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Valkis
05-11-2010, 12:52 PM
5 bars (10 lines)
Due 24 hrs.
G/L

Valkis
05-11-2010, 01:15 PM
It's clear as he's typing and proving that he's taking a liking to losing,
And what your writting is stupid, so I remove disgrace, like a final solution, *
I render him gay and so he's like an unwanted package; I send 'um away,
Bitch whut? It's like time's mixed up, Dusk won't emerge at the end of the day,
Beneith me, the earth is burning, dude screams like we heard him cumming,
Prepares to fuck and aims his but, wouldnt make the cut like a nervious surgeon,
This man's harmless, like he's a soft paraplegic humantarian......and armless,
A killer? Get fucking real, this guy won't touch the steel, stays from black markets, *
He contests my anarchy? Nah Blood squirts as I wreck his arteries,
He couldnt make me dizzy, will never see double D aside breasts and batteries.

* Dusk Race
* Touch the Steal

Valkis
05-11-2010, 01:18 PM
I changed it to 5bars. Origionally I ment 8 lines not 8bars, so I fucked up there dude. Make it hot man.

oDoUoSoKo
05-11-2010, 08:25 PM
ok i got u

oDoUoSoKo
05-11-2010, 10:03 PM
lyrical content causin cataclysms, the shit is big
criminal complex, 'course the vandalism up in ur sig's
the only crimes on record valkis, unknown in my necka
the woods, im muhammed welcome to the rhyme mecca
your good but im better, take shears to adams apple
make rears that have an asshole take fear when havin battles
aint queer, just have axl rose sort of swagger, guns n roses
bought a dagger, some explosives, slaughter battlers, valkis knows this
oughta battle online knowin ya talents hopeless
and no one would show up, since u suffer from halitosis

oDoUoSoKo
05-12-2010, 11:47 PM
guess we can start with the votes

THE MASON
05-13-2010, 01:17 PM
vote goes Dusk

Valkis had some dope lines, but some of the personals are tired, i get it yall think Dusk is gay.

Dusk just brought the lyricism and some more in depths attacks imo. the last two lines sealed the deal tho

peace, good battle

Valkis
05-13-2010, 07:00 PM
Lyricism? I'm in confusion of your delusions, is this religion?

Ok, more votes

namoR
05-13-2010, 07:04 PM
Vote goes to Valkis

Both brought nice lines, but Valkis got nice multi's and way better punches.

oDoUoSoKo
05-13-2010, 10:09 PM
is this religion? uh, wuh? eloels.

MosHigh
05-18-2010, 07:54 AM
my vote goes for Dusk...

oDoUoSoKo
05-18-2010, 09:30 AM
thx, a little elaboration please?

MosHigh
05-18-2010, 02:09 PM
thx, a little elaboration please?

well word play was tight and felt like your flow was more steady...plus, i'm really not into a lot gay rhyme type battlin'. imo, if you are going to battle come with some facts or some real lyrical attack....it's only soo many times you can call someone a fag....you know?

oDoUoSoKo
05-18-2010, 07:35 PM
thx bro..2-1

Valkis
05-19-2010, 03:27 PM
MosHigh, gay jokes? I don;t believe I based a single line from it. I said "I render him gay" and that was all of it. I would like you to please explaiin the bars from my verse, because I think you were lost from the get go tbh.

OreoZebra
05-19-2010, 10:37 PM
My vote goes to Dusk. Better lyrical content, and better flow.

Valkis
05-20-2010, 10:26 AM
So, lyrical content is going above punchlines on this site? Wow, thats some super rap battling.

oDoUoSoKo
05-20-2010, 08:59 PM
used to be the opposite

ArcherPriest
05-21-2010, 09:43 AM
i didnt really catch a knockout blow from either of ya.. overall, i thought it was decent lines from both but lackin word play 'n hard hits. However, dusk's flow was murda.. leagues above the other dude

vote dusk

oDoUoSoKo
05-21-2010, 12:38 PM
thx bro, good to see a vet in here votin

Valkis
05-21-2010, 11:47 PM
IT SHOULD BE THE OPPOSITE! Itt's a rap battle. Punchlines win battles. lol next person to vote I was an explination of my lines, I swear I must be going over heads because I never usually have to be 'that annoying guy' who loses and complained because its never an issue. Explain my lines people, if you can.

oDoUoSoKo
05-22-2010, 12:36 PM
it shouldnt be the opposite, maybe nowadays snot nosed little punks who battle are enslaved by the concept of punchlines only battles, but ur on a forum with cats from the old guard..who value other things aswell. this aint smack, son..eloels.

ArcherPriest
05-22-2010, 09:41 PM
valkis gotta point.. how can it be a battle w/o punches? we got the temple for all that other shit.. this is the field yo.. you dont step in the ring w/o gloves.. save all that deep lyrical shit for lp's.. this is suppose to be about disses, jokes, metas.. not 50 dollar words n bs rhyme schemes.. everyone focus' so hard on multis 'n shit these days its become monotonous, predictable crap.. fuck all that shit.. im over it.. everyone got the same style these days

oDoUoSoKo
05-22-2010, 11:44 PM
theres no way ur serious...


im advocating ballance, not one thing more than the other..but nowadays its ONLY punchlines..nothing else, THAT is monotonous and and predictable crap.

