village gets stomped when the king kong of rap
steps out the swamp and sings the song of war before we srap
you feel my wrath and begin to suffercate
swing my lyrical bat and just like that your done, it was a piece of cake
i baked it and ate it, and left nothing but crumbs
and then i washed it down with some red rum
mud spelled backwards is dum, ask buggs bunny
my rhymes are dope, i should get payed with drug money
but the government cant sieze what ive achived
i got accounts over seas they cant freeze
damn str8, like the creese in my pants
hold the mic so long so my arms strong like lance
i never run around and prance like a fairy
i huff and puff your little house on the priere
your brick house aint no match for this big bad wolf
ill hypmotize your eyes with just one look
then ill knock u unconcious, get in your subconcious
send u to the moon when my space shuttle launches
so be catious if you got beef with the butcher
cuz you'll get punked, call me ashton kutchner



miami kepps on maken it
ft lauderdale keeps on taken it
hollywood keeps creating it
univesally sucka's hating it


i smoke the weed de de da de smoke the weed de da all day
if you got that fire plz come out and smoke that hay
cuz, here's an example of the flyist one, boooooooo
here's an example of the flyist one



its 420 fuck the kids, do you know where the weed is
the beat is fat plus i got my adidas
i feed this rhyme in your head cuz you need this
everybody wants to be a millionare like regis
if you rejects step in my way you become roadkill
either that or splattered on my windshield
try to step to me but u cant penentrate my force field
my words heal like the pope you get cold chills
i got mad skills, they need anger management
can u manage it or loose control like savages
im on the hunt like scavengers, bust shit like gallegher
and i got more greens then a salad bar
read the tarot cards but the future is premature
put my name in the game, sign my signature
spit this literature, you'll study me in philosophy
about how i keep it real and i spit shit honestly
the hennesy from tennesse has got me remenising
im like a-rod, when i swing im never missing
im dissing you fools call me simon cawell
you're an american idol thats suicidel, throw in the towel

GuardianOne
08-17-2005, 10:59 AM
I'll reply on friday

Peace

hollywoodrealty
08-20-2005, 01:11 AM
my mind' a seed, somebody planted, fertilized it
watered it, and let the sun beam on it
went from a seed into a stem and before you know it
i turned into hemp, most of the world grows it
started mass producing exact replica's of me
together, we grew from a stem into a tree
we were stuck and hidden in between corn and wheat fields
camoflage berage, this shit was like a force field
but one day some dudes came running through with macheties
cut us loose from the ground, but most of us were ready
steadily stacked us and put in the back of the pick up truck
drove a lil while and stopped, what the fuck
they took us out and hung us upside down to dry
took away water, fertilizer, and the sun we needed to survive
they left us for days and nights to sit and dry up
then they took us down before we fried up
hacked, stacked and squeezed into bricks
packed, strapped, and hid into containers
put on a slip then shipped from the lands of jamaica
slid into port everglades and thats when these 3 dudes with shades
came searchen around saying "we aint playen no games"
but somehow, the dogs never sniffed us out,
later on that night the forklift came to lift us out
they took the shipment and slipped it on this cat's big rig
drove us str8 into this huge wharehouse, this shit was sick kid
then they finally let us out, we were
seperated, measure and weighted
chopped up and stuffed in huge bags i felt violated
now we were all in zip locks zipped up
different dealers came in to pick up their shipment
this crazy dred came in and took me, along with 5 others
my last brothers
he threw us in his trunk under the spare tire
im getting tired
my life's been flipped upside down
i went from living in peace to being seperated into pieces
it feels like im going to drown
i was split into nickels, then nickels to dimes,
dimes to quarters, doubling everytime
cats roll me up, commence the blunt passen
quarters to ounces, soon the pounds started blasten
traffic and cant seek alternate routes
dig into my roots and see the bloody truth
the dred bought me for twenty g's, doubled his profit
rolls up my best bud's, started to puff it
i went from seed to weed then the weed turned to ashes and smoke
inhale the knowledge, exhale the toxins with every toke
my weed is his business, and his business is your pleasure
you are the seed that grows and shows that wisdom is the treasure

Unforgiven
08-20-2005, 12:46 PM
that was fucking tight!

GuardianOne
08-21-2005, 06:56 AM
Its quite a descriptive verse,and flowed well for such a entricate verse. And long also.

Peace
PS: Keep posting

hollywoodrealty
08-21-2005, 02:57 PM
thanks for the comments guardian and northstar, check out my next one i drop about a bomb technition

hollywoodrealty
08-21-2005, 03:03 PM
this ainta bomb threat, you heard the ticken
magaiver state of mind, quick thinken, quit shitten
theres no time to spare, bomb explodes in 3 minutes
evacuate the place, everybody starts trippen
get trampled bcuz people aint careful
run for your lives
everyman for himself,children and wives,
first
whats worse is there's no time to call the experts
so da butchers jumpen in this shit for what its worth
which line should i cut first, red or black
and whats this yellow one,
1 wrong move and we're all gone
step back to analyze the situation
i cant get the damn ticken out my head, im running out of patience
2 minutes left, people getting stuck in the staircase
someone stuck this bomb up inside a leather briefcase
i gotta crack the code like davinci
is this a dream, or a joke, somebody pinch me
reality hit me when i saw the sticks of dynomite
if i pull them off it sets the trigger for them to ignite
somebody get me some scissors, im gonna cut this line
if i get it wrong every mother fucker's gonna die
i close my eyes and i start cutten
this shit is still ticken, damnit that didnt do nothin
there about 100 wires and i only got a minute left
but im still cool, i yell, somebody get me a cigarette
i light it up, damn it i had enough
i gotta find the one that will save us from blowing up
all of a sudden i remembered something i saw on the discrovery
channel about how to dismantel a bomb, from a to z
watching tv high got u watching some stupid shit,
never in my life did i think id have to use it
but now all of a sudden i held the key to the mystery
i hold the answer to saving everyone's mysory
i cut the red and yellow one and the ticken finally stopped
my heart nearly stopped but i ended up on top
the mayor gave me the key to the city
taken pictures holden babies, all the ladies kissen me
even got interviewed on larry king live
im the butcher flyen back to the killer be hive

TUCO
08-21-2005, 10:51 PM
this ainta bomb threat, you heard the ticken
magaiver state of mind, quick thinken, quit shitten
theres no time to spare, bomb explodes in 3 minutes
evacuate the place, everybody starts trippen
get trampled bcuz people aint careful
run for your lives
everyman for himself,children and wives,
first
whats worse is there's no time to call the experts
so da butchers jumpen in this shit for what its worth
which line should i cut first, red or black
and whats this yellow one,
1 wrong move and we're all gone
step back to analyze the situation
i cant get the damn ticken out my head, im running out of patience
2 minutes left, people getting stuck in the staircase
someone stuck this bomb up inside a leather briefcase
i gotta crack the code like davinci
is this a dream, or a joke, somebody pinch me
reality hit me when i saw the sticks of dynomite
if i pull them off it sets the trigger for them to ignite
somebody get me some scissors, im gonna cut this line
if i get it wrong every mother fucker's gonna die
i close my eyes and i start cutten
this shit is still ticken, damnit that didnt do nothin
there about 100 wires and i only got a minute left
but im still cool, i yell, somebody get me a cigarette
i light it up, damn it i had enough
i gotta find the one that will save us from blowing up
all of a sudden i remembered something i saw on the discrovery
channel about how to dismantel a bomb, from a to z
watching tv high got u watching some stupid shit,
never in my life did i think id have to use it
but now all of a sudden i held the key to the mystery
i hold the answer to saving everyone's mysory
i cut the red and yellow one and the ticken finally stopped
my heart nearly stopped but i ended up on top
the mayor gave me the key to the city
taken pictures holden babies, all the ladies kissen me
even got interviewed on larry king live
im the butcher flyen back to the killer be hive
Jesus Christ this peice was disgusting....im sorry man but back to the drawing board....like seriously......drastically.........

peace

TUCO
08-21-2005, 10:57 PM
damn....dude....u seriously need some lessons.....im about to throw up

peace

GuardianOne
08-22-2005, 02:11 AM
no homo
Iam sure sure what you mean, maybe you can enlighten us on you thesis? Since you know everything?

Peace

hollywoodrealty
08-22-2005, 02:15 AM
rzarectah93, u are a hater, u are like a 14 year old girl the way u yap on these threads but never drop a rhyme, if u got some shit to say to me lets go on the battlefield, i will crush you like a pinata, i could care less about your comments

hollywoodrealty
08-22-2005, 02:16 AM
rzarectah93, u are a hater, u are like a 14 year old girl the way u yap on these threads but never drop a rhyme, if u got some shit to say to me lets go on the battlefield, i will crush you like a pinata, i could care less about your comments

GuardianOne
08-22-2005, 03:40 AM
You hav a nack at expressing thing well. The whole verse flowed well, considering that it was very story like. But the way you put it makes it hard to grasp the intensity of the lyrics (or situation) might need to work on the content there. But it was a good verse.

