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Visionz
10-04-2005, 02:10 AM
1 round duel to the death-5 votes to win it.peace

Visionz
10-04-2005, 03:07 AM
Ur not heavenly, your god's concept of of dog shit/i spit to get ur wig split like a cleft lip/my rhymes is not of this world like a chick with a third tit/years later you'll 'recall' your 'total' downfall/cold like the Russian winter that murdered 'em all/This rap nazi couldn't stop me/my mentals click like papparatzi/ I pubish pictures in scriptures that'll change your concept when they hit ya/Sportin x-tra large but the shirt don't fit/maybe you should realize what size to fuck wif/You're in Big & tall but you bring a little man's frame/dunkin on a 6-foot-hoop cause you got a little man's game/ I won't stoop to your level of those landlocked amatuer flows/I'll leave you wide open like the view from the Pocanos/Then I'll slit ur throat and leave you to swim with the sharks/The only shit ur droppin is going straight to the ocean's dark/I'm the silent assassin, I never leave a mark or any remains/Just like your life's work after your soul's decontained/ Bury you with two quarters cause you're eternally chump change/

tha god concept
10-04-2005, 03:09 AM
ayo i saw eric.....now i no why he wants to be unseen
he looks like a fuckin anerexic alien from tatooine.... not a human being
always staring at his computer screen.....hoping he'll get noticed
i ghost write for this punk i hope that all yall no this

erics about to get served like a fuckin supena
aka imma blowem away like my name was katrina
me against hims like crazy leggs vs a balerina
nigga I AM HIPHOP your just a public speaka

tha god concept dont accept nonsense kid my style is riddiculous
imma make you feel my presents like blind children on christmas
nigga your on my hit list...u better be cautious
my rhymes will surround and stomp you like you was a midget in a mosh pit

my rhymes can be deadly so read the hazzards when i battle rap
juss one look at my verse can give my apponent a fatal heart attack
or make they fuckin skull crack....cause they brains swell up
my linguistics are sadistik feel the pain sho nuff

erics rhymes are weak like snitching on sumone you love
my rhymes are tight like OJ's famous leather glove
its like they were touched from sumone heavinly up above....the way theyre distinguished
i turn punks like eric into sum gimp kids...so maybe they have a shot at winning the rap SPECIAL OLYMPICS

tha god concept
10-04-2005, 03:11 AM
nyce battle homie


votes...

Visionz
10-04-2005, 03:13 AM
nice battle man, it's cool how we have contrasting styles that are both tight

Robert
10-04-2005, 03:26 AM
dope battle guys it was hard to call who won but I think Eric got it.
The God Concept:
flow-7/10, Good flow.
wordplay-7/10, alright wordplay.
creativity-8/10.
vocabulary-6/10, Alright.
punches-9/10, Dope Punches, A little better then Eric.

Eric Unseen-
flow- 8/10Liked the way your verse flowed homie.
wordplay-8/10, good multi's and rhyme scheme.
creativity-8/10.
vocabulary-6/10, about the same as the god.
punches-8/10.

Overall, cocept=74%, Eric=76%
Dope battle guys, you to are closely matched thats for sure,
vote=Eric
peace to both emcees.

Visionz
10-04-2005, 03:42 AM
thanks for postin ya vote man, peace

deuce Lo
10-04-2005, 10:36 AM
my rhymes are tight like OJ's famous leather glove-the god concept

thats a sick verse, over all amazing battle to the both of ya, but i liked concepts style and flow better, and creative punches

vote goes to the god concept

RockD
10-04-2005, 12:11 PM
The God Concept:
flow-3.5/5, Good flow.
wordplay-3/5, average wordplay.
creativity-4/5.
vocabulary-2/5, Alright.
punches-5/5, Nice punshes

Eric Unseen-
flow- 4/5 very nice flow
wordplay-5/5, rhyme scheme was ill.
creativity-4.5/5. blows minds wit creativity
vocabulary-3/5, average
punches-4/5 the obly place where u lost lol

Overall, cocept=17.5, Eric=20.5
the punches were nice on concepts cona but eric overal illness lol
vote=Eric

Visionz
10-04-2005, 12:33 PM
2-0, thanks for postin the vote.peace

TeknicelStylez
10-04-2005, 12:55 PM
The God Concept:
flow- 6.5/10 I noticed some bar stretching
wordplay- 7.5/10 not bad
Creativity- 7/10 kind of unoriginal
vocabulary- 6/10 no really noticable vocabulary here
punches- 8.5/10 you came with alot of punches but I can't give you 10 cuz they weren't that good...