ArcherPriest
05-23-2010, 08:22 AM
obviously you've never battled on stage, i understand this is text so complexity is valued more here than vocally cuz mufuckaz got the time to read thru it n break the shit down.. but if you on stage its strictly shock value.. whatever captures the crowd.. 'n it aint solid writing mechanics that does this.. its solid punchlines. I aint tryna say dont use multies or dumb your shit down.. im jus sayin that these days people focus so much on that shit that it's taken away from what a battle is all about.. there are some that can ballance the two, a small handfull on this site.. but 9 outta ten mufuckas find themselves using lines or words just becuz they rhyme or fit the scheme they're usin.. this takes away from whats bein said by restricting the way your able to convey your thoughts lyrically.. thats why half the battles on this site got a couple decent lines and the rest is a bunch of bullshit filler.. thats also why the battlefield fell the fuck off.. i remember back in the day there would be 5 battles goin at a time.. voting was done in a day.. someone was postin every minute... but like i said, everyone has strayed away from what battles are all about and adopted the same style as the next mufucka.. if you dont want to use punches then set up topic battles.. ive never seen two mufuckas get on stage n hav a god damn vocab contest.. or stand up there seein who can rhyme the most words in the most complex way.. not to take away from that cuz i write like that too.. long before 90% of the posters here.. but too many heads is lettin that take away from basic battle fundamentals.. no wonder this section sucks now.. y yall think all the old heads bounced 'n the new heads never stick around.. dont get me wrong, there's alot of iLL writers on this site, i aint takin nothin away from anyones skills here.. im jus sayin that at LEAST half the verses i see in here belong in the fuckin temple

oDoUoSoKo
05-23-2010, 08:37 AM
obviously u have no idea what ive done becaus ei have battled on stage, in streets, in schools, etc..and i kno how it goes down, but i was also taught by the old school battlers, the REAL battlers, and punchlines arent nearly as important as other things..and ur obviously takin this punchline shit to heart...im saying their should be a balance, i never said nothin bout vocab, i mean flow, personals...etc.

ArcherPriest
05-23-2010, 08:46 AM
i aint singling you out man, or tryna say all that other shit aint important.. you know how i write man, im one of the mufuckaz you learned from.. im jus sayin that punches should be the main focus of battles.. all that other shit is secondary

oDoUoSoKo
05-23-2010, 08:56 AM
eloels, i should say that shit about me learning from u is ridiculous but ur not entirely wrong, but the cats i learned from i learned from in person, taught me how to freestyle and what not.

Locust
05-23-2010, 07:35 PM
i vote for kingshyt, he came with the harder penis

ArcherPriest
05-23-2010, 09:31 PM
^haha.. fo real holmes, i wuz hard dickin... i re-read that shit it came off straight boner yo..ha, i aint as angry as it sounds tho... 'n really my points good but i aint mean to be up in dusks ass like that.. i guess im jus more disapointed in the way the site fell off more than anything... i kno yalls with me there

Valkis
05-24-2010, 08:32 AM
Watch that grindtime shit. You have guys who arent even rappers absolutley killing the thing. Dirtbag Dan has absolutley no lyricism and still makes a killing. I do agree that lyricism and flow are good factors to have, but come on, a verse without punches is waaaaaaaaaaaaay worse than a verse without good lyrics. Punches > All in a battle. I'm not saying that you don't have any, I won't sway like that, but the voters seem to be voting on that, or just not understanding my shit, which is why Id want the next voter to do a bar by bar and explain my verse as proof of knowledge.

oDoUoSoKo
05-24-2010, 09:43 AM
feeling himself^

iniquity
05-24-2010, 11:44 AM
valkis got this hands down. imo dusk's lines were way too lazy and simple.

oDoUoSoKo
05-24-2010, 12:37 PM
agreed^

Valkis
05-25-2010, 09:56 PM
Fuck off Dusk, your making me seem like a prick now haha.

Sense-A
05-27-2010, 01:20 PM
I vote Dusk this time.

Valkis
05-27-2010, 08:19 PM
^Didnt read all the "explain votes" stuff eh?

Jonny Details
06-08-2010, 01:40 PM
whuy arent u cats recording on beats then uploading them when u dis...typing this shit outs pointless and proves nothing...pay the fuck attention to details

i'll stick a rusty screwdriver in ur eye hahahhahhahahahha

www.myspace.com/jonnydetails
www.myspace.com/detailsbeatspage

oDoUoSoKo
06-08-2010, 10:38 PM
....

$inista
06-22-2010, 06:13 PM
It's clear as he's typing and proving that he's taking a liking to losing,
And what your writting is stupid, so I remove disgrace, like a final solution, *
I render him gay and so he's like an unwanted package; I send 'um away,
Bitch whut? It's like time's mixed up, Dusk won't emerge at the end of the day,
Beneith me, the earth is burning, dude screams like we heard him cumming,
Prepares to fuck and aims his but, wouldnt make the cut like a nervious surgeon,
This man's harmless, like he's a soft paraplegic humantarian......and armless,
A killer? Get fucking real, this guy won't touch the steel, stays from black markets, *
He contests my anarchy? Nah Blood squirts as I wreck his arteries,
He couldnt make me dizzy, will never see double D aside breasts and batteries.

* Dusk Race
* Touch the Steal

First line is good next three line are gay & the rest is nothing special

Dusk much better rhyme skeam but lack strong punches

I render this battle gay. I mean a tie