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deuce Lo
10-03-2005, 03:16 PM
10 to 15 lines
1 drop each
5 votes
VOTES NEEDED

deuce Lo
10-03-2005, 03:39 PM
im the man, and u aint, ima win, u jus wait
ima spill your guts, on the window sill, it cuts
im givin u a chance to give up, or i will have to snuff
your shits wack, give up, u cant beat me, thats tough
enough, im tired of battlin these cats that are hacked and sawed
you spit like u broke your jaw, when i spit i leave them in aw
what you just saw was a rhyme, u will see this for the last time
cause after this you are dead, and all of u that will be left is ur head
this rap shit is mine, u want it, thats fine, but u cant, so jus die
the vein in your brain is bursting from wut im say'n and u cant get the concept
that my rap is beyond that, and that i am one the best, like ODB, u are put to rest

watskeburt
10-03-2005, 06:00 PM
name is watskebUrt

get ready

im not afraid, of gay razors infested with aids
no rza_razor trace after this verbal murdercase
i read your stupid verse, no claps for wack raps
ill slap you leatherstrapped, you cant insult me with that crap
blow you off the map, this guy rhymes handicapped
sorry if it hurts bitch, much effort? you aint worth it
who the best rhymer on this earth is? youll see when watskeburt spits
dont claim you got this cause youre worth not a dime
fucking enzyme, my sublime rhymes produced in nighttime
watskeburt!?...
wartime, i know when its mine so ill stop at ten lines


yo people please VOTE

peace razor

deuce Lo
10-03-2005, 06:04 PM
good shit son, respect

1 thing wrong, u got 11 lines there so that 10 line shit aint cuttin it

tha god concept
10-03-2005, 06:21 PM
im goin with rza_razor cause watskeburts first line sounds jus like a line in an eminem freestyle the freestyles called " are u afraid of a razor with aids"

plus i liked rza razors werdplay better and he had better punches



vote - rza_razor

deuce Lo
10-03-2005, 06:27 PM
much love concept, and his first line is recycled from that freestyle ur right

watskeburt
10-03-2005, 06:35 PM
it is, thats the first thing that came to my head when reading his name, but i changed it and went on, i dont see the problem

and you can't call that "watskeburt!?..." a line, i left it alone to suggest a pause, theres 10 lines of rhyming

but anyway i dunno if this vote counts cause bigben posted new voting rules...

deuce Lo
10-03-2005, 06:46 PM
wut comes to mind for me is wut i write, which is ma own shit, i dont recycle, original shit for me

VOTE EVERYONE

watskeburt
10-04-2005, 06:03 PM
uppin

its only 21 lines to read yo please vote

Ironlungz
10-04-2005, 07:34 PM
deuce lo
flow...............6
wordplay........4
crativity.........5
vocab...........3
punch............3

Watskeburt
flow...............4
wordplay........3
creativity.........5
vocab.............3
punches........5


21-20 in favor of deuce lo.... close call... did the verses one by one, so i fhink it fair

GreenBee
10-04-2005, 08:36 PM
im the man, and u aint, ima win, u jus wait
ima spill your guts, on the window sill, it cuts
im givin u a chance to give up, or i will have to snuff
your shits wack, give up, u cant beat me, thats tough
enough, im tired of battlin these cats that are hacked and sawed
you spit like u broke your jaw, when i spit i leave them in aw
what you just saw was a rhyme, u will see this for the last time
cause after this you are dead, and all of u that will be left is ur head
this rap shit is mine, u want it, thats fine, but u cant, so jus die
the vein in your brain is bursting from wut im say'n and u cant get the concept
that my rap is beyond that, and that i am one the best, like ***, u are put to rest
You Dont Have The Right To Do That. Im Sorry Mate Im Being Honest You Just CANT Rhyme. Your A Hater, You Wanna Make People Bleed Instead Of Avoiding Trouble. Well...

If I Ever Meet You, YOUR IN TROUBLE...

PIECE

GreenBee

Going To Fuckin Bed..

Fuck Yall

deuce Lo
10-04-2005, 08:39 PM
much love iron lungz, this is maybe ma 2nd time every battling, let alone freestylin, jus gettin better thanks for your vote

DONGOD GODDON
10-05-2005, 02:12 AM
You Dont Have The Right To Do That. Im Sorry Mate Im Being Honest You Just CANT Rhyme. Your A Hater, You Wanna Make People Bleed Instead Of Avoiding Trouble. Well...

If I Ever Meet You, YOUR IN TROUBLE...

PIECE

GreenBee

Going To Fuckin Bed..