Overall = 71%

Eric Unseen-
flow- 7/10 Decent Flow
wordplay- 9/10 you had some hot wordplay
my rhymes is not of this world like a chick with a third tit/years later you'll 'recall' your 'total' downfall/thats gonna go over alot of peoples heads.

creativity- 9/10 alot of rarely used stuff in here
vocabulary- 8.5/10 use of strong multi syllable words
punches- 7/10 were you was lacking not too many punches

Overall = 81%

PEACE



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Visionz
10-04-2005, 04:19 PM
3-0, guess that's a tko, glad you caught that one Tek, good to know it's not gonna go over everyones head. peace and respect to everyone who posted a vote

tha god concept
10-04-2005, 08:55 PM
yo i had a vote on here earlier 2day......where is it now??

and arent battles all about punchlines????????

if so........

anyway good battle eric im not hatin juss statin

tha god concept
10-04-2005, 09:03 PM
im juss sayin this 4 all the next battles that are comin up

why is vocab and werdplay bein judged in battles honestly???

battles are spose to be raw and 2 the point with punches.

not like a witty story with good werdplay.

im juss sayin its not how u judge a battle

Visionz
10-04-2005, 11:07 PM
it helps me out so I'm not complainin', lol.....you def threw the harder punches in our verses but I gotta say its about the total package, nawmean.....it was a nice battle regardless.peace

TeknicelStylez
10-04-2005, 11:50 PM
Shutuuuup I'm tired of nigguhz bitching when they lose because they lost, you a shark nigguh anyway.

tha god concept
10-05-2005, 03:08 AM
im not doggin eric at all tek his style is fuckin tight , im juss sayin im not feelin this new voteing system , and i had a vote on here earlier 2day but ben must of erased it cause it wasnt inthe new voting format

Visionz
10-05-2005, 03:24 AM
yeah I saw the guy mention the vote in one of the sticky post, I'm not feelin the whole tko shit anyways, think it should go to 5 period, but u knw fuckas don't vote up in here, I got battles from what seems like two or three weeks that still ain't closed. I'm glad that people are kinda forced into taking creativity and wordplay into consideration just cause I feel like those are my strong suites, I'd loose a lot of battles if it was just about the punches. I can throw 'em and shit but thats still probably where I could use the most improvement. I do hate that I have to assign a fuckin point total to my opinion though for it to count, wish that Ben, all respect due, would've got more opinions on it before he threw it out there.

tha god concept
10-05-2005, 03:29 AM
ya i hear that unseen........what do u want 2 do about this battle??

im glad u saw that i did have a vote and didnt deny it homie, or say i was makin that shit up like sum cats would do on here

so what do u wanna do about this battle??

Visionz
10-05-2005, 04:08 AM
whatever cleva, man.......I'm down for taking it to 5 votes for the winner, if the guys got to put point he's just gonna come back, maybe, to put a total that would just justify what he already said.....I say put the vote to 3-1 and keep it moving,imo

tha god concept
10-05-2005, 04:11 AM
ya sounds good 2 me homie

so best to 5

ur up 3-1

peace holmes

led_mic
10-05-2005, 04:56 AM
That was pretty good, nice display
Ill have to give my vote to Eric though
Concept has used the blind kids christmas "presents" line before,
lets not recycle...its a tight line just make some more original lines is all im saying...

The God Concept-
Flow: 3/5 not bad
Wordplay: 3/5 pretty clever
Creativity: 2/5 (the "presents" line killed it for me)
Vocabulary: 3/5 (Spell a bit better and your point will be clearer)
Punches: 4/5 (Katrina was insensitive but it was a punch nontheless)

Eric Unseen-
Flow: 3.5/5 Didnt stray from theme
Wordplay: 4/5 Eternal Chump Change did it
Creativity: 4/5 good
Vocabulary: 3.5/5 not bad
Punches: 4/5 tight

If you guys could vote for me or teknicel that would be appreciated
we need some votes, peace...

b.a.R.n.
10-05-2005, 04:59 AM
http://www.wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=7778&page=1

yo check out my last two lines in my battlewith hollywood, and erics "I pubish pictures in scriptures that'll change your concept when they hit ya"......

Visionz
10-05-2005, 06:10 AM
just cause we rhymed the same words don't make em the same.man,


think the bigger picture is how i write my scripture
an immediate response? or maybe later it'll hit ya

that is funny though, damn I keep on looking at it cause I think its crazy
we used the words differently though, like you were saying that you look at everything as a whole for your motivation, whereas I'm publishing photographs in my head that are printed by typing 'em out. you're waiting to see if the concept will hit immediately or if it takes a slow response, while I figure they already got it and they're changin their mind.....I mean it's different but when you look at it, it's damn near the same. It makes me wonder if subconsciencly I absorded the lines cause I know I read your verse but I didn't recognize having read it until I got to your van gogh line, and I don't think I've read it since I voted on it. I don't borrow lines, God as my witness, I write off the top with a mental rolodex of images but it's uncanny to me how simuliar the lines are.............respect to you barn but please don't think I sharked ya lines man, that's not what I'm about but at the same time I can't even guarentee that my subconscious wasn't play sponge on that one. shit is too fuckin weird.peace

Visionz
10-05-2005, 06:13 AM
4-1, thanks for postin your vote.peace

b.a.R.n.
10-05-2005, 07:39 AM
i see what u mean eric, and i dont accuse of stealing but i thought it was too similar to just let it pass, no disrespect i know your one of the best on here. peace

Luther Large
10-05-2005, 08:57 AM
eric unseen tha god concept(all numbers are best out of 6)
flow:3/3
wp:3/3
creativity:4/3
vocab:3/3
pl's:3/5

this battle was pretty close........ummm i didnt add up the total scores but ya'll can.....peace

Visionz
10-05-2005, 08:40 PM
^scores aside who do you think had the better verse?

Visionz
10-06-2005, 08:46 PM
4-2, bumpin for votes

Visionz
10-08-2005, 12:26 AM
bump, bump