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BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 06:10 PM
TUCO

lesser GODs get riled up when unsatisfied
as the greatest get praised for lyrical high rise
get thru this stage and face tough circumstance
put up ya stance cause my breeze flow like rubberbands
they stretch and snap back at you causing skin lesions
no cure for the weak, vegetated state for a week
feeding tube just to eat with TUCO's name in the paper
khamikazii type thoughts reach the mental

bigben

at ease these bleeding suffering and diseased,
common place site released violence increased,
homicide deceased surrounded in veiled grief,
an Oceans barrier reef amongst chaotic elements and beliefs,
a yearn to eat raised on fears, disbeliefs.. and think obsolete,
never question skeptically subjective visions heard the sheep,
consumption thoughts blinked looped repeat they succeed,
feeding human pigs tainted seed for impulsive spending sprees,
egotistical greed jealous gluttons enraged envious lustful vanity needs,
Thats the seven deadly sins you Bitches plead in need,
amid mental sicknesses unique never seen on land across the sea,
rabid ruthless deeds cause-n- effect of overpopulated streets,
with little left to be most victims careless and rather sleep,
slaughtering meat has changed focus to the middle east,
advanced weaponry barbaric murderings in-the name of peace??,
erasing history leaving behind burning blood and grease,
memories of horrific scenes commited by half human beasts,
sealed away with-in a scheme of lucid dreams about obcene cream,
wake up and feast feel the warmth and heat defrosting mental freeze,
Fuck your screams and pleas enraged emotional energy you bleed,
trying to Escape but you can't camoflauge sink, swim, or slither away from me!!!

chromatic 4

C-rock bust in with everything in position
You know not to talk on the phone cuz the feds be listening
We hit the spot about a block away from the target
One more thing If nothing happens then don’t start shit
Dollar said cool
but I knew
How he do
Kill a cat just for fun and didn’t even use guns
Homes was crazy with a ninja sword he was sick enough to slice thru babies
Approaches these cats with military tactics
c-rock licked off and they all just scattered
So much for the surprise rock could see fire in my eyes
He just laughed but got gassed
caught a shotgun blast
I’ll never forget the look right before he passed
Fuck it I’m on automatic spraying speractic
cover fire got us close to
What was supposed to
be the big stash but they played our ass
Back track home boys it’s a trap there’s a bomb in the back
With just enough time to react
We ran full speed out the door but not before dollar hit the floor
Shit we lost one more
we made a great escape we can re-up and settle the score…



Khamakazii

Thru da barbed wire and out to tha fields
Gradually escaping from da ones dat kill
Use my skills to escape from concentration camp hills
Rippin at my skin like a fukin knife to a wheel
Hows dat feel
Bein chased and laced like a dangerous dog
Runnin thru da marshes and seein nuffin but fog
Like a radical element My lyrics get captured
Like dark matta fractured with hatchets and get held captive
But it wont be long before I get adaptive
Unlockin the secrets of the site and mapped it
Escaping from matchstick bars sufferin emotional blows and scars
But cant get me I use rhymes as a form of camouflage
Bullets like sars infect the weak as I speak they freeze
The words I conjure produces airborne disease
Causes blood to boil and skin to bleed
As I seize a guard with my expertise and hidden fatigues
Got blak face paint to hide myself in darkness
The guards have spotted me must run my fastest
Through to the graveyard the smell of carcas
Causin mayhem and bedlam an all out rawkus
We got slaves fightin guards and guards fightin slaves
As I paved da way of freedom today
a revolution is bein born from this racial war
government separated the rich from tha poor

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 06:16 PM
Like winter I pummel with the coldest of thoughts permeate the skin of opposition leaving lesions and spots I'm digging in heads like a mortician's grave plots inserting venom thru ya veins like coin machine slots I'm treating sweet emcees like Motts mashing'em down to apple sauce I'm cleaning ya clocks replacing the cogs and sprockets and leaving you knots I burn visions so bright and hot ya iris is permanently shot seeing sunspots I capitalize on every block treat you like merchandise ya ass is being bought I leave you in a state of shock you begin to resemble a withered and decayed George C. Scott I tire foes who try and mock they end up fatigued lying in a Cot I taunt you like a Tot mentally frustrated you need to be Taught I pick thru your head like a Lock and insert paranoid subliminal thoughts as you stutter when you begin to Talk cuz I have you rolled up and worn like wearing 3 day old socks I'm a Ship that travels and docks motoring around the world as you sit complacent and rot and some of ya'll staying up late on the block peddling those chemical rocks from what you wrought endangered from being Jailed or Shot caught in the devils forceps from trying to force it....

Ronin
06-08-2005, 06:16 PM
decent shit, i liked your verse the best, tucos was short but nice too

bens flowed the best tho and had the most imagery and coherancy

fox7jr7
06-08-2005, 06:16 PM
nice nice.

"slaughtering meat has changed focus to the middle east,
advanced weaponry barbaric murderings in-the name of peace??, "

i like that one.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 06:31 PM
never dismiss your rhyme its all about days and times sunshine and grime I've walked a path of death and disgrace was handcuffed and placed in a cell to waste cuz I wouldnt snitch on my corner spot soldiers yeah we cut boulders sold them to peeps that stayed up late like sipping folgers but back to the time of incarcerated crimes when Police truely lie and disguised their crimes only to stain me for some time... 6 months to be exact but I battled back with a public defender who wasnt down with that…she didnt want to throw me in the blender of correctional time but instead heard me out cuz she new the cops lied she seen the forked tongue of the cops fabled kiss she knew I was set up to take this like a fat kid eating a crepe dish we fought long and hard court was like an everyday job up with jury in the morning yawning and learning not every devil is white cuz the public defender was tight she stopped my flight I wasnt taking a dive in the eternal night where men rape men and they say that’s alright struggled through testimonies of police and my fam and of course my street fam represented and took the stand and began the police bashing on how they always over reacted strip searched us like bandits God Damn It I cant stand the humility of standing there but naked but that was the way we were treated see like half humans with no rights but to bleed… the cops were mean stuck glocks in our faces released us in front of rival gangs as they chased us... but I was vindicated when those cops were disgraced came to find out some stranger took the stand to complain... about these officers and how they laced their scams seen them before close lining an innocent man riding a mountain bike it was nothing nice so the cops were known to have a sharks bite bend the laws for their own intentions not to mention I was exhonerated of all my charges they were sending left me balling tears of joy were crawling down my emotional face as I thanked the Jury and told the prosecutor thanks in a sarcastic way looked at the cops grimace as i walked away laughing ...

FUJIKIMA
06-08-2005, 06:38 PM
I Hear You Peace

FUJIKIMA
06-08-2005, 07:09 PM
See The Science Dropping In The End

FUJIKIMA
06-08-2005, 07:50 PM
In This World Of Diversity,there Is No Comparing

ON POINT
06-08-2005, 09:16 PM
that WAS tight

002
06-08-2005, 09:37 PM
i love this style. this is exactly what i'm feelin right now. dope stlrytellin, raw shit. peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-09-2005, 11:19 AM
Ready for some vocabulary? lol.

When It's all over, We'll stand through, fucko's

V1 (bigben aka Magnetic)
My eye Sockets Rock Society’s violent Optics,
Caustic Camouflaged Critters Constantly Criss-Cross it,
Caught Casualties Calmly Cough up Cancerous Concoctions,
Off’em on the Chopping block with no Options,
Innocence Auctioned… Toxin’s Exaustion Caution!
Psycho Society Stalkers Spiral asylum Shockers,
Deaths Doctrine Doctored Democracy’s Dollared!!
By Demographic Scholars Using Media Bollards,
Controlled Corporate Chatter Batters Backstabbers Blabber,
Dangling Desirable Hazards Attracting Clones Capture,
The Statures of Bitches, Buzzards, Butchers, N Bigot Bastards,
Ravaged Roasted Planters entrapped in Wrath’s Rapture,
Brimalows Holding Daggers Stride with a Ho Swagger,
Chapter’s of Crafty Jolly Rancher heads Sever and Smatter,
Pockets full of Candies Melted in Plastic Wrappers,
Ghastly Casper’s Advance with Modern Answers,
Children gather around Boiled Bible Banter,
Biological Branders, Brain Implanters Scholastic Sub Standards,
Political Dancers, Radio Wave Enchanters,
Digital Police Scanners, Magnified Lens Crafters,
With poor Teachers and Bad Habits Thoughts are Blander,
Dreams Slowly Shattered,
Being Devoured Hour by Hour,
Pickled by Time Slowly being Soured,
Destroyed for Power like the Twin Towers,
Beasts’ Devoured the Diseased, We Send Flowers…
V2 (Spoken)
Acoustic appearance assassinating atheists and arraying amateurs
Activating and aiming at ancient aliens with abacus
Abandon attention’s access, when the spirit is set
Soaring over seas with the sections at silence, fissures are sent
To break the ground, shatter the movement of mountains forming oasis
Battering bases and bursting through with importance and basics
Magnetically lyrical, attracting fierce verses ablaze
Vigorously meticulous, back lashing fears to your virginal state
Palace is acid, passionate actions, seems to be my miraculous graphics
Plastering masses, and satanically active, scurrying faster than passing your gasses
Its gaseous flashes, Pastors twitch when I’m grasping the pen
Raptors are bent, like actors when spent, leave you rappers gasping for breath
Acting possessed, the rhymes felt, sentimentally line’s melt
With dice dealt, life’s spelt, with more fake laughs than Seinfeld
Wise self, whose asking for a chance at evading, the wrath is brutal
Wives yelp, your passing out a cancer escaping, this rap’s a mural

Chorus: So When It's all over, you'll see who stands through
And then you'll fall, soldier, We'll be the last few
To devour the midless, overpowering silence
Others cower the virus, turn hours to mileage...
V3 (bigben aka Magnetic)
Predisposed to blindness pacifists bind us,
designed to be mindless our emotions are kind less,
sniffed past our sinus stuck to our vices,
no matter what the price is babies born lifeless,
in the hood we're sightless like an emcee that's Mic-less,
its time to take flight rediscover the light,
that once burned so bright but we wander at night,
I've seen lots of fights when I hustled at night,
struggled with my denial acting vulgar and vile,
off-focus when wired crashed like a blown front tire,
money and jewelry admired fanning the fire,
souls expire on the high wire while others are pained,
and the flames we exchange change our names,
into consecutive numbers staged locked in a cage,
the struggle never wanes exploiting the shamed,
riding poverty's train lives falling like rain,
from cooked cocaine watching mind altering panes,
mind altering games contain established to tame,
so we stay in the lane as Loved ones are slain,
Let’s regain control Driving Fast in Cold Rain,
Stop Hydroplaning and veer off death's lane
Chorus

V4 (bigben aka Magnetic)
Brass figures Tarnish Thrown discarded garbage,
I polish with Mathematical knowledge,
Carte Blanche! Fuck ya dinner Garnish!,
Infectious like hamburger meat with the rawness,
My Flawless Jack Johnson strikes leave ya jawless,
Harnessed the math autopsy read severe head trauma,
The drama surveyed from the evidence contained,
a Smoke Screen Scene Cellophane Clear theme,
a Deafening Scream Silenced the Streaming Dreams,
Beaming the never-ending story but this isn’t in Disney’s category,
re-running “Cops” and repeated forensics stories,
programming the boring Scoring Sleeping and Snoring,
mentally on vacation touring as the medias coring,
creating threats Feeding Fears Flashing Flaming Flesh,
its all inter-meshed so simple its complex,
Content and Context Connect Cold Concepts,
Commercialize Constricting Comments,
regardless We Come Correct,
connect the dots the sinful throw rocks,
backs get splotched casting stones,
atonement for those that roam
Foundation Fragile Foam hard yet brittle call it scone,
ice Cream Cone zone Eskimo pie frozen stone
Spoken and Magnetic Mathematical Pro's Decode Deaths' Code...

V5 (Spoken) Poetic paragraphs of a painter, pictures of parallel times
Pinning opponents down to their puncture, when its compatible, I’m -
The artist from ancient ruins, adjacent movements or basic fluids
Chasing cupids for shameless bullets, I’m tracing humans, and painting cubic
Death to the delirious, delicious danger when hazardous
Having havoc on haven, heaven can’t save us, from my ravenous
Raptures, the raptor on a rampage when I bomb all the ravens
Robbers and pagans, get clobbered with pages, of unstoppable hatred
Constant escaping, I abolish your mans with the strongest of hands
Cowards with trance, any artist with chants, I’ll conquer the lands
When I plot in advance, the bastard bombing your brother’s country
Deposits from me, get slaughtered calmly, and bothered gauntly
The honor’s from me, as I decapitate your residents own
Medicine homes, and president’s throne, in my possession when known
Sever this tone, the cynical fields, when the umbilical seals
In the womb, when I rip and un-peel, its a despicable feel
Gluttony kin, when then hunger begins, the thunder and winds
Come as it swings, with the blood of the skin, making priests vomit their sins
Distraction, disaster, dastardly deeds when I wreak the spells
Speak in Braille, Pertinent to any with the speech impels
Peace in hell, as I rape demons, with the same semen
That flames, bleeding, and snakes, feeding on brains, meaning my fame’s reading
Is an exchange streaming, As I become more than just a rebel
I’m a bust your treble, sent to hell, watch as I snuff the devil
Punish the souls, in the gut I expose, when they thrust to revolt
Jump and assault, with a hundred of bolts, running to jolt
Cunning and bold, and evil, satanic worshippers won’t reach me
As I kill their leader, fill the speakers with the blood when my knees bleed
I was told the strong live, and the gullible die
When I found out by my god damn self, that’s just a soluble lie
Troublesome lives, get shunned when I shatter their dreams
Shitting shards of the glass I broke, alas I spoke, when It mattered to me
Passionately, The sequel is aesthetic, and mad edits, get fast dented
And passed centric, Its sad, ending in clash exits with magnetic
Overzealous, and utterly atrocious, the name is spoken
The only orb of destruction, and corruption, the tainted omen
Damien in the flesh, but more sarcasm with the tone
When the acids in your dome, I’ll leave alone, and watch it reach your own
Teaching the zone, how this is done, as it gets evaporated
Giving birth to the words, when I haven’t even ejaculated

Chorus
peace ya'll, much love to P.I.R. and peace to magnetic aka bigben for shining with me... 1

TUCO
06-09-2005, 11:22 AM
*sigh* the ol Wu Corp collabs
good to see yall still choppin shit up, no doubt
great peice

peace

OG Kane
06-09-2005, 11:23 AM
YEEEEEAH
i wanted to read it again so bad after it dissapeared in methical
ill collab

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-09-2005, 11:38 AM
This is old but relevent

The heat conduction caused from the governed social friction,
leads to daily dereliction characters characterize falsified fiction,
for friction! scoring away real conviction as convictions,
create convicts caused from the justice jurisdictions,
jury formed from the government's populous systems,
treaty's made by profits and commissions constant contradictions,
these elementary predictions about the presidential nonsense selections,
is they never changed the tri-lalateral or united nations administrations,
same advisory corporations contaminating with corruption,
convectors conducting digital high denominations,
suffocating these nations with peace oscillations,
talk titillations for profitable relations economic stagnation,
viscious cycles and overpopulation visual stimulation,
trauma, instigation and malinformation... creating malnutrition in places!
deformations in faces! miseducation in stages! trepidation is contagious!
the populations enrages! energized engages allowing segregation,
incendiary terroristic allegations patriot act incarcerations without hesitation!
chemical instigation ya soul's contamination is this the free thinking nation?? Naw!! It’s the idea strangulation,
whips are the Laws for mental lacerations movement negation by way of eliminating public information,
social annihilation equal's society's devastation welcome to the Fast Food World of the Slave Nation!!!!.....
I'm Sick Sick SIck A bomb inside me TIckS TiCKs tIcKS...
ConVinceD conVinced ConVinced My Life Is MiNced mInCeD MiNcEd...
unLess I Fix fiXX FIXX...
Kill and InFlict InFlIcT infLiCT...
EuthanIze the ConFlict Flict Flict,
Jekyll And HyDe Tactics ConStrUct ConstRICT

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-09-2005, 11:42 AM
My eyes reach for higher visions releasing tears of emotional emissions watching humanity in constant remission they bleach our thoughts with journalism ancient wisdom prophesized the worlds' division the deepest of cries are immunized with religion.. war and media control they prioritized causing mental incisions splashing our children with computer illustrated lies subliminal propaganda scientifically devised peaceful culture circumcised with surgical precision we're all in this crisis totalitarian intentions to stop us with social vices no matter what the price is.. a conscious decision or social circumstances we have the power to elude deaths enchantress feel the gravity of your life as your sent to the canvas....so stay focused or these wicked ways will blow up this planet!!

You champanzee's and apes always panic damn it swinging from tree tops you fucken monkey bandits fucking up this society with ya foolish habits taking chances gambling like X-Men Gambit throwing out poker hands that cover the lands exploding entire villages you are the Damned with ya little beaver workers with exploiting scams this shit has gone too far understand!! as political Orangutans overspend over laws on others land overstraining relations till they overwhelm the nations...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-09-2005, 11:54 AM
Blood cells Jail cells Split cells the cremated pales complex tales shadow of self never will they prevail my long arm sword style swiftly details cutting the fat off you cheap whales 3 toed sloth's are ate.. A moth to cotton cloth.. the cloth of faith.. a moth to a flame dies in vain a look of shame deliberate pain drilled into your wisdom teeth sans novocaine extreme signals you shiver in vain electrical impulses straight to ya mainframe circuitry enflamed I hacked into ya brain a lift ya like a crane call me the earth worm I eat through the dirt and shit out fertile worth I'm the expert call me the MD Mentally Dynamic more motion than the Sea I treat imbeciles like Bozo's and they dissipate like Aqua Net to the Earth's Ozone I'm not playing my tongue's slaying 50 caliber ammunition spraying baptizing you backsliding Christians laying in a blood bath mental incisions attack religion graphed math Are you listening? lyrically my words are whistling! past your armor hot lead sizzling! Tonka toys get cracked rusted and stiff slice sever spliced spliffs durability lacked from my fatal smacks knocked the wind out ya ass...as ya gasp like a fish ya easily broken like a dish my time's embedded into ya grill make a wish with my mad reflection moving yet still can ya feel this beastly piece? or shall I continue until ya deceased? I move like meat a hundred steer stampede deceit crazed chameleon camoflauging scenes fantastic flawless dreams donate danger with alligator army schemes as the blood streams and bodies steam ....

photo optics I ride a whale to the continents polar opposites earthquake tsunami rocking it try and stop this my waves of intellect reach the highest cockpits unlock the secrets to pandora's box bitch!... as the dumb read a book and the blind sit and watch I'll run through you like the time on the clock and fertilize the mind with the shit I drop catastrophies deciphered through governmental plots devastation equals profits I wear a smock splashing colorful visions polaroid extravagant kodak framed edition religion a mock threat as prophets use mental optics my ship arrived mutha fucka I'm gonna dock quick unload food for thought as you dogs bark and shit over kibble and bits you need to quit start using ya brain and stop those actions from emotions it just corrosion leaving ya brain dissipating rising like clouds from the ocean...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-09-2005, 11:55 AM
creatures with devilish features perish in deaths theatre where we live overcomed by stagnant teachers and hypocritical preachers using religion for budget binging I see drug syringes and cracked states of characters cringing scheming for another shot from the demon dry heaving on concrete spitting up seman whores with eyes beaming shattered heathens once innocent children lost sights of what they were dreaming innocence leaving now they walk a stained path while others in the cypher point and laugh treating family like trash I wake up in this social blood bath I wanna clean these visions seen through a dirty lens life on the mend from plastic tendencies loss of consistency in family history sweating in cold all I feel is misery truths are bent as lives are spent like coins dropped in video game slots we sit and watch the devastation most never intervene due to hesitation fetal separation during gestation infanticide from selfish generations and we continue living life with mental constipation...


