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Grim Reapa
10-06-2005, 06:43 PM
Ok

rules

1 round

10-12 lines (6, 1/2 bars)

no hater, dickriding or just unexplained votes

Grim Reapa
10-06-2005, 07:00 PM
Ok i will drop a jewel first

Tombstone, stillness engraved with a name

Reads,'Charging Soldier', lost at the table of lifes 'crap game'

A street poet loriet I stand on a higher plateau

Allthough I stand on skills alone not ego

Scitzo, multiple rhyming techniques I can bestow

Upon you now lets stop talking about me

A true emcee's birth-right is to speak intellegently

Written compositions, writen it down for all to see

This is a battle a new age wu tang corp democracy

My rhymes are shifty dont mean to be lethargic

Now your turn next gladly if you can spit some logic

WARPATH
10-07-2005, 06:38 PM
Who the fuck is this schooly boy that directly calls himself a Genius?

If I recall correctly under the alias Cappah you was swinging from my penis-

I seen this- fiendish plot bubble from the start-

You tested your favorite rapper but that wasnít really smart-

Iíll tear your heart apart and serve it back with my culinary arts--

So write scholarly compositions- Iím gonna run the streetz-

And when its time to got to school -kid you better pack some heat-

Cuz when I see a geek-- heís getting smacked-

Give up your tennis shoes- bitch your getting jacked-

Iíll extract what you lack and reimburse you with a style from the Rocky Mountains-

Your styles puberty- the shitís just barely sproutiní

Youíve just been molested by a man- now quit your girly poutiní

WARPATH
10-07-2005, 06:41 PM
Who the fuck is this schooly boy that directly calls himself a Genius?

If I recall correctly under the alias Cappah you was swinging from my penis-

I seen this- fiendish plot bubble from the start-

You tested your favorite rapper but that wasnít really smart-

Iíll tear your heart apart and serve it back with my culinary arts--

So write scholarly compositions- Iím gonna run the streetz-

And when its time to got to school -kid you better pack some heat-

Cuz when I see a geek-- heís getting smacked-

Give up your tennis shoes- bitch your getting jacked-

Iíll extract what you lack and reimburse you with a style from the Rocky Mountains-

Your styles puberty- the shitís just barely sproutiní

Youíve just been molested by a man- now quit your girly poutiní

WARPATH
10-07-2005, 06:43 PM
Who the fuck is this schooly boy that directly calls himself a Genius?

If I recall correctly under the alias Cappah you was swinging from my penis-

I seen this- fiendish plot bubble from the start-

You tested your favorite rapper but that wasnít really smart-

Iíll tear your heart apart and serve it back with my culinary arts--

So write scholarly compositions- Iím gonna run the streetz-

And when its time to got to school -kid you better pack some heat-

Cuz when I see a geek-- heís getting smacked-

Give up your tennis shoes- bitch your getting jacked-

Iíll extract what you lack and reimburse you with a style from the Rocky Mountains-

Your styles puberty- the shitís just barely sproutiní

Youíve just been molested by a man- now quit your girly poutiní

WARPATH
10-07-2005, 06:45 PM
Who the fuck is this schooly boy that directly calls himself a Genius?

If I recall correctly under the alias Cappah you was swinging from my penis-

I seen this- fiendish plot bubble from the start-

You tested your favorite rapper but that wasnít really smart-

Iíll tear your heart apart and serve it back with my culinary arts--

So write scholarly compositions- Iím gonna run the streetz-

And when its time to got to school -kid you better pack some heat-

Cuz when I see a geek-- heís getting smacked-

Give up your tennis shoes- bitch your getting jacked-

Iíll extract what you lack and reimburse you with a style reighning from the Rocky Mountains-

Your styles puberty- the shitís just barely sproutiní

Youíve just been molested by a man- now quit your girly poutiní

Grim Reapa
10-07-2005, 06:51 PM
thanks for responding man props man

votes now

Idiom
10-07-2005, 07:07 PM
i'm back from a short vaca

i gotta go against my brother from OmO tho

looks to me that your verse wasn't direct very much towards him
some parts were but there was to much of rappin' instead of direction
in a puch.....your verse was nice but not battle material though.
to much of yourself in there and i seen a line that didn't rhyme at aLL
which i see a little too much around here....

i reaLLy don't think i need to explain the new vote system
because it more of a self hype to charges diss...

big ups...but yo VernaK ima put you in touch with my brother
because he'LL make everyone on here look like girly shits
he reminds me to much like physcosis.....

vote = C.S.

Grim Reapa
10-07-2005, 07:11 PM
yeah

thats why i dont battle

i just dont know how too diss

idiom get on aim

Grim Reapa
10-07-2005, 10:16 PM
Vote

Visionz
10-08-2005, 01:15 AM
CS took this one easily, brutal throughout the verse while GA didnt seem to be on the attack at all, even if you admire the style you still gotta go for the throat, and don't know why you say that you don't know how to dis, you don't win battles against me not knowin. peace

Robert
10-08-2005, 09:53 AM
Charging soldier got this over Genious, the flow of the verse was good, the punches were solid and the overall rhyme scheme and vocab was good. Genious didnt right a bad verse but there weren't really any punches so Charge gets this
Vote=Charging Soldier

Grim Reapa
10-08-2005, 10:11 AM
ok thats it

i shoulda put two rounds fuck

TeknicelStylez
10-09-2005, 08:46 AM
Lol genious' verse sounded like a multi lined haiku

Vote = C.S.