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Dae Ja Nae
06-21-2005, 10:33 PM
once a bridge has been burned, can it ever be rebuilt

is there still beauty to be found once a rose begins to wilt

if one is heavily burdened with guilt, can the mind ever be freed

if you live in the shadow of doubt, will you ever be able to believe

if on a daily basis you greave, is there ever time for a smile

if you're an over achiever, do you ever relish a moment to rest for a while

if we all move in the circle of life, why are our thoughts so square

if we know the worst is yet to come, why are most never prepared

if the mind is plagued by nightmares, how does one ever dare to dream

how does one grasp the concept of an awful silent scream

how can one claim to thirst for knowledge, and be the first to deny the drink

how can you write your own ticket in life, if society refuses to supply the ink

if life is over as fast as the eye blinks, how can some moments last forever

can a relationship honestly stay intact after the friendship has been severed

how can home be where the heart is if one is truly empty inside

how can the most courageous person be afraid to swallow his or her pride

why isn't there anything beneath those who claim to be a step above

does it hurt so bad when you break up, because initially you "fell" in love

if one is held captive in a self-contained prison, why are they unable to escape

and if you're the master of your own destiny, how can another's action seal your fate?


Just pondering,

Peace

I-Legit
06-21-2005, 10:52 PM
my answer would be, yes, simply cause if the thought excists...its highly possible
and yeh i see what your talkin about, but it sounds like u doubt a lot of things or somthing to the effect.

um for the rhymes, they were cool, not to hard to rhyme now n days...but i liked it, never belive everything u think about or think is true....could be anything......u never know

BlaK FuRYaN
06-22-2005, 04:11 AM
One thing i admire about you Dae is your a swords-woman wid diverse talent....
You spit fire and convey food for thought....plus you keep up wid tha otha swordsmen uppin here....
As im a man who often reflekts tha purpose of life i can appraciate this skroll you crafted......

'stay awke'

GuardianOne
06-22-2005, 06:34 AM
Its a refreshing verse, and a lot of thought between the lines. It might lead many to bring conclusions. It actually put a womens touch to it.

Peace
PS: Nice to have you back, how are you?

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 10:07 AM
Good lookin' on the feedback fellas. I really appreciate it.

PS: I'm doing okay G-One, thx 4 asking :) ... how about yourself ?

I-Legit
06-22-2005, 10:37 AM
yeh cause we all love carrots

GuardianOne
06-23-2005, 01:55 AM
Hey what's with this peas and carrots, plus corn ( i hope its not what iam thinking)?



Peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-23-2005, 09:12 AM
Damn. Dae that was like drinking a Chocolate Milkshake very satisfying...

I love the way you asked those questions you Inspire me to write even more!!!!!

PEACE Queen do ya thing!!

TUCO
06-23-2005, 06:55 PM
there is no particular line that stands out IMO
the wholr peice is beautiful yo, no fuckin doubt mama
just continue to amaze the shit outta me

peace

Sicka than aidZ
06-23-2005, 11:18 PM
ill prolly spend half my life trying to write something as beautiful as that and wont come up with anything like what u can recite,..thats beautiful and amazing. I like reading the poetry on these forums alot. staycool, 1

Dae Ja Nae
06-24-2005, 01:31 PM
Much love in the Temple :) ... that's real peace. You guys are too much ;).


THX

Dae Ja Nae
06-24-2005, 01:33 PM
Haha ... Peas, carrots, corn and chocolate milkshakes ... Hmm :chef:

blackwisdom
07-09-2005, 07:53 AM
once a bridge has been burned, can it ever be rebuilt

is there still beauty to be found once a rose begins to wilt

if one is heavily burdened with guilt, can the mind ever be freed

if you live in the shadow of doubt, will you ever be able to believe

if on a daily basis you greave, is there ever time for a smile

if you're an over achiever, do you ever relish a moment to rest for a while

if we all move in the circle of life, why are our thoughts so square

if we know the worst is yet to come, why are most never prepared

if the mind is plagued by nightmares, how does one ever dare to dream

how does one grasp the concept of an awful silent scream

how can one claim to thirst for knowledge, and be the first to deny the drink

how can you write your own ticket in life, if society refuses to supply the ink

if life is over as fast as the eye blinks, how can some moments last forever

can a relationship honestly stay intact after the friendship has been severed

how can home be where the heart is if one is truly empty inside

how can the most courageous person be afraid to swallow his or her pride

why isn't there anything beneath those who claim to be a step above

does it hurt so bad when you break up, because initially you "fell" in love

if one is held captive in a self-contained prison, why are they unable to escape

and if you're the master of your own destiny, how can another's action seal your fate?


Just pondering,

Peace

It's been a while since I've been able to read my thoughts. I miss that. My skills always elevate after hearing my second voice. Thanks you for speaking.


I wonder what the world would be like if indigenous people held down their nations
For thousands of years they've had peaceful ship trades until the meeting with pale faces
Men cloned from grease monkeys and albinos on the "so called island of Patmos"
Un-natural beings now grown to the all eye seeing, the originators and benefactors of toast
I can go on for days on how I want to instill in the youth the truth of this planets origins
But I wonder why when I start to tell the truth my views are greeted so foreign
I'm an African with the heart of Mandela and the spirit of General Nat Turner
I know that the Earth would breathe a sigh of relief once we begin to learn her and properly love her


peace Da'

b1ack fact10n
07-09-2005, 08:15 AM
once a bridge has been burned, can it ever be rebuilt

is there still beauty to be found once a rose begins to wilt

if one is heavily burdened with guilt, can the mind ever be freed

if you live in the shadow of doubt, will you ever be able to believe

if on a daily basis you greave, is there ever time for a smile

if you're an over achiever, do you ever relish a moment to rest for a while

if we all move in the circle of life, why are our thoughts so square

if we know the worst is yet to come, why are most never prepared

if the mind is plagued by nightmares, how does one ever dare to dream

how does one grasp the concept of an awful silent scream

how can one claim to thirst for knowledge, and be the first to deny the drink

how can you write your own ticket in life, if society refuses to supply the ink

if life is over as fast as the eye blinks, how can some moments last forever

can a relationship honestly stay intact after the friendship has been severed

how can home be where the heart is if one is truly empty inside

how can the most courageous person be afraid to swallow his or her pride

why isn't there anything beneath those who claim to be a step above

does it hurt so bad when you break up, because initially you "fell" in love

if one is held captive in a self-contained prison, why are they unable to escape

and if you're the master of your own destiny, how can another's action seal your fate?


Just pondering,

Peace


Deep. Really deep. I wouldnt be able to come up with something half as inspirational if I sat on my ass for a year. Nice one,hope to read more.

Racailla
07-09-2005, 09:04 AM
I definitley love these poetic lines, much love!

Dae Ja Nae
07-09-2005, 11:05 AM
It's been a while since I've been able to read my thoughts. I miss that. My skills always elevate after hearing my second voice. Thanks you for speaking.


I wonder what the world would be like if indigenous people held down their nations
For thousands of years they've had peaceful ship trades until the meeting with pale faces
Men cloned from grease monkeys and albinos on the "so called island of Patmos"
Un-natural beings now grown to the all eye seeing, the originators and benefactors of toast
I can go on for days on how I want to instill in the youth the truth of this planets origins
But I wonder why when I start to tell the truth my views are greeted so foreign
I'm an African with the heart of Mandela and the spirit of General Nat Turner
I know that the Earth would breathe a sigh of relief once we begin to learn her and properly love her


peace Da'
:D ... You're welcome, and thank you ... you know how we do. Thanks for the build up as well black ;) ... both the opening and the close spark mind tingling impulses to the conscious. It's so good to have your words back.

Peace to Black L3g10n and Racailla for the feed ... it's greatly appreciated.

One Luv

Dae Ja Nae
07-09-2005, 10:16 PM
My being is bound by darkness on a quest to receive the light
explorations of exploitations attempt to blind my sight
divine rights reach new heights
an unfathomable flight
with an unknown destination
most will board without hesitation
laying down the crumbled foundation of a lost nation
every plan in which theyíve partaken
leads us closer to desecration
contemplations of consciousless pagans
leave the just to suffer the endless ramifications
the best of us now forced to wear badges of defamation
character assassination
the whole world now views us with the deepest sentiments of disgust
we want more, so we take more, an insatiable lust
no sense of trust, more like a well disguised terrorist
reeking havoc blacker than the plague, but most of us are oblivious
like these weapons of mass destruction, our "word" is non-existent
speaking with forked tongues- and trickery of magicians
Politicians ...
they bring division amongst the hearts and minds of men
beginning with our decision to allow these tyrants in
we canít win
not when they have an infinite reach that knows no end
forever bathing, but yet uncleansed of their inexorable sins
betrayal of friends - outcaste - unable to make amends
inflicted wounds so slow to heal, those that do are reopened
my mind spins, dizziness sets in,
I falter on my feet
inner strength is now weak, inner voice unable to speak
I beseech thee to set us free
from your clutches of iniquity
for your acts of depravity will enslave us for an eternity
on my knees I begin to plead
the cries of a desperate daughter with a heart that bleeds
hoping all will heed
before itís to late,
our fate sealed shut behind an unyielding gate .....

Peace



Some of you might recall this one ...

iNtell3kT
07-09-2005, 10:38 PM
My being is bound by darkness on a quest to receive the light
explorations of exploitations attempt to blind my sight
divine rights reach new heights
an unfathomable flight
with an unknown destination
most will board without hesitation
laying down the crumbled foundation of a lost nation
every plan in which theyíve partaken
leads us closer to desecration
contemplations of consciousless pagans
leave the just to suffer the endless ramifications
the best of us now forced to wear badges of defamation
character assassination
the whole world now views us with the deepest sentiments of disgust
we want more, so we take more, an insatiable lust
no sense of trust, more like a well disguised terrorist
reeking havoc blacker than the plague, but most of us are oblivious
like these weapons of mass destruction, our "word" is non-existent
speaking with forked tongues- and trickery of magicians
Politicians ...
they bring division amongst the hearts and minds of men
beginning with our decision to allow these tyrants in
we canít win
not when they have an infinite reach that knows no end
forever bathing, but yet uncleansed of their inexorable sins
betrayal of friends - outcaste - unable to make amends
inflicted wounds so slow to heal, those that do are reopened
my mind spins, dizziness sets in,
I falter on my feet
inner strength is now weak, inner voice unable to speak
I beseech thee to set us free
from your clutches of iniquity
for your acts of depravity will enslave us for an eternity
on my knees I begin to plead
the cries of a desperate daughter with a heart that bleeds
hoping all will heed
before itís to late,
our fate sealed shut behind an unyielding gate .....