Some candles hold the light that flicker in the night I'll remove the O2 and put out ya light in this jungle forrest of rodents and mice living in a petrie dish for a scientists plight banish those that fight as I mash on the mic my third eye sight is opened from what I write learned to escape a cipher of death as sweat beads drop from my heated breath I'll mesh you genteals together like a net and make you catholic pedophiles confess I'm a mess like a fat kid eating Bar-B Qued ribs and deliver knock out blows with the stamina of Jack Johnson when you approach me approach with caution cuz like salads or assholes you'll be tossin or like Incisors I'll be flossin getting inbetween you devilish boss men in constant denial you mutha fuckas stay at the bottom like piles or hemmoroids I avoid you tenderloins avoiding the noid like dominoes you fall in succession foiled from ya saran wrap conventions....

444trumpets
06-09-2005, 01:07 PM
Big Ben Got Some Flows

the messiah
06-09-2005, 02:13 PM
that was fuckin insane, but thats why they call u big ben. nice drop

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-09-2005, 05:30 PM
Raw sewage laced thrown at ya face water treatment catch infectious waste scrubbing grime in ya grill like tooth paste I move in haste shifting weight I'm fueled by immense hate this government left a bitter taste the violence building up in me will soon escape blanketing the world in darkness like a room with drapes catch a jagged dish or a broken plate you witless apes blow ya papes on gold plated capes cheap mental mind states programmed to hate and eat til ya overweight let me paint and illustrate this global gate opened by the devil a Jello mold and Cake getting baked in deaths oven at a temperature of 668 twisted bodies lay from exploding fate I wanna live a long life before I reach the Golden Gates living in the Golden State reside in the city with the Golden Gate I watch the Time so I'm never late my chain gun shoots' holes the size of crepes the fruit of life is ate as I pick the grapes and impale my silver staff into those that rape I'll scrape ya dome to elevate instate truth's that stick like Duct tape realize were sold like real estate with media fear that controls the place as the low income and death rate continue its pace climbing to new heights it's time to wake and crack this system like tectonic plates after shock earthquakes my convictions are stronger than columns supporting weight more distraught than a wife that lost her mate from crimes of passion our lives relate...

ON POINT
06-09-2005, 10:00 PM
Truth

002
06-10-2005, 07:51 AM
Chuck D would love this one (2nd verse). actually, he'd love just about veverything from you, bigben. i like the rhymin in the 1st verse, and of course, the message. the kids up in here might learn somethin.

Rebel_INS
06-12-2005, 04:07 AM
WHAT the fuck? That was crazy shit! Wow.. what a lyricist

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-21-2005, 04:41 PM
keep this in the mix silly rabbits get hit for succumbing to the trix get chopped like eunics I'll stop ya movement or migration wilder beast I'm a Gator in waiting death ya facing like cheetah's I'm chasing.. friction cant stop my inertia when my mind made up I'm gonna hurt ya leaving ya brittle like hard candy I know stupid bitches cant stand me!! cuz they have no feet to stand on seperated by my cannon I paint with the vividness like Krylon spraying for days I'll toxify lungs breathing in my haze and decapitate sons who try and flip my trade..call me Ace cuz I start and finish when i'm on deck Queens Jacks and Kings feel it let me tip ya cup I wont spill it cuz there nothing more idiotic and moronic then letting things go to waste...while their filling our foundation with garbage get going or get parted

Ronin
06-21-2005, 04:57 PM
sick shit man, both had that killer vocab and it flowed nice, ben...when u wanna do some shit?

Ronin
06-21-2005, 04:59 PM
fucking hell man u got a never ending rhyme brain lol

shit is tighter than ever man

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-21-2005, 05:06 PM
Ronin---lets get a collab going like the old days!!!

Tuc what up man I've been busy I'll peep it out PEACE

BlaK FuRYaN
06-21-2005, 05:07 PM
Tight verse but i hate commentin on yo shit coz u aint really chek for me plus u already know your skriptures are decent....

bleep...

Ronin
06-21-2005, 06:37 PM
as i was reading the instruemntal for 'say goodbye to yesterday' came on

shit matched perfect

good drop, alot of home truthes

GuardianOne
06-22-2005, 05:21 AM
Like Ronin said your lyrics just don't stop they continue excelling, thats nice.



Peace

I like your content also!!!!

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 08:11 AM
You got skillz for days man

Stay up

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 08:50 AM
Jewels from an elevated state of mind.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 10:04 AM
Ready for some vocabulary? lol.

When It's all over, We'll stand through, fucko's

V1 (bigben aka Magnetic)
My eye Sockets Rock Society’s violent Optics,
Caustic Camouflaged Critters Constantly Criss-Cross it,
Caught Casualties Calmly Cough up Cancerous Concoctions,
Off’em on the Chopping block with no Options,
Innocence Auctioned… Toxin’s Exaustion Caution!
Psycho Society Stalkers Spiral asylum Shockers,
Deaths Doctrine Doctored Democracy’s Dollared!!
By Demographic Scholars Using Media Bollards,
Controlled Corporate Chatter Batters Backstabbers Blabber,
Dangling Desirable Hazards Attracting Clones Capture,
The Statures of Bitches, Buzzards, Butchers, N Bigot Bastards,
Ravaged Roasted Planters entrapped in Wrath’s Rapture,
Brimalows Holding Daggers Stride with a Ho Swagger,
Chapter’s of Crafty Jolly Rancher heads Sever and Smatter,
Pockets full of Candies Melted in Plastic Wrappers,
Ghastly Casper’s Advance with Modern Answers,
Children gather around Boiled Bible Banter,
Biological Branders, Brain Implanters Scholastic Sub Standards,
Political Dancers, Radio Wave Enchanters,
Digital Police Scanners, Magnified Lens Crafters,
With poor Teachers and Bad Habits Thoughts are Blander,
Dreams Slowly Shattered,
Being Devoured Hour by Hour,
Pickled by Time Slowly being Soured,
Destroyed for Power like the Twin Towers,
Beasts’ Devoured the Diseased, We Send Flowers…

V2 (Spoken)
Acoustic appearance assassinating atheists and arraying amateurs
Activating and aiming at ancient aliens with abacus
Abandon attention’s access, when the spirit is set
Soaring over seas with the sections at silence, fissures are sent
To break the ground, shatter the movement of mountains forming oasis
Battering bases and bursting through with importance and basics
Magnetically lyrical, attracting fierce verses ablaze
Vigorously meticulous, back lashing fears to your virginal state
Palace is acid, passionate actions, seems to be my miraculous graphics
Plastering masses, and satanically active, scurrying faster than passing your gasses
Its gaseous flashes, Pastors twitch when I’m grasping the pen
Raptors are bent, like actors when spent, leave you rappers gasping for breath
Acting possessed, the rhymes felt, sentimentally line’s melt
With dice dealt, life’s spelt, with more fake laughs than Seinfeld
Wise self, whose asking for a chance at evading, the wrath is brutal
Wives yelp, your passing out a cancer escaping, this rap’s a mural

Chorus: So When It's all over, you'll see who stands through
And then you'll fall, soldier, We'll be the last few
To devour the midless, overpowering silence
Others cower the virus, turn hours to mileage...

V3 (bigben aka Magnetic)
Predisposed to blindness pacifists bind us,
designed to be mindless our emotions are kind less,
sniffed past our sinus stuck to our vices,
no matter what the price is babies born lifeless,
in the hood we're sightless like an emcee that's Mic-less,
its time to take flight rediscover the light,
that once burned so bright but we wander at night,
I've seen lots of fights when I hustled at night,
struggled with my denial acting vulgar and vile,
off-focus when wired crashed like a blown front tire,
money and jewelry admired fanning the fire,
souls expire on the high wire while others are pained,
and the flames we exchange change our names,
into consecutive numbers staged locked in a cage,
the struggle never wanes exploiting the shamed,
riding poverty's train lives falling like rain,
from cooked cocaine watching mind altering panes,
mind altering games contain established to tame,
so we stay in the lane as Loved ones are slain,
Let’s regain control Driving Fast in Cold Rain,
Stop Hydroplaning and veer off death's lane

Chorus

V4 (bigben aka Magnetic)
Brass figures Tarnish Thrown discarded garbage,
I polish with Mathematical knowledge,
Carte Blanche! Fuck ya dinner Garnish!,
Infectious like hamburger meat with the rawness,
My Flawless Jack Johnson strikes leave ya jawless,
Harnessed the math autopsy read severe head trauma,
The drama surveyed from the evidence contained,
a Smoke Screen Scene Cellophane Clear theme,
a Deafening Scream Silenced the Streaming Dreams,
Beaming the never-ending story but this isn’t in Disney’s category,
re-running “Cops” and repeated forensics stories,
programming the boring Scoring Sleeping and Snoring,
mentally on vacation touring as the medias coring,
creating threats Feeding Fears Flashing Flaming Flesh,
its all inter-meshed so simple its complex,
Content and Context Connect Cold Concepts,
Commercialize Constricting Comments,
regardless We Come Correct,
connect the dots the sinful throw rocks,
backs get splotched casting stones,
atonement for those that roam
Foundation Fragile Foam hard yet brittle call it scone,
ice Cream Cone zone Eskimo pie frozen stone
Spoken and Magnetic Mathematical Pro's Decode Deaths' Code...

V5 (Spoken)
Poetic paragraphs of a painter, pictures of parallel times
Pinning opponents down to their puncture, when its compatible, I’m -
The artist from ancient ruins, adjacent movements or basic fluids
Chasing cupids for shameless bullets, I’m tracing humans, and painting cubic
Death to the delirious, delicious danger when hazardous
Having havoc on haven, heaven can’t save us, from my ravenous
Raptures, the raptor on a rampage when I bomb all the ravens
Robbers and pagans, get clobbered with pages, of unstoppable hatred
Constant escaping, I abolish your mans with the strongest of hands
Cowards with trance, any artist with chants, I’ll conquer the lands
When I plot in advance, the bastard bombing your brother’s country
Deposits from me, get slaughtered calmly, and bothered gauntly
The honor’s from me, as I decapitate your residents own
Medicine homes, and president’s throne, in my possession when known
Sever this tone, the cynical fields, when the umbilical seals
In the womb, when I rip and un-peel, its a despicable feel
Gluttony kin, when then hunger begins, the thunder and winds
Come as it swings, with the blood of the skin, making priests vomit their sins
Distraction, disaster, dastardly deeds when I wreak the spells
Speak in Braille, Pertinent to any with the speech impels
Peace in hell, as I rape demons, with the same semen
That flames, bleeding, and snakes, feeding on brains, meaning my fame’s reading
Is an exchange streaming, As I become more than just a rebel
I’m a bust your treble, sent to hell, watch as I snuff the devil
Punish the souls, in the gut I expose, when they thrust to revolt
Jump and assault, with a hundred of bolts, running to jolt
Cunning and bold, and evil, satanic worshippers won’t reach me
As I kill their leader, fill the speakers with the blood when my knees bleed
I was told the strong live, and the gullible die
When I found out by my god damn self, that’s just a soluble lie
Troublesome lives, get shunned when I shatter their dreams
Shitting shards of the glass I broke, alas I spoke, when It mattered to me
Passionately, The sequel is aesthetic, and mad edits, get fast dented
And passed centric, Its sad, ending in clash exits with magnetic
Overzealous, and utterly atrocious, the name is spoken
The only orb of destruction, and corruption, the tainted omen
Damien in the flesh, but more sarcasm with the tone
When the acids in your dome, I’ll leave alone, and watch it reach your own
Teaching the zone, how this is done, as it gets evaporated
Giving birth to the words, when I haven’t even ejaculated

Chorus

peace ya'll, much love to P.I.R. and peace to magnetic aka bigben for shining with me... 1
COT DAMN!!! MAGNETIC AND SPOKEN ARE IN DA HOUSE!!! THIS ISHT GO HARD AS HELL!!!

It was my plan to read thru and highlight my favorite lines, but this whole damn thing was BLAZED!!! I mean, I have chills right now!!! This isht really takes me back, man. Yall did the damn thing right here, NO DOUBT!!!!! The two of you together make an unstoppable force!!!

Peace fellas

Knok-A-Fella
06-22-2005, 10:24 AM
HOLY FUK

that is the best peice of lyricism i have read on wutang since psykosus stopped writin

the multis in your rhymes are amazin
and these lines

"Acoustic appearance assassinating atheists and arraying amateurs
Activating and aiming at ancient aliens with abacus"

were shockiin

truly brilliance

Bless,1

100pr00f
06-22-2005, 10:26 AM
some phat lyrics ....u should try em over beats

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-27-2005, 03:04 PM
This is an older script I rewrote...drop a comment!

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as they... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... seduced by subliminal blinks,
as puppeteers wink... manipulating the strings.. for menacing diabolical means...

abstracting dreams transform into... shrills... whelps... and screams...of reality scenes,
formality is cream...a casual steam seems to rise...
council of foreign relation advised... incendiary eye's... squinting with lie's,
striking sickles...corrupting minds... intelligence pickled... holding chrome nickels,
Deaths' design to cause ripples...the herders tickle with financial games,
distracting thru blackened glass panes... while masking shame...they're exacting Pain torching flames...

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as we... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... seducing with subliminal blinks,
as puppeteers wink... manipulating the strings we sink.. subversive scene’s submerge suicidal defeat..

while extracting wealth... churning in society's Ocean... poor people floating Kelp,
Trust no one!!, screaming Help!!... dusty bodies shelved... like stocked items in Aisles...Hope expired Sour Milk... their wicked laws welt,
Demonic Beasts' Paws felt... as our poker hand's dealt... they mark the cards in stealth,
what supplements are for our heath?? Water treatment Fluorides... Additives... Insecticides...,
chemicals to sterilize??.. High Fructose Syrups derived.. from corn crops subsidized,
added to foods open your eyes!!.. processing cancerous products they disguised...

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as you... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... as televisions subliminally blink,
erasing what you think... manipulative media dreams.. maniacal Mason’s mastering menacing means..

emotions digitalized... with high resolution crimes... watched by our children's eyes, beamed down by satellite eyes religion ritualized... to mesmerize... as Wars' epitomized... the Defense Budgets on the rise,
Stray votes anesthetized... Our enemies are energized... from our muttered Caged Cries!!
chemicals are blown into the skies... as the life expectancy rate declines,
American brains hollowed out like Mines... from Televised Lies and Reading the Times,
Subtly littering our insides... digesting chemicals from chemist designs... We Dine then We Die...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-27-2005, 03:11 PM
Some Old stuff...drop a comment


(S)atellites soaring scowering serpent seas,
(W)icked worshippers watching warriors weep,
(A)nalog architects allow arbitrary acts,
(M)echanical movements meniacal men mask,
(P)rostituting people propagating poison pasts...

(A)lligators swimming thru the blood and ash,
(T)his SWAMP turned muddy from corporate cash,
(E)conomy everlast powering the upperclass...

(M)isery loves company the poor are dying fast,
(E)xpert politicians ATE our fate lowering standards to pass!!!

ON POINT
06-27-2005, 04:26 PM
I Like This One, It Would Sound Great If You Made A Song Out Of It, With One Of Them Eerie Hypnotic Beats Behind It!

Peace

BlaK FuRYaN
06-27-2005, 05:12 PM
This is an older script I rewrote...drop a comment!

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as they... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... seduced by subliminal blinks,
as puppeteers wink... manipulating the strings.. for menacing diabolical means...

abstracting dreams transform into... shrills... whelps... and screams...of reality scenes,
formality is cream...a casual steam seems to rise...
council of foreign relation advised... incendiary eye's... squinting with lie's,
striking sickles...corrupting minds... intelligence pickled... holding chrome nickels,
Deaths' design to cause ripples...the herders tickle with financial games,
distracting thru blackened glass panes... while masking shame...they're exacting Pain torching flames...

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as we... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... seducing with subliminal blinks,
as puppeteers wink... manipulating the strings we sink.. subversive scene’s submerge suicidal defeat..

while extracting wealth... churning in society's Ocean... poor people floating Kelp,
Trust no one!!, screaming Help!!... dusty bodies shelved... like stocked items in Aisles...Hope expired Sour Milk... their wicked laws welt,
Demonic Beasts' Paws felt... as our poker hand's dealt... they mark the cards in stealth,
what supplements are for our heath?? Water treatment Fluorides... Additives... Insecticides...,
chemicals to sterilize??.. High Fructose Syrups derived.. from corn crops subsidized,
added to foods open your eyes!!.. processing cancerous products they disguised...

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as you... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... as televisions subliminally blink,
erasing what you think... manipulative media dreams.. maniacal Mason’s mastering menacing means..

emotions digitalized... with high resolution crimes... watched by our children's eyes, beamed down by satellite eyes religion ritualized... to mesmerize... as Wars' epitomized... the Defense Budgets on the rise,
Stray votes anesthetized... Our enemies are energized... from our muttered Caged Cries!!
chemicals are blown into the skies... as the life expectancy rate declines,
American brains hollowed out like Mines... from Televised Lies and Reading the Times,
Subtly littering our insides... digesting chemicals from chemist designs... We Dine then We Die...

I like your world view....there so much fuckery hapnin on this globe sometimes you jus don't know where to start......

Nice work Ben....highlighted part where favourite


one

Dae Ja Nae
06-27-2005, 09:17 PM
This is an older script I rewrote...drop a comment!

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as they... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... seduced by subliminal blinks,
as puppeteers wink... manipulating the strings.. for menacing diabolical means...
(^^ Powerful Opening)

abstracting dreams transform into... shrills... whelps... and screams...of reality scenes,
formality is cream...a casual steam seems to rise...
council of foreign relation advised... incendiary eye's... squinting with lie's,
striking sickles...corrupting minds... intelligence pickled... holding chrome nickels,
Deaths' design to cause ripples...the herders tickle with financial games,
distracting thru blackened glass panes... while masking shame...they're exacting Pain torching flames...

