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Undiluted Karma
08-05-2010, 04:03 PM
I will post any lyrics as per forum requirements that I write in this thread. . I've been writing lyrics for a few months, but very randomly and as a sorta random hobby and I havent paid alot of attention to it so I consider these my sorta first verses. Constructive criticism is very welcome.
Peace

My rhyme verse will leave you dead in a hearse
So when I eject atoms and molecules disperse
I mastered the key to the universe
Hiatian witchdocters wouldn't dare even curse
Because to try and put a spell on me
will leave you three feet deep
inject your veins with PCP
ressurect bodies with yeast
its the beast from the East the venomous rhymer Emeritus bless up.

The worst part of it all is I haven't accomplished my master thesis, styles are so Devilish, he will be praying for Jesus
Cause' they worship the rhyme,
build a shrine
offer me bitches for their own peace of mind
cause at the end of the day this shit is God Cipher Divine.

I entered the stage with minimum wage
released my rage,
corrupt their mage, down their forcefield
force the motherfuckers to yeild,
decorate my shield with their intestines
make them think twice before they try and test mine

Because at the end of time, th end of humanity
there will be no one left
just my insanity,
schizopherenic I'll look in the mirror and praise my vanity
Say "Emeritus you are the greatest of all time
top 5 dead or alive straight from the Wu Corp killa bee hive"
Make fake emcees writhe in pain and anguish
Until im sane and vanquished
Till' i'm rage and famished
So all theres left to consume is my disciples own tomb,
leave nothing behind, so it goes without sayin' that I consume the womb.

Undiluted Karma
08-10-2010, 09:28 AM
Yo I'm here to spit this dart,
with the conviction of a man locked behind bars,
imprisoned by the system just for demonstration his numerical art,
creative murderer he tore they limbs apart,
decorated their bodies with Biblical scriptures,
sons feelings emoted through pictures"

But at the end of the day anger overcame his dreamed emotions
The devil in his head told him to cause a commotion
So deep was his devotion,
Then he instantly started to set it in motion
He constructed a potion, 12 parts anthrax
Blisters broke out all over the gaurds bodies caused them to writhe on their backs
All from being a crooked accountant for diverting fat stacks
Converted to a devious fiend constructing deadly hazmats

Strange thing was it was only in his dream, the demon told him to make those guards scream,
But in reality he learnt that life was just a fatality
And that killing people was just a normality.

THE MASON
08-12-2010, 02:31 PM
good shit

the more you write the more you will hone in on what your style is. but these are good starting pieces, all i can say is write from the heart and dont try to fake the funk.

peace, ill keep checkin in every so often

Undiluted Karma
08-12-2010, 02:38 PM
yeah im still finding my feet as they say
the subject matter is the difficult part, theres alot of things im interested in
much appreciated on the feedback

Undiluted Karma
08-23-2010, 09:11 AM
Shoot the troops,blood splatter over breakbeat loops
Emeritus never lies, always spittin the truth
Assault rifles, assorted snipers
poison your soldiers like venomous vipers
strike the cipher, put a scar on your face like Michelle Pfeiffer
Whos the best, put your rhymes to the test,
Set fire to the flame,
Emeritus reignitin' the game

Undiluted Karma
09-05-2010, 10:44 AM
Light a torch to your future funeral pyre,
harass your family till the day you retire
I heard of your plight through the wire,
yet you have the audacity to call me a liar,
Corrupt bankers, and stacks of guns,
I'll be waiting nearby
Till the clock runs
Till Death is by your side,
and your ready to ride,
Rest assured i'll be waiting with Cyanide.

Poison Flowerz!
09-07-2010, 09:45 AM
Yo I'm here to spit this dart,
with the conviction of a man locked behind bars,
imprisoned by the system just for demonstration his numerical art,
creative murderer he tore they limbs apart,
decorated their bodies with Biblical scriptures,
sons feelings emoted through pictures"

But at the end of the day anger overcame his dreamed emotions
The devil in his head told him to cause a commotion
So deep was his devotion,
Then he instantly started to set it in motion
He constructed a potion, 12 parts anthrax
Blisters broke out all over the gaurds bodies caused them to writhe on their backs
All from being a crooked accountant for diverting fat stacks
Converted to a devious fiend constructing deadly hazmats

Strange thing was it was only in his dream, the demon told him to make those guards scream,
But in reality he learnt that life was just a fatality
And that killing people was just a normality.

this was my favorite verse so far this is dope! keep it up G

Undiluted Karma
09-08-2010, 04:44 AM
thanks mate

Crackhead Bob
09-08-2010, 04:48 AM
Wanna roll with a dart real quick?