Peace



Some of you might recall this one ...

love it!!!
nice ish Dae.....:thumbup:

TUCO
07-09-2005, 10:40 PM
love it!!!
nice ish Dae.....:thumbup:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v421/TucsZilla/7th1.jpg

peace

iNtell3kT
07-09-2005, 10:45 PM
its called a peace sign....what u didnt know?

TUCO
07-09-2005, 10:47 PM
its called a peace sign....what u didnt know?
i taught u well my son

peace

iNtell3kT
07-09-2005, 10:48 PM
i taught u well my son

peace pfffthahahahahahha

PsYkOsUs
07-09-2005, 11:12 PM
your lyrics are good... you have an excellent balance of vocabulary in this piece, and it was very desriptive, which is what i like to see... i like to have visual interpretation of any verse i read or hear, otherwise it just doesn't hold my attention... it read like spoken word to me, and i think it's a great poem... you did a good job settin' the 'mood'; if you were on a slam stage, it'd be quite captivatin'... it feels really dark, and i always like poetry that's bold enough to question faith... but i have to admit, my only complaint is that i'm not quite clear as to where this journy led... what i mean is: it felt like you were takin' us somewhere, but despite your descriptions, i'm not sure i got to see the whole picture... maybe you could elaborate a little...

PEACE, and keep writin'

PSY

Rebel_INS
07-10-2005, 03:54 AM
That shit is fire yo

JOHNNY_TICAL
07-10-2005, 05:13 AM
politicians.... damn yo ... dat shit got me.... dis shit is sick...... u got sum skills... no doubt... hopefully dis would inspire me 2 come wit more......... Good shit ....



peace out .......

[blaze it!!!!}

Dae Ja Nae
07-10-2005, 12:30 PM
your lyrics are good... you have an excellent balance of vocabulary in this piece, and it was very desriptive, which is what i like to see... i like to have visual interpretation of any verse i read or hear, otherwise it just doesn't hold my attention... it read like spoken word to me, and i think it's a great poem... you did a good job settin' the 'mood'; if you were on a slam stage, it'd be quite captivatin'... it feels really dark, and i always like poetry that's bold enough to question faith... but i have to admit, my only complaint is that i'm not quite clear as to where this journy led... what i mean is: it felt like you were takin' us somewhere, but despite your descriptions, i'm not sure i got to see the whole picture... maybe you could elaborate a little...

PEACE, and keep writin'

PSYI know exactly what you are referring to, and I thank you for your honesty. Constructive criticism only makes a person strive harder to better "themselves" ...

Peace 7th, Tuco, Rebel and Johnny ... I appreciate the luv ...

One

blackwisdom
07-10-2005, 02:26 PM
This is one of the ones I listen to to calm my nerves.

peace Da'

TUCO
07-10-2005, 02:38 PM
no doubt no doubt
sorry for fillin ya thread with beef....i HAD to do it mama....u know my crazy ass
but like always....a refreshing read, no doubt
much love

PAZ

BlaK FuRYaN
07-10-2005, 03:09 PM
My being is bound by darkness on a quest to receive the light
explorations of exploitations attempt to blind my sight
divine rights reach new heights
an unfathomable flight
with an unknown destination
most will board without hesitation
laying down the crumbled foundation of a lost nation
every plan in which theyíve partaken
leads us closer to desecration
contemplations of consciousless pagans
leave the just to suffer the endless ramifications
the best of us now forced to wear badges of defamation
character assassination
the whole world now views us with the deepest sentiments of disgust
we want more, so we take more, an insatiable lust
no sense of trust, more like a well disguised terrorist
reeking havoc blacker than the plague, but most of us are oblivious
like these weapons of mass destruction, our "word" is non-existent
speaking with forked tongues- and trickery of magicians
Politicians ...
they bring division amongst the hearts and minds of men
beginning with our decision to allow these tyrants in
we canít win
not when they have an infinite reach that knows no end
forever bathing, but yet uncleansed of their inexorable sins
betrayal of friends - outcaste - unable to make amends
inflicted wounds so slow to heal, those that do are reopened
my mind spins, dizziness sets in,
I falter on my feet
inner strength is now weak, inner voice unable to speak
I beseech thee to set us free
from your clutches of iniquity
for your acts of depravity will enslave us for an eternity
on my knees I begin to plead
the cries of a desperate daughter with a heart that bleeds
hoping all will heed
before itís to late,
our fate sealed shut behind an unyielding gate .....

Peace



Some of you might recall this one ...


Sup Dae....This was nice....the way you put it together was nice....tha content behind it made me feel like we as people have no hope....and have been beaten to our knees....it wasn't tha kind of fightin resistant spirit which was prolly tha zone um in at tha moment....this dosn't mean that i didn't like or appreciate your piece....
coz i know fire resides in you an you testin tha waters wid this one......

Much Love

Racailla
07-10-2005, 04:12 PM
I wonder if you have any recordings ? I'd really like to listen to your wisdom

GuardianOne
07-11-2005, 02:44 AM
Its quite a powerful verse, or can i name it "verse in thought". And suitably titled as here it shows a new difinitive approach than the conventional lyrics mostly placed. And you seemed to lure with the lyrically content in discribing what is only there. And what more ample title than the one you gave it. This verse showed a more developed sense of thought (hey you know there are many schools of thought) and yet this one had its own clarity (with nothing).

Peace
PS: Keep posting. And i had not read this one before!!

Dae Ja Nae
07-12-2005, 08:08 PM
A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
THAT FIRE BURNS ...
SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
GET THAT? ...
MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

Peace

444trumpets
07-12-2005, 08:18 PM
Pretty Tight I Like That Sig
KNOWLEDGEABLE FLOW
Tight Ass Verse
Yo Shit Was Raw
Peace 4.4.4 Trumpets

Wuddup You Wanna Battle
COME In The Chamber
Messing Wit Shu
Peace

Sicka than aidZ
07-12-2005, 08:25 PM
cool,...fuck retiring tho,.....ima kill it till the end, tha hell with that, peace

TUCO
07-12-2005, 09:08 PM
A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
THAT FIRE BURNS ...
SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
GET THAT? ...
MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

Peace
OMG yo.....i mean...even at my best, im sure i couldnt flow like this yo, on the real though...thats my word Dae....fuckin ripped tha shit 3 times over with this peice....
left me speechless, no doubt mama
keep breakin these cats' backs, they blind without the catarats
lol no doubt mama.....

PAZ

AcidPhosphate69
07-12-2005, 10:31 PM
D A M N, that shit was fucking tight! You ripped that shit apart like a fucking tornado on that verse. Hot shit.

Dae Ja Nae
07-13-2005, 06:47 PM
LOL ... thx for the feeds. I am in no way a battler, except when I have to be ;). This is something I was just kidding around with ... :). I think I'd better stick with my original format though.

Peace

BlaK FuRYaN
07-14-2005, 06:28 AM
A WHOLE FORUM OF THUG WANNA B'S TRYIN HARD TO LIVE UP TO THESE
STANDARDS OF HIGHER LEARNIN', ALWAYS YEARNIN' BUT NEVER LEARNIN
THAT FIRE BURNS ...
SO SIT BACK AND WATCH ME TURN
SCEPTICS INTO BELIEVERS, YALL ASSES IS TOO EAGER
YOUR STYLE IS WACK ... SO THE BATTLEFIELD-YOU SHOULD LEAVE IT LIKE BEAVER
CLASSIC UNDERACHEIVERS ... NIGGA UP YOUR GAME
THIS SHIT IS CHILD'S PLAY AND I'M CHUCKY-READY TO WRECK AND MAIM
... LEAVE YOU LYIN' IN SHAME,
CUZ THIS DAME DON'T PLAY GAMES DUN
I'LL SNATCH THE RAP STATS FROM THE CHOSEN ONE
DAE IS SECOND TO NONE ...
I BREAK PUNKS LIKE YOU FOR FUN
HOW YOU WANTING TO SPARK BEEF WHEN YOU AIN' T HOLDING GUNS?
YOUR FLOW IS SLACK-IT LACKS TACT LIKE COOK COKE, CRACK
GET THAT? ...
MY 45 WILL MAKE YOUR ASS LEAN BACK
NO SHELLS, I FLOW THAT WELL, A STEP AHEAD OF THE REST
THE SHIT YOU SPIT IS ILLEGIT, IT'S BULLSHIT AT BEST
CONTEMPLATE YOUR WORSE FATE-YOU WANNA GAMBLE-YOU'LL LOOSE
INFILTRATE YOUR CAMP'S GATE AND SHUT YALL DOWN LIKE JEWS
CONCENTRATED MY TOOLS ...
WITH MY REP, I'LL NEVER LOOSE
LEAVE YOU PISSIN YOUR PANTS, CRYING-BROKE AND SINGIN' THE BLUES
SPLIT IN HALF FROM THE AFTERMATH OF MY VERBAL MACHETE
I WHOOP ASS BADDER THAN BETTY BUT YALL BITCHES AIN' T READY-FOR THIS FIRE ...
NIGGAS THAT KNOW ME CALL ME BARBed WIRE
YOUR IMAGE, I RIP TO SHREADS IF YOU TRY TO CONSPIRE
FORCE YOUR ASS TO RETIRE
YOUR CREW WILL DEEM ME AS "SIRE"
SEALING YOU GRIM FATE, THAT'S MY GREATest DESIRE




Respect My "G" ... LMAO ...

Peace
PEACE DAE...I SEE YOU OPENED THA CHAMBER OF FLAMES ONCE AGAIN.....

YOU SHOULD'VE CALLED THIS ONE "IF IT OFFENDS YOU, DEN ITS ABOUT YOU"

NICE RELEASE.....

MUCH LOVE

blackwisdom
07-14-2005, 03:57 PM
LOL ... thx for the feeds. I am in no way a battler, except when I have to be ;). This is something I was just kidding around with ... :). I think I'd better stick with my original format though.

PeaceI concur.

peace

ThePharaohNosferatu
07-14-2005, 04:53 PM
WOW! good stuff!

Would love to see you kill some dudes at a Battle

*Wink*

*please look down under my banner*

LOL!

PsYkOsUs
07-14-2005, 10:07 PM
PEACE... i liked this, it reminded me of Jean Grae's "haters anthem"... even if it was just fuckin' around, i love to see people post verses like these, 'cause cats are so sensitive on this forum they all feel offended in some shape or form... no need to name names, they know who they are, and they know they need to step they're game up! keep them on their toes, 'cause this verse could've easily set the battlefield into a panic...