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as we... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... seducing with subliminal blinks,
as puppeteers wink... manipulating the strings we sink.. subversive scene’s submerge suicidal defeat..

while extracting wealth... churning in society's Ocean... poor people floating Kelp,
Trust no one!!, screaming Help!!... dusty bodies shelved... like stocked items in Aisles...Hope expired Sour Milk... their wicked laws welt,
Demonic Beasts' Paws felt... as our poker hand's dealt... they mark the cards in stealth,
what supplements are for our heath?? Water treatment Fluorides... Additives... Insecticides...,
chemicals to sterilize??.. High Fructose Syrups derived.. from corn crops subsidized,
added to foods open your eyes!!.. processing cancerous products they disguised...
(^^ real knowledge right here)

ringing the bell.. the dull drum's of life repeat,
hitting in sync... rhythms killing the sheep,
as you... rest... work... and sleep,
consume replaces think... as televisions subliminally blink,
erasing what you think... manipulative media dreams.. maniacal Mason’s mastering menacing means..

emotions digitalized... with high resolution crimes... watched by our children's eyes, beamed down by satellite eyes religion ritualized... to mesmerize... as Wars' epitomized... the Defense Budgets on the rise,
Stray votes anesthetized... Our enemies are energized... from our muttered Caged Cries!!
chemicals are blown into the skies... as the life expectancy rate declines,
American brains hollowed out like Mines... from Televised Lies and Reading the Times,
Subtly littering our insides... digesting chemicals from chemist designs... We Dine then We Die...
As always, this was an amazing body of work Big Ben. Your pieces always shine so much light on the darkest of truths, making them as significant as your name itself.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
06-27-2005, 09:49 PM
In a word ... Dopeness!!

Treazon
06-27-2005, 09:59 PM
very nice...all flowed well and made perfect sense, A+ homie...


peace

GuardianOne
06-28-2005, 01:41 AM
This was classic, the flow and the thoughts! As usual you put everyone at test. And How you expressed it was so vivid. Few can place such imagery in words. Respect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace

GuardianOne
06-28-2005, 02:32 AM
Interesting combination, you're aways able to experiment with content and bring it out properlly. Nice attachment to the words.

Peace

M.I.C Diesel
06-28-2005, 04:55 AM
Always enlightenment.
Keep scripting the illest darts. Good to see you, Ronin, & Skale to name a few, still blessing these monitor walls..

PEACE.

Killer Falcon
06-28-2005, 11:37 AM
that was one of the best verses i've read recently. you've got a nice use of words and vocab which suits your flow. interesting messages as well

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-05-2005, 01:25 PM
my pinpoint accuracy hits the target heads are parted sickly discarded,
amongst the variable diseased and dearly departed,
My speech is rawness,
similar to steak served straight from the fridge,
Bite me? catch a fever and get severly sick,
downing you suckas... falling off of a ridge,
I bridge the gap for neglected generations stuck like sap,
fuck a charlie murphy true story my sinister slaps impact,
crushing exoskeletons of feeble beetles roaches and crabs!!,
Condensed and imbedded to concrete slabs!!
squashing slugs and snails with immense pressure,
molecularly fused and meshed together,
Chiseled characters callously create terror,
As foolish felons are gassed in the man made ovens of flesh,
Failing the righteous tests social carnage lives messed,
wasted garbage used for lands for so called solid foundation,
filled with fractured flaws and faux finish forbidden fruit bitten,
Formatted friction formulas fitting formaldehyde molecular fission,
Decrepit depictions dehydrated cadavers coldly crowding districts,
Continuous Cycles vicious
Scientists fishing chromosome stitching,
electrical transformers above our heads emitting,
magnetic fields slowly killing information kept from our folks and children,
dumbing down the masses cutting after school programs and classes,
using southern slavery tactics,
actors acting politicians in practice,
obviously supporting these actions,
played out like keystone caper slapsticks,
mixed with commercial soap opera dramatics,
systematically shock charged starting static
violent images accepted as society’s tragic habits…

100pr00f
07-05-2005, 01:37 PM
hey i never saw this.......this is nice...u should have this on a track.....

Father N Dangerous
07-05-2005, 02:35 PM
man that shit was blessed 10/10 POPCORN PLAYA! stay up

444trumpets
07-05-2005, 02:38 PM
Damn You Talking Bout Everybody Good Work Peace 4 4 4 Trumpets

Racailla
07-05-2005, 02:43 PM
Insane picture you've created! Tight flow
what more can I say? Big up

ON POINT
07-06-2005, 12:54 AM
man, that was some science droppin like a chemistry set fell off the table! EXPLOSIVE!!!

one

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 01:21 AM
Quite eratic, and fast paced. The verse had a lot of knowledge, shifting from one direct to the next topic at an enormous rate (which is what i have begun to notice with your style). Its impressive i should say.

Peace

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 01:28 AM
Yah that was some tight stuff you portratyed. And that goes for everyone. Not many find time to explain such stories, and it just goes to show- that something can not be left unheard or seen. Peace. Good verse.

Peace
PS: I also ride to work on my mountain bike.

I-Legit
07-06-2005, 03:47 AM
PEACE was a blender waiting to be spun
destroy all to him so he thinks hes number 1
like father without a son, he begun a silent rampage
through limbo he excisted, in my heart, he was in bliss and well he was trippin
he didnt listen, but only to the bimbo that cheated and treated him like a....
....non-exsiting misfit, so fainally he picked up the gun
stuck it to his chest...............*sigh* i miss him.....

...it was over..... done


R.I.P. James Romero
Febuary 13, 1987 - December 7, 2003

BlaK FuRYaN
07-06-2005, 04:21 AM
Did'nt Ben and Spoken tell ya'll i ghost rit they skrolls for em'........?

How forgetfull and ungreatful theses niggus are......lol


j/k


It part time shit like this started cummin fru tha vines.....Definately nice work lads.....

keep it movin'

BlaK FuRYaN
07-06-2005, 04:27 AM
never dismiss your rhyme its all about days and times sunshine and grime I've walked a path of death and disgrace was handcuffed and placed in a cell to waste cuz I wouldnt snitch on my corner spot soldiers yeah we cut boulders sold them to peeps that stayed up late like sipping folgers but back to the time of incarcerated crimes when Police truely lie and disguised their crimes only to stain me for some time... 6 months to be exact but I battled back with a public defender who wasnt down with that…she didnt want to throw me in the blender of correctional time but instead heard me out cuz she new the cops lied she seen the forked tongue of the cops fabled kiss she knew I was set up to take this like a fat kid eating a crepe dish we fought long and hard court was like an everyday job up with jury in the morning yawning and learning not every devil is white cuz the public defender was tight she stopped my flight I wasnt taking a dive in the eternal night where men rape men and they say that’s alright struggled through testimonies of police and my fam and of course my street fam represented and took the stand and began the police bashing on how they always over reacted strip searched us like bandits God Damn It I cant stand the humility of standing there but naked but that was the way we were treated see like half humans with no rights but to bleed… the cops were mean stuck glocks in our faces released us in front of rival gangs as they chased us... but I was vindicated when those cops were disgraced came to find out some stranger took the stand to complain... about these officers and how they laced their scams seen them before close lining an innocent man riding a mountain bike it was nothing nice so the cops were known to have a sharks bite bend the laws for their own intentions not to mention I was exhonerated of all my charges they were sending left me balling tears of joy were crawling down my emotional face as I thanked the Jury and told the prosecutor thanks in a sarcastic way looked at the cops grimace as i walked away laughing ...
I can relate...definately...but down here they dont take you all tha way to a nex teritory for other people to fuck you up....I think tha states take it to anuva level wen it comes to law inforcers...

"it must a been the worst day in they life wen dat cop died - megalon"

BlaK FuRYaN
07-06-2005, 04:36 AM
my pinpoint accuracy hits the target heads are parted sickly discarded,
amongst the variable diseased and dearly departed,
My speech is rawness,
similar to steak served straight from the fridge,
Bite me? catch a fever and get severly sick,
downing you suckas... falling off of a ridge,
I bridge the gap for neglected generations stuck like sap,
fuck a charlie murphy true story my sinister slaps impact,
crushing exoskeletons of feeble beetles roaches and crabs!!,
Condensed and imbedded to concrete slabs!!
squashing slugs and snails with immense pressure,
molecularly fused and meshed together,
Chiseled characters callously create terror,
As foolish felons are gassed in the man made ovens of flesh,
Failing the righteous tests social carnage lives messed,
wasted garbage used for lands for so called solid foundation,
filled with fractured flaws and faux finish forbidden fruit bitten,
Formatted friction formulas fitting formaldehyde molecular fission,
Decrepit depictions dehydrated cadavers coldly crowding districts,
Continuous Cycles vicious
Scientists fishing chromosome stitching,
electrical transformers above our heads emitting,
magnetic fields slowly killing information kept from our folks and children,
dumbing down the masses cutting after school programs and classes,
using southern slavery tactics,
actors acting politicians in practice,
obviously supporting these actions,
played out like keystone caper slapsticks,
mixed with commercial soap opera dramatics,
systematically shock charged starting static
violent images accepted as society’s tragic habits…
As well as your rapid ryme style i dig your detailed awareness to blatent totaliterianism...and global domination....
I think you convey systematical pressure accurately....in alot of skrolls you drop...

One of my favourites was one called "We Pay"....i actually did my own version because of tha many ways i related to it...but didnt drop it coz your was up...hopefully wid your permission ill spit my version on audio....

peace

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 06:18 AM
It was a verse with a lot of meaning. And the expressions you use also sometimes leave one with a lot more to mention. I thought there were some areas of the verse that you used a sentnce and added a word which had its own meaning but related to that same sentence. I don't know if i made any sense there? Correct me if iam wrong (or maybe it was the arrangement of the sentence)? Nice verse!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 06:42 AM
Yah as always i appreciate your lyrical skill, gets someone thinking on what you are portraying. Nice arrangement also. It flowed well.

Peace

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 06:54 AM
Yah it goes with the Title, but your expressions that you had used went a lot further than what could have been. Nice verse also flowed well. You know what covers everything is you are good at your style!!!

Peace

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 07:47 AM
The first verse had a lot of maning that even i could relate to. Others can just relate thinking it can happen. But it was well placed. The second verse was a bit obscure, only once did i notice that it had a sense of meaning. But nice As always.

Peace

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 08:28 AM
Yah it was a mainly urban thought based verse. It was nice , and you got in a lot of scientific expressions. Whilst kept the flow on point. But it was well placed. Showed a lot of urban society.

Peace
ps: Nice imagery though!!!!!!!!!!

PsYkOsUs
07-06-2005, 01:10 PM
Peace ben, i always got love for a fellow spoken word artist... i feel a lot of your work, always have, i just don't comment enough... now, you know i love gargantuan words, and i like people who aren't scared to use them, but unlike a lot of your other pieces, i think it was overdone here... while readin', it really took away from what you had to say... but i'm not gonna hold it against you, 'cause i'm sure it would blow me away if you were on stage... i have written in similar styles, but i had to get away from it, 'cause it's so much vocab that readers/listeners start to loose track of what you're sayin'... it's important to balance it with some simple shit too, so people don't loose interest... it's hard to really get somethin' out of it in this form, 'cause there's so much information to download to your brain... i like the end though, i felt like my consciousness was screamin at me like an alarm clock... a solid wake up call...


PEACE

PSY

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-12-2005, 03:22 PM
I posted this on Methical a while back....feedback appreciated


Lumbering thru the woods of today.. social circumstances chopping away.. emitting a smog and a haze,
The Shepard’s laws contain.. herding the sheep asleep.. yet awake in a daze,
Radio signals submerse frequencies of pain.. designed, marketed and aimed,
at desensitizing nations strategically softening society’s frame,
molding young brains.. applying pressure like modeling clay,
violent visions subconsciously lay.. gaining control to mentally train,
Psychological plays.. colorful graphs and backgrounds displayed.. with opinions that sway,
power sanding the brain.. grinding it down to the size of a grain,
living in this boundless cage.. with a wireless range.. televised suggestions conform we obey,
inhaling cancer causing chemical pain.. while killing the cells in our brain,
as we digest and graze.. on what’s made accessible in the hood where we stay,
those poisonous fast food chains.. continue to reign.. serving saturated flames,
we act like dragons in the Dragon’s Lair game.. as they play Dirk and have us slayed,
while housed tightly together like ice cubes in trays,
regardless we maintain.. act jovial and play.. outside on the sunniest days,
and have the sense to drink in the shade.. surrounded by drugs and guns daily were slain,
amongst the urban decay.. we manage to stay away.. from the Predators that Prey,
with tainted lessons for mindless slaves.. tragedy’s combine producing stones engraved,
Its hard to find ya way.. and stay on the path of the road you pave,
Some give in mental mazes a blaze.. grinding for days.. while others commit crimes of rage,
Going against the grain.. willing to Kill and Maim.. in order to obtain.. the Geese’s Golden Egg,
From the evil Goose that lays.. stained souls brew in the Booze of the slain,
Consuming fumes of pain.. capitalism a viral strain..
infecting our veins.. as we Buy Sell and Trade..
So What'cha have to say??.. or will you just sit and complain??...with mental bloodstains...

444trumpets
07-12-2005, 03:39 PM
nice work
i like the part about poisonous fast food chains
peace 4 4 4 trumpets main

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-12-2005, 04:25 PM
this piece started off as a PM to Black and by pure emotions became what it is now, this piece was brought about by the re- election of Bush please leave comments....

V1 bigben
PEACE....Blackwisdom... yeah! lets Add mental math..and Multply minds to Subtract.. the Variable Fractions Graphed using Religion .. blueblood Tri-Latteral devil commisions the Product and Sum of Division... used on the populous system... playing the victim they shot hot sizzling shit from?... those supposed polls... but who really knows?... Skull and Bones... had the voting polls closed... the president was already chose... before we casted a vote... Bush is soulless clone... that is prone to address the masses in a condesending tone... a smirking bastard sleeping in bed with Sharon...., Cheney, Blair and Margaret Thatcher... when they speak flowers wilt from their evil chatter... listen close you can hear the devils laughter... as they dine with the serpents of disaster... we're getting FUCKED on a mattress... made of glass and plaster... one move we die from the shards of the shatter...nowadays nothing matters... but a profit and its projected sales target... the poor are treated like a sweaty armpit... doused in deodorant to hide the stench... of living entrenched... in slummed out areas concreted and fenced... my thirst needs to be quenched... but this system leaves us dehydrated yet drenched... in lack of fluid movement of empowering thoughts... with a simple television box..you know most sit and watch!... as the clock strikes and day turns to night... powerful brains reduced to a 20 watt light... catch the sight... grab you family and take flight...BigBen and Blackwisdom unite...illuminate the universal sight... raise your fist and fight...get up, get out, speak up, move, motivate never hesitate... stop being victims use your mental might to elevate...

Hook - bigben
I'm sick of the commercial state,
the media slowly rapes,
social fear to instate,
turning masses into mindless apes,
that feed on the wrath of grapes,
pop politics pre-ejaculate plates,
the Bush Administration pre-meditates,
as the murder rate quickly escalates,
crimes CSI science could'nt solve this case,
we're losing faith... we're losing weight... we're losing love when all we feel is hate....

V2 Blackw.i.s.d.o.m.
How we gonna feel love… when justice won’t budge… my people are holding a grudge… ‘cause we’re stuck in the mud… telling us that the country has spoken… how the hell we gonna speak when 49% of the country ain't awoken… the other 51% is sleep, either that or brainwashed… brainwashed by money or brainwashed by the cloth… I just might pack up my bags & hop a plane to Japan… chill for a few years until I solidify my plans… comeback & start some small businesses… so little black kids can bear likeness to the witnessing… of a young black man just doing his thing… to combat the despair that the little Bush brings… with his wealth supposedly shining & glistening… & all of our youth ears intooned & listening... we feel that we need to follow suite… follow entrepreneurs in &/or outside of a suit… meaning strong men just like me… I got the key to set you & your mind free… also I got the remedy & the cure for my peers… we’ll hold ourselves down for more than 4 more years… ‘cause no government could ever stop me… even if I scribe this poem sloppy… my tongue & pen are sharper than blades… mind so bright you need to put on shades… but this poem is all about you… providing to you the strength needed to pull through… don’t forget the government needs us, but we just hand over the power… never let this beast successfully devour.. the youth of this place… I know it’s time to fight by doing my math & glaring into BigBen’s face… he keeps the pace... all I'm doing is carrying the baton in the race... all eyes seeing the conspiracy manifesting... take the proper time to learn the lessons... 'cause wise men feed many while fools thirst for wisdom... love your little babies before the go to bed pease kiss them... thanks for BigBen and his constant hands on the time... please decipher the meaning and the method in our rhymes... because all things outside of God's name is vain... it's on us, we gotta make the government feel the flame.. peace to the Planetary Systems & Intergalactic Universe… take a choice walk with us or take that ride in a hearse...

JOHNNY_TICAL
07-12-2005, 05:22 PM
damn.. got my attention.... and shit... shit is straight fire... both of u
knew dat foo big ben had fire... seen sum shit of his da other day.... but black wisdom .. damn dog .. u got my respects.. maybe one day my flow will evolve like 1 of urs... good shit !!

peace out !!! {blaze it }!!

Dae Ja Nae
07-12-2005, 05:43 PM
this piece started off as a PM to Black and by pure emotions became what it is now, this piece was brought about by the re- election of Bush please leave comments....

V1 bigben
PEACE....Blackwisdom... yeah! lets Add mental math..and Multply minds to Subtract.. the Variable Fractions Graphed using Religion .. blueblood Tri-Latteral devil commisions the Product and Sum of Division... used on the populous system... playing the victim they shot hot sizzling shit from?... those supposed polls... but who really knows?... Skull and Bones... had the voting polls closed... the president was already chose... before we casted a vote... Bush is soulless clone... that is prone to address the masses in a condesending tone... a smirking bastard sleeping in bed with Sharon...., Cheney, Blair and Margaret Thatcher... when they speak flowers wilt from their evil chatter... listen close you can hear the devils laughter... as they dine with the serpents of disaster... we're getting FUCKED on a mattress... made of glass and plaster... one move we die from the shards of the shatter...nowadays nothing matters... but a profit and its projected sales target... the poor are treated like a sweaty armpit... doused in deodorant to hide the stench... of living entrenched... in slummed out areas concreted and fenced... my thirst needs to be quenched... but this system leaves us dehydrated yet drenched... in lack of fluid movement of empowering thoughts... with a simple television box..you know most sit and watch!... as the clock strikes and day turns to night... powerful brains reduced to a 20 watt light... catch the sight... grab you family and take flight...BigBen and Blackwisdom unite...illuminate the universal sight... raise your fist and fight...get up, get out, speak up, move, motivate never hesitate... stop being victims use your mental might to elevate...

Hook - bigben
I'm sick of the commercial state,
the media slowly rapes,
social fear to instate,
turning masses into mindless apes,
that feed on the wrath of grapes,
pop politics pre-ejaculate plates,
the Bush Administration pre-meditates,
as the murder rate quickly escalates,
crimes CSI science could'nt solve this case,
we're losing faith... we're losing weight... we're losing love when all we feel is hate....

