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Arbiter
06-17-2010, 03:09 PM
Bonjour, in Illuminat haute couture
On tour with the social cure, entrepreneur
Obscure, but a bet that's sure to procure
Hope where the youth are poor and unsure
Like a Leo's demure, a lure with pride pure
Guaranteed to make the instinct to lead mature
If your honor’s legit, forsure we’re close knit
But a heart unfit gets your mouth in a bit
We pass through the lodge to circumscribe our wit
Though my wisdom was thick, I squeezed till it fit
Rhyme is lube when you're slick, we rap smooth to the kick
The unfettered mind never slows but it flicks
Emotions and clits, now I court like Knicks
Ethics in the mix, truth they love so it sticks
The culture clerics, meet your needs like a fix
Time is short, it ticks, baptize me in the Styx

We fourth column tracks with substitute facts
Bury the truth in subconscious attacks
Motivate with the light that shines through the cracks
Till the fire melts binding illusions like wax
What lacks at the peak is permission to speak
Stifled by oaths that restrain our technique
But the waters must leak, so we hasten and sneak
From agents that seek and destroy the unique
Desire's a prison till you're meek and can seek
The meaning of pages they never critique
Till the Builder is shaping the world like physique
True to your color that unlocks the mystique
Dance to the music of spheres you can't see
Self-Lord And Master over-man like Nietzsche
Grounded in the temple like Solomon's key
Chaos in the compass, branch out like a tree

Aquarian-bible quotes, towering cliff notes
Float you to the summit like Atlantis life boats
Let so-called Servants take flight and gloat
Guardians spit the cipher of Gods and outvote
Death they go through it, my liquid sword’s fluid
Groovin’, tracks in stone, forever lucid
Fusin’, purple and gold with ego bruisin’
Shocks for the flocks: "Sort you like Anubis"
Like muses, alchemy for the toothless
Swords for self-lords, a rose could never move this
He who swings with five rings, cuts Matrix useless
Wax wings keep Mercy kings near the truthless
Prove it, if your docile chain has no stain
Complain, let slave drivers rule, abstain
The power turns vain social beasts that you train
With the secret in chains, black brothers profane
My love for women was muted, but could not be undone
Cursed by darkness like Leah, when all she dreamed of were Sons
Forced away from the Tower but we’ll forever be one
Till the sickness is cured, I’ll sing with genuine lungs

-Abiff

Part 3 of the Prophecies of Leviathan (Chesed)

Ares
06-17-2010, 03:47 PM
Aquarian-bible quotes, towering cliff notes
Float you to the summit like Atlantis life boats
Let so-called Servants take flight and gloat
Guardians spit the cipher of Gods and outvote
Death they go through it, my liquid sword’s fluid
Groovin’, tracks in stone, forever lucid
Fusin’, purple and gold with ego bruisin’
Shocks for the flocks: "Sort you like Anubis"
Like muses, alchemy for the toothless
Swords for self-lords, a rose could never move this
He who swings with five rings, cuts Matrix useless
Wax wings keep Mercy kings near the truthless
Prove it, if your docile chain has no stain
Complain, let slave drivers rule, abstain
The power turns vain social beasts that you train
With the secret in chains, black brothers profane
My love for women was muted, but could not be undone
Cursed by darkness like Leah, when all she dreamed of were Sons
Forced away from the Tower but we’ll forever be one
Till the sickness is cured, I’ll sing with genuine lungs


Wow, this was some on-point, ill ass fucking shit. I really enjoyed reading that, keep it up. Quoted favorite lines.

ArcherPriest
06-18-2010, 03:40 PM
yea homie this was tight.. at first it kinda came off like you were jus tryna kick our dicks in with multies but as i got into it you came with some sick lines

Though my wisdom was thick, I squeezed till it fit
Rhyme is lube when you're slick, we rap smooth to the kick

What lacks at the peak is permission to speak
Stifled by oaths that restrain our technique
But the waters must leak, so we hasten and sneak
From agents that seek and destroy the unique

Death they go through it, my liquid sword’s fluid
Groovin’, tracks in stone, forever lucid

Arbiter
06-20-2010, 08:39 PM
Thanks brother, I dont know much about structuring rhymes to the meter of a song, or how to change from one rhyme to the next smoothly, so I am trying to learn by feedback. I think I get what you mean about too many multies, it's kinda a crutch. Teach me some secrets about writing darts that sound good over a beat, and talk some philosophy over a blunt with me. Peace,
Arbiter

J.T.S.
06-21-2010, 10:55 AM
Mos def this one here was live, some of the best writing ever!!

ChristO
06-30-2010, 11:43 AM
...live...solid...