Peace
PS: Good read

Jabba Jaw
08-22-2005, 05:16 AM
the vesre started off ok

the flow was choppy at times
creative topic to write about
it fell off a lil towards the end but i can see potential in there
juss keep at it homie

hollywoodrealty
08-22-2005, 08:11 AM
guardianone, i read through the comments taht u make, and u are one of the few people who keep it real, u tell people whats good whats bad, thanks for the comments, and 83 raw, thanks for being str8 forward, there is defenently some work needed, peace to u all

TUCO
08-22-2005, 08:14 AM
LMAO
all of guardians comments/feedback come out positive.....ALL of em....regardless who's peice it is....hahahahhahahahha
u gotta learn to accept constructive criticism dude.....i hated ur peice....simple as that
and u mentione battlefield??? please.....like i wanna waste my time and drop lyrics on this site, lol

peace

TUCO
08-22-2005, 08:14 AM
^^^ nice copy/paste techniques

peace

Jabba Jaw
08-22-2005, 12:45 PM
.....like i wanna waste my time and drop lyrics on this site, lol

^^^
that juss says to me that you wack as fuck home boy

lol

TUCO
08-22-2005, 12:51 PM
hahaha i'm wack huh?
wow....maybe i should write a buncha shit and post it here so i can prove myself "un-wack"!!!!
YEA!!!!
lol dont joke urself dude....i used to post mad rhymes here back in the day.....just got boring to know that it gets me nowhere

peace

Jabba Jaw
08-22-2005, 01:39 PM
used to post mad rhymes here back in the day.....just got boring to know that it gets me nowhere

^^^

true...
i juss do it for a bit o practice

TUCO
08-22-2005, 05:14 PM
the vesre started off ok

the flow was choppy at times
creative topic to write about
it fell off a lil towards the end but i can see potential in there
juss keep at it homie
no homo

peace

hollywoodrealty
08-23-2005, 03:52 AM
rza i can take criticism, and if u look through gaurdians latest comments, i saw him talk down on 3 or 4 verses recently, but had good things to say about mine, now not everyone who made comments gave me props, someone said some of my verse was choppy and unorganized, but he liked the concept, see i respect that, but u come on all my threads and have some hating negative shit to say, i block u out, bcuz when u come to me like a kid, i cant take u seriously, if u got comments keep em cool, if u dont like something, break it down, i know not everyone can think my shit is good, so i dont think my is the best, but i know by far it isnt the wackest shit as u claimed, so say what u want

hollywoodrealty
08-23-2005, 04:08 AM
anyone else got some feedback for me on this rhyme right here

Robert
08-23-2005, 04:21 AM
Good verse Hollywood, you definitely got a good flow and your rhymes are always clear. However, I wasnt really feeling the subject material in this verse but still good
peace

TUCO
08-23-2005, 08:36 AM
.....................its the wackest shit

peace

hollywoodrealty
08-23-2005, 11:06 AM
rza stop your bitchen, u dont even bust nothing except for nuts u lil fag

TUCO
08-23-2005, 01:16 PM
.............................

peace

MC MIDAS
08-23-2005, 01:39 PM
I Found Your Verse Boring, Initial Idea Was Aite But Otherwise I Found It Wack And It Dint Captivate Me At All!!!

Yo Tuco, I Remember Battlin U It Was Alright, If You Wanna Go Again It Will Be Cool Certain Fools Will Prob Hate On Me.. But Fuck It.. Lemme Know

hollywoodrealty
08-31-2005, 09:25 AM
this was a freestyle i wrote and posted here, and i want to know what some of ya'll think, peace




tetris, i drop bricks, crucifix, connect with
2 sticks, clutch fist, holy fish, dinner dish
apples and snakes, i throw my grapple's at fakes
funeral chapel's filled with people feeling heart aches
the butcher turns his beef to steaks, well done, its hell son
ask rza, do u hear the bell's son
well done, im on a distinguished road the god's tell me
golden rod holy, u get robbed for your roley
i snatch mics, snatch lives, metal spikes, baptised
capsize, downsize, you aint fly, you're disguised
hide your face, hide your fate, hide the truth, u cant wait
living lies day by day, the legend dies, you're shark's bait
demonstrate that demons originated in semon
busted in like venom, devils blue dress made of denem
its hell on earth, you want to levitate to a better place
you hesitate, an alien stuck in the human race
face the truth, face reality face the facts
remember jesus whipped, bloody back, blood bath
tetris, i drop bricks, crucifix, connect with
2 sticks, clutch fist, holy fish, dinner dish

hollywoodrealty
08-31-2005, 08:00 PM
alright let me hear some comments if anyone has any?

Idiom
08-31-2005, 08:09 PM
not bad mate

(y)

OmO < Idiom

hollywoodrealty
08-31-2005, 10:22 PM
thanks idiom, peace

hollywoodrealty
09-01-2005, 11:49 AM
anybody else?

SurreaL
09-01-2005, 11:54 AM
nice rhyme's, I liked the tetris line, that was cool, peace.

hollywoodrealty
09-01-2005, 12:45 PM
word up, thanks surreal, i know u are a respected guy around here so to get good feedback from u is good shit, peace

hollywoodrealty
09-02-2005, 01:46 AM
lord cant help me, this the hand that he dealt me
i keep a str8 face, dont wanna look guilty
the world is filthy, the things we do to get wealthy
i got a piece of the pie, but why's my stomach still empty
cant stay healthy, there's too many diseases
this burger and fries are too greasy, i cant eat this
murders, homicides, how can we defeat this
many people praying everday help me jesus
but i wake up the next day and still see this
nobody said it would be easy but geez its
so cold sometimes that my brain just freezes
so hot sometimes im melting, where's the breezes
cant be clueless, cant have loose lips
bcuz if my ship sinks ill be useless
the shit stinks, eventually u get used to it
its like taking a sip from the cup of death
i had enough of it but it seems that im adicted
everytime im feeling low i get lifted
im feeling gifted, one of the chosen ones
playing russian rullet with a fully loaded gun
its loads of fun when times is good
but when its not your body rotts like old wood
misunderstood by many, hated by most
dead red roses lay next to the burried, here comes the holy ghost
holy smokes, is all this just a hoax
pinched myself, am i dreaming, is this a joke
its what i wrote, take it or leave it
the world is so fucked up i cant believe it

hollywoodrealty
09-03-2005, 07:57 AM
id like to hear more comments if anyone has any?

hollywoodrealty
09-03-2005, 07:58 AM
any comments?

GuardianOne
09-03-2005, 10:01 AM
Sorry wrok had me caught-up i'll comment tomorrow

Peace

Cap I
09-03-2005, 11:10 AM
I'm feeling your lyrics. It's nice.

hollywoodrealty
09-03-2005, 03:35 PM
thanks cap, come out to the battlefield and vote on some battles too, peace

Wu-tang Fan
09-03-2005, 03:50 PM
Yo you know what;I can't help picturing you as the guy in the signature!Oh and those lyrics were good aswell.Keep it up man

Chief 'Broom
09-03-2005, 04:26 PM
Good rhyme scheme Good wordplay. Good subject matter. I could relate - plus i like the phrase "holy smokes." Write on. Peace

hollywoodrealty
09-03-2005, 05:08 PM
haha wutang fan, i look nothing like the guy in that picture, but t hanks for the props, and chief broom, thanks for your input too, holy smokes, peace

hollywoodrealty
09-04-2005, 04:18 AM
dark castle, try to tresspass, man ill bash you
smash you, make u freeze like a statue
wu tang romania, dracula transylvania
all these crazy thoughts in my head, i cant explain to ya
allegorical, infallible like the oracle
rhetorical questions bring agression, event pivotal
capitol punishment, astonishment criticle
biblicle scriptures, mental pictures of ridicule
cruel and unusual, i torture individuals
my words make it visual, sharpening knives in my rituel
virtuel reality, assault and battery
you wanna go to war with me bring on your cavelry
but i will bring pain upon thee curious mc
i kill you cats 10 times, u got 9 lives, my knives are deadly
get ready, on your mark get set
im feeding your eardrums, put on your head set
the melody is the remedy, words are heavenly
mental thoughts inevitable, manifest destiny
but listen closely, decipher the scrolls from the dead sea
my words come together like a goo tee, get checked like gretzky

hollywoodrealty
09-05-2005, 07:41 AM
anyone got any feedback for me?

hollywoodrealty
09-06-2005, 03:07 PM
?

TeknicelStylez
09-06-2005, 04:59 PM
It was iight, a little rambling at one point but not bad

hollywoodrealty
09-06-2005, 07:27 PM
ok i gotta stick to the topic better, thanks peace

hollywoodrealty
09-08-2005, 08:46 AM
come in here and show your love for that weed u blaze........... 1st verse was written by idiom.......................




this my ode to marijuana for them highs on low days/
kept my mental thoughts sharp so for the green i praise/
the smoke inhallation soothes my lungs/
wake n bake every morning thus my day's begun/
shotgun to brain got me lifted a fuck/
my vision gets more clearer i feel gifted as fuck/
gasmask tokin lefts words unspoken/
laced wit opium crazy things were awoken/
tingles in my fingers as the herb stiLL lingers/
singers feel my Vibe as we role gettin high/
talkin bout that outkast funky ride/
dippin' on the eastside/ rollin' on chrome wheels
tical, my niggas we abide by this cheebah/
one more hit my dawgs chyeah.






next verse is by hollywoodrealty aka da butcher



they call me the pope of dope
cuz u take one hit, and your like "holy shit", rope a dope
its like skiing down the slopes
dont crash, you get smashed like a cantelope
doctor of weed, is that what u need, i got the antidote
when life's so stressful and u just cant cope
when reality hits, thats when u start to choke
take two hits, got your head spinning like spokes
you'll thank me when that fine bitch lets u poke
its all cuz of that thick ass cloud of smoke
thats why u pay me the money, and u still be broke
gotta smoke the crippy till i see like a kaleidoscope
my minds on drugs, so crack the egg and drop the yolk
these rhymes i wrote are brought to u in part by the blunt i toke

hollywoodrealty
09-08-2005, 08:50 AM
keep this going people, drop your thoughts on weed, good or bad, peace

jallainINS
09-08-2005, 03:42 PM
yo sprinkle that shit, i roll up the blunt
tighter then a 10 year old girls cunt
dont lick your lips and make the end stick
closed, i want that smoke pourin in thick
the sound of you chokin puts a smile on my face
take your time dog this isnt a race
turn up the radio we bumpin the wu
damn, fix that shit yo its gonna canoe
down to the roach take out the gator clip
dont touch it to your lips, take a big rip
hold that shit in dont let it get out
eyes red, stomach rumblin, thats what its about
laughin at nothin, we're close to the end
good blunt, good high, good times, good friends

jallainINS
09-08-2005, 11:56 PM
doctor of weed, is that what u need, i got the anictdote

anicdote is a joke..you were lookin for antidote i think..i liked it though. makes me wanna go toke right now.