PEACE

PSY

Dae Ja Nae
08-04-2005, 01:28 AM
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=405661

When I think of Poetry, I think of the wind beneath my wings
soaring to new heights, viewing all that life brings
all things ...
become anew, for this art shines a different light
it embraces the ills of this world and somehow makes wrongs seem right
magically turning adversities into an impossible victories
mysteries begin to unravel as we travel through out history
unlocking secret tombs and giving voices to Taboos
illuminating dark places, creating faces from lost clues
nothing is unknown ... for it enables the mind to dream
putting everything within our grasp, no matter how inconceivable they seem
silent screams ...
are now heard because Poetry has given them a voice
cries that once fell upon def ears, now have reason to rejoice
to me, itís lifeís essence ... the very force that drives me
like the blood pumping through my veins, it keeps me alive, see ...
Poetry is who I am ...
the continuous rhythm of my soul
the fire contained within that runs wild and grabs hold,
of the smallest hint of imagination, turning stray thoughts into great visions
manifested into fruition ...
... itís the teacher of lifeís lessons-never requestiní a tuition
Itís gives the smallest life-a true purpose,
a creative mind-a new surface ...
to draw upon whatever desires the heart inspires into service
all these things and more, are reasons I will always adore
Poetry
and her depth ... I will endlessly explore



How about you?

SurreaL
08-04-2005, 01:58 AM
That was deep, very nice wordplay, it flowed nicely in my head, and I didn't need a beat, so that's Ill, peace.

White N Dangerous
08-04-2005, 02:05 AM
It was tight, keep it real holmes, 10 / 10

SurreaL
08-04-2005, 02:22 AM
pssst..... Holmes is a Lady, :)

Dae Ja Nae
08-04-2005, 02:27 AM
pssst..... Holmes is a Lady, :)
LOL ... yes, I am. Thanks for the feedback you two. I really appreciate it. Check out the link to hear it.

Peace

SurreaL
08-04-2005, 02:28 AM
I heard it, it was sweet, peace.

White N Dangerous
08-04-2005, 04:21 AM
it's all the same amigo ;)

blackwisdom
08-04-2005, 06:49 AM
I always, always grow from your words. I only got a chance to listen, cause I'm at work, but I'll give you some good feedback soon. Your words are indescribable. I'm holding back what I really want to say, but I thank God for the ability to be able to receive your words.

peace

G.O.D.PT3
08-04-2005, 06:58 AM
http://s51.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3PITA08F34GQQ0YIOAUDARRHTA

When I think of Poetry, I think of the wind beneath my wings
soaring to new heights, viewing all that life brings
all things ...
become anew, for this art shines a different light
it embraces the ills of this world and somehow makes wrongs seem right
magically turning adversities into an impossible victories
mysteries begin to unravel as we travel through out history
unlocking secret tombs and giving voices to Taboos
illuminating dark places, creating faces from lost clues
nothing is unknown ... for it enables the mind to dream
putting everything within our grasp, no matter how inconceivable they seem
silent screams ...
are now heard because Poetry has given them a voice
cries that once fell upon def ears, now have reason to rejoice
to me, itís lifeís essence ... the very force that drives me
like the blood pumping through my veins, it keeps me alive, see ...
Poetry is who I am ...
the continuous rhythm of my soul
the fire contained within that runs wild and grabs hold,
of the smallest hint of imagination, turning stray thoughts into great visions
manifested into fruition ...
... itís the teacher of lifeís lessons-never requestiní a tuition
Itís gives the smallest life-a true purpose,
a creative mind-a new surface ...
to draw upon whatever desires the heart inspires into service
all these things and more, are reasons I will always adore
Poetry
and itís depths ... I will endlessly explore



How about you?
nice. keep at it ssiter. peace

PsYkOsUs
08-04-2005, 10:22 AM
Wow! first off, lemme just say that your audio is ill... you had a very nice delivery, and a very nice voice too; you're very talented... it felt like i was watchin' you on Def Poetry Jam, did you record that in a studio, or into your computer with a mic?

now your lyrics were very insightful... i'd like to say it was thoughful, but i don't think this one was written with anythin' other than pure heart... i get the feelin' it just flowed effortlessly onto the page... and from a technical standard it was written beautifully, a nice blend of strong vocabulary and artful simplicity... i don't have much else to say, other than keep doin' what you do... and lemme know when to watch for you on Def Poetry...

PEACE

PSY

Ronin
08-04-2005, 10:53 AM
great piece, deep...like psy says it seems like it just flowed raw from your mind to the paper

beautiful little analogies and comparrisons

props

Dae Ja Nae
08-04-2005, 12:44 PM
Wow! first off, lemme just say that your audio is ill... you had a very nice delivery, and a very nice voice too; you're very talented... it felt like i was watchin' you on Def Poetry Jam, did you record that in a studio, or into your computer with a mic?

now your lyrics were very insightful... i'd like to say it was thoughful, but i don't think this one was written with anythin' other than pure heart... i get the feelin' it just flowed effortlessly onto the page... and from a technical standard it was written beautifully, a nice blend of strong vocabulary and artful simplicity... i don't have much else to say, other than keep doin' what you do... and lemme know when to watch for you on Def Poetry...

PEACE

PSYThanks to everyone for sharing your thoughts on this piece. Encouraging words are always welcomed and appreciated.


black, thanks for always holding me down ... you know how we do ... and how we think. The same can be said about you my brotha ... :yes: *D ... you know what they say ... great minds baby, great minds ;)
.
Psy, thanks for the compliments ... :) ... and you are exactly right ... it was a stray thought at first, and the rest just followed. After I read it, I was moved by it's powerful simplicity, so I recorded it (onto my computer with a mic). I always try to approach Poetry from the heart ... because I love Her.


Peace

ElusiveFugitive
08-04-2005, 05:15 PM
Fantastic!! I felt the emotion injected in this piece, and longed for it all over again after I finished reading. I couldnt access the link but would love to hear it from the voice of the writer. I look forward to reading more from you, keep posting

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-05-2005, 11:21 AM
wow Dae you sure no how to move a person this piece has a feel to it as if you just released a big breathe from with in... it seems you needed to get this out and it just poured outta you..PEACE

Dae Ja Nae
08-05-2005, 01:01 PM
Thank you both ... as always, it's appreciated.

BlaK FuRYaN
08-05-2005, 05:31 PM
yo Dae check your mail....i gotta picture i think you might like.....

Murderous Mack
08-06-2005, 01:42 AM
Man fuck this candy ass shit. When I think of poetry I think of pain, misery, torture, murder, and bludgeoning motherfuckers to death. None of this pansy let's all have a group hug bullshit. Fuck that. I murder motherfuckers in cold blood, then use my wicked rhyme kicking ability to recount it.

Dae Ja Nae
08-06-2005, 01:38 PM
Man fuck this candy ass shit. When I think of poetry I think of pain, misery, torture, murder, and bludgeoning motherfuckers to death. None of this pansy let's all have a group hug bullshit. Fuck that. I murder motherfuckers in cold blood, then use my wicked rhyme kicking ability to recount it.
LOL at this lame ass clown ...

Ebo
08-06-2005, 01:54 PM
This is a serious piece and should therefore be respected likewise. I really liked the style and form of your verse. It gives me the feeling you really put in the effort and emotion to build this verse.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
08-06-2005, 02:21 PM
Thank you ...

Killer Falcon
08-06-2005, 07:10 PM
damn, that was nice. i'm feeling your imagery a lot, its vivid and conveys your message very well. i checked out the audio and that was good too. i really like your style. please post more, this was a very enjoyable piece to read

peace

iNtell3kT
08-06-2005, 11:03 PM
i would explore if it came with a condom :P j/p Dae, i loved it, listen to it, might listen to it again, i love the way your thought pattern gives off a clear strait vision..........

word, thats mad nice!
good stuff

Roman Deini
08-07-2005, 02:40 PM
when i read this one, i got that tune of dear summer in my head, fits perfect.

Dae Ja Nae
08-07-2005, 06:39 PM
Once again, thanks to everyone for the love, and props to all who felt my piece, but please know that for me that's not what it's all about. Any criticism, be it positive or negative, serves a purpose to a true writer. Not ever person that views another's work is going to approve of said work. I am more than aware that people have different opinions as well as tastes. Because it is so, I also know that I will never be able to satisfy the palate of every individual. In my opinion, negative comments help a person to grow and become stronger/better, so I am not offended by them, and actually view them as stepping stones to success. However, it's the blatant disrespect that I dislike. So ... if you choose to be disrespectful, it's all good, but please know that ... I AM THAT CHICK ... I'll serve that shit right back to your ass ... RAW.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
08-07-2005, 09:16 PM
Thanks Spoken ... yeah, those were better times ... The Poet's Corner. I still miss it ... and My 4 Horsemen ... lol ...

That thread contained some real jewels ... so much talent. I really miss reading them all, we all contributed to the insightful inspiration that was felt there. Hopefully we'll be able to build some new memories in time ...


who knows :)

Peace

PS: I'm down for whatever ... still waiting for that beat ... ;)

NAKHI the SOLORIAN
08-08-2005, 01:21 AM
Damn Mami...............


reading it word for word made me like it even more....
damn......
eye am speechless...

good work.
peace the older God.

p.s. still waiting on your verse and what direction we gonna take this...

you know where to find me

Kingz and Queenz for life!

M.I.L.E.S
08-08-2005, 12:59 PM
thats deep thats a level i'm tryin to get to keep posting

Dae Ja Nae
08-08-2005, 08:07 PM
Damn Mami...............


reading it word for word made me like it even more....
damn......
eye am speechless...

good work.
peace the older God.

p.s. still waiting on your verse and what direction we gonna take this...

you know where to find me

Kingz and Queenz for life!
whoa ... it slipped my mind ... sorry ... I'll get at it soon and let you know.

Peace

someone
08-09-2005, 03:30 AM
^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ ^O^ :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: ^O^ ^O^

Dae Ja Nae
08-11-2005, 06:02 PM
^^^ ;) ... :d

ElusiveFugitive
08-11-2005, 11:00 PM
I dont think this lacks fighting spirit at all...To me, the descriptive & emotional language of the verse leads me to think that you are neck deep in your battle, letting off a little steam, and gathering yourself for your next move. I liked it! Keep the ink flowing

ONE LOVE

Dae Ja Nae
08-12-2005, 01:36 AM
I dont think this lacks fighting spirit at all...To me, the descriptive & emotional language of the verse leads me to think that you are neck deep in your battle, letting off a little steam, and gathering yourself for your next move. I liked it! Keep the ink flowing

ONE LOVEThanks EF ... I'm glad you enjoyed the read ...