Undiluted Karma
09-08-2010, 02:15 PM
Wanna roll with a dart real quick?

what?

Crackhead Bob
09-08-2010, 03:48 PM
fo get it

Undiluted Karma
09-10-2010, 01:40 PM
Spit bars to the stars,
catch a one way to ticket to Mars
visit various constellations and alien nations,
so fuck material elevation
I bring acid trips
and fuck catching bodies I'll CIA a fool and make him catch a freudian slip.

My mind is like a fortress
can't penetrate the outershell
Get blown up like a grenade
Fed-ex the peices to Hell
First Class recorded delivery
I'll use your remaining flesh as part of my livery.
And to try and disrespect me is to meet your doom
Because your head will end up being a trophy in my living room wall.

Undiluted Karma
09-10-2010, 02:05 PM
Densely packed rhymes
means I'm under pressure to spit them in double time
So I compress them, zip them up nice and tight
So when I extract them
All you see is a shining light
I can adapt my flow to any elements
Rain, hail or snow, still benevolent
And I spit like the 90's but I'm still relevant

Undiluted Karma
09-15-2010, 06:48 PM
Vicious beasts traversing grimey city streets
Pack mentality,torn duality, out for some meat, bout to catch the next fatality
Shit's unreal but thats just reality
Lack of food for the monsters, lack of morals for humanity,
Orphans strive and struggle, strength in numbers, by the fireplace, warm and huddle.
A plague on the surface of the Earth, doomed from birth,
Abandoned foetus' therein they lie
Too young to die, too old to live,
Too small veins to apply the shiv.

mikhail213
09-16-2010, 06:05 PM
hott!!
keep building!

Undiluted Karma
09-16-2010, 06:10 PM
Weeping willows gaze out at a forlorn ocean
Human rights protestors hustle, make a commotion,
Bodies line the King's court,
Unsettling auras, people are projecting dark thoughts,
The smell of death in the air, test of the year,
So much destruction, how can I feel blessed to be here,
How it must stress to be weak,
How much blood can it leak,
The poor and the destitute,
Work the streets as prostitutes,
Sell your soul to the Devil, sell your snatch to the rats,
Let the victors reap the treasures,
Let them plant their seeds in abundant leisure,
No need to use contraception,
Got the Generals protection,
And if they start to complain, let fear reign,
Zip up your fatigues, put a bullet in their brains.

Undiluted Karma
09-16-2010, 06:15 PM
Many thanks on the feedback, Mikhail

mikhail213
09-16-2010, 06:21 PM
uwelcome

Undiluted Karma
10-24-2010, 08:57 AM
Deadly forest fires, spark thought,
Check out the mastermind I, trying to hold down the fort,
Just executed my general, he tried to tell a lie, I must confess,
he wasn't one of the best, a dumb soldier,
I had to put him to rest, none the wiser, just bolder,
No surprise there, but the enemy is weak, dissilusioned
while my forces stand strong, battle war cry, sing a song
wont be there long, before the bullets start flying,
protect the women and children they cant be dying.

haven't writted down anything on the corp for a while, I was in a MK frame of mind just wrote this quickly, its an aight verse nothing special

mikhail213
10-24-2010, 09:22 AM
ur rhymes are sick!

keep it raw

Undiluted Karma
10-24-2010, 06:21 PM
Muchos gracias for the feedback b, alot of people unwilling to do that shit

peace

Undiluted Karma
11-04-2010, 02:03 PM
Even my critics they say my lyrics are spectacular,
Brown Shakespeare they can't fuck with my vernacular,
I've got diastyrous schemes to being the rap game to its knees,
shatter its ligaments, and rip out its spleen,
Hell hath no fury when I demolish your team,
Assassinate the jury, Write an email to your mother while hearing you scream,
I'll single handedly, unilaterally, drain your batteries, your'e gonna have to call the cavalry, unlimited power its gonna take a while to unravel me.