Lyrical Genius
09-08-2005, 11:57 PM
I smoke blunts like its goin out of style
i smoke the finest sess, it keeps me high for a while
break out that dank and put it in grinder
get that commersh shit away, my bud is kinder
our blunt sessions last at least 10-12 rounds
I only buy the best weed by the pounds
now to end my verse lemme just sigh
lets smoke that blunt, and get real high

hollywoodrealty
09-20-2005, 03:35 PM
life is hard on the boulevard
you can stare at my scars, they tell a story about a bloody war
battles, metal shackles straped around your ankles
restrained, mentally drained, but ima take you
through a journey across mountains and deserts
see volcano's explode, reload my mental presence
i show evidence to back my stories of the underworld
ive witnessed boys and girls killed just for cheap thrills
the shit is sick, ill, have you feeling queasy
im trapped in this sick hell, why cant it just be easy
but it cant, this life already planned out
you're just a pawn in gods chessgame, with your hand out
why's one man rich, the next man's poor
the systems got a glitch, this shit stinks like manure
who makes the rules, who says this is my destiny
i didnt choose it, why cant i loose it, im living in mutiny
there's no more purity, just str8 insanity
feeling obscurity, chemicals changing our anatomy
the gravitational pull can almost crush your skull
education at schools dont teach kids, just makes them dull
its null and void, all sales final
you cant avoid, you get destroyed, smash your spinal
went from laying under the tree's in peace
to obeying the demands, machine guns in the hands of the police
one curupt cop equals thousands of innocent civilians
one disrupts his thoughts gets framed, lands in prison
when its your word against his, who the fuck is gonna believe u
he created evidence, you got no lawyer to relieve you
but in the scheme of things, you pray you'll grow angel wings
you wanna die, the afterlife, you hear the angels sing
but u cant, you're trapped in this living hell
its quicksand, my mind is strapped in a prison cell

Dupreez
09-20-2005, 04:42 PM
Nice hollywood. That shit was dope. You should be posting in here more often you got the skillz.

Peace........

hollywoodrealty
09-21-2005, 01:29 AM
thanks dupreez, im glad u dig this shit, peace bro

hollywoodrealty
09-21-2005, 04:13 PM
anymore feedback plz?

krazi m.i.c.
09-21-2005, 04:55 PM
pretty darn god , u got skillz , keep it up

ElusiveFugitive
09-21-2005, 06:51 PM
this is dope Hollywood...Rhyme scheme was tight and the content was philosophical. To me it portrayed a vision of an awakened soul watching chaos and sorrow inflicted in the world around them and helpless to change it...

im trapped in this sick hell, why cant it just be easy
but it cant, this life already planned out
you're just a pawn in gods chessgame, with your hand out
went from laying under the tree's in peace
to obeying the demands, machine guns in the hands of the police
one curupt cop equals thousands of innocent civilians
one disrupts his thoughts gets framed, lands in prison
when its your word against his, who the fuck is gonna believe u
he created evidence, you got no lawyer to relieve you
I'll look out for more from you

ONE LOVE

hollywoodrealty
09-22-2005, 02:39 AM
thanks elusive and krazi for the feedback, and ya elusive, i work hard at have some kinda story or plot in my rhymes, stick with one subject or scheme, peace to u both

hollywoodrealty
09-22-2005, 02:25 PM
anyone else got any comments for me, peace

J.T.S.
09-23-2005, 09:20 AM
That was heavy favorite lines were

See volcanoes explode, reload my mental presence

feeling obscurity chemicals changing our anatomy

Well thought out darts peace.

GuardianOne
09-24-2005, 03:13 AM
Nice verse and well placed also, you thoughts on this verse seem to be drifting not aimlessly. Cause you go through a certain area in the verse then come back to whats really happening in this world, quite impressive (some people just take different pieces and parts and join the verse) you sought of walked through it (like the motions) well controlled. Some parts though you seemed to be kind of lost in thought (not literally but in knowledge, asking questions making it try to make sense)nice verse

Peace

hollywoodrealty
09-24-2005, 05:49 PM
thanks james and gaurdian for your insight, ya i was trying my hardest to stay on topic and just speak about some ill shit, hopefully i can drop some more quality like this, peace

hollywoodrealty
09-25-2005, 07:56 AM
anyone else got some input?

hollywoodrealty
09-26-2005, 08:56 AM
hunted or hunter, predetor, or pray
the cycle of life, how'd we make it all this way
a psycho of the night plays an angel in the day
nigga's get the dracula bite, then they gotta avoid the sun's rays
when the heavyweights start swingen and your just a featherweight
i start swingen till u see a white light, open heavons gates
if you dont know how it goes, let me demonstrate
its like desecrating the words of the bible before its time to meet your fate
if u cant wait and have no patience in a snake pit
trust me, you'll get killed when the 1st snake bit
physically im out numbered but mentally im ahead
gotta think quick or your ship sinks, you're dead
dont be misled by the voices in your head, just think
train yourself for the challenges in life, perfect your instinct
bcuz the shit stinks, expect the worst, get the best
im on god's quest to feeling righteousness
im always in accordance with virtue and morality
dont dance with devil's in blue dresses, thats fatality
reality, its virtual, my spirituality is supernatural
vitality is crucial, in actuality its perceptual
you gotta invision your future if u want to leave the past
my invasion of your culture will change it fast
if your ears digest the words, if your eyes reolize
when reading the scriptures of the butcher, there's no surprise
i lay out all the facts, no fiction, just friction
shake the earths grounds, no playen around, its an addiction

hollywoodrealty
09-27-2005, 12:25 AM
any feedback?

Visionz
09-27-2005, 12:44 AM
nice verse man but I wish I could hear you actually spit cause sometimes it seems like the words loose their rhythym

its like desecrating the words of the bible before its time to meet your fate
if u cant wait and have no patience in a snake pit
trust me, you'll get killed when the 1st snake bit

these are tight lines but they also seem kinda long-winded but I could see how that might not be the case if I heard you spit'em. Overall though, nice verse and concept.peace

hollywoodrealty
09-27-2005, 12:54 AM
thanks eric, ya im working shit out right now with recording a few songs, so far i got 4 done, but im trying to perfect shit, and sometimes i might overstuff a line so usually i edit the songs when it comes time to spit it, but usually everything works out just fine, when i got my shit on point ill drop some audio, peace

hollywoodrealty
09-30-2005, 08:56 AM
fuck the rags, im bout the riches
if the hoe is on the rag im fucken other bitches
im not one to brag or burn bridges but my rap style is privelaged
small time mc's i call them rap midgets
i got magic like johnson, kick shit like charles bronson
and i always spit shit daily like carson
this is arson, cuz im burning the track
this is war son, there's no turning back
im warning u that when u see me covered in blood
you better run for cover before i nip it in the bud
my bombs are never duds, filled to the rim with gunpowder
you never seen it coming just like a sunshower
i got the power, lighting strikes when the beef ignites
deep insight, i creep at night, in the shadows of fright
im on a flight, a one way ticket to the sickest
site you ever seen, its not a dream, its really tempest
its not even a nightmare, this hell is my reality
nigga's dont fight fair, that why i cast a spell that brings casualties
in actuality, the death rate is on a rapid increase
when the butcher swings his knife, mc's deceased, rest in peace

Grim Reapa
09-30-2005, 10:09 AM
raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww

Dupreez
09-30-2005, 05:21 PM
Hollywood kiling it!!!!!

Yo, hollywood your game has stepped up so much over the last few months!!! Fuck man you coming through tight!!!

Hot rhyme bro.