You are very much correct. This is my verse from a collab that I did with CD ... :looking: ... it was centered around my frustration with our entire electoral process and the unjustified war that was waged against Iraq. It was really my way of letting off some steam, while at the same time calling attention to how we are being viewed, or dare I say judged, by the actions of our so called President. There are so many people who are and voted against him, yet we are all forced to wear the same badges of shame as those who are in support of him. The masses blindly flock behind this "Shepard" being foolishly mislead by his unfounded suspicions, which serve as the weakening agent in his supposedly "solid" foundation. It's almost as if he were single handedly trying to destroy us as a Nation and a people. We are looked upon by all as a greedy, selfish nation who is only concerned with selfish gains, and for the most part, it's sadly true. But that is the image of those in positions of political power and authority, not the common people, although we are the ones to pay the ultimate price. It makes one really wonder who the true terrorist are. They try to blind us even further with all these bullshit illusions about voting, and how by doing so, we can make a difference ... lol ... what's even sadder than that is the fact that so many people believe it, as if the previous election wasn't enough of a mockery. Things will never change. The state of the world will only continue to diminish. This is just the beginning ... of the end that is.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
09-07-2005, 11:02 PM
muah ... *D

Visionz
09-07-2005, 11:33 PM
you speak the truth Dae, really enjoyed that piece, thought your train of thought flowed real nice line to line. Peace,

J.T.S.
09-08-2005, 12:23 PM
[QUOTE=Dae Ja Nae]My being is bound by darkness on a quest to receive the light
explorations of exploitations attempt to blind my sight
divine rights reach new heights
an unfathomable flight
with an unknown destination
most will board without hesitation
laying down the crumbled foundation of a lost nation
every plan in which theyíve partaken
leads us closer to desecration
contemplations of consciousless pagans
leave the just to suffer the endless ramifications
the best of us now forced to wear badges of defamation
character assassination
the whole world now views us with the deepest sentiments of disgust
we want more, so we take more, an insatiable lust
no sense of trust, more like a well disguised terrorist
reeking havoc blacker than the plague, but most of us are oblivious
like these weapons of mass destruction, our "word" is non-existent
speaking with forked tongues- and trickery of magicians
Politicians ...
they bring division amongst the hearts and minds of men
beginning with our decision to allow these tyrants in
we canít win
not when they have an infinite reach that knows no end
forever bathing, but yet uncleansed of their inexorable sins
betrayal of friends - outcaste - unable to make amends
inflicted wounds so slow to heal, those that do are reopened
my mind spins, dizziness sets in,
I falter on my feet
inner strength is now weak, inner voice unable to speak
I beseech thee to set us free
from your clutches of iniquity
for your acts of depravity will enslave us for an eternity
on my knees I begin to plead
the cries of a desperate daughter with a heart that bleeds
hoping all will heed
before itís to late,
our fate sealed shut behind an unyielding gate .....

Peace



Some of you might recall this one ...

Dae this was beautiful Queen u get iller wit every drop u drop! Had to read this multiple times your'e so talented it's beyond imagination, loved the message, vocab, and tha flow was flawless. All praises due..

noel411
09-10-2005, 01:48 AM
I think I've seen this one before. It's a good piece. One of the things that impresses me about your writing is that you can use bars of varying lengths, and still keep a steady flow. That's not easy to do.

Chequita
09-11-2005, 04:21 AM
This is a Good read i can see your a deep thinker, and aware of the madness going down.

Dae Ja Nae
09-17-2005, 12:47 PM
Thank you both. I really appreciate.

Dae Ja Nae
09-23-2005, 09:45 AM
Generations of technique combined with a God like flow

With a style so bold that I control the sacred scrolls

the tactics of Queen Nzingha, esteem like Nandi

heart of the Zulu Priestess with the presence of Tiye

I sew beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted

your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted

my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish

subliminal famine vanquished, proceed to feed the malnourished

this hereís mental nutrition, I blaze food for thought

amazed by the way transition frees the mind thatís been caught

fuck them mind tricks, my shitís lucid-I surpass Jediís

swift with liquid swords, render your thoughts paralyzed

itís the ...

Return of The Dragon snake spittiní with Deadly Venoms

Iím strapped with The Golden Arms ready to get up in em

Iím more ...

sort after than the sacred secrets of Egypt

perplexin' like hidden messages in solar eclipses

with no guns, I flow son, "The Chosen One"

I collect souls of Shoguns, The Assassin

Still, Priceless ...

The Modern Isis, itís your girl Dae Ja

smooth with seductive ways that amaze and Per Suades ya

to seek a higher learning and quench the soul that is yearning

become one with the beating drum and fuel the fire thatís burning

evolve into something greater, magnify The Creator

The Savior, Mind Elevator, save the bullshit for later


Peace

BlaK FuRYaN
09-23-2005, 12:45 PM
This was really nice. I felt allot of knowledge, word play and messages which makes for a good productive verse.....

see if 50cent was sayin words like this, i wouldn't hate him...but any way.....it was a very good read....this line was tight....


Iím more ...

sort after than the sacred secrets of Egypt




from this piece i can tell you reading quite abit.....


until our next audio kollab


peace

J.T.S.
09-23-2005, 02:11 PM
UH-Ohh The Lady Gza!

J.T.S.
09-23-2005, 02:12 PM
Hot shit as always Dae!

GuardianOne
09-24-2005, 01:35 AM
It s a nice verse, has a lot of references. But ou also keep your frankness (or should i say common logical sense). Nice verse. Like the part of the Zulu (Dupreez will enjoy that half- well iam from the ngoni/nguni tribe my family is first line in the royal family, Mpezeni, Unzima, Nzima, Chazula,Magugu,Gamalio- you can tell from my surname Mbazima, Zwangendaba's wife Ntombazi)

But anyway thats tribalism, nice verse you seemed extremely confident in this verse.

Peace

NAKHI the SOLORIAN
09-24-2005, 03:55 PM
flames, flames, flames...........


nice verse Ma you keep it up and you just might be the first signee on my up and coming label....



knowledge, knowledge

ElusiveFugitive
09-25-2005, 04:29 PM
A beautiful jewel Dae...Ill flow throughout and profound content, these parts were my favourite

I sew beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish
subliminal famine vanquished, proceed to feed the malnourished

to seek a higher learning and quench the soul that is yearning
become one with the beating drum and fuel the fire thatís burning
evolve into something greater, magnify The Creator
The Savior, Mind Elevator, save the bullshit for later

ONE LOVE

Dae Ja Nae
09-25-2005, 11:09 PM
Peace to all The Temple Warriors for holdin' it down and spreadin' the love ... I appreciate that ...

Peace
;)

Dae Ja Nae
09-29-2005, 12:41 PM
aahchew ...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-29-2005, 12:51 PM
heart of the Zulu Priestess with the presence of Tiye

I sew beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted

your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted

my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish

subliminal famine vanquished, proceed to feed the malnourished

this hereís mental nutrition, I blaze food for thought

amazed by the way transition frees the mind thatís been caught

fuck them mind tricks, my shitís lucid-I surpass Jediís

swift with liquid swords, render your thoughts paralyzed

Spit salaciousness split tongues get snake kissed

The Modern Isis, itís your girl Dae Ja

smooth with seductive ways that amaze and Per Suades ya

to seek a higher learning and quench the soul that is yearning

become one with the beating drum and fuel the fire thatís burning

evolve into something greater, magnify The Creator

The Savior, Mind Elevator, save the bullshit for later

Damn Dae Dynamite you Display

Dae Ja Nae
10-04-2005, 03:59 PM
slicker than oil

for riches he toils

foolishly fighting over materialistic spoils

nothing to gain

slipping away like grains

of sand ...

his clinched fist equals an empty hand

the strength of a man

always in popular demand

but realize he's human first

so for money and power he might thirst

fuck around and fall victim to the curse

these are the acts that break made men

show you his worse side before mental expansion can begin

strap on a suit if armor to protect his weakened flesh

appearing hard as stone to hide the heart underneath his chest

at his best he feels blessed

but deep down he knows he's hexed

trying to deny the latter makes him stress

so now he's vexed

striving for perfection

to heal the scars of rejection

unable to hide from the truth seen in his own reflection

broke the mirror to free the demons

covered in blood but never screamin'

after viewing the shards itís still to hard to even envision dreaminí

tired of being the victim

of a system that convicts him

running from lifeís restrictions

deepens the affliction of addiction

to vanity ...

a state of sanity

is becoming a thing of the past

searching for the arms of security in something that was never meant to last

time to remove the mask ...

and dismiss the fear of shame

never point and outward finger when you only have yourself to blame

see, real strength can be found once a man can admit his faults

feelings of pride, brought to a halt

inner depth, now able to exalt

now free from his former self

heís finally obtained true wealth

a sense of oneness/being whole, a pleasure he has never before felt

he accepts the hand heís been dealt

because he believes in the power of choice

no longer afraid to lift his voice, he now has reason to rejoice

viewing the world with new eyes is his first step towards ecstacy

and becoming a "true" master of his own destiny

a Man Iíll be proud to have stand next to me



Peace

GuardianOne
10-05-2005, 01:58 AM
This is a very powerful verse. It has one thinking of what a woman or how a woman thinks. A perspective hardly witnessed in written verse. Its funny actually the title you gave it. Cause it totally- i don't know how to express it, its well expressed, you managed to bring it to such a conclusion which i could not imagine. Actually surprised!!

Nice verse.

Peace
PS: Keep up the good work and keep posting.

noel411
10-05-2005, 02:28 AM
This is a good piece, Dae. Clearly all about the content, which I would certainly give a thumbs up. I think anybody who struggles with themselves at times, can relate to this on some level. Interesting to see it related in reference to a man specifically, from a female perspective. Reminds me a lot of some pieces I have penned. Good use of varying lengths of lines too. You tend to do that well. This was a good read.

ElusiveFugitive
10-05-2005, 02:58 PM
strap on a suit if armor to protect his weakened flesh


appearing hard as stone to hide the heart underneath his chest










unable to hide from the truth seen in his own reflection
broke the mirror to free the demons
covered in blood but never screamin'
after viewing the shards itís still to hard to even envision dreaminí
tired of being the victim
of a system that convicts him
running from lifeís restrictions
deepens the affliction of addiction




Dae, very well written piece about the male psyche...It showed great insight that you could articulate it so fluently from a womans point of view. Some of us guys (me included ) at various times like to think we do a good job of being emotionally imperceptible. For all the good intention it is a self defeating cycle that we need to liberate ourselves from

Whether or not this piece was about a particular person you hit the nail on the head. I enjoyed this read, the highlighted quotes stuck out the most to me...Props!

ONE LOVE

the funky drunk
10-05-2005, 03:14 PM
This is a very powerful verse. It has one thinking of what a woman or how a woman thinks. A perspective hardly witnessed in written verse. Its funny actually the title you gave it. Cause it totally- i don't know how to express it, its well expressed, you managed to bring it to such a conclusion which i could not imagine. Actually surprised!!

Nice verse.