V2 Blackw.i.s.d.o.m.
How we gonna feel love… when justice won’t budge… my people are holding a grudge… ‘cause we’re stuck in the mud… telling us that the country has spoken… how the hell we gonna speak when 49% of the country ain't awoken… the other 51% is sleep, either that or brainwashed… brainwashed by money or brainwashed by the cloth… I just might pack up my bags & hop a plane to Japan… chill for a few years until I solidify my plans… comeback & start some small businesses… so little black kids can bear likeness to the witnessing… of a young black man just doing his thing… to combat the despair that the little Bush brings… with his wealth supposedly shining & glistening… & all of our youth ears intooned & listening... we feel that we need to follow suite… follow entrepreneurs in &/or outside of a suit… meaning strong men just like me… I got the key to set you & your mind free… also I got the remedy & the cure for my peers… we’ll hold ourselves down for more than 4 more years… ‘cause no government could ever stop me… even if I scribe this poem sloppy… my tongue & pen are sharper than blades… mind so bright you need to put on shades… but this poem is all about you… providing to you the strength needed to pull through… don’t forget the government needs us, but we just hand over the power… never let this beast successfully devour.. the youth of this place… I know it’s time to fight by doing my math & glaring into BigBen’s face… he keeps the pace... all I'm doing is carrying the baton in the race... all eyes seeing the conspiracy manifesting... take the proper time to learn the lessons... 'cause wise men feed many while fools thirst for wisdom... love your little babies before the go to bed pease kiss them... thanks for BigBen and his constant hands on the time... please decipher the meaning and the method in our rhymes... because all things outside of God's name is vain... it's on us, we gotta make the government feel the flame.. peace to the Planetary Systems & Intergalactic Universe… take a choice walk with us or take that ride in a hearse...Together, your words produce spontaneous combustion ... this here's a Towering Inferno, no doubt!!! I hate it when I end up damn near highlighting the whole joint ... but it was that HOT. An unstoppable force is what the two of you are. I wanted to drop my two ... but "one can never improve upon perfection, every attempt to do so would only be in vain ;)." My hat stays tipped ... and you know this ...

I bow before you both ...

Peace,
Dae

Racailla
07-13-2005, 04:12 AM
2 of the hottest emcees in this board come together, good stuff!
I know you can even et it hotter than this, the topic was already used too often.

Kepp your styles!

Killer Falcon
07-13-2005, 10:08 AM
damn. this is the best i've read for a long time. i love those metaphors bigben, some really inspirational shit right there. blackwisdom had some dope lines as well, i feel the message your putting across. excellent work from both, your styles go together very well

peace

Queen Of Poetry
07-13-2005, 12:04 PM
9:|6 9:|6 9:|6

Hot!!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent piece!!!!!!!

blackwisdom
07-13-2005, 12:06 PM
bigben diggin' in the crates again:) Thanks for that reminder. Thanks for the feedback.

I think about how you told me your family responded to "That Paperbag" often, bigben. You've forever moved me with that.

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-13-2005, 12:09 PM
Yeah man " That Paperbag " will always touch my family PEACE

Definitive X
07-13-2005, 12:17 PM
Yo, man you both came correct on this one...peace to black and bigben, y'all are legendary status now...

cd
07-13-2005, 04:58 PM
Ah, if I remember correctly this one is an oldie, but worth reading again. Both of you always bring such emotion thru your works as well as the skill. It funny how everyone was so anti Bush and the outcry was so loud before the election. And now there is hardly a peep. Before we blame the politicians or masters we have to take a hard look at ourselves. It's not them to blame. They simply take advantage of what's GIVEN to them. Since the beginning of time, the few have controled the many. This could not happen if the majority weren't, fickle, weak, selfish and easily manipulated. Think about it......

Dae Ja Nae
07-13-2005, 06:35 PM
In a word ... Masterful ...

Your delivery, as always, is powerful as well as beautiful.

Peace

BlaK FuRYaN
07-14-2005, 06:23 AM
this piece started off as a PM to Black and by pure emotions became what it is now, this piece was brought about by the re- election of Bush please leave comments....

V1 bigben
PEACE....Blackwisdom... yeah! lets Add mental math..and Multply minds to Subtract.. the Variable Fractions Graphed using Religion .. blueblood Tri-Latteral devil commisions the Product and Sum of Division... used on the populous system... playing the victim they shot hot sizzling shit from?... those supposed polls... but who really knows?... Skull and Bones... had the voting polls closed... the president was already chose... before we casted a vote...(PRS-PROBLEM REACTION SOLUTION) Bush is soulless clone... that is prone to address the masses in a condesending tone... a smirking bastard sleeping in bed with Sharon...., Cheney, Blair and Margaret Thatcher... when they speak flowers wilt from their evil chatter... listen close you can hear the devils laughter... as they dine with the serpents of disaster... we're getting FUCKED on a mattress... made of glass and plaster... one move we die from the shards of the shatter...nowadays nothing matters... but a profit and its projected sales target... the poor are treated like a sweaty armpit... doused in deodorant to hide the stench... of living entrenched... in slummed out areas concreted and fenced... my thirst needs to be quenched... but this system leaves us dehydrated yet drenched... in lack of fluid movement of empowering thoughts... with a simple television box..you know most sit and watch!... as the clock strikes and day turns to night... powerful brains reduced to a 20 watt light... catch the sight... grab you family and take flight...BigBen and Blackwisdom unite...illuminate the universal sight... raise your fist and fight...get up, get out, speak up, move, motivate never hesitate... stop being victims use your mental might to elevate...

Hook - bigben
I'm sick of the commercial state,
the media slowly rapes,
social fear to instate,
turning masses into mindless apes,
that feed on the wrath of grapes,
pop politics pre-ejaculate plates,
the Bush Administration pre-meditates,
as the murder rate quickly escalates,
crimes CSI science could'nt solve this case,
we're losing faith... we're losing weight... we're losing love when all we feel is hate....

V2 Blackw.i.s.d.o.m.
How we gonna feel love… when justice won’t budge…4 REAL my people are holding a grudge… ‘cause we’re stuck in the mud… telling us that the country has spoken… how the hell we gonna speak when 49% of the country ain't awoken… the other 51% is sleep, either that or brainwashed… brainwashed by money or brainwashed by the cloth… I just might pack up my bags & hop a plane to Japan… chill for a few years until I solidify my plans… comeback & start some small businesses… so little black kids can bear likeness to the witnessing… of a young black man just doing his thing… to combat the despair that the little Bush brings… with his wealth supposedly shining & glistening… & all of our youth ears intooned & listening... we feel that we need to follow suite… follow entrepreneurs in &/or outside of a suit… meaning strong men just like me… I got the key to set you & your mind free… also I got the remedy & the cure for my peers… we’ll hold ourselves down for more than 4 more years… ‘cause no government could ever stop me… even if I scribe this poem sloppy… my tongue & pen are sharper than blades… mind so bright you need to put on shades...YEAH but this poem is all about you… providing to you the strength needed to pull through… don’t forget the government needs us, but we just hand over the power… never let this beast successfully devour.. the youth of this place… I know it’s time to fight by doing my math & glaring into BigBen’s face… he keeps the pace... all I'm doing is carrying the baton in the race... all eyes seeing the conspiracy manifesting... take the proper time to learn the lessons... 'cause wise men feed many while fools thirst for wisdom... love your little babies before the go to bed pease kiss them... thanks for BigBen and his constant hands on the time... please decipher the meaning and the method in our rhymes... because all things outside of God's name is vain... it's on us, we gotta make the government feel the flame.. peace to the Planetary Systems & Intergalactic Universe… take a choice walk with us or take that ride in a hearse...

IN THIS I FEEL BIG BEN DESCRIBES THA PROBLEM AND WISDOM DROPS THA SOLUTION....WHICH CRATES A BALANCE....THA HIGHLIGHTED PARTS WHERE LINE I LIKED MOST.....

PEACE TO BOTH POETS

BlaK FuRYaN
07-14-2005, 06:36 AM
I posted this on Methical a while back....feedback appreciated


Lumbering thru the woods of today.. social circumstances chopping away.. emitting a smog and a haze, (DIG THA FLOW)
The Shepard’s laws contain.. herding the sheep asleep.. yet awake in a daze,
Radio signals submerse frequencies of pain.. designed, marketed and aimed,
at desensitizing nations strategically softening society’s frame,(LANGUAGE-ON POINT)
molding young brains.. applying pressure like modeling clay,
violent visions subconsciously lay.. gaining control to mentally train,
Psychological plays.. colorful graphs and backgrounds displayed.. with opinions that sway,
power sanding the brain.. grinding it down to the size of a grain(I HEAR YOU)
living in this boundless cage.. with a wireless range.. televised suggestions conform we obey(YEAH)
inhaling cancer causing chemical pain.. while killing the cells in our brain,
as we digest and graze.. on what’s made accessible in the hood where we stay,
those poisonous fast food chains.. continue to reign(SHITS HAPPNIN HEAR TOO...PFC-KFC-TFC) serving saturated flames,
we act like dragons in the Dragon’s Lair game.. as they play Dirk and have us slayed,
while housed tightly together like ice cubes in trays,(SMALL SQUAERS N RECTANGLES)
regardless we maintain.. act jovial and play.. outside on the sunniest days,
and have the sense to drink in the shade.. surrounded by drugs and guns daily were slain,
amongst the urban decay.. we manage to stay away.. from the Predators that Prey,
with tainted lessons for mindless slaves.. tragedy’s combine producing stones engraved,
Its hard to find ya way.. and stay on the path of the road you pave,
Some give in mental mazes a blaze.. grinding for days.. while others commit crimes of rage,
Going against the grain.. willing to Kill and Maim.. in order to obtain.. the Geese’s Golden Egg,
From the evil Goose that lays.. stained souls brew in the Booze of the slain,
Consuming fumes of pain.. capitalism a viral strain..
infecting our veins.. as we Buy Sell and Trade..
So What'cha have to say??.. or will you just sit and complain??...with mental bloodstains..
I'LL BE BACK!!!!

princeblack
07-15-2005, 04:48 AM
That is hot shit,u got bars, and the pic is gangsta

SurreaL
07-15-2005, 05:08 AM
very nice, I alway's read you're work man, even if I don't feed, good work fam, peace.

Rebel_INS
07-15-2005, 05:15 AM
Hott rhyming man keep it up

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-18-2005, 12:47 PM
Thanks for the positive feedback much appreciated by my peers on here keep'em coming...PEACE

Ronin
07-20-2005, 03:54 PM
nice shit, seemed diff than usual verses less hard but a nice message

good flow too man

ElusiveFugitive
07-20-2005, 07:29 PM
I feel you...those rhymes are soulful, illustrating the chaotic urban landscape in my minds eye. It was a pleasure

Peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-21-2005, 10:25 AM
Thanks Ronin and Ellusive appreciate the response!!

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 05:02 PM
man whatever happened to the 9 generals??? i miss that shit, that one we had beat Kell 16's collab he had......we were bomb

tekunique
07-29-2005, 06:10 PM
good shit indeed wordplays were amazing but lines full of words that start with the same letter is kinda cliche no ? maybe its just easy to see the intent, thats why.. props tho.

u-turn
07-29-2005, 08:45 PM
long read, but worth it, very nice

jallainINS
07-30-2005, 12:02 AM
i wish i could hear this shit, cuz i know it would sound better. but it was definately dope

002
07-30-2005, 01:09 PM
mad vocab. i could quote tons of this shit.....
flows real nice on the triumph beat

anyway, this was quality shit. enjoyed readin it.

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-30-2005, 08:11 PM
Peace To all thanks for the comments much apreciated

jjh_38
07-30-2005, 10:45 PM
c'mon c'mon... good shit, u know this.... but what about some new shit....... i hate gettin part way thru a verse an havin da sha vu fuckers!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-30-2005, 11:21 PM
c'mon c'mon... good shit, u know this.... but what about some new shit....... i hate gettin part way thru a verse an havin da sha vu fuckers!

I hear Ya ... I'm actually waiting for Xtadas to post
A quick 8 and 16 I emailed to him Friday

Ronin
07-31-2005, 03:20 AM
still ill, when u wanna collab ben#? lol

Ebo
07-31-2005, 02:07 PM
I printed this one and read it through, this is some good stuff. I like the how your flows go. Couldn't you record this and post it somewhere??

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-05-2005, 03:42 PM
All different sentiments we lay'em down till sediment,
and benefit off pain petrie dish chemists' strip,
elastic twists fathomed from deep with in the abyss,
fatigue your hope as you fascinate over chips,
anaconda corporate rat races keep the foreign crimped,
flat-lines to Richter scales from black nines a soul slips,
Dracula type habits with devilish looking lips,
serpentine movement fastidious over bits of bacon,
slow baking filibusters fortifying laws for money making,
breaking the backs of the poor already forsaken,
whore's making 1000's of movies as porn’s gaining,
while exploiting our children openly seen on videos scraping,
shaping a generation of women into playthings,
while rapings are a product of those watching and hating,
relaying hate from which spawned from a skewed news viewed,
as violent programming get all commercials and cue's,
and the poor are used disposable like Tampon tools,
fuck civil rights !!Nowadays who civil and what’s right?,
pulling feeding tubes while a family is in a full blown fight,
with a government who practices on coveting the drug smuggling,
as we get lumped into an oven they hold the oven mitts mumbling....

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-05-2005, 10:37 PM
a reworked piece some of ya'll will remember it...please drop a comment...


Clipped Wings of the Arch Angel
by Big Ben
I'm the Arch Angel slaying devils and their fables,
War is a Demon dish Served cold on the Table,
destruction communicated thru fiber-optic Cables,
Human's treated as if were Livestock in Stables…


Attributes of Strength Knowledge and Agility,
Kamikaze thoughts of resurrecting a Killing Spree,
Malnutrition of the minds sparks me Bitterly,
Acknowledging stupidity with Chapter's of History,
Acquiring a Symphony of Strategic line Delivery,
Shiny and Shimmery Divine thoughts of Misery,
Computer Trick-Knowledgry destroying Human Honesty,
Tick Toc strikes the clock cautiously..
Humanity’s spliced Nano-Technology in our anatomy,
Neurotic Academy Narcotics paving Slave Batteries,
Scattering life sadly Nightmare's become Reality,
Habits of Circumstance a force I call Social Gravity,
Image Factories created for Soul Programmed Savagery,
Gradually Grinding while Graphing Genomes into Tapestry,
Cactus Politician speech sticking the masses Statically,
Statistically mapped economy positions the Poor's Shattering,
Casually Contaminating Cleaning Canvases Chromatically,
Established lack of Imagining!! Eradicating Individuality,
Catastrophes Created keeping the Masses Distracted to Sleep!,
Corporate Tax Brackets systematically slap the mass Casualties,
Semantic Scenes Snake Charming Schemes Death is the Sampling...

Minds sticky syrup Maple thoughts Unavailable,
dream's unattainable our Rights are the Inalienable,
Camera frame's roll capturing vision's Unstable,
Sadistic Sumo Style Face-Holds.. applying pressure to the Ungrateful…

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-06-2005, 01:50 PM
PEaCE Guardian oo2 and 444 trumpets

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-06-2005, 01:55 PM
Once again Guardian, Racailla and 444 trumpets thanks for the responses PEaCE

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-06-2005, 01:57 PM
Quite eratic, and fast paced. The verse had a lot of knowledge, shifting from one direct to the next topic at an enormous rate (which is what i have begun to notice with your style). Its impressive i should say.

Peace


PEaCE and thanks for the responses

Ebo
08-06-2005, 01:57 PM
Your flow is "off the hook"! I really like your wordplay, Ben

Dae Ja Nae
08-06-2005, 01:59 PM
creatures with devilish features perish in deaths theatre where we live overcomed by stagnant teachers and hypocritical preachers using religion for budget binging I see drug syringes and cracked states of characters cringing scheming for another shot from the demon dry heaving on concrete spitting up seman whores with eyes beaming shattered heathens once innocent children lost sights of what they were dreaming innocence leaving now they walk a stained path while others in the cypher point and laugh treating family like trash I wake up in this social blood bath I wanna clean these visions seen through a dirty lens life on the mend from plastic tendencies loss of consistency in family history sweating in cold all I feel is misery truths are bent as lives are spent like coins dropped in video game slots we sit and watch the devastation most never intervene due to hesitation fetal separation during gestation infanticide from selfish generations and we continue living life with mental constipation...


Some candles hold the light that flicker in the night I'll remove the O2 and put out ya light in this jungle forrest of rodents and mice living in a petrie dish for a scientists plight banish those that fight as I mash on the mic my third eye sight is opened from what I write learned to escape a cipher of death as sweat beads drop from my heated breath I'll mesh you genteals together like a net and make you catholic pedophiles confess I'm a mess like a fat kid eating Bar-B Qued ribs and deliver knock out blows with the stamina of Jack Johnson when you approach me approach with caution cuz like salads or assholes you'll be tossin or like Incisors I'll be flossin getting inbetween you devilish boss men in constant denial you mutha fuckas stay at the bottom like piles or hemmoroids I avoid you tenderloins avoiding the noid like dominoes you fall in succession foiled from ya saran wrap conventions....
With skills like this, it's no wonder why you're one of the Temple Greats!!! You know you stay holding the reins flame ... that goes without saying.

Peace

Ebo
08-06-2005, 02:00 PM
Damn. I'll have to agree with Guardian, it's fast-paced. Love it.

Peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-06-2005, 02:05 PM
brining back the madness and sadness mixed together with lyrical fatness

Dae Ja Nae
08-06-2005, 02:07 PM
Your use of the rhyme scheme is flawless. I doubt theres anyone who doesn't feel your style. Shits hectic, and your one 'psykotik' sumamabitch. peace ben, keep dropping bombs on em, P.I.R.!
I second that ...

Peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-06-2005, 02:09 PM
return of the boom bap

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-06-2005, 02:12 PM
PEaCE Dae ...trhanks for the genuine love

Dae Ja Nae
08-06-2005, 02:13 PM
I remember this one ... I'm loving the new twist. Untouchable dopeness man ... keep doing your thing.

Peace

tekunique
08-07-2005, 09:48 AM
Cactus Politician speech sticking the masses Statically,

Catastrophes Created keeping the Masses Distracted to Sleep!,

those 2 lines had me bugged...you should be signed with like 2 albums son..respects... peace.

Ebo
08-07-2005, 12:20 PM
Sup Ben? I liked this one, took my a couple of lines to get into what you were trying to say, but i felt the content. Liked the wordplay too; "flat-lines to Richter scales from black nines a soul slips," Props

Peace

Papers
08-07-2005, 09:25 PM
"Established lack of Imagining!! Eradicating Individuality" - love this line.

"Casually Contaminating Cleaning Canvases Chromatically"- line caught me eye, what exactly you thinking with this one?