Peace.....

hollywoodrealty
10-01-2005, 07:51 AM
thanks for the comments dupreez, u always come through, and vern, thanks too, and i like the new name, the shit fits you, vernakula is ill, peace, and any other comments?

hollywoodrealty
10-02-2005, 05:13 PM
only droppen hits

hollywoodrealty
10-15-2005, 08:36 AM
i came to play thats why im sporten the jordans
when i step on the court, you'll feel the explosion
witness the erosion of your defense
my quickness and swiftness throws you off sequance
i pledge allegiance to this rap game
its contagious once u get a taste of the fame
why waste the chance to advance in society
the thoughts of albert einstein hide inside of me
when i invented the style that got cemented
under the pavement, 2000 years later its still sacred
i turn theives into dabree when i pop them
cant run from ghost and goblims cuz somebody's gotta stop em
the problem with getting past your fears is
when u think u defeated them but suddenly they reappear, its
the way shits gonna be just leave it alone
ill put u in the past now its time to move on
but your holding on for your dear life
got you all stressed out like a zebra loosing its stripes
whats all the hype about, its time for me to kill the noise
shoot out your eardrums so u got no choice
this is my kingdom, im the one wearing the crown
i got my dog pound like the cleveland browns
bunch of doverman pinchers, bulldogs, and rot wielers
and when they all attack there's no survivors
nothing but leftovers for the vulchers
evolution of man, im changing the culture
im the butcher, my rhymes are toxic
spit flames, swing switch blades when i talk sick
your like the walking dead, a zombee
i gotta eat, i aint ghandi, your hoes all on my salami
the butcher got the freshest meats, the freshest rhymes, the freshest beats
so take a number and have a seat

TUCO
10-15-2005, 09:20 AM
this thread sucks

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 09:25 AM
lmao ..... what the fuck you doin up this early on saturday tuco?

hollywoodrealty
10-15-2005, 04:21 PM
this guy tuco is really getting on my nerves, all he does is bich, riding my nuts, for someone who dont like me, he sure is writing on every thread i put something on, maybe u a homo, get off my nutz plz, thanks

hollywoodrealty
10-16-2005, 08:26 AM
you know that feeling when your pheening, you veins bleeding
your brains freezing, just a taste would be so pleasing
cant think str8 or concentrate, cant meditate
feeling low, you would do anything to levitate
staying up late, i cant sleep, i tried counting sheep
toss and turn constintly kicking off my sheets
wake up late, got bags under my eyes
am i dead or alive, i can feel it buring up inside
the walking dead, tales from the crip
my body's loosing more blood then crips
i wanna flip a coin, heads or tales, its mental
if it lands on heads ill put a gun to my temple
or maybe a slit of the wrist would be the quickest
and if it lands on heads then ill be on satin's shitlist
am i already on his hitlist, am i next in line
im hooked just like a snook ona fishing line
should i live through all the pain and suffering
someone dealt me my cards without shuffling
but when i think i gotta bad somebody's got it worse
and thats how i learned to overcome the curse

Father N Dangerous
10-16-2005, 11:21 AM
sum wicked rhymes butcher stay up 9/10

hollywoodrealty
10-17-2005, 07:28 AM
thanks white and dangerous for the commnets, glad to see the haters have dissapeared from here, keep it positive always, peace

TUCO
10-17-2005, 06:49 PM
this thread still sucks

TUCO
10-17-2005, 06:49 PM
lmao ..... what the fuck you doin up this early on saturday tuco?
nigguh! im an earlybird, cant help it dude

hollywoodrealty
10-18-2005, 07:40 AM
tuco u must be my bigest fan in disguise, u always on my nuts, would u plz stop sucken my balls, thanks

TUCO
10-18-2005, 06:42 PM
u like guys suckin ya balls

hollywoodrealty
10-20-2005, 04:25 AM
why you trying to copy my style, fool this aint kinko's
and i wanna know who is this bitch ass named tuco
he thinks he's fat, fuck that, ill give him lypo
snatch the chord out ya hand, he's like "where the fucked my mic go"
im psycho, i roll with 200 crazy white dudes on harley davidson motorcycles
that will knock your ass out like nyquil
you're name is tuco, you're one letter off from being a taco
skinny ass kid, snap you like a twig cuz you're flaco
call me rocko, cuz ill rock this baby to sleep
how could he not know im a wolf dressed up as a sheep
and you best to keep ya mouth shut before i sew it closed
gay slut who takes it up the butt, and he wears woman's clothes
high heels, be careful, you get your wig peeled backwards
you never drop shit, not even a fucken little black turd
you just a black bird, dont fuck with this scare crow
how could u attack my words, stop hating on my rare flow
use a bow and arrow, aim it right at your noggen cuz
i wanna see u get scared and freeze up like haggen daz
and when i let it go, hit tuco, fucken bullseye
fucken with jeckel and hyde is suicide, i made this fool cry

hollywoodrealty
10-22-2005, 09:16 AM
bring to you the 2nd chapter, the life after
i bring dissaster, step in the room and kill the laughter
change it into tears, we tip beers for those who's passed away
lived the fast way, end up burnt ina asstray
these cats play, by their own set of rules
if one cat strays away he better pray its april fools
cuz otherwise they pull out tools, grab the hammer out the tool box
bust 3 shots on the block and watch the fools flock
its gridlock, like five o'clock traffic jams
my rhymes are dope like coke, sniff 1000 poetic grams

RaE
10-22-2005, 09:25 AM
ehhh...some parts slipped, but tha flow was solid for tha most part, keep it up, 7/10. 1ne.

hollywoodrealty
11-06-2005, 01:38 AM
my masterpieces will make you see double like reeses pieces
this is the last supper, thats me to the left of jesus
bloody cross, back stabbed, double crossed
im running back, cant drop the ball, no fumble loss
you wanna rumble, you get tossed in the slammer you fucken hammerheads
be humble, dont floss, but your life's about glamour and glitz
this is a battle of wits, who can outsmart the next guy
biggest criminals are the ones wearing the neck tie's
coorporate thugs, 3 piece suits, leather briefcase
im kicken so much knowledge to you, i wear a knee brace
living the fast pace like im playing high stakes poker
cant be a joker, thats why i never spit shit mediocre
im like that ogre in your reoccuring nightmare
just when u think im gone, boom im right there
i might spare your life but most likely ill end it
dont fuck with the butcher knife, its not highly recomended

hollywoodrealty
11-07-2005, 08:07 PM
n e feedback?

hollywoodrealty
02-24-2006, 08:22 AM
1

hollywoodrealty
02-24-2006, 08:55 AM
look into my archives to see the dark lives
my dark eyes will pierce your skull like some sharp knives
ive been deprived yet ive survived the daily struggles
ive always strived to avoid that nine to five hustle
ive arrived to the conclusion, a quick solution
that if there's no exicutions then there's no evolution
the past present and future of our culture builds the structure
like architecture, spit this lecture to paint a mental picture
i wrote these scriptures like apostles, man im hostile
my rhymes are diesel, im about to flex my rap muscles
burry the dead, shovel the dirt over the casket
unburry the live, reverse homicide, remove the blanket
i never would of banked on it, life's a gamble
you shouldnt try to scramble, if you move with a shamble
this is my preamble strike, a preliminary introduction
if the war starts u dissapear like a tax deduction
the repercussion is often deadly
this shit was meant to be, it didnt happen accidently
this rhyme will self destruct in 10 seconds, so man listen
i baptised those who despised, you've been christen

hollywoodrealty
02-25-2006, 08:37 AM
anyone out there with some feedback, peace

Tito
02-26-2006, 07:41 AM
Writing Scheme Is Pretty Clean.. > I Felt What U Were Trying 2 Say... >


Protege Wtf??? Just Playing Dog..

Good Shit ..




Peace !

Father N Dangerous
02-26-2006, 09:08 AM
haha u always waz ill, str8 verse too after the long hackin session. anway stay up n keep blessin

hollywoodrealty
02-27-2006, 08:03 PM
this is a peice i wrote on a smaller forum but not many people read it so im hoping to attract more heads here.................





sick, psychodelic, sadistics, holding 2 sticks
cross them, hangit on my neck as a crucifix
1 cross plus 3 nails equals 4given
1 life lost so the rest can stay liven
christ has rissen, it was written in hebrew
in a lifeform thats transparent and see through
hide's amongst us, only giving us occasional signs
but we still know his presence is devine
wine is the blood of christ, his flesh is the bread
we feast, and try to fight the beast that devil spread
there's a spider web that spun in your head
but im here to clear the cobwebs out of the mental dead
enough said, hail mary's verses bloody mary's
stair in a mirror, seen terror, dead body's carried
bodies burried but their soles left to roam the earth
reincarnate, you need a rebirth
ive visioned heaven and hell, thats the spell of relegion
at twelve, hear the churchbells, my sole felt the collision
like 2 trains heading right for each other, when they crash you hear it
in the name of the father, son, and holy spirit



we're surrounded by good and evil, the unbelievable
will we survive the rip tides, thats inconcievable
or will you just melt fast in the devils grasp
ill pray to the lord for you

hollywoodrealty
02-27-2006, 08:05 PM
yo thanks for the comments, glad to see some usual faces back in the mix, peace

Aqueous Moon
02-28-2006, 07:39 PM
WOW...I feel yo passion...very nice imagery and good word play...yo content is your own expressions and I can't hate...keep it coming

hollywoodrealty
02-28-2006, 08:32 PM
yo thanks for that aqueous moon, im glad to see someone is digging this shit, i like to spit a few different styles, so this is just one side of it, keep a look out for some other things, thanks and peace

hollywoodrealty
02-28-2006, 08:36 PM
dropped this not too long ago, once again not too many heads read it and i hate good shit to go to waste, peep it and let me know what ya'll think, peace





imagine, blood splashen once the butcher knife is exposed
the blade slashes your skin, crashes your bones
the thrown is up for grabs, the king has yet to be proclaimed
im blowen u up to scraps, my raps will burn you like a flame
i will not change my style, you either hate it or you love it
im giving you bitches the boot, ya u know where u can shove it
i rise above the clouds, to an outer exhistence
giving speeches 2 crowds, my words are loud, there's no resistance
im more persitant then a door to door salesman
delever more messages then mailmen, now call the revren
bcuz i killed the track, spit the eulogy with no apology
some of ya'll are pussies, trust me, i studied gynocology
reverse psychology, god's phrophecy's, monstrosities
i spent days and nights studying the words of Socrates
i must be Plato, reincarnated, ill move to athens greece
teach lectures to educate humanity of peace
but if there cant be peace, there's war, call me the warlord
who ever wants to tango can get strangled by my mic chord
its the beginning of the end, apocalypse, a full eclipse
a full clip to bust guns with, now you're like holy shit