Peace
PS: Keep up the good work and keep posting.i agree , well expressed

BlaK FuRYaN
10-05-2005, 03:59 PM
A DRINK OF WATER......thats whut this verse is....

sup Dae....this reminds of one joint on Laurin Hills last cd where she jus vibesin with the guitar....she spat one ryme...every verse was on point

"Mystry of Eniquity" thats it....


i loved this peice

6what131
10-05-2005, 09:26 PM
2 thumbs up , real nice work

Dae Ja Nae
10-05-2005, 11:09 PM
I just want to thank all you fellahs for feelin' my piece. Is easy to relate to the male psyche once one is able to remove the preconceived barriers of what supposedly makes us so different in the first place. We are all the same, in that we are all HUMAN ... we all live and breath ... we all hurt and die ... and we all fight in this battle we call life. But yet, society places the initial burden of "strength" on a man. It's that very same pressure that has many would be good men going against what he knows to be right in an attempt to somehow succeed or feel complete. All of what I wrote also holds true for woman, it's just that we're not hit with it as directly as men are. It's crazy when you really think about it ... if we could all just embrace the fact that we are ONE, perhaps this proverbial battle of differences that we so rigorously fight would be won almost instantaneously. Right now, I'm still in the process of wrapping my mind around this notion. I've not yet perfected it, but at least my mind and my heart are open to the possibility of doing so.

Thanks again for the feed ... as always, you guys know it's appreciated.

Peace

Visionz
10-06-2005, 12:16 AM
Nice, strong lyrics as I've come to expect from you. Swear if i had a record lable, I'd sign you. keep it up Dae.peace

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
10-06-2005, 07:24 AM
YO NICE VERSE MAN REAL TRUTH SPOKEN THAT DEFENATELY KNOWLEDGE BORN FOR REAL KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

Dae Ja Nae
10-06-2005, 04:16 PM
Nice, strong lyrics as I've come to expect from you. Swear if i had a record lable, I'd sign you. keep it up Dae.peaceYO NICE VERSE MAN REAL TRUTH SPOKEN THAT DEFENATELY KNOWLEDGE BORN FOR REAL KEEP UP THE GREAT WORKEric, you are too kind :f :D ... Props to the both of you for diggin' my piece.

One Luv

PsYkOsUs
10-07-2005, 10:47 PM
"broke the mirror to free the demons"


i love that line, so simple, yet it speaks volumes to me... the whole poem was good, but that one line stole the show... i don't have much to say other than it's a great piece, and i enjoyed the read...


"I just want to thank all you fellahs for feelin' my piece. Is easy to relate to the male psyche once one is able to remove the preconceived barriers of what supposedly makes us so different in the first place. We are all the same, in that we are all HUMAN ... we all live and breath ... we all hurt and die ... and we all fight in this battle we call life. But yet, society places the initial burden of "strength" on a man. It's that very same pressure that has many would be good men going against what he knows to be right in an attempt to somehow succeed or feel complete. All of what I wrote also holds true for woman, it's just that we're not hit with it as directly as men are. It's crazy when you really think about it ... if we could all just embrace the fact that we are ONE, perhaps this proverbial battle of differences that we so rigorously fight would be won almost instantaneously. Right now, I'm still in the process of wrapping my mind around this notion. I've not yet perfected it, but at least my mind and my heart are open to the possibility of doing so."


wise words too... keep doin' your thing... i hate to sound sexist, but 70% of the women i come across on a daily basis seem to be completely brain-dead... they, as well as my ex-girl, could take notes from you, LOL... intelligence is frowned upon in my neighborhood...

Dae Ja Nae
10-09-2005, 08:49 AM
Awww ... thx Psy ... now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside :D ... lol ... trust, I do have my faults, but I'm grateful that a lack of intelligence isn't one of them. Thanks again for taking the time and for giving me props.

***And a special thanks to Bigben for putting this thread together for me. I'm lovin' it.


Peace

Dae Ja Nae
10-20-2005, 08:21 AM
Removing The Mask

Who is the one to blame for the source of my shame
surely it is I, for Iím the one who is inflicting the pain
itís plain to see, but hard to believe,
that this person is me . . .
a harsh reality to finally accept full responsibility
no recollection of myself, no fiber to my being
unable to cast a reflection that is even worth seeing
so full of doubt . . .
so I cast whatís on the inside-out
camouflaged like a chameleon so others canít see what Iím about
seen as the brightest light, but yet unable to shine
embarrassed by my life at times, so I pretend that all is fine
like hand blown glass . . . my mind-it seems so fragile
hard to believe to those who perceive me as being so agile
but Iím not . . . Iím non-existent . . . an empty hollow shell
living in the shadows of what appears to be hell
chastised and bastardized to suit ones selfish needs
mislead by a generosity that concealed true greed
thought I was freed . . .
but in actuality, I became a shackled ďslaveĒ
a young girl with a ďmasterĒwhose thinking was completely depraved
mislead by ways . . .
that appeared at first to be real love
surrendered all that I was in hopes to hover above
the former image of myself that was so lost and unworthy
if only Iíd trust in ďhimĒ, then I would never have to worry
and trust I did . . .
for many years, until there was nothing left
the many lies that were told, became the secrets that I kept
behind closed doors Iíve wept . . .
my pillow cases soaked and wet . . .
drowning myself in sorrow because this life is so hard to accept
and equally, so unkind . . .
at times it felt as if I were losing my mind,
drying these weary eyes that seem to be nearly blind
searching for an unknown love that seems impossible to find
perhaps it shall be mines next lifetime . . .

Who knows . . . . . .

Peace

the funky drunk
10-20-2005, 02:04 PM
damn .. that was dope

noel411
10-20-2005, 05:04 PM
That was a very strong and thought provoking piece. I liked it how you began by describing your personal inner turmoil, but then switched it to relating your turmoil to the actions of another. It had a sad, lost, almost hopeless sort of feeling, and once again related very well to anybody who struggles with themselves. Good effort. An interesting read. Keep it up.

Dae Ja Nae
10-21-2005, 07:02 PM
Thanks for taking the time and showing the luv guys ... yall know the rest ;) ...

Peace

tha god concept
10-21-2005, 07:04 PM
yo u always come correct homie

keep droppin jewelz on us

yo drop sum feed on my thread 2 homie id like 2 hear ur opinion cause i can tell u no whats up

peace

denaturat
10-21-2005, 07:39 PM
Love your writing: it's creative, thoughtful, tasteful, original...to use that all encompassing word: dope!

blackwisdom
10-21-2005, 09:25 PM
Removing The Mask

Who is the one to blame for the source of my shame
surely it is I, for Iím the one who is inflicting the pain
itís plain to see, but hard to believe,
that this person is me . . .
a harsh reality to finally accept full responsibility
no recollection of myself, no fiber to my being
unable to cast a reflection that is even worth seeing
so full of doubt . . .
so I cast whatís on the inside-out
camouflaged like a chameleon so others canít see what Iím about
seen as the brightest light, but yet unable to shine
embarrassed by my life at times, so I pretend that all is fine
like hand blown glass . . . my mind-it seems so fragile
hard to believe to those who perceive me as being so agile
but Iím not . . . Iím non-existent . . . an empty hollow shell
living in the shadows of what appears to be hell
chastised and bastardized to suit ones selfish needs
mislead by a generosity that concealed true greed
thought I was freed . . .
but in actuality, I became a shackled ďslaveĒ
a young girl with a ďmasterĒwhose thinking was completely depraved
mislead by ways . . .
that appeared at first to be real love
surrendered all that I was in hopes to hover above
the former image of myself that was so lost and unworthy
if only Iíd trust in ďhimĒ, then I would never have to worry
and trust I did . . .
for many years, until there was nothing left
the many lies that were told, became the secrets that I kept
behind closed doors Iíve wept . . .
my pillow cases soaked and wet . . .
drowning myself in sorrow because this life is so hard to accept
and equally, so unkind . . .
at times it felt as if I were losing my mind,
drying these weary eyes that seem to be nearly blind
searching for an unknown love that seems impossible to find
perhaps it shall be mines next lifetime . . .

Who knows . . . . . .

PeaceDa', I started two poems to try to answer you, but I feel that I shouldn't.

If only...

J.T.S.
10-22-2005, 12:11 AM
Peace Dae another intriquing piece.

Dae Ja Nae
10-23-2005, 11:08 AM
Once again, I'd like to say thanks to all of you who took the time to "Dig MY Jewels" ... One Luv and ...

**Special shout to denaturat ... you are too kind ...



Peace
;)

Jeru
10-23-2005, 11:47 AM
:hooray: :hooray: :hooray: Yay for this thread :clap: 9:|6 :clap: 9:|6 :clap: 9:|6 :clap: 9:|6 :clap: 9:|6 :clap: 9:|6

ElusiveFugitive
10-24-2005, 02:55 PM
Peace Dae, you spoke volumes with this joint. We all live behind various masks, so much so that it can seem impossible to separate the self from the "masked" reality...
A lotta heart went into this no-doubt,


[QUOTE]
no recollection of myself, no fiber to my being
unable to cast a reflection that is even worth seeing
so full of doubt . . .
so I cast whatís on the inside-out
camouflaged like a chameleon so others canít see what Iím about[QUOTE]


but Iím not . . . Iím non-existent . . . an empty hollow shell
living in the shadows of what appears to be hell
for many years, until there was nothing left
the many lies that were told, became the secrets that I kept
behind closed doors Iíve wept . . .
my pillow cases soaked and wet . . .
drowning myself in sorrow because this life is so hard to accept



At times in my life I can completely relate to the message, the truth is not always an easy thing to digest...Love your work

Keep ya head up

ONE LOVE

Dae Ja Nae
10-27-2005, 09:14 PM
Peace Dae, you spoke volumes with this joint. We all live behind various masks, so much so that it can seem impossible to separate the self from the "masked" reality...
A lotta heart went into this no-doubt,


no recollection of myself, no fiber to my being
unable to cast a reflection that is even worth seeing
so full of doubt . . .
so I cast whatís on the inside-out
camouflaged like a chameleon so others canít see what Iím about


At times in my life I can completely relate to the message, the truth is not always an easy thing to digest...Love your work

Keep ya head up

ONE LOVE
Peace J' and thanks for the luv ... :D .... Thank you as well E.F.

Ballad Ballistik
10-27-2005, 09:55 PM
you never said thanks for the rep points i dropped ya a few days back...
thats cool...i know your busy..

Dae Ja Nae
10-27-2005, 10:22 PM
you never said thanks for the rep points i dropped ya a few days back...
thats cool...i know your busy..
I'm sorry Ballid, you didn't leave your name. Without doing so, it's impossible for me to know who the points came from. I've given up trying to guess ... lol ...

I've gotten quite a few rep points because of this thread, which really makes me feel good. There's nothing like the feeling of having people appreciate your artwork. Especially when you put heart into it (which I do because I love Poetry).

