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sileNt.siN.
04-15-2010, 12:58 AM
dropping freeverses in here.

just typed it up.

The Titans Clash, my adversaries heart Inside my Grasp
Reciting Raps to the sounds of the beat...a Final Tap
before it Fades into Silence, Roaring to Wake up a Riot
My Ancient Alliance arrives, now there's no Safety reminders
Mindstate of a highness, brainwaves containing a virus
it's like i've contaminated my Iris with Aids that's Laying inside it
Flash backs are torture chamber scenes, no soaring Angel wings
painful screams, where death is the final resort to Pain Relief
all The Madness in this vision, is something i can Hardly say
The Spanish inquisition starts looking like a holiday
Parting ways with my sane self, deranged, i think my brain melts
at the thought of all the pain dealt, it's strange how i don't crave help
Raised hell as a former son, added Light to my empire
Damien may begin with his dynasty of fire
where we Hire demons to Heighten Evil with Rifles to abuse
Entire regions start dying, people ignited from the fumes

BornPower
04-26-2010, 12:43 AM
THIS was raw as hell! The imagery...the stuttering flow....big ups, yes sir.

Father N Dangerous
05-07-2010, 07:01 PM
dropping freeverses in here.

just typed it up.

The Titans Clash, my adversaries heart Inside my Grasp
Reciting Raps to the sounds of the beat...a Final Tap
before it Fades into Silence, Roaring to Wake up a Riot
My Ancient Alliance arrives, now there's no Safety reminders
Mindstate of a highness, brainwaves containing a virus
it's like i've contaminated my Iris with Aids that's Laying inside it
Flash backs are torture chamber scenes, no soaring Angel wings
painful screams, where death is the final resort to Pain Relief
all The Madness in this vision, is something i can Hardly say
The Spanish inquisition starts looking like a holiday
Parting ways with my sane self, deranged, i think my brain melts
at the thought of all the pain dealt, it's strange how i don't crave help
Raised hell as a former son, added Light to my empire
Damien may begin with his dynasty of fire
where we Hire demons to Heighten Evil with Rifles to abuse
Entire regions start dying, people ignited from the fumes


sup andrew!!??? this piece is nice :picture::picture::picture: call me dawg we need to freestyle been too long :0 ain't got any min's so call me afta 9 my tyme!!


anyway..

this piece was ill son, flow was on point, vocab was extraordinary, structure was very well put together, and imagery well :picture::picture::picture:

MosHigh
05-18-2010, 01:23 PM
yeah, deadly ass verses for real...the images are crisp and flow is flawless

sileNt.siN.
06-03-2010, 08:26 AM
thank you all for the feedback. very much appreciated.

about to drop another one.

eyo

I carve my Initials into your corpse, leave the Watermark behind
so the evidence is evident, the Cops are All adviced
The way i karate chop a guy, till there body's not in line
have 'em looking like pastrami with salami on the side
I'm not a wicked menace, I'm a Calm n Honest Guy
With a back pack full of gas traps when i'm Locked up on a crime
You see, i usually do Not apologize
But i'm sorry for your loss, see, your Daughter crossed the line
Jack the Ripper mentality, with Chickens and emcees
See, you bitches become a victim of the killings for a fee
I grow titanium claws, when a bitch is fetishing
so i stick my finger deep inside the hole, like a wedding ring
Everything around me, made me what I Am Now
They thought they had it safe, but I'm a Monster in a Glass House
It only takes the scent of blood for Me to go and Lash Out
All hope for humanity has "Left" like the "last house"

ArcherPriest
06-03-2010, 10:56 AM
ya iLL shit old friend! if this is who i think it is

sileNt.siN.
06-04-2010, 05:19 AM
kingshyt! holy shit. how the fuck are you man
you've been ghost for a minute
whats been up.

ArcherPriest
06-04-2010, 08:22 PM
haaa, i knew that was you!.. long time homie
jus been chillin tho man.. takin care of my fam 'n shit
finally got off paper so i been layin low
good to see ya around tho,, ill try 'n put some
drops in here for old times .. peace

ArcherPriest
06-04-2010, 09:05 PM
friends or enemies ahead of me? i need no distintion
eventually all destinies will lead to extinction
reaching total depletion, belittled civil liberties
skud missile deliveries from ships at middle sea
target areas, harriers, departing from harbor carriers
breaching the border barriers of former sumeria
moral hysteria, spreadin rapid savvy propaganda
spotted by chopper cameras, locked 'n read mirandas
the department of corrections have lessons administered
while they're testin their infected injections on prisoners
they're subjected to immoral suggestions of ministers
when the data gets collected detectives will finish work
crack a guinness first, before attacking random locations
the men will stratigize a plan with an outstandin ovation
yellin' get ya fuckin hands up! like your flashin quotations
if i wuznt cuffed id stick this fuck like plasma donations
it's a twisted regime.. coded encrypted machine
if you doubt it you'll be surrounded by enlisted marines
quick n vicious in schemes, tactics,'highly technical gadgets
no naked rectacle matches, get taped in medical bandage