TUCO
02-28-2006, 11:01 PM
dunno if this shit is blessed enuff to be holy
almost evil actually

hollywoodrealty
03-01-2006, 07:39 AM
damn tuco where u been, i can see u are still hating on me, but its all good, some things never change

adedwutang
03-01-2006, 06:21 PM
tight verse hollywood, happy to see the same guys who used to tear it up in the battlefield before the site crashed are still here, this is my first post since it came back up, expect to see me here more often
1

p.s. -"i will not change my style, you either hate it or you love it
im giving you bitches the boot, ya u know where u can shove it"

that shit was hot

Hollow Dartz
03-01-2006, 07:07 PM
It's was ok, the Multi's were ok, but they could've been better, but overall it was nice.

hollywoodrealty
03-02-2006, 11:27 AM
thanks for the comments taco

Liquid Lines
03-03-2006, 01:36 PM
u gotta be one of, if the best, on here in my opnion

Rebel_INS
03-03-2006, 02:25 PM
Good drop man

hollywoodrealty
03-03-2006, 02:32 PM
damn thanks liquid lines, im glad to see im connecting with some people on here, and thanks to u too rebel_ins for giving me input, keep your eyes peeled for more things to come, thanks again and peace

hollywoodrealty
03-03-2006, 02:38 PM
yo thanks for the kind words adedwutang, ya im with u, its nice to see some familiar faces here, but im also notcing a lot of new heads coming with positive words and less negativity.

and hollow dartz, i appreciate your feedback, im glad u thought it was nice atleast, lol, i thought my flow was good on this one, but u are right, u can always improve, ill try and surprise your ass with something even more ill in days to come, thanks and peace

hollywoodrealty
03-07-2006, 10:56 PM
what up, u better get up, bcuz im fed up
im hitten u with punches until you're spitten red up
i keep my head up, i aint no turtle hiding under a shell
abra cadabra now you're under my spell
if this was poker, u punk bitches better fold
bcuz the butcher knife is cold, ill throw u in the sleeper hold
you cant control, im the one sitten in the cock pit
you want to be bold, lyrical terrorist bout to get shot quick
bcuz my planes equipt with a federal marshall
that shoots to kill, no job ever done partial
u messed with the butcher, my specialty is knives
or sharp objects that will slice u up and take your lives
fillet, switch blade's, which ways's the cemetary
dead or alive, you bitch nigga's is getting burried
this aint no tom and jerry cartoon
ill drag u in a dark room and feed you nothing but mushrooms
you'll be trippen for days, you're in a daze
now your ass is in trouble bcuz i let the lion out the cage
this aint no wizard of oz, my lions vicious
cut u up and leave you covered in blood, you look delecious
you're finished

$icka Than Aidz
03-08-2006, 09:46 PM
ya but martyr is a bitch so how could he of killed my verse, as for psycusus, i never seen u spit one line, your like the fat kid in gym class that gets picked last you wack ass


YA FUCKED UP HUH, IVE ONLY READ THE FIRST PAGE SO FAR, IM SORRY DUDE:thumbup:

hollywoodrealty
05-04-2006, 12:34 AM
in the temple of darts, many start, few finish
im stressed, my dark hair's turning grey, i look distinquished
cant extinguish the fire, yo i gotta let it burn
like usher, the pressure can quickly make your stomach turn
are you concerned with the chance you can be worthless
are you willing to risk it all, i am, thats why im standing here shirtless
just my flesh, skin and bones, i lay it all on the line
for one chance to shine, it can be my last chance to reach the shrine
there's a fine line between right and wrong, im fighting strong
ill spit till i have my last breathe, however long
that might be, maybe i live to be infiniti
maybe i die tomorow, then im just a memory
maybe no one will remember me, a blank tombstone
fuck that, i aint no john doe, nigga im gun ho
i go out blasting like scarface, this shit is high stakes
u got beef with the butcher, well watch me pull out my steaks
this is my slaughterhouse, the house of a thousand corpses
a complete change of physical form like metamorphosis
life dont always smell like fresh roses and summer's breeze
one door opens, another closes, your frozen like 32 degrease

but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully

tha god concept
05-04-2006, 12:38 AM
yo im feelin that shit homie glad to c ya back up in here droppin raw shit

you got a nice style my man

u should peep out sum of my new shit homie..

peace god~1~

hollywoodrealty
05-04-2006, 12:42 AM
yo thanks for peeping my shit out, ya i been laying low a few weeks, concentrating on work, but a little hiatus isnt bad now and then, peace

hollywoodrealty
05-04-2006, 07:12 AM
any other comments?

Liquid Lines
05-05-2006, 05:55 AM
I just dont get it, hollywoodrealty why ever1 hating on u, most people seem to have got a problem with you, they diss ya verses no matter how good they are.

hollywoodrealty
05-05-2006, 06:41 AM
im used to people like tuco hating on me, they have nothing better to do. and now vern is hating too, and the funny thing is we are all from miami, from the same fucken city. u would think that rather then being negative, people could be fucken nicer, especially with their neighbors, but fuck em, they want to hate, keep on hating, im still droppen jewels, peace

Liquid Lines
05-05-2006, 06:47 AM
U right u dropping jewels, keep up the quality shit.

hollywoodrealty
05-05-2006, 11:38 AM
see its people like u, liquid lines, that keep me wanting to write dope shit, and vern, come on dog, look at my record, look at my post, from day one to present, im spitten shit correct, dont front on the facts, peace

hollywoodrealty
05-07-2006, 10:35 PM
k lets get back to the music here, enough with the drama, drop me some more feedback on this verse...........

in the temple of darts, many start, few finish
im stressed, my dark hair's turning grey, i look distinquished
cant extinguish the fire, yo i gotta let it burn
like usher, the pressure can quickly make your stomach turn
are you concerned with the chance you can be worthless
are you willing to risk it all, i am, thats why im standing here shirtless
just my flesh, skin and bones, i lay it all on the line
for one chance to shine, it can be my last chance to reach the shrine
there's a fine line between right and wrong, im fighting strong
ill spit till i have my last breathe, however long
that might be, maybe i live to be infiniti
maybe i die tomorow, then im just a memory
maybe no one will remember me, a blank tombstone
fuck that, i aint no john doe, nigga im gun ho
i go out blasting like scarface, this shit is high stakes
u got beef with the butcher, well watch me pull out my steaks
this is my slaughterhouse, the house of a thousand corpses
a complete change of physical form like metamorphosis
life dont always smell like fresh roses and summer's breeze
one door opens, another closes, your frozen like 32 degrease

but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
05-08-2006, 11:18 AM
DONE...Keep up the nice reads Butcher!

hollywoodrealty
05-08-2006, 04:50 PM
big ben, aka wutangcorp police cheif....dont fuck with big ben the boss, peace

Vernakular
05-08-2006, 08:27 PM
U Still Suck Battle Me Foo

hollywoodrealty
05-14-2006, 12:19 AM
this aint science fiction, im living a life of addiction
the horror and terror was unseen, no psychic prediction
the stars and moon were aligned, my mind intertwined
i sat in a dark room, felt the tingles in my spine
the clock struck nine, the sweat dripped off my forehead
the explosion in my head hit with the force of a warhead
code red, yo, red alert, my pen squirts
poisonous fluid, there's nothing to it, as my words insert
permanently, into your bloodstream like dope pheens
the rush is something that one could of never foreseen
but this dream now becomes your reality, the vitality
needed to grow, without this you'll have an abnormality
my mentality is 1/2 habitual 1/2 spiratual
if i make it out alive, its gonna take a miracle
my lyrical ability cant have any fragility
bcuz on the battlefield you gotta have versatility
ill handle shit with hostility, the city is devil's playground
im going to war with him, there's a chance i can be hellbound
time to calm down, get composure, i need some closure
i should of seen this coming but i never read disclosures
im stuck in this enclosure and there's no way out
its to late to reroute, i wish i could roundabout
but just when im in doubt, destiny awaits me
the angels from above show me love, lucifer hates me
how does god rate me on a scale from one to ten
ill never know unless i wake up in heaven's den

Father N Dangerous
05-14-2006, 12:52 AM
this aint science fiction, im living a life of addiction
the horror and terror was unseen, no psychic prediction

Yeah, this opening line was dope, good rhyme scheme and everything

the stars and moon were aligned, my mind intertwined
i sat in a dark room, felt the tingles in my spine

I like the Intertwined i've also used such a whord ta rhyme off of. good shit

the clock struck nine, the sweat dripped off my forehead
the explosion in my head hit with the force of a warhead

Haha, i've also used forehead but neva thought of warhead ta rhyme
Ill shit


code red, yo, red alert, my pen squirts
poisonous fluid, there's nothing to it, as my words insert

Ight good shit hopefully this is gettin somewhere

permanently, into your bloodstream like dope pheens
the rush is something that one could of never foreseen

Ight feelin da flow, n the imagery

but this dream now becomes your reality, the vitality
needed to grow, without this you'll have an abnormality\

Ilght ill vocab, good wordplay

my mentality is 1/2 habitual 1/2 spiratual
if i make it out alive, its gonna take a miracle

Feelin tha concept of this line made it go from average ta Expert

my lyrical ability cant have any fragility
bcuz on the battlefield you gotta have versatility

Ight lil eazy here below average compared ta the rest of ya lines but safe

ill handle shit with hostility, the city is devil's playground
im going to war with him, there's a chance i can be hellbound

K again a average line

time to calm down, get composure, i need some closure
i should of seen this coming but i never read disclosures

There ya go gettin better with the first line

im stuck in this enclosure and there's no way out
its to late to reroute, i wish i could roundabout

Feelin this line good shit

but just when im in doubt, destiny awaits me
the angels from above show me love, lucifer hates me

I see you got sum emotion too which balances ya style out

how does god rate me on a scale from one to ten
ill never know unless i wake up in heaven's den