BTW ... which comment did you leave? And again, I'm sorry.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
11-02-2005, 04:33 PM
Dae Ja Nae

created from the Earth's womb
with the luminous glow of the Moon
and eyes so bright they make the Stars in Heaven swoon
I am Woman ...
bestowing balance, giving life to all things
my beauty, more exuberant than blooming flowers in spring
curved like an hourglass
normal measures, I've surpassed
fully composed of strength, and sugar coated with class
soothing like milk and honey, satisfaction guaranteed
sought after like silk and money, a luxurious need
the most graceful breed ...
... mere presence sets the spirit free
worthy of humble pleas from down on bended knee
warm and nourishing like the morning Sun
standing beside my man to help him overcome
whatever perils he may face-we're two parts of one team
helping to achieve our dreams
no matter how impossible they may seem
eternal Queen ... Supreme Being
mother, lover, friend and wife
when things go wrong, within my arms they appear to be right
love at first sight ...
my body, an aphrodisiac
strike a cord deep in your soul wherever you see me at
the most pleasing acts ...
delivered under the veil of the night sky
with a prowess so powerful, it makes grown men cry
one could never deny ...
the force that makes your life feel whole
I am Woman ...
the Earth's Blessing, perfect mate for you soul


{Hook)
The first creators of life from their God given essence
Nation Builders, giving our Babies their first lessons
What we need to survive & what we live and die for
Witness the beauty in their eyes, when they pain I give & cry more


blackw.i.s.d.o.m.


She nourished me for nine months in her womb
Designed the minds that made the first pyramids and tombs
Brighter than high noon
Transforming life like a hardened cocoon
Her energy moves the planets and makes the Earth revolve
Inside of her essence all problems are solved
I need to protect her to keep her calm
So she can nurture my seed keeping him still in her arms
Suckling him into boyhood allowing me to make him a man
Iíll kneel for her but more so she demands me to stand
So thatís what Iíll do until my physical existence is through
To every divine avatar my love goes out to you
If I see you in the streets or in my presence feeling sad
Depend on me as if Iím your loving brother or dad
I live to protect you and allow you to build our nations within
God gave me paradise in the eyes of strong women
Understand your power and never abuse it
Youíre my water my origin I need you to use it
As a means to elevate us all to a place we need to be
Women are as strong to me as the current of the sea



{Hook}
The first creators of life from their God given essence
Nation Builders, giving our Babies their first lessons
What we need to survive & what we live and die for
Witness the beauty in their eyes, when they pain I give & cry more

Aqueous Moon
11-02-2005, 05:04 PM
Peace

These words are beyond beautiful, truly divine.

ElusiveFugitive
11-02-2005, 05:10 PM
I am Woman ...
bestowing balance, giving life to all things
my beauty, more exuberant than blooming flowers in spring
curved like an hourglass
normal measures, I've surpassed
fully composed of strength, and sugar coated with class
soothing like milk and honey, satisfaction guaranteed
sought after like silk and money, a luxurious need
the most graceful breed ...
... mere presence sets the spirit free
worthy of humble pleas from down on bended knee


Dae, this was a masterful expression of the so-called "fairer sex". Could easily have quoted the whole thing, this part killed me...sublime

Her energy moves the planets and makes the Earth revolve
Inside of her essence all problems are solved
I need to protect her to keep her calm
So she can nurture my seed keeping him still in her arms

So thatís what Iíll do until my physical existence is through
To every divine avatar my love goes out to you
If I see you in the streets or in my presence feeling sad
Depend on me as if Iím your loving brother or dad
I live to protect you and allow you to build our nations within
God gave me paradise in the eyes of strong women


Props to you Black W.I.S.D.OM, your verse shows a heartfelt and emotional appreciation of the power of women in this world...It is unfortunate that many "men" are unable to recognise this fact and instead belittle their queens...


Great collab, good work both of you. Keep the ink flowin'

ONE LOVE

noel411
11-02-2005, 07:46 PM
To be honest, I wasn't feeling it. It's just a personality thing for me though. I really didn't enjoy the content at all. I think it was a good piece, it just fell on the wrong eyes in my case. Too positive for a negative noel like me. I can appreciate it to some degree, as it was a nicely worded piece, but just not for me.

Dae Ja Nae
11-03-2005, 08:41 AM
Props to ElusiveFugitive and Aqueous Moon for checking us out and showing some luv *D ... I'm glad yall were feelin' it.

To be honest, I wasn't feeling it. It's just a personality thing for me though. I really didn't enjoy the content at all. I think it was a good piece, it just fell on the wrong eyes in my case. Too positive for a negative noel like me. I can appreciate it to some degree, as it was a nicely worded piece, but just not for me.
and lol ... why am I not suprised Noel. I knew from the moment I posted this collab that you weren't going to ehjoy the "sweetness" of our words. We know you don't get down with the mushy stuff, and that's cool. Atleast you took the time to check it out and post on it. Even though it wasn't for you, you still left something positive (as you always do), and I appreciate that ;).



Peace

Queen Of Poetry
11-03-2005, 09:32 AM
I loved it!!!! Hotness!!!!!!!!!

blackwisdom
11-03-2005, 10:42 AM
I would like to thank everyone for their comments. It's been a while since I've collab'd with Da'. I appreciate any opportunity to do so, she's such a beautiful Woman.

Queen, I use that General Tubman quote in my email signature at work. Stay up and keep ya head up. You'll overcome.

Peace be unto you all
Hotep

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-03-2005, 03:19 PM
Positive and Bright given insight I hold my head upright

Dae Ja Nae
11-05-2005, 07:31 AM
Thanks BB

*D

Dae Ja Nae
11-06-2005, 09:35 AM
Dae Ja Nae

created from the Earth's womb
with the luminous glow of the Moon
and eyes so bright they make the Stars in Heaven swoon
I am Woman ...
bestowing balance, giving life to all things
my beauty, more exuberant than blooming flowers in spring
curved like an hourglass
normal measures, I've surpassed
fully composed of strength, and sugar coated with class
soothing like milk and honey, satisfaction guaranteed
sought after like silk and money, a luxurious need
the most graceful breed ...
... mere presence sets the spirit free
worthy of humble pleas from down on bended knee
warm and nourishing like the morning Sun
standing beside my man to help him overcome
whatever perils he may face-we're two parts of one team
helping to achieve our dreams
no matter how impossible they may seem
eternal Queen ... Supreme Being
mother, lover, friend and wife
when things go wrong, within my arms they appear to be right
love at first sight ...
my body, an aphrodisiac
strike a cord deep in your soul wherever you see me at
the most pleasing acts ...
delivered under the veil of the night sky
with a prowess so powerful, it makes grown men cry
one could never deny ...
the force that makes your life feel whole
I am Woman ...
the Earth's Blessing, perfect mate for you soul


{Hook)
The first creators of life from their God given essence
Nation Builders, giving our Babies their first lessons
What we need to survive & what we live and die for
Witness the beauty in their eyes, when they pain I give & cry more


blackw.i.s.d.o.m.


She nourished me for nine months in her womb
Designed the minds that made the first pyramids and tombs
Brighter than high noon
Transforming life like a hardened cocoon
Her energy moves the planets and makes the Earth revolve
Inside of her essence all problems are solved
I need to protect her to keep her calm
So she can nurture my seed keeping him still in her arms
Suckling him into boyhood allowing me to make him a man
Iíll kneel for her but more so she demands me to stand
So thatís what Iíll do until my physical existence is through
To every divine avatar my love goes out to you
If I see you in the streets or in my presence feeling sad
Depend on me as if Iím your loving brother or dad
I live to protect you and allow you to build our nations within
God gave me paradise in the eyes of strong women
Understand your power and never abuse it
Youíre my water my origin I need you to use it
As a means to elevate us all to a place we need to be
Women are as strong to me as the current of the sea



{Hook}
The first creators of life from their God given essence
Nation Builders, giving our Babies their first lessons
What we need to survive & what we live and die for
Witness the beauty in their eyes, when they pain I give & cry more

NAKHI the SOLORIAN
11-14-2005, 01:57 AM
good to cee you two back at it again....


very well written......


mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

got me thinking about taking a moment away from the MPC to scribe summin.....


nice to read your thoughts again blackwisdom..and Dae you know how we do even if you don't return my messages...lol j/k

one love to both of you

elusivef
02-02-2006, 06:07 PM
I'm grateful to be able to read these poems again...Peace Dae Ja

E.F

RZA's Wife aka Goddess
02-02-2006, 06:34 PM
blackwisdom and Dae Ja Nae

Dae Ja Nae
03-25-2006, 09:30 AM
-blackw.i.s.d.o.m.-

I pray for those poí folk out there cold in the snow
From the ones in the forest to where the concrete grow
Where rats are bigger than cats & pimps push poison in veins
Kids kidnapped off of busses & trains & now theyíre slaves with no names
I call them kids cause that word is used for baby goats
I see their ribs & goose bumps cause they canít afford to have coats
Cause those in charge donít care about the spirit of man
One man can change the Earth so I try the hardest I can
I stand, but my legs only can hold but so much weight
I eat food to feed my spirit, so I place no meat on my plate
Iím starting to get back to my regular weight; Iím building mass
I almost canít wait to stand and instruct before my class
But everything comes in degrees and everything goes accord
I have some training to complete; I have to polish up my sword
So I can stand as a man that can see things for what they are
Understanding the constellations as formations and solo stars
Some call them ancestors on chariots guiding the way
But public schools canít offer our children the tools to meditate and pray
Which are vital to their survival as individuals and as a tribe
Cause spirituality is the key and the only way for us to survive

Hotep



~Dae Ja Nae~

I speak for those who are broken, the hopeless, mainly voiceless
who struggle from day to day to, those who juggle life's painful choices
those people who's souls are rottin', those grieving feeling forgotten
with tear filled eyes, who try to keep their heads to the sky
my desire, is to inspire, to motivate and make a difference
to plant seeds that sprout the belief there's true worth in our existence
we may suffer and meet resistance, but that should feed our persistence
fuel our need to be consistent if we're to go the full distance
It's time we move beyond popularized crimes and genocide
and embrace a true since of pride to silence a future generation of cries
unlearn a lifetime of lies sewn by those disguised as the wise
sternly believe our integrity should never be compromise
visualize change within our mind's eye, and trust in the power thereof
though some things will remain the same, we'll evolve from our new found love
towards the mental restoration of Kings, weíre descendants of royalty
with an adoration of Queens who are deserving of loyalty
learning from past mistakes and breaking free from their cycles
moving forward with clean slates that proudly display our new titles
weíll drink from cup of unity that shall quench all our thirst
re-staking our rightful claim to the fruits of this Earth

Peace

Sicka than aidZ
03-25-2006, 05:19 PM
oh shit!! i was thinking about u while in the shower today dae!

ElusiveFugitive
03-26-2006, 11:48 PM
I think I've read this one from Black W.I.S.D.O.M before, well written verse first and foremost...

Dae you added to this beautifully, each line flowed perfectly onto the next like ripples from a pebble thrown into the centre of a clear pool. ..the message of passive resistance and gradual wearing away at adversity, like water wearing away at the most impenetrable of substance...
I tip my hat. Its great to see you here again.