You have some crazy vocabulary in everything you doin. I agree, need to hear some audio from ya.

PsYkOsUs
08-07-2005, 09:34 PM
Ben, this verse is sick as hell!!! i think this is one of those pieces that really needs to be heard to really appreciate it though, 'cause i'm sure it just sounds hot... i'm feelin' the messages, but i do feel there's a lack of vividness n the verse, hence why i think it'd be much more impressive in audio... the only line i didn't like was:

"Casually Contaminating Cleaning Canvases Chromatically,"

i just didn't get it at all... but other than that, i think it was great...


PEACE

PSY

Dae Ja Nae
08-07-2005, 09:41 PM
"Established lack of Imagining!! Eradicating Individuality" - love this line.

"Casually Contaminating Cleaning Canvases Chromatically"- line caught me eye, what exactly you thinking with this one?

You have some crazy vocabulary in everything you doin. I agree, need to hear some audio from ya.I think it's along the lines of how the system is responsible for so much corruption (Casually Contaminating), and then the way they solve the problems that arise from the corruption is by going to war ... using gun/bullets (Cleaning Canvases Chromantically).

That's what I pulled from it anyway, but I could be wrong ... :).


Let us know Ben :yes:

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
08-07-2005, 09:49 PM
The Master has done it once again ... Ben, you are just too sick with it. I think I need a jacket, because this one left me covered in chills. I loved the use of metaphors in this one. You already know the deal ... AWESOME!!!


** Dae exits the thread snapping **

Peace
;)

u-turn
08-07-2005, 10:04 PM
ill as always

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
08-08-2005, 11:53 PM
nice use of wordplay shit was sick, fresh 2 def

martyr
08-09-2005, 08:24 AM
...Ben i liked this peace alot, i vaguely remember it... though it was good to read again... usage of lexicon was great... assonance and consonance was cool, i liked that, cause unlike alot of times i read/hear it, this made perfect sense...


"shiny and shimmery, divine thoughts of misery
computer trick knowledgry destroying human honesty"

w're my favourite, this whole peace really is quotable... the socail gravity line, whoooeeee... this is a very solid peace... im feeling it, you need a beat with a different hook beat and then another verse and this is one of those bangers dsigruntled teens ride around smoking blunts to... keep writing man... peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-09-2005, 12:20 PM
I think it's along the lines of how the system is responsible for so much corruption (Casually Contaminating), and then the way they solve the problems that arise from the corruption is by going to war ... using gun/bullets (Cleaning Canvases Chromantically).

That's what I pulled from it anyway, but I could be wrong ... :).


Let us know Ben :yes:

Peace


Yes Dae your are right and correct

We are all cleaned ( killed ) by means of our economic and ethnic background

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-09-2005, 12:37 PM
Ben, this verse is sick as hell!!! i think this is one of those pieces that really needs to be heard to really appreciate it though, 'cause i'm sure it just sounds hot... i'm feelin' the messages, but i do feel there's a lack of vividness n the verse, hence why i think it'd be much more impressive in audio... the only line i didn't like was:

"Casually Contaminating Cleaning Canvases Chromatically,"

i just didn't get it at all... but other than that, i think it was great...


PEACE

PSY

PEaCE Psy thanks for the comment

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-15-2005, 08:07 PM
we all strive to attain expensive dreams...
trying to earn financial cream...financing our little schemes...
for the credit, the money, the green.. we'll do many things...
the blind must not lead.. and the deaf shall not speak...

living cheap check to check just to pay the rent we focus and vent as were pulled like dents… outta cars a flowers scent turns to tar removing the marks we set goals and push hard… distracted by the social fence were scarred locked and chained with the economy to blame… the poor sustain while the elite make the cream… we work while they defeat all activities… that may cause ascension stopped by democratic and republican conventions… laws passed to lighten corporate tensions… as we fight just for a poor man’s pension… our social security is already spent and gone.. inhaling the smog were robbed but we still pay as our time burns away… corporate erosion on earth we age our bodies decay… swallowing dull blades starving the youth of today… its the government games they score as we play… lowering standards in public education soon enough if your not rich you wont get one.. I'm tired of that foot were being stepped on… as were constantly being slept on turned to crimson stained remains… from the cage of rage the mentally enslaved are the gladiators of today… held in the correctional facilities of pain…once called the coliseum now its just how you see them... my third eye is open and bleeding... they speak of freedoms please don’t believe them!... advanced disease and bacteria sprung from chemists greed… supporting guns a politicians stinging tongue… absolute power sought it only breeds the dumb… my throat hums to the drums the notes sung from the lost sons… the red dwarf considered small but still a big sun… treachery and treason is how they reason.. steamed and seasoned through out violent Seasons.. murder rate increased from the cycles of beast… dawned where rent and leases spawned living in the storms calm we need to hold on!!!!!... With a grip so strong.. we need to hold on like a grudge never shall I budge… raw and rugged holding it together with lugs, nuts, and bolts you try to pry and tug but I’m never letting go… they’re salting the slugs with debilitating drugs hold on before ya squashed like bugs…Hold on as colors and hues get smudged!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-15-2005, 09:01 PM
This is an old piece

Genome scientist graphing the world,
While satellites lenses look backwards,
Stamped barcodes tracking consumers we splurge,
Graphed men gaining new world control of this orb,
Life’s like Lego’s they rebuild what they burn,
Our Life’s nothing compared to what they earn,
Unless one day it’s a child of they’re own,
But new world order keeps them out of the urn,

Look listen and learn laws looped lawyers churn,
Complicating cases callous chambers controlled burn,
Creating criminals chopping children like ferns,
Engaging enraged burn electrical energy emissions,
Gentrified generations propagating politicians,
Slimy snakes shifting powering pulsating pistons,
This Samoan strong soaring serving satans victims,
Vomiting voracious visions venomous scalpel incisions,

Obstacles religion malnutrition of the brain,
Serving their own needs while controlling ya frame,
The Pope, Bush, and Cheney are just links in the chain,
Misdirecting the people keep’em tame with Gods name,
Taking their advice a kin to kneeling on glass and knives,
Subjected to savage lies look deep into their eyes,
Free speech they despise FCC works for their side,
FBI rides assassinating peers that mentally climb,
Analyzed to break those lines of freedom in our mind,
Straight jacket schizophrenic mentality’s bind,
Manipulate our visions light’s division in prisms,
Sending poor to prisons on laws we commission,
Energy and information control this world’s nations,
pivoting movements digitalizing to clone new creations

Biogenetic evidence,
Scientists splicing pestilence,
Diplomatic irrelevance,
Politicians equal executives,
FDA implants contaminants,
Disguised as supplements,
News reports excrement,
Propaganda establishment,
Pacifying the populous,
With historical documents,
Origins innocuous
Inebriate the audience,
With drugs moral silence,
Sex induced blindness
Glorifying violence,
Fabricated kindness,
Alcohol binds us,
Commercialized crime,
Hollywood Idolized,
While teachers left to fry,
Subsidized profits shine,
Devils contort the net,
Computers generated info,
Controls who we Bomb next...

morgan
08-15-2005, 09:09 PM
sound man bet u dint get all that down in 1 nite!!!???

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-15-2005, 09:13 PM
sound man bet u dint get all that down in 1 nite!!!???
I actually wrote this as a freestyle then rewrote some of the lines in one evening but that how i work while I have a thought i have to finish it..PEaCE and thanks for peeping

6what131
08-15-2005, 09:16 PM
Obstacles religion malnutrition of the brain,
Serving their own needs while controlling ya frame,
The Pope, Bush, and Cheney are just links in the chain,
Misdirecting the people keep?em tame with Gods name,
Taking their advice a kin to kneeling on glass and knives,
Subjected to savage lies look deep into their eyes,
Free speech they despise FCC works for their side,
FBI rides assassinating peers that mentally climb,
Analyzed to break those lines of freedom in our mind,
Straight jacket schizophrenic mentality?s bind,
Manipulate our visions light?s division in prisms,
Sending poor to prisons on laws we commission,
Energy and information control this world?s nations,
pivoting movements digitalizing to clone new creations


nothing to say but wow....great verse
________
Yamaha DT125 (http://www.cyclechaos.com/wiki/Yamaha_DT125)

Father N Dangerous
08-15-2005, 09:18 PM
it's hard to get feed these days, but i'll always be here!

Gentrified generations propagating politicians,
Slimy snakes shifting powering pulsating pistons,

^ can u say tizight?


Like most of your pieces there off da chain, for example this one, even tho it is old, its still ahead of its time ;) stay up

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-15-2005, 09:24 PM
PEaCE 6what and White

Thanks
Appreciate the feedback ...yeah its old but I must share with all what was once here before the site crashed I will eventually put the rest of my old stuff up here..PEaCE

J.T.S.
08-15-2005, 10:08 PM
Yo, that was hot 2 def fam!

J.T.S.
08-15-2005, 10:52 PM
That was a good read and i understood where u were coming from.

Father N Dangerous
08-15-2005, 11:01 PM
living cheap check to check just to pay the rent we focus and vent as were pulled like dents… outta cars a flowers scent turns to tar

^^ How do you come up with this stuff!!! STAY up, and keep em comin'

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-15-2005, 11:04 PM
I write what I live and see..PEaCE I need to rewrite this piece it still needs some work IMO

Thanks for the feedback james and white

Papers
08-15-2005, 11:24 PM
Im really diggin the blue part,

Subsidized profits shine,
You got this shit down man

Diggin your shit, fuck corporate america and there fucking lobbyists buying votes

led_mic
08-16-2005, 01:39 AM
THAT...was the realest thing I have read so far at this forum,
This is what its all about, spreading wisdom to save the masses,
honorable and very noble...good luck to you Big Ben...and such an appropriate text color too...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-16-2005, 11:23 AM
PEaCE thanks for the comments Papers and james

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-16-2005, 11:24 AM
PEaCE thanks led_mic ,we all gotta open our eyes

Born Ruler I
08-16-2005, 11:53 AM
lowering standards in public education soon enough if your not rich you wont get one.. I'm tired of that foot were being stepped on… as were constantly being slept on turned to crimson stained remains… from the cage of rage the mentally enslaved are the gladiators of today… held in the correctional facilities of pain…once called the coliseum now its just how you see them... my third eye is open and bleeding... they speak of freedoms please don’t believe them!... advanced disease and bacteria sprung from chemists greed… supporting guns a politicians stinging tongue… absolute power sought it only breeds the dumb…

Dope, Benido....Very dope.

I likes.

One

Born Ruler I
08-16-2005, 11:56 AM
Graphed men gaining new world control of this orb,
Life’s like Lego’s they rebuild what they burn,
Our Life’s nothing compared to what they earn,
Unless one day it’s a child of they’re own,
But new world order keeps them out of the urn,

Yessir!

One

tekunique
08-16-2005, 12:15 PM
yo after you the 'hold on !!!' part, i liked how you kept using hold on.. thats cool stuff right there.. props. peace.

led_mic
08-16-2005, 01:55 PM
Computers generated info,
Controls who we Bomb next...
Oh my fucking God I MUST battle you...but none of that ignorant "oh Ill slice you open" type shit but a battle of wisdom to spread some ideas to the people reading this thread and see where it goes...I just hope that we are not banned for this...

You know what they say...every thing happens for a reason/

But when you question the motives you can be accused of treason/

"Satellites facing backwards" (BIG BEN), TV's infested with bugs/

Monitoring the opinions of millions the ignorant sitting like slugs/

"Ma hurry up! Fuck...American Idol is on!"

"Hold on Jenny Sue...wait up till the President's done"

Think of this situation perhaps it might sound familiar/

The terrible blatant truth is the President's another singer/

Another selfish contestant apiring the greatest contract

You think he's calling the shots? no my friend its the guys in the back/

nice suits, black ties, more greed, exquisite lies/

Swatting Iraqi innocents more often than you swat the flies/

The greatest show on earth is the entire Mass Media/

The one and only reason we are not out now causing hysteria...

Born Ruler I
08-16-2005, 02:54 PM
The one and only reason we are not out now causing hysteria...>

anesthetic like liquor stores and bible belt beatings
prosthetics, onlookers gored and trifle svelt proceedings
red dragon Rothschild illusory currency
wasted resources can't afford electric currently
they select vics, assuredly, as the final hour looms
vampire hollow tooth mass murder, devour tombs
the only goal acquisition of real property estate
snatch land like from southern Blacks backs, intestate
the whole continent of Afrika auctioned off in great chunks
man made virus depleting immune systems, been p'unked
but we don't even Guess Who, or even question status quo
more worried about gold teeth and rims, 'Who's the baddest, bro?'
Bush serpentine scales are not really made of green
you've been fooled to believe more cash makes you supreme
Bilderburgs stuff the word fed to reserve the Fed Reserve
who gains off each interest rate while us peon's getting served?
follow the money, where is the top where the buck stops?
but meanwhile we worried 'bout Amber abducted from truck stops
the news keeps you subdued while the spawn of devil's brood
sits aloft in a blood throne with no worry of being pursued
Council on Foreign Relations relatin satan
while 2 bone crossed white skulls were fakin debatin
look into the history of society's secrets you will find
KMT was the blueprint for this bastardized mind
pyramids of glory replaced by monuments to evil
if Trilateral is cotton, then call me the Black boll weavel

Dae Ja Nae
08-16-2005, 05:55 PM
I really can't see how someone would ever say they're not feeling your flow Ben. I mean, I know it's to each his own, but you bring so much knowledge, not to mention, some of purest fire, to The Temple. Your rhyme scheme is so fuckin' ridiculous that it makes one just sit back and be like ... whoa ... dude is ill as hell. Completely off the hook. Your words always leave me pondering, while at the same time somewhat enlightened. So, fuck the haters Papi ... just keep doing you, which I know you will ... ;) :) ... much luv fam, and ...

Peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-16-2005, 09:07 PM
I actually need to add to this

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-16-2005, 09:08 PM
thanks for the feedback Blak

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-16-2005, 09:17 PM
Take another look for those who missed this
PEaCE

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-16-2005, 09:24 PM
Thanks Ebo appreciate the feedback

blackwisdom
08-16-2005, 11:37 PM
IN THIS I FEEL BIG BEN DESCRIBES THA PROBLEM AND WISDOM DROPS THA SOLUTION....WHICH CRATES A BALANCE....THA HIGHLIGHTED PARTS WHERE LINE I LIKED MOST.....

PEACE TO BOTH POETSThanks BlaK. I know that my first book isn't in print yet, but if you want some serious answers you'll need to check out Volume II. SpOk3N, this was done after the election last year. Thanks for the feedback.

peace

GuardianOne
08-17-2005, 12:38 AM
I never read this one don't know how it slipped through the temple with out my noticing it. But it was a nice, you unrulely and undeciplined way of using words but yet in all english is correct is amasing. You use words that in a english class which are never to be heard of but is part of the extensibly vocabulary. Your verse are interesting.

Peace
PS: Keep up the good work

J.T.S.
08-17-2005, 12:59 AM
B.B. you always never cease to amaze me wit how visual ya darts are man, it's so timeless, and futuristic man, i gotta say god u and psychosus are light years ahead of ya time!

J.T.S.
08-17-2005, 01:04 AM
Another banger!

led_mic
08-17-2005, 01:30 AM
Big Ben...ultimate respect for you and your art...
...you have an uncanny ability to pinpoint specific problems within society...
the dragon has been spotted and its next destination is very well-known although not to all of us...
...the problem has been defined and like with all problems a solution just as structured as the problem itself must be presented to the dazed masses...within this internet site...for the time being I propose a thread...

GuardianOne
08-17-2005, 02:24 AM
It suits the title, cause most of the verse drifts to a lot of various points on the same content, which might be a talent which you have cause you can shift the information to other areas but still maintain the element of the verse (or title).Sometimes i have to read the title again after i finish reading the verse- thats how diverse you thoughts get, so i can reaffirm where its from (the verse).

Peace

GuardianOne
08-17-2005, 07:43 AM
It was a good attempt, but i think for your style you seem to force a lot on this one. other flow compactively (your verses i mean), but this one or maybe its because you were trying to think or put accross a meaningful message on it (don't try that-you already bring out your meaningful messages), where i captured you creativity lacking was the use of "civil" and "rights" that what concluded the facts. But it happens to all of us (lyrically). But since you have you mastery you delivered it well, it was nice. Or maybe its because it had meaning (you know a soulful verse).
When i read your last reply "you need to add on that" i thought what does he need to add? You can leave it like that (but thats just a thought).
There are many schools of thought!!!!!!!!!

Keep up the good work.
Peace
PS: Correct me if iam wrong, it helps!!!!!!!!!

Born Ruler I
08-17-2005, 08:49 AM
Appreciate the piece. Amalgamated subjects into a single matter. My kind of rhyme.

One

Born Ruler I
08-17-2005, 08:50 AM
I remember your acronym rhymes. I think at one point cats even added on to some. Always creative, Bro. Keep them coming.

ONe

Born Ruler I
08-17-2005, 08:51 AM
TEACH! Hot.

One

Born Ruler I
08-17-2005, 08:52 AM
I love the metpaphors, similes, and puns. You are a writer's writer, Benido.

One

whatradio
08-17-2005, 01:07 PM
DIZAAAAAM

bringin that pain as usual

good shit sun!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-17-2005, 02:43 PM
PEaCE thanks for the feedback

BlaK FuRYaN
08-17-2005, 05:45 PM
umma hafto read this a lil later but i thought id show some acknowledgement


peace

Immaculate
08-18-2005, 02:26 AM
consistently one of my favorites, ima always check for ya brother, flows amazing..peace

BlaK FuRYaN
08-18-2005, 05:46 PM
yo Ben....um sayin mayne.....your views on current affairs are vivid....true exspression in them lines of opression.....

peace

Immaculate
08-18-2005, 06:07 PM
love the title first off, secondly that was some real nice work there ,your thoughts are definitely worth more than a penny, thats whats up tho keep em coming, peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-18-2005, 06:31 PM
Thanks Blak and Immaculate we need to spread the word before it spread unknowningly like a secret virus

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-19-2005, 06:33 PM
Pictures conveyed through my dangerous blades,
Vagueness is swayed from my illustrated speech,
manipulating peeps slithering snakes foes screech,
as I eat all the wrath of grapes pile high my stack of papes,
as the brains of the wacked get raped caged acting apes,
I'm on lock channeled my chi my Kung Fu Hustle achieves,
the Lions Roar and Buddhist Palm kill these diseased,
my notes cut throats my knives slice causing gore Its time for war…


writing cycles of war these vile bibles are torn,
lightweights are worn temporal lobes form discord,
daunting puzzling practices I unsheathe my sword,
I’m gripping this board my wrist movements ignored,
words and verbs strung together these guillotine chords,
amphibious dynamics tore gords swagger Swayze static,
road house tactics observed flowers wilted in attics,
stretched out elastic you’re built with poisonous plastics,
I’m Mr. Fantastic you’re just an average kid,
Indecent Proposals lavish in drastic bids,
Demi Moore’s get their asses pinched,
As I’m laughing I pulverize your cabbage,
with one foot in the casket most of you quickly vanish,
basket case character’s banish the clasps on the wrists click,
I light the wick on the dirty bomb as the time ticks,
encased with nails screws and metal shards to start conflicts...