Again another good line where Imagery Shines

Overall: This shit was hot ill shit fa real, really caught my eye with everything you put into it. or were you just playing around? Haha you tight

hollywoodrealty
05-14-2006, 10:53 AM
yo thanks for breaking it down, im glad u were feelen it the whole way through, keep em coming plz

hollywoodrealty
05-15-2006, 11:45 AM
bump this

Vernakular
05-16-2006, 09:41 PM
u suck cok faggit

hollywoodrealty
05-18-2006, 07:03 AM
vern, get off my nuts plz before i put a bad taste in your mouth

WARPATH
05-18-2006, 06:24 PM
k lets get back to the music here, enough with the drama, drop me some more feedback on this verse...........

in the temple of darts, many start, few finish
im stressed, my dark hair's turning grey, i look distinquished
cant extinguish the fire, yo i gotta let it burn
like usher, the pressure can quickly make your stomach turn
are you concerned with the chance you can be worthless
are you willing to risk it all, i am, thats why im standing here shirtless
just my flesh, skin and bones, i lay it all on the line
for one chance to shine, it can be my last chance to reach the shrine
there's a fine line between right and wrong, im fighting strong
ill spit till i have my last breathe, however long
that might be, maybe i live to be infiniti
maybe i die tomorow, then im just a memory
maybe no one will remember me, a blank tombstone
fuck that, i aint no john doe, nigga im gun ho
i go out blasting like scarface, this shit is high stakes
u got beef with the butcher, well watch me pull out my steaks
this is my slaughterhouse, the house of a thousand corpses
a complete change of physical form like metamorphosis
life dont always smell like fresh roses and summer's breeze
one door opens, another closes, your frozen like 32 degrease

but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully
but see i gotta get paid fully
whether its truthfully or untruthfully

This imagery was dope, fell off a for a line or two in the middle, but came out solid, dope rhymes as always peace-

Vernakular
05-18-2006, 07:42 PM
vern, get off my nuts plz before i put a bad taste in your mouth

dont act like your hot shit, im not scared of anything you've posted

hollywoodrealty
05-18-2006, 08:20 PM
vern man, u gotta stop acting like a little kid, if u dont have anything important to say then dont say shit at all. You the one who is starting shit with me for no reason, maybe u want to be like me when u grow up, but u got a lot of growing to do then. Clean the cob webs out your head, smell the reality.

hollywoodrealty
05-18-2006, 08:21 PM
hey thanks for the feedback charging soldier, i try and keep it solid throughout the rhyme, but i can see a line or 2 that i would probably change before i put it on vocally, thanks and peace

Vernakular
05-18-2006, 08:23 PM
u think your better than spoken, when ur not


think up some new shit, stop recyclin, i posted my shit for criticizm, u got writers block

fine........have fun with the only four half decent rhymes youll ever write

TUCO
05-18-2006, 08:53 PM
gay

hollywoodrealty
05-18-2006, 11:39 PM
tuco in spanish means homo

hollywoodrealty
05-28-2006, 10:21 PM
4 to the 3rd power equals 64
or u can add them up, thats twelve, watch the shells hit the floor
the style you cant ignore, like roosters in the a.m.
lay it down like tiles, create a floor over the pavement
old school style, older like cavemen, im ancient
spit rhymes like uga booga, and then my looga starts sprayen
i am man, hear me roar, punch my fist against my chest
i spit so much i make u drown like the city of atlantis
or hurricane francis, now im dancing with wolves
indian chants, do a rain dance, im maken moves
you cant have trumpet with out the trump, who's the Don
im the apprentice and i get relentless when my pen hits, its on

hollywoodrealty
06-13-2006, 08:35 PM
copy and paste, my blunts are laced with hazordous waste
your lungs get burnt from the taste of an acid chase
chemical imbalance, feeling malice
ive got a callus from holding the mic, this shit is sharp like a cactus
pointy thorns, devilish rhymes, ive got 2 pointy horns
i might have to sacrafice the life of your firstborn
word is bond, im a mix between james bond and king kong
ill read your palm, short life line, you wont live long
here today gone tomorow, thats the story
bloody murder, who felt the sorrow, who saw the glory
unholy style leaves your eyes burning like chlorine
better duck cuz this shits exploding
ive got more chemicals then the periodic table
im a triple crown winner, watch me dip out the stable
this is that shit your cant handle
didnt i tell you to read the warning label
the butcher knife cuts, i bust like numbchucks
leave you numb and stuck, looken like a dumb fuck
here i come, duck, drop the cannonball
and splash down on your just like a waterfall
all's well that ends well, i cast spells
voodoo magic, its tragic, welcome to my hell
well, you fucked with me, i turned u into a casualty
dont get mad at me, ill put you on the 10 o'clock news, its sad to see
another travesty

hollywoodrealty
06-21-2006, 01:39 AM
ok here is the completed song, peep the hott shit, peace

this aint science fiction, im living a life of addiction
the horror and terror was unseen, no psychic prediction
the stars and moon were aligned, my mind intertwined
i sat in a dark room, felt the tingles in my spine
the clock struck nine, the sweat dripped off my forehead
the explosion hit with the force of a warhead
code red, yo, red alert, my pen squirts
poisonous fluid, there's nothing to it, as my words insert
permanently, into your bloodstream like dope pheens
the rush is something that one could of never foreseen
my mentality is 1/2 habitual 1/2 spiratual
if i make it out alive, its gonna take a miracle
my lyrical ability cant have any fragility
bcuz on the battlefield you gotta have versatility
ill handle shit with hostility, the city is devil's playground
im going to war with him, there's a chance i can be hellbound
time to calm down, get composure, i need some closure
i should of seen this coming but i never read disclosures
but i, swing knives & slash through body armor
spit a blizard, sharp like scissors from my barber

just when im in doubt, destiny awaits me
the angels from above show me love, lucifer hates me
how does god rate me on a scale from one to ten
ill never know unless i wake up in heaven's den


just when im in doubt, destiny awaits me
the angels from above show me love, lucifer hates me
how does god rate me on a scale from one to ten
ill never know unless i wake up in heaven's den



spiritual, create life, the mic chord is my umbilical
i perform rituals with gods and lords, this shit is biblical
my lyrical ability can cause a feeling of tranquility
or serenity, im weakening the mind of my enemy
i was born in seventy-nine, connected with the jesus bloodline
protected by da vinci, someone switched me to obscure mankind
blinded by confusion and intrusion
is it all just an illusion, will you u ever see the conclusion
its a delusion, using deception as a weapon
im never snoozing, stay on my toes, aint no 1/2 steppen
im reppen it for all the warriors, you better get a grip
forever tempted to spit thats why im droppen empty clips
i stack more chips then the world series of poker
i got more invested in this then a stockbroker
like Al Roker, i can see the rain coming
El Nino, this shits for real, thats why your brain's numbing
gotta stop thumbing around, wasting valuable time
all my life i been involved in organized crime
confused, so i stayed isolated, frustrated
i debated the good versus the bad, and elabarated



just when im in doubt, destiny awaits me
the angels from above show me love, lucifer hates me
how does god rate me on a scale from one to ten
ill never know unless i wake up in heaven's den

just when im in doubt, destiny awaits me
the angels from above show me love, lucifer hates me
how does god rate me on a scale from one to ten
ill never know unless i wake up in heaven's den

Father N Dangerous
06-21-2006, 04:57 AM
word i see you still doing your thang mayne, fuckin ill written dawg for real , and that song is a masterpiece 4 real keep doin u and i'll be hearin ya c.d in no time :D

stay up keep blessin

hollywoodrealty
06-21-2006, 09:28 AM
yo thanks for the good words white and dangerous, and thanks for still peeping my lyrics all this time, peace man

hollywoodrealty
06-21-2006, 08:03 PM
anyone else feeling this?

hollywoodrealty
06-23-2006, 05:22 PM
?

VernakuLa
06-30-2006, 05:05 PM
im gonna be honest here, ive been meen in the past but ima break it down for u real

the reason why u aint got good flow is because, your using too many words in one line, making it sound forced, thats why your audio dont sound as good as it could

another thing

try to develope some rhyme schemes in there, it would sound alot better on audio

my 2 cents

hollywoodrealty
07-01-2006, 08:08 AM
ok thanks for breaking it down for me vern, peace

VernakuLa
07-01-2006, 10:59 PM
btw, u should quit rapping and this site, because you are REALLY shit

hollywoodrealty
07-02-2006, 11:04 AM
thanks again, too bad i cant be like nasty nak, the 17 year old pale white kid with a puss face from miami or new york, or where ever u are from this month

VernakuLa
07-02-2006, 03:22 PM
ok, u still suck dude, dont record audio u suck, dont ever come in here saying that your sicker than anyone alright

peace bitch

hollywoodrealty
07-02-2006, 06:03 PM
get out my thread snapperhead

hollywoodrealty
07-02-2006, 06:16 PM
how can u talk shit when i got the 2nd best record in the battlefield on this site, and u got less losses than u do wins, get the fuck out of here with that bullshit, i can understand if u dont like my style, and u can hate on my shit, but i still reck shit much better and more consistant then u, grow up little man, u are the official hater of the month

VernakuLa
07-02-2006, 07:18 PM
how can u talk shit when i got the 2nd best record in the battlefield on this site, and u got less losses than u do wins, get the fuck out of here with that bullshit, i can understand if u dont like my style, and u can hate on my shit, but i still reck shit much better and more consistant then u, grow up little man, u are the official hater of the month

keep thinkin that way, im not even gonna tell you how lacking you are in skill, martyr did that for u

ur thread sucks

peace :'(

hollywoodrealty
07-03-2006, 08:46 AM
ok poppacrackheadlatin

TUCO
07-03-2006, 11:39 AM
ghey

hollywoodrealty
07-03-2006, 03:51 PM
sorry taco, vern is already july's hater of the month, but come back next month and ill leave the spot open for u