ONE LOVE
E.F

Dae Ja Nae
05-27-2006, 12:04 PM
blackDiamond

Itís the born day of my Ebony A-alike on the Mic
I could never do you justice with the simple words I write
If I might I would like to offer you some words to please
But first please place you spirit at ease
ĎCause youíre the Mother of the Universe
Similar to the inspiration of this verse
This world does hurt but itís souls like yours that bring the sun out
The radiance from your love it never runs out
So please accept this shout out as an act of "I am We"
Just knowing that you exist gives me knowledge that Iím Free
As soon as we unite on the screen sparks fly
Emanating past the visual to the Third Eye
Priceless: The Modern Isis
A Mother a lover with a butt kicker license
I know you like this cause itís all for you with every syllable
But none can compare to you the gift that you give is so incredible
Iím hysterical when you rejuvenate me with your loving light
Remember I said chill and relax while you read the words I write
Now from the Daí we met to the Daí the Suníll set I'll never regret
That I call you my Sister RBG and more than that
Everyday is your day in its own special way
Please remember that when that bills donít pay
And the odds are stacked
You know I got your back
Just take a look at the ancient way that we bond placing your mind on me
ĎCause my spirit in these words go deeper than the naked eye could ever see


from alpha visualization to mind tingling stimulation
Iím loviní the supplied vibrations of this mental libation
your depth of penetration always reaches my C-spot
mind sex so powerful, mentally making me hot
to this thing that we got, Iím hooked
on your use of phonetics
literally enslaved by the way youíve mastered alphabetics
by such polished Poetics Iím netted, in unSpoken words
I only pray that you never curb your superb addiction to the verbs
though not uttered, but still heard
because the heart is the soulís ear
so my spirit receives every message given loud and clear
such greatness combined can blind-the brightness of a rare find
blackDiamonds forever shine the lights of a-alike minds
see, this bond that we share is sacred, like scriptures written in stars
only Osiris and Isis had one greater than ours
yes, Iím filled to capacity from your act of "I am We"
so thanks for reaching into your soul and finding this gift for me
your RBG that hum-b-ly accept this token of affection
delivered with such perfection by my spoken reflection

blackwisdom
05-27-2006, 12:39 PM
^:$

Hotep

blackwisdom
05-29-2006, 09:30 AM
Life isÖ oommm
Hold up wait I know life isÖ. Aaaah
I donít know
Maybe life is everything that the world would show
Or maybe life is paying bills and dying
When I was young life was crying
Seeing Mom get beat in the head
Some say life begins when youíre dead
But others say that life is now and so is heaven
If I want to see what life is I tune into channel 11
Or maybe Lib
Assata said life is suppose to be free
But when I feel like life isnít loving me
Life can be harder than a tree
That just fell alone in the forest
Growing moss in damp areas before anybody saw it
Iím all for it, but itís confusing what it is
Well maybe before when I was small but now Iím big
And still small in many ways
Maturity doesnít come with many days
Or many years or many tears nor many beers and fist fights
Itís so much harder when you see it and others refuse to see the light
But from there perspective maybe we all are right
Maybe we all know the truth but get confused and want to fight
Life is Divine and itís in order when laws are found
Life is much more than this simple poem could ever expound
Or is it?
A woman is life when she gives it
I try to live it with a smile and a positive words trying to do good
But most of the time it hurts when my intentions are misunderstood
But itís all good Ďcause life isnít all peaches and apples all the time
I just hope that next time I see you weíll both be doing fine
Peace

Dae Ja Nae
08-23-2006, 08:13 PM
Life isÖ oommm
Hold up wait I know life isÖ. Aaaah
I donít know
Maybe life is everything that the world would show
Or maybe life is paying bills and dying
When I was young life was crying
Seeing Mom get beat in the head
Some say life begins when youíre dead
But others say that life is now and so is heaven
If I want to see what life is I tune into channel 11
Or maybe Lib
Assata said life is suppose to be free
But when I feel like life isnít loving me
Life can be harder than a tree
That just fell alone in the forest
Growing moss in damp areas before anybody saw it
Iím all for it, but itís confusing what it is
Well maybe before when I was small but now Iím big
And still small in many ways
Maturity doesnít come with many days
Or many years or many tears nor many beers and fist fights
Itís so much harder when you see it and others refuse to see the light
But from there perspective maybe we all are right
Maybe we all know the truth but get confused and want to fight
Life is Divine and itís in order when laws are found
Life is much more than this simple poem could ever expound
Or is it?
A woman is life when she gives it
I try to live it with a smile and a positive words trying to do good
But most of the time it hurts when my intentions are misunderstood
But itís all good Ďcause life isnít all peaches and apples all the time
I just hope that next time I see you weíll both be doing fine
Peace

maybe life is all things, few and far in between
from the first moment of entry, to emitting your first scream
the awful sting of a strange hand, a man slapping your backside
unaware of the significance of the tears that you first cried
being physically alive ... the beginning of deathís sentence
the feelings of being abandoned, defenseless and breathlessness
the concept is so intense, so inclusive of all things
wrapping your mind around the joy and pain that it brings
the foolishness of youthfulness and the bliss of itís ignorance
the perfection of your perception before losing your innocence
seeing through the shades of gray to the beautiful hues of blue
recognizing signs of her time while collecting her many clues
the knowledge of being used ... a small tool in a grander scheme
enduring her many lashes, having faith in the unseen
transporting to a land of dreams, mental escape from confusion
partaking in the serene, abruptly awake from illusions
the diffusion of this delusion that our leaders call peace
the infliction of senseless suffering of subjects stricken with grief
persecuted for your beliefs, the vain appeal of free will
subconsciously chilled to the ills of the amount blood that still spills
from being filled with desperation by the Concentration of the Aryan nation
to the silver clouds of motivation of slaves freed from the masterís Plantation
replacing the bitter cries of those whoís lives were despised
with eyes that are filled with pride and heads that are held up high
the inability to deny the haunting voices inside
unable to be suppressed no matter how hard you've tried
the unbearable burdens of man, the hollow ground on which he stands
the calloused hearts of those who refuse to lend a helping hand
the observation of conversations in relation to conservation
and the swollen pockets of corporations due to mass exploitation
the fictitious value of money, and rising cost of inflation
the joke of rasing a family on the crumbs of minimum wages
the sweatshop of America masquerading as a melting pot
believing status is based on how many cars youíve got
but itís all for not ... cause most of us are sadly mistakiní
that life is ours for the takiní, it goes beyond what we make it

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
08-23-2006, 08:16 PM
This is my post from another thread ... just a little lyrical flex ;) ...


I drop hot lines in my sleep while weaker minds count sheep
back to snatch shit like a thief, the Temple warriorís high chief
leaviní foes Russelliní like Crows, pigeon toed silly hoes
get tossed like old clothes, plucked like ducks in rows
all those opposed can fold, my style is lock and load
fuck around get slumped down on a dead end road
my words span the globe, Iím probiní minds in Tel Aviv
shit Is real, like holdiní lines, doing time for felonies
stickiní niggas for hella cheese, the world is yourís then bet it
quick to flash your jewels, youíll get swiped like credit
touched by the hand that glistens so Iím chosen, man listen
the sky is my only limit so Iím full of ambition
trick bitches claiminí they gifted, mamiís sick with it
still infectiní your whole click with the shit I spit
my flowís infectious like aids, invadiní brains like tumors
ear born disease consumed ya, spread like legs and rumors
ebonics that sonic boomed ya, my styleís wilder than Guile
street fightiní with ruff necks, duckiní Teks on the green mile
Daeís the Golden Child, I walk and breathe the killerís creed
please believe, rookie emcees donít ever want it with me
I leave domes blown like the breeze, chests-swissed like cheese
knock your heart off your sleeve, break you down to your knees
this that shit you should heed, rare breed, canít fuck with my flow
disbelievers can get it though then duct taped like video

Word: adamanteus

VernakuLa
08-26-2006, 05:11 PM
Dae you are my fav emcee on this site! I love ur work ma

peace

ElusiveFugitive
08-27-2006, 04:37 PM
damn lol...that was so hot it scorched my eyeballs as I read it. I sat down straight away to write a verse of my own. Beautiful work Dae, as always. Check your pm box. Peace, E.F

Locust
08-27-2006, 04:46 PM
yea some inspirational verses up in here

Dae Ja Nae
09-24-2006, 10:26 PM
Thank you fellahs, thank you very much. You guys make a sista feel real special ... :yes: *D ;)

White N Dangerous
09-24-2006, 11:17 PM
This is my post from another thread ... just a little lyrical flex ;) ...


I drop hot lines in my sleep while weaker minds count sheep
back to snatch shit like a thief, the Temple warriorís high chief
leaviní foes Russelliní like Crows, pigeon toed silly hoes
get tossed like old clothes, plucked like ducks in rows
all those opposed can fold, my style is lock and load
fuck around get slumped down on a dead end road
my words span the globe, Iím probiní minds in Tel Aviv
shit Is real, like holdiní lines, doing time for felonies
stickiní niggas for hella cheese, the world is yourís then bet it
quick to flash your jewels, youíll get swiped like credit
touched by the hand that glistens so Iím chosen, man listen
the sky is my only limit so Iím full of ambition
trick bitches claiminí they gifted, mamiís sick with it
still infectiní your whole click with the shit I spit
my flowís infectious like aids, invadiní brains like tumors
ear born disease consumed ya, spread like legs and rumors
ebonics that sonic boomed ya, my styleís wilder than Guile
street fightiní with ruff necks, duckiní Teks on the green mile
Daeís the Golden Child, I walk and breathe the killerís creed
please believe, rookie emcees donít ever want it with me
I leave domes blown like the breeze, chests-swissed like cheese
knock your heart off your sleeve, break you down to your knees
this that shit you should heed, rare breed, canít fuck with my flow
disbelievers can get it though then duct taped like video

Word: adamanteus


Lyrical Flex indeed! this shit was str8 Fyah! fa real shits hot..
anyway the high-lighted part was my fav. part i guess u can say
fa real i could tell ya be doing ya thing on this shit, real hotness
nothing to complain about thats for sure. feelin da style and how you use it ;)

stay up and keep droppin!!!

Lil' Ruger
09-24-2006, 11:20 PM
you make me jealous *cries*

Da Dishonourable Don
09-25-2006, 03:31 AM
yo, your shit's aight girl, keep doin' u!

J.T.S.
09-25-2006, 12:31 PM
(Singin) It's not unbelievable Dae Jan Nae is the illest!!

noel411
09-25-2006, 04:42 PM
Already spoke to you about this, but I just thought I'd pop in and show my approval. Also props to BW. It would be nice to see more of this in here.