BlaK FuRYaN
08-19-2005, 07:35 PM
Bloooood Klaaaaaaart!



Pictures conveyed through my dangerous blades,

Vagueness is swayed from my illustrated speech,
manipulating peeps slithering snakes foes screech,
as I eat all the wrath of grapes pile high my stack of papes, - imagery is tight....gotta warcloud precence to it....
as the brains of the wacked get raped caged acting apes,
I'm on lock channeled my chi my Kung Fu Hustle achieves,
the Lions Roar and Buddhist Palm kill these diseased,
my notes cut throats my knives slice causing gore Its time for war…


writing cycles of war these vile bibles are torn,
lightweights are worn temporal lobes form discord,
daunting puzzling practices I unsheathe my sword,
I’m gripping this board my wrist movements ignored,
words and verbs strung together these guillotine chords,
amphibious dynamics tore gords - oh shit swagger Swayze static,
road house tactics observed flowers wilted in attics,
stretched out elastic you’re built with poisonous plastics,
I’m Mr. Fantastic you’re just an average kid,
Indecent Proposals lavish in drastic bids,
Demi Moore’s get their asses pinched, - lol.....
As I’m laughing I pulverize your cabbage,
with one foot in the casket most of you quickly vanish,
basket case character’s banish the clasps on the wrists click,
I light the wick on the dirty bomb as the time ticks,
encased with nails screws and metal shards to start conflicts...




WHY DID YOU STOP THERE......!?
THIS FLOW ROLLS OF THE TOUNG WEN I SPIT IT.....THE WHOLE VERSE SEEMS ACTIVE

100pr00f
08-19-2005, 07:41 PM
yea its good....baybee he did it couse thier will be another chapter for it

just gota wait and see haha

whatradio
08-20-2005, 11:48 AM
Ill

O3EY
08-20-2005, 04:27 PM
Always thinking with that genius flow, That's the kind of lyrics I strive to reach. Peace Big Ben. :dududu:

Father N Dangerous
08-20-2005, 10:36 PM
yeah that be the cat

ill shit u spit man stay up

GuardianOne
08-21-2005, 06:43 AM
Yah its a sensitive verse, seemed to contain a lot of emotion. Quite different from your usual explosive content. But was well paced, and flowed well. You did it very well.

Nice flow

Peace
PS: Keep posting

GuardianOne
08-21-2005, 07:38 AM
That was a tight verse, it flowed well and with your usual explosive words. Which continue!
Nice verse

Peace

blackwisdom
08-22-2005, 11:36 AM
Pictures conveyed through my dangerous blades,









Vagueness is swayed from my illustrated speech,
manipulating peeps slithering snakes foes screech,
as I eat all the wrath of grapes pile high my stack of papes,
as the brains of the wacked get raped caged acting apes,
I'm on lock channeled my chi my Kung Fu Hustle achieves,
the Lions Roar and Buddhist Palm kill these diseased,
my notes cut throats my knives slice causing gore Its time for war…


writing cycles of war these vile bibles are torn,
lightweights are worn temporal lobes form discord,
daunting puzzling practices I unsheathe my sword,
I’m gripping this board my wrist movements ignored,
words and verbs strung together these guillotine chords,
amphibious dynamics tore gords swagger Swayze static,
road house tactics observed flowers wilted in attics,
stretched out elastic you’re built with poisonous plastics,
I’m Mr. Fantastic you’re just an average kid,
Indecent Proposals lavish in drastic bids,
Demi Moore’s get their asses pinched,
As I’m laughing I pulverize your cabbage,
with one foot in the casket most of you quickly vanish,
basket case character’s banish the clasps on the wrists click,
I light the wick on the dirty bomb as the time ticks,
encased with nails screws and metal shards to start conflicts...






BigBen flips verbs like he's Dominique Daws
Please excuse me while I add some of my blemishless flaws
Walls crumble as I attach with bass hitting heavy
If you ain't ready all you had to do was tell me
That you're still in the ghost spell and you're following lies
Surprised when a young buck has to open your eyes
To realize that 90% of what you learn is fabricated
As europeanized as this land when colonated
But I ain't here to teach
My man just has the power to reach
To touch me deep that I just had to speak on it
Now go back to your topic before I start to forget
That this is a poetry thread instead of a free for all
Now read your poems while I just chill like I'm a fly on the walls

peace

martyr
08-22-2005, 11:45 AM
...hot script, good flow as always great vocab and that distinctive been style combined of like killah priest, goretex and the dictionary or something.... i liked this alot...



amphibious dynamics tore gords swagger Swayze static
road house tactics observed flowers wilted in attics


...that says it all... keep writing my man... did you get any of that audio stuff? im anxious....peace....

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-22-2005, 02:35 PM
yeah I did thanks I'm gonna buy this professional mic and do my own Hustle and flow at the house

BlaK FuRYaN
08-22-2005, 04:24 PM
YO BEN, AS SOON AS YOUR HOOKED UP WITH A MIC HULLA AT ME....yeah I did thanks I'm gonna buy this professional mic and do my own Hustle and flow at the house

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-28-2005, 02:06 AM
I carry weight fully draped surveyed dream scape cops dangle fiend bait,
to instigate they underestimate my degrees...
I sedate enemies with columbian cake ease..
snakes coil up and wait never did I hesitate left victims at death's gate,
they await contemplating faded hate took their life and continued to skate...

I run this sickest of business never leave'en a witness,
drink barrels of Guinness chemistry and physical fitness,
bust shots with quickness Molotovs cracked ya physics,
sizzle the block you hear hisses of rippling shots crippling marks,
I left my heart in The Mission District when I started to spark,
puncturing frames as blood drained when my Soul turned Dark!,
never Barked or took an Oath This Crook killed Pawns and Rooks,
left behind the Books observed my surroundings it was time to Cook!,
an Iron Chef building up taxless books never looked back.. always Jooked crack,
eyes bled my faith from every dub sack.. shook fishes returned back cuz they were Hooked fat....

I was raised In the North where the Color Red equaled ya Worth,
I dug through eroding Earth from being submersed in Dirt sun soaked I thirst,
Seen a lot of Hurt in this World of Low Economy funeral families gather disperse
never Punked out Bitches were Stomped out beat to pulps and Burnt Out,
sporting my fresh Maroon Jersey splitting heads mentally unworthy Servin shocks,
as a child my house was Dirty socks raided by cops holding flashlights and Glocks,
pointed in every position I was just a kid only guessin??.. what were they suggestin?? Livin Lifes Lessons Learned at an early age my Parents slaved dazed in a crackcage..
Hid my shame with 40’s to the brain cutting classes soothing tactics
Pulling at lifes plastic wearing down waist elastic striking the matchsticks,
Addicts with hatchets fragilely casted characters fastened to habits,
From the lavish to the average cabbages damaged sliced and sandwiched….

art saved me from ordering the same salami sandwich

noel411
08-28-2005, 02:58 AM
Interesting piece. A lot of rhymes in there. Crafty to say the least. I found it a little confusing at times, but it's a strong piece lyrically. Flow seemed to maybe change up at times, but definately kept a pattern. Good piece.

GuardianOne
08-28-2005, 08:35 AM
It was a well placed verse, like how you incorporated the food, with real life situations whilst through the entire verse- you expressed somethings which could occur (or did occur) in life. But still kept the verse to its point ( the title).

Peace
PS: Nice verse

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-28-2005, 12:22 PM
thanks Noel and Guardian appreciate the feed back...

This piece kinda jump forward and back to my mindtsate as I was a teenager the color of the bars signify an emotion...PEaCE

6what131
08-28-2005, 03:22 PM
I was raised In the North where the Color Red equaled ya Worth,
I dug through eroding Earth from being submersed in Dirt sun soaked I thirst,
Seen a lot of Hurt in this World of Low Economy funeral families gather disperse
never Punked out Bitches were Stomped out beat to pulps and Burnt Out,
sporting my fresh Maroon Jersey splitting heads mentally unworthy Servin shocks,
as a child my house was Dirty socks raided by cops holding flashlights and Glocks,
pointed in every position I was just a kid only guessin??.. what were they suggestin?? Livin Lifes Lessons Learned at an early age my Parents slaved dazed in a crackcage..
Hid my shame with 40’s to the brain cutting classes soothing tactics
Pulling at lifes plastic wearing down waist elastic striking the matchsticks,
Addicts with hatchets fragilely casted characters fastened to habits,
From the lavish to the average cabbages damaged sliced and sandwiched

all vesres were good but this one stood out for me

BlaK FuRYaN
08-28-2005, 06:04 PM
Ben this vers is tight....so many ryme skemes but the content was exciting....imagry jumps of the screen....your ryme style is like a chinese fire cracker......

The last verse was totallyunderstood especially about the parents and hiding emotions....

#the colour codes didnt make much sence to me, red exspresses anger white expresses innocence in regards of the situation with the cops....but yea....on the overall it was definately interesting.....


peace

J.T.S.
08-28-2005, 08:30 PM
I carry weight fully draped surveyed dream scape cops dangle fiend bait,

to instigate they underestimate my degrees...
I sedate enemies with columbian cake ease..
snakes coil up and wait never did I hesitate left victims at death's gate,
they await contemplating faded hate took their life and continued to skate...

I run this sickest of business never leave'en a witness,
drink barrels of Guinness chemistry and physical fitness,
bust shots with quickness Molotovs cracked ya physics,
sizzle the block you hear hisses of rippling shots crippling marks,
I left my heart in The Mission District when I started to spark,
puncturing frames as blood drained when my Soul turned Dark!,
never Barked or took an Oath This Crook killed Pawns and Rooks,
left behind the Books observed my surroundings it was time to Cook!,
an Iron Chef building up taxless books never looked back.. always Jooked crack,
eyes bled my faith from every dub sack.. shook fishes returned back cuz they were Hooked fat....

I was raised In the North where the Color Red equaled ya Worth,
I dug through eroding Earth from being submersed in Dirt sun soaked I thirst,
Seen a lot of Hurt in this World of Low Economy funeral families gather disperse
never Punked out Bitches were Stomped out beat to pulps and Burnt Out,
sporting my fresh Maroon Jersey splitting heads mentally unworthy Servin shocks,
as a child my house was Dirty socks raided by cops holding flashlights and Glocks,
pointed in every position I was just a kid only guessin??.. what were they suggestin?? Livin Lifes Lessons Learned at an early age my Parents slaved dazed in a crackcage..
Hid my shame with 40’s to the brain cutting classes soothing tactics
Pulling at lifes plastic wearing down waist elastic striking the matchsticks,
Addicts with hatchets fragilely casted characters fastened to habits,
From the lavish to the average cabbages damaged sliced and sandwiched….

art saved me from ordering the same salami sandwich

^O^ Keep em' coming razor sharp darts!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-08-2005, 02:50 PM
Mos def..I have alot of words swimming in my head I must release put in a thread for those that need to be fed... we dive in deep only to emerge out of breath some broke their neck failed to protect subjected to the devils mirror watch him reflect the sorrow and damned the hollowest of plans forming a nation of hollow head fam its the days of osiris the god of the dead as the eye of horace watches what is said and owl seeking bread in the form of a mason design patients recline inside their hospitalized minds internally we're defined our exterior is a materialistic crime judged on how we look and how we shine blinged out subliminal thought rule the blind as the cries of our children fall on deaf ears smoke screens votes steam adhere to the american dream fallen brothers mothers scream flyswatted broken dreams designed to tempt those that fiend only the dumb do these things!!!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-09-2005, 02:44 PM
spine boggles time follows the rhind of the fruit is peeled bitches and butchers fear the politcal smeers campaigning head lights freeze the deers beaten peers on the boardwalk they fall off the pier only to adhere freemasons dont care they rather become satanic sadist mind rapists hidden inside divine encasements the deaf dumb and blind can taste it the blood of the poor the rich always waste it standing still the masses are complacent they rather watch television while demons our children be chasing!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-09-2005, 02:45 PM
illustrate panoramic forresting giraffes unprotected reticulated necks are chopped in half blood confetti designs splash rhino's on the warpath lions impaled and left with an infected open gash hyenas mob together take the injured down fast elephant tusks of ivory collide and smash cheetahs chasing after zebra ass carrion stripped by bird beaks vultures digesting rotten meat warthogs gutted by a pride of lions to eat the famished and diseased die in the heat wilderbeast migrate primates raise the crime rate generated manipulations of the young they mind rape in the concrete jungles with the viles, bindles, and cream bundles those that get wet are set on high in the dryer on tumble sweet lives are cookies and easily crumble their shaped and baked in the streets placed on cookie sheets ingredients and flavors added relative to where you sleep marinated in alcohol to aide in your defeat souls brewing in the melting pot are exposed to the heat I run barefoot on concrete with slave feet...

444trumpets
10-09-2005, 04:42 PM
pump fluid out the bastard carcass ran through that cat broke back life reanactment swords slit the neck no hope for respect on signs massacre fuck a chainsaw motha fucka its the swords you run from son sun ray spark the lesson war already done who really leftem dumb guessen to shoot body mangled in parachutes doom for all beings circum to omen statistic of foolish words get blasted kid i gives a fuck bladder expose the drama situated in streets the tattoo across the forehead shot in the middle left for dead any set regret the first day moon become one with space warped victim scared speeclees born into the physical diolect i wreck a mutha fucka unconcious till death is silent struggle and envy the life before u its the laughter right after head stolen for virtue of game lames in paths struck cut bypass into the reality above any emcee slit your throat in due time weak rymes west coast shine purify the nature fucken wit the truest beast lion feet axe cut thorax crack open the meal ready to serve knights gone for the night circum the beheading ritual speak worthy whisper the night along the scene left the memory image snatch the alligators out waters for play wraped victim body tortured submission fold the message land sandy wirlwinds circum the greatest sin within the fallen lies truth
Mutha fucka

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-11-2005, 02:21 PM
Yeah!!!^

J.T.S.
10-11-2005, 07:39 PM
Seed of chucky unlucky midget throwin' flyin' daggers in tha house sickness
Choke tha witness for his digits tha uncanny digital wizard
You chicken tenders get slayed for ya gizzards
My skin like lizards lyrical reptile wit rap styles that cause blizzards
Skinnin' critics shit gets critical cold-blooded spittin'
Constipated shittin' on vagabonds get bagged, then bombed
Once tha sword is drawn heads are torn from knecks who's next
To get hexed wit Blair witch project effects

002
10-12-2005, 05:33 AM
wow. PURE illness.. peace al of you.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-24-2005, 01:15 PM
mind of matter nines point they scatter vines growing covering the ladder fish heads battered then fried lightly breaded confusion with in the third eye innoculations pin point the pituatary flying over like birds eyes words bring nutrients call it rye octopus ink in ya eye clouded cumulus design duplicate and confine metamorphisis of a mind turned from thinker into masses of the deaf dumb and blind problem reaction and solution crime distributions life and death fusion drakonian illusions illuminate to elliminate individual conclusions who are you fooling?? who have you ruined??? time is ticking keep moving!!!!

444trumpets
10-24-2005, 06:02 PM
Foolish Ones Left Numb
Brain Gone
Oxygen Low Capacity Of Lungs
Drench The Salt Poisonous Thought
Flow Like Oceans Fish Being Caught
Delay The Oil Spill Human Opportunist Deciding Which Lifes To Fill
The Supply And Demand
Big Ben With The Helping Hand
Informats Of Truth Streets Decay In Which Fills The Pain In Tooth Aches Belly Grumbling The Frienship Has Past The Moment Sequence The Lines And Rymes To Past Crimes
Stories Of Conquest
The Beast Feast On Corrupted Minds Visualise The Sign
Brew The Enzymes Created The Natural Existence Inside Spritual Binds Mend The Relationship With The High
Nines Pointed For Sale Of Treaty
Watch The Exchange Dollar Amount
Shot Rang Out
I Fill In The Holes Of The Needy

Ballad Ballistik
10-24-2005, 07:56 PM
how did i sleep on this thread so long...nice work everybody...

Big Risk
10-24-2005, 08:31 PM
Cum globs from poor slobs chillin on the corner eatin corn cobs.
People starvin so they decide to eat aids through the anus
Lifes hanis, mother fuckaz we need changes.
Why do we fuck the mouth before the cunt.
pullin stunts on little girls, sexuall world glorifies ripped butts.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-03-2005, 02:50 PM
White N Dangerous



~Imagine~ vodka & ~gin~ smellin like ~jasmins~/
and that biggie & pac were just ~has beens~/
my ~rhymes are ~rough~ my ~mind~ is on ~self destruct~
~sinin~ in vegas so imma throw ~my chips in~/
~livin~ in the desert so call me ~egyptian~/
causin alot of ~trouble~ for ~crews~ like ~obstacles~/
everyday is a ~struggle~ i ~do~ smoke ~optimals~/
while ni66as ~Shot They Load~ they ~Lock N Load~/
as Souls are ~Boxed & Sold~/




BiGBeN
We all struggle for self wealth, knowledge & spirituality,
… some gradually realize its all a formality,
working for nothing while nothings ever happening,
our bank accounts are tapped-in lights on roaches scrambling,
low income kitchens Top Ramen was popping back-then,
throw an egg-in and hot sauce & I'm-in!!
while we spin the wheels of fortune,
drug wars leave behind Orphans,
the World power is disproportioned,
“they” send in the armed forces,
only to light the devil’s torches,
the spoils of war finance new global courses,
soldiers of sin’s conflicted with-in still enforce it,
bets placed life gambled the chips are all-in!!,
obeying and conforming to a system of dorsal fins,
in a ocean of fake white sharks,
traces of blood is recognized and bitten apart,
by teeth of political larks,
with cirrhosis of the liver and a bad heart,
life expanded cheating death with Medical Lab parts,
pace maker ticker Old Bastard Slave Masters,
Bavarian Blue-Blood 13 colony crafters,
sadist sodomy sackers they need a lobotomy...
Yo! White N Dangerous hand me a protractor,
I’ll design their demise like a General Contractor,
they don’t fool me they distract with terrorist disasters,
a puppet pulled faster creating mental cancer,
when the Crank Yanker’s call don’t Fucken answer,
deep sea thinkers barges and tankers oil rig big bankers,
collateral damage expendable lives extinguished and televised,
“they” plot scheme and lie to obtain laws it’s a no brainer!!
Alcohol was legalized to inebriate your neighbor,
alleviate you from your savior,
time official what’s the issue?? Tears collected in tissue,
the patriot act and patriot missile’s take away lives like pistols!,
burning fat and gristle Freedom is a lie,
The Statue of Liberty a Freemason design,
modeled after the Devil’s Bride,
symbolizes the elite control over the Dumb, Deaf, and Blind,
these play makers confine while the clock managers lose time…
my sinister skilled stratagem scatters silent saddend men,
my merciless blows are jaw shattering,
the piles of defeated demented grow,
with the basis of these basic brains faces kneaded like bread dough,
good night heads still sleeping on soft pillows Go to bed… Whoa!!!