Fuck Yall
wtf - this is a (rhyme) battle! what´s wrong with you bee?
"yo yo i take it to the streets..." lmao

Visionz
10-05-2005, 03:27 AM
DueceLo

flow.............3/10, seems way too choppy
wordplay.....1, what word play? don't rhyme just cause it rhymes man
creativity......1,"ima spill your guts, on the window sill, it cuts" is the glass shattered?
vocab..........1,
punches...........1

Sorry that I have to put a number on it for the vote to count but I can't front on ya,I wasn't feelin' the verse at all. I can try to give ya some positive feedback if you want it but ya defintely need to set up ur game.

watskeburt, just outta curiosity what the phonetics on ur name? not sure how to pronoune it in my own head

flow.............7, good flowthru out the verse
wordplay.....6...nothin real killa but still decent
creativity......6.
vocab..........6,
punchs..........6

Decent verse man, feel like you probably got better ones inside the dome, but I can understand if the competition left you a little uninspired.keep it up thou.peace
vote.cmon' that anyone would see it different is kinda crazy to me on this one, Watskeburt

watskeburt
10-05-2005, 04:09 AM
thanks for your vote eric and ironlungz, im glad you said this because i really thought my verse was better. No disrespect for deuce lo/rza razor, but i really cant understand ironlungz voted for him.
And the phonetics, i tried to show that in the verse with the "hurts bitch, worth it, earth is, burt spits". im from holland, Watskeburt is dutch slang for "what happened". The pronounciation is like this: 'what'-and just 'ske'- and 'burt' sounds like hurt, earth, worth.
thanks again yo, keep votes coming please!
peace

Visionz
10-05-2005, 04:14 AM
cool^

b.a.R.n.
10-05-2005, 08:51 AM
rza razor:
flow...4/10
wordplay...2/10
creativity...1/10
vocab...4/10
punches...2/10

damn man, that was just shitty, just try and think about it a little longer perhaps..

watskeburt
flow...7/10 i liked that
wordplay...7/10 good rhyming, easy but well fitted in your lines
creativity...5/10 i think you could have done better
vocab...6/10 descent
punches...6/10 nothing special, but ok

my vote=watskeburt, man that rzarazor-deuzelo-dongodgoddon-stop changing ur name so much-guy really fucked it up, how can ironlungz vote for that crap, makes m wonder if he even read it

ps yo watskeburt i see you have westerpark as location, i live close yo i know the jeugd van tegenwoordig and their watskeburt slang, AMSTERDAM YEAH

watskeburt
10-05-2005, 09:07 AM
peace baRn, amsterdammical damage on wucorp yo, thanks for the vote....WATSKEBURT?!
thats 2-1 to me..keep em coming PLEASE i want to finish open battles before i start a nw one yo, imma vote on some open battles theres way to much that need to be voted on now.
VOTE!!

deuce Lo
10-05-2005, 12:06 PM
Is Any Of You Guys Voting For Watskeburt Relizing That His First Verse He Stole From The Eminem Freestyle, Like Wtf

watskeburt
10-05-2005, 02:27 PM
i didnt steal it stop bitching about it

Visionz
10-06-2005, 02:51 AM
Is Any Of You Guys Voting For Watskeburt Relizing That His First Verse He Stole From The Eminem Freestyle, Like Wtf

even if man, it wouldn't had made yours any better, don't bitch,on this one ur lucky to get one, suck it up and keep truckin,peace

deuce Lo
10-06-2005, 11:20 AM
i aitn bitchin, i he won aight, but i jus dont like people recycling

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-10-2005, 07:14 PM
2-wats
1-lo aka razor

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-12-2005, 07:21 PM
2-wats
2-Lo

RockD
10-13-2005, 12:57 PM
deuce lo
flow...............6/10 nice flow above avg.
wordplay........5/10 avg
crativity.........3/10 iight not awful
vocab...........3/10 same here
punch............2/10 i'm not that great at punches but this wasnt either

Watskeburt
flow...............7/10 above average a lil better than lo
wordplay........6/10 above avg
creativity.........5/10 avg although i like how it finsihed
vocab.............5/10 avg
punches........8/10 strong to me

very obvious vote=Watskeburt

watskeburt
10-13-2005, 01:07 PM
thanks for the votes chris and rockd, thats 3-2 in my favour

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-13-2005, 04:12 PM
More Votes

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-26-2005, 07:36 PM
votes needed

K-Oss
10-28-2005, 01:16 AM
I'm gonna have to give this one to watskeburt. His play on razors name was good. im not afraid, of gay razors infested with aids
no rza_razor trace after this verbal murdercaseHe also took this one on flow.
Razor's verse lacked aggression, maybe it would've been differentn if there was round 2.

Vote = watskeburt

deuce Lo
10-29-2005, 07:01 PM
k-oss, he stole that little thing from eminems freestyle, so he didnt do anything, he stole it