VernakuLa
07-03-2006, 06:25 PM
sorry taco, vern is already july's hater of the month, but come back next month and ill leave the spot open for u

weakk.....

hollywoodrealty
07-04-2006, 12:36 AM
come see me in the battlefield nasty wak

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 12:16 AM
w/e

hollywoodrealty
07-08-2006, 07:49 PM
i swing clubs like tiger woods, this is hollywood
the realty is that im filthy, now thats understood
i drop shit like turds in porta potty's
devilish acts, its ungodly, god body
mind spirit and sole left burning in the coal
the firey depts of hell, are we all gonna go
i make sins, cut thin like a shark's fin
tred water, the slaughter released from my dark pen
win, loose or draw, i got claws, you wanna brawl
i leave your ass bloody on the ground trying to crawl
i kick stomachs till blood spits, thats hard hits
never harmless, i always hold it down regardless
the odds can be against me, but dont tempt me
ill run through your whole team like mean wayne gretzy
my power plays leave you dazed and confused, your unstable
im done eating this food for thought, can i please be excused from the dinner table

Classic
07-08-2006, 07:56 PM
i swing clubs like tiger woods, this is hollywood
the realty is that im filthy, now thats understood
(Good opener here. Like the wordplay.)
i drop shit like turds in porta potty's
devilish acts, its ungodly, god body
(The toilet line is a kind of played concept. A lil confusin' 2nd line. Good bar overall.)
mind spirit and sole left burning in the coal
the firey depts of hell, are we all gonna go
(Good bar. Nice multis.)
i make sins, cut thin like a shark's fin
tred water, the slaughter released from my dark pen
(Still doin't good. Multis and wordplay.)
win, loose or draw, i got claws, you wanna brawl
i leave your ass bloody on the ground trying to crawl
(Meh, kind of a played concept. Mediocre.)
i kick stomachs till blood spits, thats hard hits
never harmless, i always hold it down regardless
(Picked it up.)
the odds can be against me, but dont tempt me
ill run through your whole team like mean wayne gretzy
(I think this could've been worded a lil better. Mediocre.)
my power plays leave you dazed and confused, your unstable
im done eating this food for thought, can i please be excused from the dinner table
(NICE closer.)


Overall, strong verse. Kept through and through. Some nice wordplay, multis stuck. Etc Etc. Bad things : some played concepts, a lil confusin' lines, and a little bit of things could've been re-worded to make it sound better.
A strong solid verse.
Good shit.

hollywoodrealty
07-08-2006, 08:02 PM
yo thanks for the quick response classic, i gave myself 10 minutes to write a song before i had to put my son to bed, i kinda like how it came out, thanks for the words, peace

hollywoodrealty
07-08-2006, 08:07 PM
gotta give props to grandmassive, i listened to his beat called "ice ninja's, and that shit let me openly flow, here is a link to the beat, sounds tight

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=387028&songID=3340420

VernakuLa
07-10-2006, 07:12 PM
i swing clubs like tiger woods, this is hollywood
the realty is that im filthy, now thats understood
i drop shit like turds in porta potty's
devilish acts, its ungodly, god body
mind spirit and sole left burning in the coal
the firey depts of hell, are we all gonna go
i make sins, cut thin like a shark's fin
tred water, the slaughter released from my dark pen
win, loose or draw, i got claws, you wanna brawl
i leave your ass bloody on the ground trying to crawl
i kick stomachs till blood spits, thats hard hits
never harmless, i always hold it down regardless
the odds can be against me, but dont tempt me
ill run through your whole team like mean wayne gretzy
my power plays leave you dazed and confused, your unstable
im done eating this food for thought, can i please be excused from the dinner table

I smell wordplay yo, and instead of rhyming one word u rhymin two


nice droppage

Yoddle!

1

hollywoodrealty
07-10-2006, 07:38 PM
its nice to see something positive from you, i dont think u are a bad guy but i think u are too wrapped up in the drama, i think u gotta be yourself and the best of you will show, peace and thanks for the info

jallainINS
07-10-2006, 07:45 PM
i swing clubs like tiger woods, this is hollywood
the realty is that im filthy, now thats understood
i drop shit like turds in porta potty's
devilish acts, its ungodly, god body
mind spirit and sole left burning in the coal
the firey depts of hell, are we all gonna go
i make sins, cut thin like a shark's fin
tred water, the slaughter released from my dark pen
win, loose or draw, i got claws, you wanna brawl
i leave your ass bloody on the ground trying to crawl
i kick stomachs till blood spits, thats hard hits
never harmless, i always hold it down regardless
the odds can be against me, but dont tempt me
ill run through your whole team like mean wayne gretzy
my power plays leave you dazed and confused, your unstable
im done eating this food for thought, can i please be excused from the dinner table

yo i gotta be real with you, i havent liked most of your stuff. i dont know where liquid lyrics or whatever his name is, i dont know how he's gonna say your the best on the site. and people said that you keep saying your better the this person and that person, i havent seen you say that, but i dont like when people toot their own horn, so if you do do that, you should give that a rest and let people talk smack until they wanna prove it on the battlefield. now onto this latest one.

i was feeling this a lot more then your other ones. to be honest, im a fan of tuco so when i saw him makin fun of you i took his side. so i was hoping that this sucked so i could tell you i thought it sucked. but it doest man your doing a good job at improving.

i make sins, cut thin like a shark's fin
tred water, the slaughter released from my dark pen

i love the flow of that second line, i think u nailed that line.

i kick stomachs till blood spits, thats hard hits
never harmless, i always hold it down regardless

another tight couple of lines there. that flowed real nicely.

the very last line was too long i think, unless verbally its supposed to keep going after the beat or something like that. otherwise the rest of the verse was pretty solid, those were the couple of lines that really stood out to me. keep writing, try to work in some more multies, thats a great way to put rhymes over the top. comment on my verse if ya got some time..peace.

hollywoodrealty
07-11-2006, 07:46 AM
yo thanks for the input jallain but i think u may have misconstrued my message. I never said i was the best, or that nobody can take me, i just like to be recognized as someone who represents this site as a quality mc, thats all i battle for. Maybe that has come off the wrong way and ive portrayed myself as arrogant, but that wasnt my intention. Anyways thanks for the detailed message on my thread and i appreciate your honesty, ill check out your material too and give u my take on some of your rhymes, peace

hollywoodrealty
07-11-2006, 08:13 PM
ive got a golden trumpet thats controling your movement like a puppet
when i squeez the keys you scream out, hey man i love it
nobody wants it, like foster kids, not knowing who their papa is
growing up in the slums of a metropolis
batman aint stoppen this, neverending robbin and sobbin
its a game of take and give, thats how we live, its never stopen
im choppen up lines, like razor blades, for heavens sake
with all these sins, how is god gonna let me in through heavens gates
i got piles of thoughts compiled, saved on computer files
so many rhymes, when its time to spit, we gonna be hear for a while
its a trial by error, for a trial by jury
who is the bearer of the terror, all this shit to get the jewelry
the bling and fancy things, big car's, bigger cigars
while kids starving, ribs are carving, did we take this shit too far
the hills have eyes, the walls have ears
im hearing voices in the sky, they got me living a life of fear
a celestial sphere where bodies appear to be projected
am i seeing this clear, gotta beware and stay protected
i sat and reflected on my past, how time moves fast
not even a meteoroligist could of seen the quite storm forecast




peace yo, i wrote this while listening to another one of the mantis aka grandmassive beats, this time i used "the trilogy"
here is the link, listen along while u read

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=387028&songID=2875243

hollywoodrealty
07-13-2006, 07:43 AM
Any feed?

VernakuLa
07-13-2006, 04:58 PM
i read that over the beat, yo u gotta take some words out lol, your sayin too much in one line

hollywoodrealty
07-13-2006, 06:11 PM
naw yo u keep saying that, but i will record it to audio and u will see how nice it flows, peace yo

VernakuLa
07-14-2006, 12:53 PM
naw yo u keep saying that, but i will record it to audio and u will see how nice it flows, peace yo

like im not dissing you, dont take it the wrong way its just...when i read it over the beat 4 or 5 lines had a fucked up flow, just constructive criticism...grow from it don't dismiss

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hollywoodrealty
07-14-2006, 02:06 PM
ok

Edgar Erebus
07-14-2006, 02:12 PM
Goddammit, this is a strong song, I mean... wow, the subject matter is fiyah. No problem with the flow in my opinion.

hollywoodrealty
07-14-2006, 05:50 PM
thanks for the feedback slim t, i guess everyone can interpriate things there own way, im glad u could connect with what i was spitten, peace

VernakuLa
07-14-2006, 05:55 PM
ok

u dont have to take the comment then, fuck, but mind you, this is coming from a fellow lyricist, just noticing patterns homie, im not dissing you

hollywoodrealty
07-14-2006, 06:05 PM
i never said u dissed me, i said ok, vernaphrodite

VernakuLa
07-14-2006, 06:33 PM
i never said u dissed me, i said ok, vernaphrodite

w/e dude, dont improve your shit, fine by me

im out

jallainINS
07-14-2006, 06:34 PM
jeeze man sometimes just loosen up. i mean i know when i finish a rhyme im always like hell yeah this is fire. and it sucks to get any comment that isnt positive. but sometimes you just gotta take it in stride. be thankful for any feed. and nak he wasnt really dissin u either he just didnt believe you either way you two should just stop now before any hatred grows from somethin so dumb.