White N Dangerous

I got the lyrical ~tech nine~/
to persuade and ~infect minds~/
im quick to spit that ~hot shit~/
unlocking styles like a ~locksmith~/
hidden darts is the one i ~rock with~/
ben and i are quick to ~blast at fools~/
for there money clips, ~cash and jewels~/
leavin mc's slain on the ~rappin news~/
me and ben are sum ~live men~/
we kinda like a ~diamond~/
forever & constantly ~shinin'~/
ya know we get the ~fetti right~/
fuck these ~pettie mics~/
swingin em like there sum ~deadly scythes~/
man im on the mic and only ~sixteen~/
like the ~water i ~keep clean~/
and ~slaughter~ and ~beat phines~/
talkin bout ~pounds~ but u haven't felt the ~weight~/
spittin lyrical ~rounds~ with big ben so you'll know they'll ~penetrate~/
i make these ~bastards flee~ when i ~capture these~/
artists known as ~wack M.c's~ me and big ben just starting this lyrical ~catastrophe~/

Father N Dangerous
11-03-2005, 03:53 PM
o0o fyah!!!! damn we needed a chorus but its all good :D feed please!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-03-2005, 09:19 PM
dont sleep on the spot foiling while ya rot rocking out the box removing the strange plots

Father N Dangerous
11-04-2005, 08:54 AM
damn ben wats up!!! ya'll can tell us if it sucks :) ANY FEED WOULD BE APPRECIATED

if ya'll are gonna read it then post sum feed whether good or bad

the funky drunk
11-04-2005, 01:47 PM
sup

that was dope , but i knew it would be LOL , that is a very nice piece right there , i enjoyed readin it , the audio would be fyah!

thanks 4 a good read

noel411
11-04-2005, 08:11 PM
Damn Ben, you really fucked up, because that verse you wrote was really nice, but where's the punctuation? I know you must have typed it up like that on purpose, maybe because you envisioned it as being one long non-stop flow or something, I don't know, but I thought it really took away from it when reading. When I read it, I read it as I would a normal broken up verse, with lines ending where I would expect them to, and it actually had a really nice flow, some parts in particular flowed very smooth, especially the parts where you threw in a lot of a similar sounding rhymes in a short space. Some thoughful references in there too. Overall I liked your verse a lot, but would have much rather seen it chopped up into lines.

WND's verse had a great flow. Quick, even lines, came off really nice. Read very smoothly. Not much in the way of content on that verse, but the multiple syllable rhymes at the end of each line made it come off nicely.

Kinda unlikely collab. Two very different verses, and styles as a whole, but definately a good showing by both of you.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-04-2005, 09:49 PM
thanks for the input Noel much appreciated I changed the format..PeacEcaeP

jallainINS
11-05-2005, 01:06 AM
tight..what else can i say, this is just what we've grown to expect from you guys. you keep postin, ill keep readin.

noel411
11-05-2005, 06:24 AM
thanks for the input Noel much appreciated I changed the format..PeacEcaeP Ahhhh, now that's better, haha.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-07-2005, 02:02 PM
aha !!!

J.T.S.
11-07-2005, 10:34 PM
Greatness from dangerous n' Ben, do it again!

Father N Dangerous
11-08-2005, 12:17 AM
Greatness from dangerous n' Ben, do it again!

ya know thats not a bad idea but it took me forever to get my lines because i was busy with school and work, but i love the feed you guys are giving on this piece. I'm happy and am gonna go chill. stay up wu corp

ElusiveFugitive
11-08-2005, 05:15 PM
We all struggle for self wealth, knowledge & spirituality,
… some gradually realize its all a formality,
working for nothing while nothings ever happening,
our bank accounts are tapped-in lights on roaches scrambling,
low income kitchens Top Ramen was popping back-then,
throw an egg-in and hot sauce & I'm-in!!
while we spin the wheels of fortune,
drug wars leave behind Orphans,
the World power is disproportioned,
“they” send in the armed forces,
only to light the devil’s torches,
the spoils of war finance new global courses,
soldiers of sin’s conflicted with-in still enforce it,
bets placed life gambled the chips are all-in!!,
obeying and conforming to a system of dorsal fins,
in a ocean of fake white sharks,
traces of blood is recognized and bitten apart,
by teeth of political larks,
with cirrhosis of the liver and a bad heart,
life expanded cheating death with Medical Lab parts,
pace maker ticker Old Bastard Slave Masters,
Bavarian Blue-Blood 13 colony crafters,
sadist sodomy sackers they need a lobotomy...

deep sea thinkers barges and tankers oil rig big bankers,
collateral damage expendable lives extinguished and televised,
“they” plot scheme and lie to obtain laws it’s a no brainer!!
Alcohol was legalized to inebriate your neighbor,
alleviate you from your savior,
burning fat and gristle Freedom is a lie,
The Statue of Liberty a Freemason design,
modeled after the Devil’s Bride,
symbolizes the elite control over the Dumb, Deaf, and Blind,
these play makers confine while the clock managers lose time…
my sinister skilled stratagem scatters silent saddend men,
my merciless blows are jaw shattering,


Ben this verse is fucken masterful! Love the content, aggressive flow and the rhyme schemes, you flip it seamlessly in parts and the alliteration on the 2nd to last highlighted line was a killer...Props Uso

White N Dangerous

I got the lyrical ~tech nine~/
to persuade and ~infect minds~/
im quick to spit that ~hot shit~/
unlocking styles like a ~locksmith~/
hidden darts is the one i ~rock with~/
ben and i are quick to ~blast at fools~/
for there money clips, ~cash and jewels~/
leavin mc's slain on the ~rappin news~/
me and ben are sum ~live men~/
we kinda like a ~diamond~/
forever & constantly ~shinin'~/
ya know we get the ~fetti right~/
fuck these ~pettie mics~/
swingin em like there sum ~deadly scythes~/
man im on the mic and only ~sixteen~/
like the ~water i ~keep clean~/
and ~slaughter~ and ~beat phines~/
talkin bout ~pounds~ but u haven't felt the ~weight~/
spittin lyrical ~rounds~ with big ben so you'll know they'll ~penetrate~/
i make these ~bastards flee~ when i ~capture these~/
artists known as ~wack M.c's~ me and big ben just starting this lyrical ~catastrophe~/

White, I havent read anything of yours before...Your style varies somewhat from Bens...In this drop you're much lighter on content, but that was cool to even things out...I'm diggin your flow with the rhyme schemes, especially the multis...Tight, nice work... Damn I wish I could have rhymed anything at 16! Lol

Nice collab both of y'all...

ONE LOVE

Father N Dangerous
11-08-2005, 05:48 PM
MUCH LOVE to fugitive man thanks for the detailed feedback :D stay up

Hellspawn
11-11-2005, 08:18 AM
damn! white n dangerous your style is sick, really liked your first verse...it's simply off the hook! the words flows like water, i rarely read what's posted in the Temple of Darts but i did and i'm not disappointed...good work
and Ben, these are some deep thoughts, i like your verses alot too.
keep the good work on people

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-11-2005, 08:48 AM
thanks for the feedback Ellusive and Hellspawn

BlaK FuRYaN
11-11-2005, 04:38 PM
White N Dangerous






~Imagine~ vodka & ~gin~ smellin like ~jasmins~/
and that biggie & pac were just ~has beens~/
my ~rhymes are ~rough~ my ~mind~ is on ~self destruct~
~sinin~ in vegas so imma throw ~my chips in~/
~livin~ in the desert so call me ~egyptian~/
causin alot of ~trouble~ for ~crews~ like ~obstacles~/
everyday is a ~struggle~ i ~do~ smoke ~optimals~/
while ni66as ~Shot They Load~ they ~Lock N Load~/
as Souls are ~Boxed & Sold~/







BiGBeN


We all struggle for self wealth, knowledge & spirituality,

… some gradually realize its all a formality,
working for nothing while nothings ever happening,
our bank accounts are tapped-in lights on roaches scrambling,
low income kitchens Top Ramen was popping back-then,
throw an egg-in and hot sauce & I'm-in!!
while we spin the wheels of fortune,
drug wars leave behind Orphans,
the World power is disproportioned,
“they” send in the armed forces,
only to light the devil’s torches,
the spoils of war finance new global courses,
soldiers of sin’s conflicted with-in still enforce it,
bets placed life gambled the chips are all-in!!,
obeying and conforming to a system of dorsal fins,
in a ocean of fake white sharks,
traces of blood is recognized and bitten apart,
by teeth of political larks,
with cirrhosis of the liver and a bad heart,
life expanded cheating death with Medical Lab parts,
pace maker ticker Old Bastard Slave Masters,
Bavarian Blue-Blood 13 colony crafters,
sadist sodomy sackers they need a lobotomy...
Yo! White N Dangerous hand me a protractor,
I’ll design their demise like a General Contractor,
they don’t fool me they distract with terrorist disasters,
a puppet pulled faster creating mental cancer,
when the Crank Yanker’s call don’t Fucken answer,
deep sea thinkers barges and tankers oil rig big bankers,
collateral damage expendable lives extinguished and televised,
“they” plot scheme and lie to obtain laws it’s a no brainer!!
Alcohol was legalized to inebriate your neighbor,
alleviate you from your savior,
time official what’s the issue?? Tears collected in tissue,
the patriot act and patriot missile’s take away lives like pistols!,
burning fat and gristle Freedom is a lie,
The Statue of Liberty a Freemason design,
modeled after the Devil’s Bride,
symbolizes the elite control over the Dumb, Deaf, and Blind,
these play makers confine while the clock managers lose time…
my sinister skilled stratagem scatters silent saddend men,
my merciless blows are jaw shattering,
the piles of defeated demented grow,
with the basis of these basic brains faces kneaded like bread dough,
good night heads still sleeping on soft pillows Go to bed… Whoa!!!




White N Dangerous




I got the lyrical ~tech nine~/
to persuade and ~infect minds~/
im quick to spit that ~hot shit~/
unlocking styles like a ~locksmith~/
hidden darts is the one i ~rock with~/
ben and i are quick to ~blast at fools~/
for there money clips, ~cash and jewels~/
leavin mc's slain on the ~rappin news~/
me and ben are sum ~live men~/
we kinda like a ~diamond~/
forever & constantly ~shinin'~/
ya know we get the ~fetti right~/
fuck these ~pettie mics~/
swingin em like there sum ~deadly scythes~/
man im on the mic and only ~sixteen~/
like the ~water i ~keep clean~/
and ~slaughter~ and ~beat phines~/
talkin bout ~pounds~ but u haven't felt the ~weight~/
spittin lyrical ~rounds~ with big ben so you'll know they'll ~penetrate~/
i make these ~bastards flee~ when i ~capture these~/
artists known as ~wack M.c's~ me and big ben just starting this lyrical ~catastrophe~/

yo Biggs.....that verse is sick and definately inspired me to write suin tonight....you jus got the whole concept rolled in one....

WD's verse was more on a street flow collab which i allways admire for ppl who can convey it with talent

definately a decent kollab

Father N Dangerous
11-12-2005, 12:47 AM
Well all in all i thank EVERYBODY that gave feed, and i thank everyone that read it and didn't give feed, everyone stay up and keep chillin.

Pe@ce

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-12-2005, 12:50 PM
PeacE Blak its nice to know I can inspire those that inspire me!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
04-12-2006, 11:17 PM
Bump for some new material soon!!!

Eversick666
04-13-2006, 10:28 AM
HOLY SHIT god, all that shit you posted ill, read that all fucken blazed
pure shit man u a real ninja.

peace
eversick666

Aclikyano
04-13-2006, 02:58 PM
PeacE Blak its nice to know I can inspire those that inspire me!

peace ben..we release them decent pre-deceased freez when treez is smoked..leavin pieces froze..
evil pose..As I break peoplez nose....unleash-a-flo upon beastz who chose sidez..tha nine near ribz..close by..

(quicc shit) peace.. big up BB... keep spittin rawness

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
04-13-2006, 11:35 PM
Man I just all the feed back ya'll gave me and I must say thanks to everyone I really appreciate all of you that took the time to read some of my more verbose pieces!!

Killer Falcon
04-15-2006, 06:38 PM
i'm feeling the collab with white n dangerous a lot. your lyricism is still sharp and meaningful. good to read some fresh material. keep up the good work

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
05-12-2006, 01:55 PM
This has been read by most of ya'll on RapLevel I'm just updating my thread.


Umbilical cords torn born into a world of murder,
the systematic killing of children & culture is ordered,
Kids awarded medals for going out like tin soldiers,
Morgues fuel & feed the Soul scorching Steam Boilers,
bodies turned to coal slowly burn & smolder,
emit an orange glow with foul, toxic smoke & odor,
so pungent it attracts vile vermin & vultures…

“We tip toe around death, disease, & borders,
read the fine print on laws designed & coded,
an obsolete system outdated, old & corroded,
watch as the software database is overloaded…“

Witness the Cirque De Solie contortionist performance,
conducted by assorted political elite corporate,
Donkeys, Elephants & media moguls consorted,
to reveal what info “They” need to be quoted,
the media sorted & spin what “They” reported,
meeting of like minds confide, arrange & supported…

Taxes, Commandments & Amendments appealed then re-worded,
civil rights changed in abundance, our freedoms absconded,
a kin to viewing haunting pictures of the grotesque & morbid,
faces & bodies of car crash victims twisted & contorted,
we’re constantly digging in our pockets increasingly shorted,
necessities needed but the poor can’t really afford it,
household bills and inflation equals government extortion,
high prices crystallized and snorted, hope and faith is thwarted,

“We tip toe around death, disease, & borders,
read the fine print on laws designed & coded,
an obsolete system outdated, old & corroded,
watch as the software database is overloaded…“

The windows to the soul are shattered & boarded,
weight shouldered on the poor class, see it, behold it,
education standards lowered, the youth only ignore it,
families in denial like teen-pregnancy babies aborted,
surrounding environment described as violent & sordid,
Once mob mentality mayhem erupts who’s gonna control it?
origami characters easily manipulated & folded,
designed into mindless drones, mentally massaged & molded,

Satellites stream snowy screen white noise to consult us,
additives, preservatives, & ingredients bleached slowly destroy us,
chemicals control us, Hate jailed and sorted, fertile earth erosion,
the stench of cigarettes, crack, gun powder and urine,
the sight of inflicted addicts in torment gauntly looks of disorder,
and agitated alcoholic aggression a daily occurrence,
gun shots, side shows, & sirens, a routine disturbance,

“The tears of mourners and their fears of street corners,
the beers intoxicate and lower fears on street corners,
our peers complicate and steer pressure until cornered,
death smeared and coated on lives reared on street corners…”

Community, common sense, and family values avoided,
invite a slew of bad situations & poor choices,
screaming mad & sobbing sad voices,
while victims collect damaged mildewed moistness,
“capital mold” spreading unabated on front porches,
don’t be seduced by these sour slick suggestive sources,
Never allow confining systems to house & horde us…
We’re too Strong & Abundant to be exploited any further…

“The tears of mourners and their fears of street corners,
the beers intoxicate and lower fears on street corners,
our peers complicate and steer pressure until cornered,
death smeared and coated on lives reared on street corners…”

BlaK FuRYaN
05-15-2006, 04:18 AM
This has been read by most of ya'll on RapLevel I'm just updating my thread.



Umbilical cords torn born into a world of murder,

the systematic killing of children & culture is ordered,
Kids awarded medals for going out like tin soldiers,
Morgues fuel & feed the Soul scorching Steam Boilers,
bodies turned to coal slowly burn & smolder,
emit an orange glow with foul, toxic smoke & odor,
so pungent it attracts vile vermin & vultures…

“We tip toe around death, disease, & borders,
read the fine print on laws designed & coded,
an obsolete system outdated, old & corroded,
watch as the software database is overloaded…“

Witness the Cirque De Solie contortionist performance,
conducted by corporate, elite, & political assortments,
media moguls Donkeys & Elephants consorted,
to reveal what info “They” need to be quoted,
the media Clowns spins what “They” reported,
meeting of like minds confide arranged & supported…

Taxes, Commandments & Amendments appealed then re-worded,
civil rights changed in abundance, our freedoms absconded,
a kin to viewing haunted pictures of the grotesque & morbid,
faces & bodies of car crash victims twisted & contorted,
we’re constantly digging in our pockets increasingly shorted,
necessities needed but the poor can’t really afford it,
household bills and inflation equals government extortion,
high prices crystallized and snorted, hope and faith is thwarted,

“We tip toe around death, disease, & borders,
read the fine print on laws designed & coded,
an obsolete system outdated, old & corroded,
watch as the software database is overloaded…“

The windows to the soul are shattered & boarded,
weight shouldered on the poor class, see it, behold it,
education standards lowered, the youth only ignore it,
families in denial like teen-pregnancy babies aborted,
surrounding environment described as violent & sordid,
Once mob mentality mayhem erupts who’s gonna control it?
origami characters easily manipulated, discarded & folded,
designed into mindless drones, mentally massaged & molded,

Satellites stream snowy screen white noise to consult us,
additives, preservatives, & ingredients bleached slowly destroy us,
chemicals absorbed-in, Hate jailed and sorted, fertile earth erosion,
the stench of cigarettes, crack, gun powder and urine,
the sight of inflicted addicts gauntly looks of disorder,
and agitated alcoholic aggression a daily occurrence,
gun shots, side shows, & sirens, a routine disturbance,

“The tears of mourners and their fears of street corners,
the beers intoxicate and lower fears on street corners,
our peers complicate and steer pressure until cornered,
death smeared and coated on lives reared on street corners…”

Community, common sense, and family values avoided,
invite a slew of bad situations & poor choices,
screaming mad & sobbing sad voices,
while victims collect damaged mildewed moistness,
“capital mold” spreading unabated on front porches,
don’t be seduced by these sour slick suggestive sources,
Never allow these confining systems to house & horde us…
We’re too Strong & Abundant to be exploited any further…

“The tears of mourners and their fears of street corners,
the beers intoxicate and lower fears on street corners,
our peers complicate and steer pressure until cornered,
death smeared and coated on lives reared on street corners…”


sup Ben...its bin a while...i read the whole piece....im influenced....i like the way this was crafted....packed full of gems....you definatley have consistency on this forum....

