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Ironlungz
10-03-2005, 08:56 PM
1 round

14 lines

Man ya know how to move a crowd - away from the stage
the props ya give yaself wud make me proud - but they're blatantly fake
if ya make a sound you're too loud - like my eardrums gon break
to me this is what you're about: food on my plate
retreat, cuz if i was on repeat ma beats wud rip off yo speakerz
then re-heat to blow yo body off while i collect ya sneakerz
rip you like 3 katrinas and a cupple of ritas
the day you bring heat is the day i see the pope on "cheaters"
this ain't dodgy shit cuz you can't throw a pun, rip you for fun
Rockd cudn't shine if he was the sun, pop if he was a gun
Whereas "I can" like I'm Nas on this shit – ”it was written”
that i shud teach ya skills, guess that's why i'm spittin
Or maybe it’s more like a blueprint, I’m Jay-z to you
And to step up again, you’d be crazy to do

edit: "votes needed" in title

RockD
10-03-2005, 09:24 PM
Nigga u doin to much crack but really i'm the abuse
This niga Ironlungz think he can beat me he's confused
nigga probably think he crip but wears a red bandana
huggin a black gurl but he a kkk in savanah
throwin signs wit his left hand
you mess wit rock u get merked man
think u can but u cant kill or beat me
even if you placed 65 cc's of poison in my Iv
i'm sorry to expose you but yo ass is fake
nigga your lines are shit mines are first rate
Fuck it u done u aint get Rock'd u got baked
I'm Devilish compared to me u Angel Cake
and thats fate since u cant respond take a 10 count and chill
cause i see yo halo risin tally up u just another kill

RockD
10-03-2005, 09:25 PM
5 votes pls

Ironlungz
10-04-2005, 03:03 AM
eh... that didn't work.... sumone put votes needed in the title who got the power to do such miracles;)

Visionz
10-04-2005, 03:07 AM
yo, RockD took this one, neither verse was sensational but his had the better flow and harder punches

Ironlungz
10-04-2005, 03:39 AM
thnx unseen, but ya know these votes need 2 be xplained

Visionz
10-04-2005, 04:17 AM
Ironlungz

flow--4
wordplay-4
creativity-5
vocabulary-4
punches-4, sneakers line not bad


RockD

flow-6
wordplay-5
creativity-4
vocabulary-5
punches-5, Devilsh to Angel cake, best1

guess that changes my votes, think I should refrain from voting if I had too many trees, RockD 25-21.peace

RockD
10-04-2005, 12:46 PM
thanx for the vote we nee..."MORE SPAM!!!!"...I mean VOTES :D bigben help us out

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-04-2005, 06:30 PM
Vote Fuckers!!!

deuce Lo
10-04-2005, 09:06 PM
iron lungz

flow 4/6
wordplay 5/6
creativity 5/6
vocab 3/6
punches 4/6

rockD

flow 3/6
creativity 3/6
vocab 5/6
punches 5/6
word play 4/6
close, both alright, both near the same level but when it comes down 2 it,

21-20 takes it, vote goes to iron lungz

RockD
10-06-2005, 02:56 PM
We need more votes :) 1-1- so far

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-10-2005, 07:19 PM
Vote!!!

RockD
10-10-2005, 09:40 PM
Thnx Big B ... Please vote i try and vote in all other battles pls vote in mines :)

RockD
10-12-2005, 11:22 AM
common i vote in ya'll battle vote in mines?and i dont care if its u Allah i judt want votes for this thread.

Robert
10-12-2005, 11:39 AM
RockD
Flow-8/10, like the flow of your verse.
Wordplay-7/10.
Creativity-5/10, that crip/blood "throwin up signs" stuff been done by canibus already.
Punches-7/10, solid punches (you've improved).
Vocab-7/10

Ironlungz
Flow-6/10, feel you were lacking at the start.
Wordplay-6/10, average.
Creativity-7/10.
Punches-6/10, alright but nothing special
Vocab-6/10

Ironlungz 62%, RockD 68%
Vote=RockD
peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-12-2005, 12:56 PM
Rock-2
Iron-1

RockD
10-12-2005, 10:12 PM
Creativity-5/10, that crip/blood "throwin up signs" stuff been done by canibus
peace
do u know wat song, i dont want to do that again not a big fan of canibus. know some stuff but not that into him.

Robert
10-12-2005, 10:56 PM
do u know wat song, i dont want to do that again not a big fan of canibus. know some stuff but not that into him.
Mic-Nificent off 2000 B.C. Yours wasnt that similar I guess but like I said hes already done it.
peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-13-2005, 04:17 PM
rock-3
iron-1

More Votes

Ballad Ballistik
10-13-2005, 06:46 PM
i vote rock d :explaination ah i liked his flow more...
rock d keep it a little tighter

RockD
10-13-2005, 10:21 PM
thnx for the vote although i have been dissapointed to find out that my verse snds like canibus :(

RockD
10-13-2005, 10:29 PM
4-1 is that a tko or a ko i dunno but did i win?

TeknicelStylez
10-14-2005, 04:54 PM
Yea you won.