sileNt.siN.
06-08-2010, 09:25 PM
yeah man. ive been busy with music. i recently got back into this too. haha

tight verse mayne

ayo

Criticize my combatants, and Give them Lectures on Attacking Me
Jeffrey Dahlmer, teacher giving Lessons from my Faculty
Somebody call the Medics, cause it's Finna be a Tragic Scene
the Panicking being televised like a Static screen
Stupid Bitch, what other type of Girl Are You?
Act like a Jerk off, and I'll prolly Pearl Harb' You....like World War 2
I work hard, obscure bars, and insecure small goons
don't make me laugh, like immature cartoons, beware all crews
Stampede through the mediterr, Boston crab your Residence
break silently and Leave Not a Scratch of Evidence
Are you alive? i'm sorry...i saw your Body Crack to Sediments
I Forgot this Fag n Left him like his Mom n Daddy's Negligence
Problematic Gentleman, I politely slide the knife in you
you wanna blow? fine...I'll shove this dynamite inside of you
Striking you, make your Entire Life Recyclable
Years later, this Queer hater gets discovered by a Mining Crew

sileNt.siN.
06-11-2010, 07:37 AM
uppppp

sileNt.siN.
06-23-2010, 01:07 AM
Beautiful imperfection, An Error from the First Breath
Concluded into a man that strikes Terror on a Church step
Verses that Outlast most, through Armageddon black smoke
when the timeline gap's broke...through an amoeba's backstroke
Everlasting in a house of pain, Adrenaline Stopped Fueling
Fixing up my Aggression is what this medicine's Not Doing
As vital as the rule to Never get Caught Losing
I'll get your Focus back on track, make the Pendulum stop moving
Incredible, Not Human, Some observations they notice now
populations in overcrowd, Got to make it go lower now
Hire me for the dirty work, Murder verses like day-to-day
Early birds get their feathers plucked, necks get cut with a razorblade
you got fire arm? well I'm Equipped with Teflon Sleeves
Your little wooden crosses have no Effect on me
End up on the floor like carmen Elektra's jeans
Elect the king, if not, its you that i Eject off screen

J.T.S.
06-24-2010, 12:28 PM
Beautiful imperfection, An Error from the First Breath
Concluded into a man that strikes Terror on a Church step
Verses that Outlast most, through Armageddon black smoke
when the timeline gap's broke...through an amoeba's backstroke
Everlasting in a house of pain, Adrenaline Stopped Fueling
Fixing up my Aggression is what this medicine's Not Doing
As vital as the rule to Never get Caught Losing
I'll get your Focus back on track, make the Pendulum stop moving
Incredible, Not Human, Some observations they notice now
populations in overcrowd, Got to make it go lower now
Hire me for the dirty work, Murder verses like day-to-day
Early birds get their feathers plucked, necks get cut with a razorblade
you got fire arm? well I'm Equipped with Teflon Sleeves
Your little wooden crosses have no Effect on me
End up on the floor like carmen Elektra's jeans
Elect the king, if not, its you that i Eject off screen

sick shit the whole thing is flames

sileNt.siN.
07-07-2010, 09:12 AM
Thanks yo. I've peeped some of your verses in the freestyle thread. nice shit! great structure to ur pieces.

sileNt.siN.
07-08-2010, 05:36 AM
verse I just did right now.
I call it.

Freestyle Verse I Just Did Right Now take 1:

boredom strikes, sorta like a butcher knife to your neck
pushing right through your chest, looking like it is death
who's this guy? Unknown to many, but flows are heavy
real talk, one lil' drop concealed wrong done Broke the Levee
Motion sickness, you'll have to go the distance facin' Spokenn's Writtens
Broken Pigment, Bones are missin, Dome looks like it's Boa Constricted
No one can withstand it, I spit classic-al Shit, Fagget
too Intact, this Impact will in fact leave Ribs cracked in
Quit Laughin', i'm done hearing you gigglin' herbs
that have the recognition that you Didn't deserve
buddy you Need Work, cause when i'm Through witchu
they'll Put you beneath Dirt like the Brooklyn Zu
Uncountable acts of Rage, making Fear a disorder
Line my victims by the age, in Numerical order
Try putting latches on me, and I'm Snapping 'em Off
Kids rip you apart cause your Rapping is soft
and for that, you're getting smacked with a Bat and a Saw
right in the Back of your Jaw like the Mandible Claw

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
07-11-2010, 02:49 PM
nice work sin

Father N Dangerous
08-09-2014, 05:33 PM
Quit laughin im done hearing u gigglin herbs, that have the recgonition that you didnt deserve

This made me laugh