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-02-2006, 05:23 PM
Another old piece..enjoy


Falling hourglass sands, evaporate the time of man,
manipulative demons contort the law for evil plans,
In America were slaves! that work hard understand?,
well I'll break it down so you can truly comprehend....

we pay, we pay, we pay, everyday and what do we got?,
we pay for death to rest in cemetery plots,
we pay the mortuary service a hefty knot,
we pay to live in everyday life we wrought,
we pay at night out in the hood on the block,
we pay with our life if were knifed or shot,
we pay for medical care or were left to rot,



we pay for clothes and become walking billboard lots,
we pay for cotton picked by our ancestors mocked,
we pay with lost heritage when those DEVILS docked,
we pay physically placed in poverty criticized and mocked,
we pay dropping our souls in the WAR machine slots,
we pay emotionally when our children at WAR are popped,
we pay mentally blocked told it will never STOP",
we pay rent to sleep in an apartment or spot,
we pay taxes on property we already bought,
we pay to power the appliances we got,
we paid for those appliances that cost a lot,
we pay for the phone so we could talk,
we pay for water so we could clean and wash-up,
we pay for gas so we stay warm and cook-up,
we pay a portion of our income 30 cents to each buck,
we pay for transportation to get forth and back,
we pay for the oil and gas to travel like that,
we pay for car insurance even if we don’t wreck,
we pay for a license & picture I.D. the police check,
we pay for education and so-called economy inflation,
we pay to keep murderers alive while their victims died,
we pay with our time when our mind is caged by the blind,
we pay for politicians and that’s a crime,
cuz they could care less if we live or die,
we pay for all of this while left with nothing to save,

so we could never elevate in a place that’s safe,
we work hard all day working in the system of slaves,
with a minimum wage set to keep us near the grave,
now wait!!! you'll say "slaves were never paid",
well. if you noticed and do the math we aint either,
if you think you're making money you need to stop inhaling ether,
Our money never expands when in Uncle Sam's hands the global death dealer,
as were dying slowly from the stress sickle from the Grimm Reaper,
in a suit and tie disguised as various religious and political leaders,
controlling through a gentle demeanor and the Laws masturbation,
if you don’t believe me go do your own calculations...
They call this the land of the free I call it the slave nation...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-02-2006, 01:25 AM
POVERTY PLANNED PACE


shadowed souls form from the blockage of light,
while death follows the lives that cast-off no light,
in the end most of society machinate but never comprehend,
willing to pretend.. to seem down wearing commercial blends,
rural areas teetering on the fence, of urban decay and expense,
loners with no where to vent live a one-dimensional life,
in the hoods kids pretend, eyes wide open but still blind,
they rather bark spit, drop quips, get hype, grimey then gripe,
jaw jackers are slighted and split, eyes empty encouragement,
some still afloat while soaking in lifes vital nourishment,
unknowingly fell but gained thoughts of sustenance,
a ubiquitous life prevalent in ignorance & arrogance
ya better watch out for Karma’s comeuppance,
in a world of bad luck ya bound to get pinched,
shuck & cinched out ya shell-tered life with no path or course,
as 85’s sit and rehearse the life of a celebrity’s net worth,
livin vicariously thru those who act, entertain and play sports,
living in the moment with reckless choices never mind the recourses,
lost souls lost touch hearts lust, lives livin lies and such,
getting ruffed, Timbs scuffed throwin’ hands up, in disgust,
Susceptible to slump, sag, hunch, rash judgments when stressed,
And that’s when ya start to dilute ya mind with sess,
Alcohol depressed… so we figure who’s it hurt,
Til the day comes when you blast someone’s Earth,
End up in chains cuffed jakes rushed road rashed ya face,
pierced ya sternum and cracked ya chest plate,
watch rib shack felons heinous institutionalized mind state,
peer at you perversely waiting to sodomize and mind rape,
broken battered outta shape, lumped like tubes of toothpaste,
once ya in the Justice systems database ya never gonna escape,
body withered, dead flowers encased in a shattered glass vase,
Flowers with ribbons are placed as the center piece of your last wake,
360 view of a poverty placed trapped fate, as this cycle completes a violent designed rat race..

Lil' Ruger
10-02-2006, 02:18 AM
^^^^ hot shit!

J.T.S.
10-02-2006, 09:10 AM
Damn Ben you got more darts than a fat bitch got farts, keep perfecting ya art peace!

J.T.S.
10-02-2006, 06:08 PM
[Big Ben is the illest!!

andrem
10-04-2006, 11:40 PM
meaningful rhymes, much respect

"in the hoods kids pretend, eyes wide open but still blind,
they rather bark spit, drop quips, get hype, grimey then gripe,
jaw jackers are slighted and split, eyes empty encouragement,
some still afloat while soaking in lifes vital nourishment,"

illness!!

Da Dishonourable Don
10-05-2006, 12:00 AM
yo Ben, gotta hand it to ya, you're nice wit it, I like the shit you sayin' and how you lay it out, keep doin' u homie, 1!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-05-2006, 02:15 PM
Peace James, andrem & DDD

Thanks for reading what I have cluttered in my mind

Sicka than aidZ
10-05-2006, 02:27 PM
FIRE!!!!!! 9:|6

Dokuro
10-05-2006, 04:33 PM
that strate homie good work keep it up
peace

Father N Dangerous
10-07-2006, 06:16 AM
heh always loved your work and this shit just blew me away! doesn't get much better then this ladies and gentlemen! you stay sharp shinobi

tha god concept
10-07-2006, 08:19 AM
~~~BIG CONCEPT KILLIN SCRIPTS~~~

~~~wednesdayverses = we@kRAPS...(get it???)~~~

how am i suppose to walk the righteous path
when yall supposibly knowledgable cats be preachin weak raps
tell me that...matter of fact prove that
let me see the gat in wich ya rhymes be surrouned with
yall counterfit....fake as pornostar hollywood tits
imma domolish this off the books typa spit
cause i aint gettin payed
and dont tell me your hooker ass power U aint gettin laid
i spray cats like RAID
cause niggaz be bitin
why the fuck you think the gods AKA name be TRIFE TYSON
smack you so hard i leave you with a scar on ya license
identity fightin...you fake analog wanna be me MC's
watch me pull the crucifix out my sheeth and burn ya with third degreez
so pull the fire alarm
cause CONCEPT be the bomb
super hero savin children from burnin in the buildin with my dead arm
and my cold shoulder be huggin bitches while watching the radar
but i creep threw the fog pullin my victims coarpses out the morgue
raw dog= god of war backwards
i dug up the GRAVE ROBBERS grave with mal-practice just for the IRONIC FACTORZ
im not a dam actor imma KNOWLEDGEABLE typa RAPPER!!!!!!!!!!
sippin from the grail with musical martyrs dieing with LAUGHTER!!!!1hunid!!

tha god concept
10-07-2006, 08:25 AM
thats what the fucks up^^^^^^^^^^

tha god concept
10-07-2006, 08:39 AM
~~~HELLbent~~~

dreary old people in the line up and im fuckin stir crazy
made the doctor lose his patients before he birthed ROSEMARY'S BABY
the ground rumbled as he fumbled so awkward it was crazy
baby shot out with horns and a full fanged mouth spitin rabies
ate the placenta and fried wifees eggs stoppin the whore from mating
the scene was like a snuff porn worthy of 100 x ratings
the doctors start debating.....they wanna put this kid down
cause its fathers pure evil and hes got his eyes and frown
three nines upside down as they held the child down
his eyes were bleeding as he grew a thorn LITTERED crown
started moaning so unholy when he stared the priest down
pulled out his own heart then ate all 5 pounds
cursing in old tongues as his second voice growled
its mother died from the shock as he laughed stinkin foul
the doctors sliced with his scalpel knife and ripped the things bowels
spiders crawled out his stomach as it shit maggots and howled
i noticed as i glanced out the window two witches prowled
ready to adopt theyre concoction of demon and child
the floor opened up into a fuckin hell hole abyss
i juss noticed the dam NUN that was in the room had already slit a wrist
the hole spit fire and smelt like shit mixed with piss
an angel crawled out with broken wings and two balled fists
"the dead goat with a man head" she said raped her innocence and this was her kid
her tongue shot out and licked the wounds clean of that NUN
her crippled wings opened up as she spoke of the sins shes done
then slit the babies thick leather throat open and hummed
praying for satan to take her back cause shes our sacrafise when numb

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-14-2006, 05:28 AM
~~LIMBO, ABYSS~~

I'm a wolf in sheep clothing,
Self Loathing, Bad Intentions Drug smoking,
Casing the Block clutching a concealed glock,
I need a drug Fix fiending for another hit,
Track marks and sores cover my crusty lips,
I move quick a sick skiddish serpent,
sidewinder surly slithering and cursin,
looming in the Shadows Perversly Searchin,
I Observe a Big ass walkin home from Workin,
my mind is Aloof & Burdened, Basket Case, Cold, Hardend,
In the Dark I notice Frigid nipples poking thru her Bra and,
I can't take It Demons tell me,
Rape Her!, She tried to escape So I Ate her... whole,
Shattered that Bitch Gun Powder Vapors...Glow


Spun favors, Stunned Neighbors,
Slum Capers Pulling weight like dumbwaiters,
Higher than City Sky Scrapers,
I'm an Addict with multiple Layers,
read about My victims in the newspapers,
I cater and Labor Alligator Predator Slayer,
Society has fallen as the dead are hauled in,
Sprawled out Stolen Souls Shriek In Hell Callin’


I'm on a dope mission,
feel my cold hissin',
call me snake plisken,
a felon with 2 convictions,
my high is subsiding,
my body begins twitching,
I'm a slug sliding,
I'm out on the prowl,
plastic people play proud,
I hate myself and scowl,
Stay up later than an owl,
sweaty grimey and oily,
all women ignore me,
I'm ready for some exploring,
rape bitches when they're snoring,
let me check the time,
3:15 The Witching Hour Death is on my mind

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-14-2006, 08:14 AM
wrought are lives sought, caught, held with blind thoughts,
collide and divide hearts, dehydrate frames on the sidewalk,
the binds locked young lifes shocked outlined in white chalk,
we fight spit growl and bark viscious Pitbull predators talk,
with words that injure the Soul perpetrators intention unknown,
innocence gone outgrown sense & judgement is blown,
similar to Pirate Cannons blasted to sink competitors afloat,
clueless to the trajectory of the Iron dying to gain Gold,
severing the adams apple as the reapers watch and gloat,
we're Angels left astray, goals decayed,we're living for Today,
fuck tomorrow, and forget yesterday, breathe dismay we sashay,
as we fill our bottles feast freely at The Grotto and try to fuck models,
agonized community collared with nothing more to Say Boy,
boarded ships looted quick new land to pillage, Ahoy!!!,
you Hunger to live like a Hustler, in a Penthouse, like a Playboy...

tha god concept
10-14-2006, 10:59 AM
chillin in the hiltons penthouse....readin playboy
larry flint hate against those soft core hunnies that cant hide toys
fresh as altoids.....slangin more blues tha Akroyd
belushi over dose got my crew paranoid
im sniffin more white than canadian winters on steroids
flashin gats brighter than fags takin poloroids
whos ya boy..?
concept askin the same fuckin questions
only response im gettin is wanna be me MC biters lickin suggestions
belly hot from real rhyme writters block droppin acid.. indigestion
answer all popparatzi questions but stay on the low at all vegas messes
i got five on it....im fly with or with out it
never doubt this
im the kid slangin lazy drugz like crack cocaine from coutches
sellin more than a couple ounces
this aint scarface fantasies
cause scarface fantasies end with more holes in bodies than i can count G
slayin those kids off the block is labour work where im from
spittin rhymes so deff you think im dumpin dum dum's
dirty droppin ......gangsta rotten
leg lockin piegeon heads from the spot n............
theres no hope

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-14-2006, 04:04 PM
chillin in the hiltons penthouse....readin playboy
larry flint hate against those soft core hunnies that cant hide toys
fresh as altoids.....slangin more blues tha Akroyd
belushi over dose got my crew paranoid
im sniffin more white than canadian winters on steroids
flashin gats brighter than fags takin poloroids
whos ya boy..?
concept askin the same fuckin questions
only response im gettin is wanna be me MC biters lickin suggestions
belly hot from real rhyme writters block droppin acid.. indigestion
answer all popparatzi questions but stay on the low at all vegas messes
i got five on it....im fly with or with out it
never doubt this
im the kid slangin lazy drugz like crack cocaine from coutches
sellin more than a couple ounces
this aint scarface fantasies
cause scarface fantasies end with more holes in bodies than i can count G
slayin those kids off the block is labour work where im from
spittin rhymes so deff you think im dumpin dum dum's
dirty droppin ......gangsta rotten
leg lockin piegeon heads from the spot n............
theres no hope
I can read between the Lines...and I'm not taking the bait!...Nice wordplay

tha god concept
10-14-2006, 05:50 PM
yo man....i wasnt talkin shit bount anyone..just a random pointless verse homie 4reel..didnt mean anything

J.T.S.
10-17-2006, 11:04 AM
wrought are lives sought, caught, held with blind thoughts,
collide and divide hearts, dehydrate frames on the sidewalk,
the binds locked young lifes shocked outlined in white chalk,
we fight spit growl and bark viscious Pitbull predators talk,
with words that injure the Soul perpetrators intention unknown,
innocence gone outgrown sense & judgement is blown,
similar to Pirate Cannons blasted to sink competitors afloat,
clueless to the trajectory of the Iron dying to gain Gold,
severing the adams apple as the reapers watch and gloat,
we're Angels left astray, goals decayed,we're living for Today,
fuck tomorrow, and forget yesterday, breathe dismay we sashay,
as we fill our bottles feast freely at The Grotto and try to fuck models,
agonized community collared with nothing more to Say Boy,
boarded ships looted quick new land to pillage, Ahoy!!!,
you Hunger to live like a Hustler, in a Penthouse, like a Playboy...


Streets flamin' frames pictures of raided labs where feds bagged and fed communities cocaine///
Homeless people treated in-humane, society snakes crack jokes as hope-less folks light fires in barrels to keep warm, can't afford to ride trains//
brainless campaigns bringin' minority camps pain//
Government funded planes hit buildings, conspiracy theories a game//
ciggarette smoke gangs target under-aged youth, cancerous lung effects, tel-a-lie-vison controls their brain //
smif n' wessun packin' thugs aim off a seeds frame, dizzy brain bandits murdered the same//
pain in the ass women cat-walking streets half-naked for a low price you can break it, noone's immune to this dis-eased game//
names of rappers on governments lists for awakening the masses, the n.w.o. masters want their heads on platters//

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
02-23-2007, 03:12 PM
Service with a smile,
Purpose with denial,
emegence of the vile,
vermin in great piles,
burdeoned with hate, towers,
instated with fake, cowards,
debate, they take hours,
we bake the cakes of power,
'relate our rates are sour,
we're paid to slave for hours,
blooming flowers are deflowered,
devoured by booming blasts,
bystandards consumed and cracked,
souls shattered like stacks of glass,
react respond retract,
to keep the masses dumb,
resonate a low hum,
the polls keep most numb,
vibrates the blow gun,
we wait for no one...

Create then destroy,
rebuild then avoid,
build hate then deploy,
it's a circle of deception,
it's all about perception,
beginning with the inseption,
of the presidential election,
the complexity of connections,
inevitably it's investments,
that dictate who's affected,
and who becomes neglected,
and what country's become subjected,
with sanctions, embargos and mandates,
genocide is man made,
as women children and babies,
are starved killed then crated,
away from the public eye,
to minimize the public lies,
that signify the troubled times,
just visualize the horrid crimes,
the news trivializes and hides from sight...

Father N Dangerous
02-23-2007, 03:34 PM
Nice feelin it Big Ben! not too complex and yet isn't too basic either. i always thought u had a good way of balance'n ya shit like dat. a real jewel right here...imma reply soon ;)

Father N Dangerous
02-23-2007, 04:02 PM
Service with a smile,
Purpose with denial,
emegence of the vile,
vermin in great piles,
burdeoned with hate, towers,
instated with fake, cowards,
debate, they take hours,
we bake the cakes of power,
'relate our rates are sour,
we're paid to slave for hours,
blooming flowers are deflowered,
devoured by booming blasts,
bystandards consumed and cracked,
souls shattered like stacks of glass,
react respond retract,
to keep the masses dumb,
resonate a low hum,
the polls keep most numb,
vibrates the blow gun,
we wait for no one...

Create then destroy,
rebuild then avoid,
build hate then deploy,
it's a circle of deception,
it's all about perception,
beginning with the inseption,
of the presidential election,
the complexity of connections,
inevitably it's investments,
that dictate who's affected,
and who becomes neglected,
and what country's become subjected,
with sanctions, embargos and mandates,
genocide is man made,
as women children and babies,
are starved killed then crated,
away from the public eye,
to minimize the public lies,
that signify the troubled times,
just visualize the horrid crimes,
the news trivializes and hides from sight...

and our Iris Inside are Eye Gives..
up.. like Tryin' ta Climb a High Cliff..
I just.. wanna clear my head like a Cinus..
Cloudy Surrondings... Surround my Advance..
Surround Sound Enhanced..How Bout a Chance..
to Ask Out Loud, why i was a Outcast All Along..
my Brothers Keeper, my Thought's no Longer able..
to keep my Concious Stable, Thank God for Mother Nature..
she Was there during labor, no pain could Erase Her Pain n Hurt..
she act's da Same but in da Back of her Brain N Nerves..
i lost my only Friend, my Big Bro.... Blood out Blood IN

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
02-23-2007, 04:05 PM
Peace W&D Thanks man I just had one of my bastard bitch property manager give me some fake ass smile while emailing my immediate manager to try and get me fired over some bullshit she was completely wrong about...which brought upon this quick jotting.

Father N Dangerous
02-23-2007, 04:07 PM
haha i i wish there were more situations like that...u don't write as much as you use too. but good seeing u again.

noel411
02-26-2007, 02:26 AM
Haven't seen anything new from you in a while, Ben. Nice drop. Good to see you're still writing.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
02-27-2007, 10:40 PM
Noel, Yeah man I write in spurts especially when pissed angered or saddend by current events or life....PEACE Noel

MaXiMus Da MaNtis
02-28-2007, 04:38 PM
id like to hear you ben over a beat......i think youd be nice

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-28-2007, 01:17 PM
My thoughts on paper cause shocks to neighbors,

enraged them were viewed as cracks in the pavement,

our days spent working hard just to pay rent,

the days spent away from our children is a design,

to capitalize and create a generation of criminal minds,

no child left behind public schools educate to pass tests,

general education is past tense as the rich live lavish,

with newly designed tests set for the masses to fail,

get banished to jail or become a second class citizen,

working as cheap labor once worked by the immigrants,

were living it the days of a police state,

now you can be searched or raided and treated with hate,

based on the possibility you may be illegal,

now tell me this isn't legalized evil,





subliminal lines read in the world papers,

continue to prayer to religious choice of savior,

as depression rises it will soon out number cancer,

so go get your phamcuetical drugs thats their answer,

enhancer brain famished all questions and no answers.

Father N Dangerous
03-09-2008, 04:03 AM
bump

J.T.S.
03-10-2008, 10:48 AM
Your writings like therapy just reading it, i alredy fell better,
You drop massive jewels