hollywoodrealty
07-14-2006, 07:02 PM
jallain, if u were to tell me something was good or bad, or u wanted to give me your input, positive or negative, i would respect that and take it in, but look at vern's track record, he goes after me for no reason, just read through my thread here and u would see, so trust me, opinions matter and count, and people's feedback on this site is what helps me improve daily, but there are certain people, like tuco or vern, that never have anything good to say. thats my 2 cents, peace

VernakuLa
07-14-2006, 10:01 PM
jallain, if u were to tell me something was good or bad, or u wanted to give me your input, positive or negative, i would respect that and take it in, but look at vern's track record, he goes after me for no reason, just read through my thread here and u would see, so trust me, opinions matter and count, and people's feedback on this site is what helps me improve daily, but there are certain people, like tuco or vern, that never have anything good to say. thats my 2 cents, peace

i was leaving honest feed lol, consider our beef squashed, but on the real, keep doin your thing homie, MY 2 cents

word up

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hollywoodrealty
07-19-2006, 07:48 PM
life is sweet, i come back like the Heat and defeat
all you Mavericks, ya'll dont wanna see my bag of tricks
I got a magician's hat, but i dont pull out rabbits
i pull out automatics, it all adds up, do the mathamatics
it might be traumatic, take your life, thats how i subract
im charismatic, possesing the ability to attract
now thats a fact, no longer a hypothesis
i use calculus and the theory of limits to produce my anaylis
i do a dialysis with the seperation of substances
i make it dificult for you just like encumbrances
life can get challenging, problems weighing you down
the angel of death took your last breathe, laying you down
nobody's playing around, this aint no carnival fool
my words serve as an essential component, call it the cardinal rule
the microphone's my tool, bout to school you like a profesor
brainwash you, control your thoughts just like an oppressor
nothing lesser, confinent and assertive, known as a aggressor
im the king, who is worthy of being my successor
feel the pressure, enough to make your head explode
solve the hidden code in order to have the truth exposed




i wrote this over another one of "mantis" aka "grandmassive" beat, this one called divide and conquer, here is the link if u wanna listen while u read along

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=387028&songID=2875258

Eversick666
07-19-2006, 08:04 PM
yep thats a pretty good one
madd science

hollywoodrealty
07-20-2006, 10:26 AM
thanks man, ya i was on the science tip, glad u enjoyed it though, peace

Eversick666
07-20-2006, 11:56 AM
no prob just tellin it how it is
peeped some others too, quite dope...
stay up
one hundred
eversick666

hollywoodrealty
07-20-2006, 03:21 PM
oh i see u are from canada aye, no wonder u and god concept hooked up, i see ya'll doing your thang too in your thread, keep writing and thanks for the feed, peace

Eversick666
07-20-2006, 03:50 PM
concept is a good friend of mine known him since i was a little
kid man, grew up wit the devilish mutherfucker.
drop in the spit boxer thread anytime..
and it's EH!
peace
eversick666

VernakuLa
07-20-2006, 06:30 PM
life is sweet, i come back like the Heat and defeat
all you Mavericks, ya'll dont wanna see my bag of tricks
I got a magician's hat, but i dont pull out rabbits
i pull out automatics, it all adds up, do the mathamatics
it might be traumatic, take your life, thats how i subract
im charismatic, possesing the ability to attract
now thats a fact, no longer a hypothesis
i use calculus and the theory of limits to produce my anaylis
i do a dialysis with the seperation of substances
i make it dificult for you just like encumbrances
life can get challenging, problems weighing you down
the angel of death took your last breathe, laying you down
nobody's playing around, this aint no carnival fool
my words serve as an essential component, call it the cardinal rule
the microphone's my tool, bout to school you like a profesor
brainwash you, control your thoughts just like an oppressor
nothing lesser, confinent and assertive, known as a aggressor
im the king, who is worthy of being my successor
feel the pressure, enough to make your head explode
solve the hidden code in order to have the truth exposed




lines in red i was really feelin, good shit 1

hollywoodrealty
07-22-2006, 09:41 AM
thank u for the input vern, keep your eyes open bcuz im feelen the flow lately, trying to drop 3-5 quality rhymes a week

jallainINS
07-22-2006, 02:01 PM
i like the heat and mav's reference that was cool. and the lines the vern highlighted were the ones i was feelin too. nice flow im lookin forward to some more stuff from you.

hollywoodrealty
07-22-2006, 06:58 PM
yo thanks for the comments, even when u write something good there is still room for improvement, ill try and make every line of the next one amazing, thanks and peace

Liquid Lines
07-24-2006, 01:20 PM
Good stuff, as always

"life can get challenging, problems weighing you down
the angel of death took your last breathe, laying you down"

Like it.

hollywoodrealty
07-31-2006, 06:15 PM
yo liquid lines, thanks for the shot out, im glad u are enjoying the writings, ill be dropping another one soon, thanks and peace

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 06:17 PM
drop sumun nija!

hollywoodrealty
07-31-2006, 07:44 PM
spit flames, burn bodies, creamated into dust
when my rhymes combust they hit harder then uppercuts
and just when u adjust, the torture continues
fill you with disease that leaves you frozen like an igloo
what to do?, you cant protest the slugfest
bodies lay unclaimed, mass graves filled with names anonymous
its nothing humorus, the casualties are numerous
our lives are in danger before we even leave the uterus
its nothing new to us, same shit different day
when things escalade, all my thoughts are in disarray
disobey the lord and you'll get a scorning
in ways of earthquakes, tsunamies, and hurricane warnings
will you ever live to see another morning, close your eyes
do you get to open them or will you feel demise
no compromise, im never selling my soul
ancient skrolls retold in testaments, new and old
behold, the future told, as i read your palm
i stay calm while i read versus out of psalms
when im gone, my body will be embalmed like king tut
closed the tomb, leave the room, doors swing shut





yo i wrote this peace to another dope ass beat from mantis aka grandmassive, here is a link, listen as u read along


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=387028&songID=4193226

hollywoodrealty
08-02-2006, 08:49 AM
any feedback?

hollywoodrealty
08-09-2006, 09:19 PM
nobody feelen this?

TUCO
08-09-2006, 09:40 PM
nobody feelen this?

no.....thats just your hand

jallainINS
08-09-2006, 10:08 PM
no.....thats just your hand


hehe


in all seriousness this was some of your best work. i liked it excellent flow throughout...

its nothing humorus, the casualties are numerous
our lives are in danger before we even leave the uterus


that was the fire. definately my favorite part.

hollywoodrealty
08-10-2006, 03:47 PM
1st off i want to thank taco for his continuous support. I dont know where i would be today without him being on my nuts, thanks.

as for jallainINS, you are one of the rare people on the site that tries to keep shit peaceful and always keeps it real, thanks for peeping my rhymes, who else likes this verse?

VernakuLa
08-10-2006, 04:57 PM
It's definatley your best work, I sensed multies and rhyme schemes present that you haven't written before...your elevating I would continue on this.

my 2 cents

hollywoodrealty
08-14-2006, 01:35 PM
thanks for the feedback vern, and thanks for reading the verses, peace

hollywoodrealty
08-14-2006, 07:39 PM
check my last verse on audio, just click the link, peace

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=401654&songID=4315981

VernakuLa
08-14-2006, 07:45 PM
its aiiiiiiiiiiight, but holly what duz ur name mean?

hollywoodrealty
08-14-2006, 08:13 PM
i am a real estate agent, in hollywood, so thats how hollywoodrealty came about, and the butcher dates back to my days working in a restaurant, cutten shit up, and when i would bust some raps, this dude said yo, watch out, the butcher cutten up that track, and thus the butcher was born

hollywoodrealty
08-28-2006, 11:11 AM
any feedback

hollywoodrealty
12-10-2006, 09:41 PM
time to bring my thread back to life......check out this piece i wrote called the ten commandments, then click the link to hear it in audio, peace


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=401654&songID=4762084


We know there are Ten Commandments, bcuz the Bible tells us so in three places
bust your scriptures from your book cases
He proclaimed to you his covenant
which he commanded you to keep: the Ten Commandments
which was written on two tablets of stone
But there are 14 statements of God in the Decalogue
and experts count up to 25 statements, it was shown.
So, how do you come out with just "Ten"?... thats unknown
because their division is not fixed in the Bible
so man had to deciefer the codes for survivol
so some have to be joined together and then
thats how they came up with the number 10

1.) I am the Lord the god and thou shalt not have any strange gods before me.
this is the beginning of the story
2.) Thou shalt not take the Lord's name in vain.
god damnit, why are we on this planet, i cant explain
3.) Remember to keep holy the Lord's Day.
the sabbath, thats when i reak havik and dismay
4.)they say u must Honor thy Father and Mother.
but all of god's brothers declare war, run for cover
5.) Thou shalt not kill
bloody murder, red rum, bread crumbs get crushed then wine spills
6.) Thou shalt not commit adultery
but sex sells, so many chicken heads end up as poultry
7.) Thou shalt not steal.
but stick up kids would split your wig, cap's peel, tires squeel
8.) Thou shalt not bear false witness against their neighbor
but our minds controled by what we read in the paper
9.) Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's wife
desperate housewives with sharp knives will end your life
10.) Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's goods
unless they rich and u stealen for the poor like robinhood
im hoping that my words arent misunderstood
my ten commandments, my realty's your hollywood

Textually, there may be twelve commandments if one observes only the sentence structure
But they are obviously "ten" in number, hence different methods of numbering them have been adopted, and they have been traditionally sorted into ten groups... and various faiths sort them differently
That thou mightest fear the LORD thy God, to keep all his statutes and his commandments, which I command thee, thou, and thy son, and thy son's son, all the days of thy life; and that thy days may be prolonged.