Sicka than aidZ
09-25-2006, 05:28 PM
what up ma DAE rip this bitch apart!!:):spin:

Battle 1
09-26-2006, 12:33 AM
This is my post from another thread ... just a little lyrical flex ;) ...



I drop hot lines in my sleep while weaker minds count sheep
back to snatch shit like a thief, the Temple warriorís high chief
leaviní foes Russelliní like Crows, pigeon toed silly hoes
get tossed like old clothes, plucked like ducks in rows
all those opposed can fold, my style is lock and load
fuck around get slumped down on a dead end road
my words span the globe, Iím probiní minds in Tel Aviv
shit Is real, like holdiní lines, doing time for felonies
stickiní niggas for hella cheese, the world is yourís then bet it
quick to flash your jewels, youíll get swiped like credit
touched by the hand that glistens so Iím chosen, man listen
the sky is my only limit so Iím full of ambition
trick bitches claiminí they gifted, mamiís sick with it
still infectiní your whole click with the shit I spit
my flowís infectious like aids, invadiní brains like tumors
ear born disease consumed ya, spread like legs and rumors
ebonics that sonic boomed ya, my styleís wilder than Guile
street fightiní with ruff necks, duckiní Teks on the green mile
Daeís the Golden Child, I walk and breathe the killerís creed
please believe, rookie emcees donít ever want it with me
I leave domes blown like the breeze, chests-swissed like cheese
knock your heart off your sleeve, break you down to your knees
this that shit you should heed, rare breed, canít fuck with my flow
disbelievers can get it though then duct taped like video


Word: adamanteus



One of the illest verses no doubt about it. Line for line just filled with hot shit. Crazy ill no doubt about it.


^O^

Sicka than aidZ
09-26-2006, 11:28 PM
hell yeah u gotta check dae's soundclick she da female fonz fo real

Lil' Ruger
09-26-2006, 11:36 PM
ooooo imma go there now does she have it in her sig if not post it

Sicka than aidZ
09-26-2006, 11:39 PM
Yeah!! Its In Her Sig

Lil' Ruger
09-26-2006, 11:43 PM
omfg! i just listened to that illusion one she tore dat shit up like a fuckin hungry nigga do a hot sauce dipeed fried chicken wing!! !!

Dae Ja Nae
10-02-2006, 09:53 AM
omfg! i just listened to that illusion one she tore dat shit up like a fuckin hungry nigga do a hot sauce dipeed fried chicken wing!! !!

LMAO ... dude, you're a trip ... but on the real though, I just want to thank errbody for peeping my work. It feels good to be appreciated, I can't say that enough. I know I really need to work on adding a few new pieces to this thread, but until I do ... errbody stay up ...

Peace
;) *D

Lil' Ruger
10-03-2006, 05:03 PM
^^^^ i agree love it when ppl give me props on ma raps.

J.T.S.
10-03-2006, 06:10 PM
I can't stop reading Dae Jae Nae's lyrics it's a rap lovers nut!!

Dae Ja Nae
10-10-2006, 11:10 PM
2005 Year In Review

blackened skies now replace the beautiful blues of old
the face of the sun cries as the state (http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/) of the world grows cold
an immoral generation to scold,
as the masses lose control
angry weather muses death dances take a toll
raining down destruction on a people without voices
trapped in life's balance, brow beaten with limited choices
their cries make the tides rise, a trail of tears with no end
it's hard to pick up the pieces when you don't have a place to begin
London Bridges fallen down, terror packed in bombs
people panic stricken like Vietnam
WAR CHARMS
worn on the backs of those with a hopeless plight for survival
every thought and action in vain when the purpose is suicidal
unable to cleanse their souls in the healing river of Jordan
to busy bombing for sport and
minds preoccupied by thoughts of warring
instead of restoring
... HOPE
steadily following the familiar path of a downward slope,
unable to hide from the scope of a tyrant's yoke
situations make the earth shake,
a great quake in the land of sand
death's hand laid upon a multitude in Pakistan
Iraqi death toll on the rise like fermented yeast
American troops lives being claimed by the heartless beast
a wolf dressed like a sheep,
spewing a false speech for peace
security breached to put the litter's pick within his reach
riots paved the way for the broken seal of the French kiss
what use to be hearts, are now cars ablaze in the midst
the upheaval of a people sparked by 2 acts of evil
the realization of wide spread hatred becoming so unbelievable
unable to view trust with a view from a "steel curtain"
scars from Fallujah's massacre still hurting,
there's no diverting
THE PAIN ...
humanityís drying up like the Dead Sea
the state of the futureís becoming impossible visually
the acts of 2005
have been synonymized by
the spiral of a blind dive
we must strive for ways to THRIVE and SURVIVE
now that 2006 has arrived ...



Peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-10-2006, 11:11 PM
Hi Dae :clap: :W

Dae Ja Nae
10-10-2006, 11:14 PM
Hey Benito, what's up ... I'm lovin' your sig ... that pic is priceless and precious

andrem
10-11-2006, 07:26 PM
the whole piece was ill, but the beginning was fire!!!
great imagery and metaphors. also, the verse flowed like water.
your eloquent style carries insightful messages very well.

"blackened skies now replace the beautiful blues of old
the face of the sun cries as the state (http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/) of the world grows cold
an immoral generation to scold,
as the masses lose control
angry weather muses death dances take a toll
raining down destruction on a people without voices
trapped in life's balance, brow beaten with limited choices"

Dae Ja Nae
01-15-2007, 10:24 AM
the whole piece was ill, but the beginning was fire!!!
great imagery and metaphors. also, the verse flowed like water.
your eloquent style carries insightful messages very well.

"blackened skies now replace the beautiful blues of old
the face of the sun cries as the state (http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/) of the world grows cold
an immoral generation to scold,
as the masses lose control
angry weather muses death dances take a toll
raining down destruction on a people without voices
trapped in life's balance, brow beaten with limited choices"



Thanks ............................ uppin' :p


Peace

TUCO
01-15-2007, 11:25 AM
check out the DOJO
back with a nice verse\

Dae Ja Nae
11-19-2010, 10:13 AM
Damn it's been a long time ... but anywayz ...


Je-ne-sais Quoi, Mťnage Trois, it feels so good
Started out at thirteen when we met in the hood
A young man with real style, type that moves the crowd
He hails from up north, so you know he was proud
His words went into my ear and coursed straight to my heart
Something Ďbout the way he spoke had me loving his art
B-boy stance, straight leg pants, Krushin his Groove
No Joke, the Dope Ropes had me feelin his moves
Sharpened his tool, bicoastal rules, stacks on deck
International Pimp status, worldwide respect
Now itís lights camera, action, Papiís doing his thing
Crowned his heights now heís relaxin, Poppin bottles and bling
Never thought I could go higher, then she came around
Butter soft full-bodied, yeah Iím diggin her now
So fly and easy on the eye, in love with her mind
She was fresh upon the scene, but yet ahead of her time
the type of chick that made the average nigga dare to dream dreams
Quick to pick a topic and gently blow off steam
she opened her mouth to speak and it was love at first sound
From that moment to this I knew that we would always be down
Like Mind, Body and Soul, the combination of 3
I, He and She became the culmination of We
Taboo, I had no clue, was like a shot in the dark
Honey opened up my mind and had me pouring out heart
She placed her words into my mouth and sent a wave through my soul
Unspoken thoughts Iíve sought, Iím breaking free from the mold
Too much to hold, control is now void, I canít hide
I want them both, the truth, itís too hard to decide
The best of both worlds, thatís what I want in this game
Confused, why must I choose, Itís like theyíre one in the same
Iím drawn to the flames, with him itís like Heaven and Earth
with her, unbridled freedom, like loveís rebirth
Gift or a curse, I ponder how he was my first
Came along when I was yearning and he quenched my thirst
Molded by hand, Iím structured off the love of this man
His labor produced the fruits of this once barren land
Like tug of war, or more, itís like Russian Roulette
Unsettling scores, abhorred, in life you give what you get
See, he made me believe that he was ďAll I Need To Get ByĒ
So full of emotion, it ďFeels Like I Could Kiss the SkyĒ
The tears that Iíve cried have dried and now Iím fueled by the pleasure
Fully played my position, now weíre tighter than ever
Like birds of a feather, or better like words in a letter,
Together we stand, united, forever tethered together


(Yeah, I still keep both of them close to my heart ... Poetry and Hip-Hop that is ... for life!!)

J.T.S.
11-19-2010, 10:20 AM
[QUOTE=Dae Ja Nae;1999723]Damn it's been a long time ... but anywayz ...


Je-ne-sais Quoi, Mťnage Trois, it feels so good
Started out at thirteen when we met in the hood
A young man with real style, type that moves the crowd
He hails from up north, so you know he was proud
His words went into my ear and coursed straight to my heart
Something Ďbout the way he spoke had me loving his art
B-boy stance, straight leg pants, Krushin his Groove
No Joke, the Dope Ropes had me feelin his moves
Sharpened his tool, bicoastal rules, stacks on deck
International Pimp status, worldwide respect
Now itís lights camera, action, Papiís doing his thing
Crowned his heights now heís relaxin, Poppin bottles and bling
Never thought I could go higher, then she came around
Butter soft full-bodied, yeah Iím diggin her now
So fly and easy on the eye, in love with her mind
She was fresh upon the scene, but yet ahead of her time
the type of chick that made the average nigga dare to dream dreams
Quick to pick a topic and gently blow off steam
she opened her mouth to speak and it was love at first sound
From that moment to this I knew that we would always be down
Like Mind, Body and Soul, the combination of 3
I, He and She became the culmination of We
Taboo, I had no clue, was like a shot in the dark
Honey opened up my mind and had me pouring out heart
She placed her words into my mouth and sent a wave through my soul
Unspoken thoughts Iíve sought, Iím breaking free from the mold
Too much to hold, control is now void, I canít hide
I want them both, the truth, itís too hard to decide
The best of both worlds, thatís what I want in this game
Confused, why must I choose, Itís like theyíre one in the same
Iím drawn to the flames, with him itís like Heaven and Earth
with her, unbridled freedom, like loveís rebirth
Gift or a curse, I ponder how he was my first
Came along when I was yearning and he quenched my thirst
Molded by hand, Iím structured off the love of this man
His labor produced the fruits of this once barren land
Like tug of war, or more, itís like Russian Roulette
Unsettling scores, abhorred, in life you give what you get
See, he made me believe that he was ďAll I Need To Get ByĒ
So full of emotion, it ďFeels Like I Could Kiss the SkyĒ
The tears that Iíve cried have dried and now Iím fueled by the pleasure
Fully played my position, now weíre tighter than ever
Like birds of a feather, or better like words in a letter,
Together we stand, united, forever tethered together


This is a live poem loved it read it like three times!!

Dae Ja Nae
11-19-2010, 10:24 AM
Thanks alot ... glad you enjoyed it!!