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JKLmantis
08-06-2010, 04:20 PM
This was done in a CHU overseas with some spare time in Afghanistan. . .


Frontenac Part 1:

Futuristic Drones fly in the crimson colored skies,
Control all the lives in an apotheosis of hives,
Optical beam and alien bays, scorpion sting rays and war cries,
In slow motion—a mechanical cyborg walking through fire in a hallway,
My dream colorless but all grey, take a leap in a portal all the way!
Wishing upon the prey, ancient stone steps and bone sticks,
The dome splits, boneless,
Caves, with paradise waters reflecting a floating vortex,
Celestial cortex, underground mummies roam crypts, 24/7 with a mumbled lisp. . .
A highway road splits, thunderclap while a nature toad spits, a little boy trips—And falls forever in tunnel pit… burning sunken ship, the truncheon chips,
Vampire kun fu hits, clear out hundreds in one huge circle circumference,
Hell spawn abundance on final days of judgment,
--Gigantic centipede, villages all in greed, indestructible ninja creed,
The king’s request was denied, castles in the sky floating high,
Death stars above the high-rise, heliographic carvings in glowing arcs arriving,
Flashy spark winks, warp drive alien ships at a mid-night sighting,
The ghost keeps on writing, while the vampire keeps on biting,
Meditating on stone pillars, imagine floating steps into a spiral,
Spirits flying wild, shiny black pyramid stacked in one pile,
Gatling gun guardian protector of a stronghold,
A fallen lullaby by a sweet flute makes the un-open chest unfold,
Face painted warrior who preys is tall and bold,
A dragon sleeps with treasures full of armor and gold,
Invisible yet, self-destruct technique hopping through watery portals,
Purple cape phantoms and orchestrated anthems are forever immortal,
The wise oracle from the mountains with every word a dropped jewel,
Reflected crystals in multiple shapes in space igloos shimmering cool,
Render a holographic galactic battle by a press of a button,
Engulfed by the lustfulness in a harsh realm of f****n,
Under water (bubble dome buildings) cybernetic buildings for an industrial age by the dozens,
Once defeating the final stage becomes a newly chapter page,
Cave days to space-age, a simple ancient club will have your face break,
Flying tanks with afterburners, cannon balls and castle workers,
walking mechs suddenly transform in a bionical flex,
Into a jet that warps into the azure, so fast… it’s morphs into a metallic burning sphere,
Jagged edge spear, wise man with a beard, Unknown disease phenomenally cured, warp drive switches gears, war veteran makes a necklace with ears,
[Self-repaired maintenance shack for organic like surgery,
robotic arms programmed, your gun jams and operational] -omitted
a planet nothing but mercury, self-aid dome organic surgery,
a blade in the past with blue flames, a barren planet that’s mundane…
Advanced cyborg enhanced and planted with a new brain,
Zombies berserk near the bar, shotgun shells, dead in the car,
Holographic tour by Jupiter’s moons, then slowly descend upon Venus,
Power of the gods in ancient runes, discovered by pillars of ruin
Lightning planet of Venus, “Believe me, I’ve seen this. . . “
Traveling on an asteroid, half stoic and yet, humorous,
A bright light leaps a nuclear shockwave, white and luminous,
Bloody moon goon, apocalyptic doom shroom, a zombie goon steps over a landmine went, “ka-booom!” in the far a lantern loomed…
Metal alloy from another galaxy, bubble dome eco system in this faculty, self-sufficient--
Breathing air, white blinding glare from 4 suns,
gravity labeled high in spite you might weigh 4 tons, meanwhile 4 bums fight over store crumbs…
Jumping off a gargoyle and strike with an ice lance, the impact is so harsh
It brings forth an avalanche, shadow fire dance, mortar explosions in the background, wizards are from the black town, wannabe gangsters claiming Tactown,
Doberman pinchers on the track now,
soldier in a trance in the hot sands in the Afghastily lands…!
Evening golden sun set…by an old bench that’s wrecked…
With an arm around your girlfriend…her cozy soul slept…
—as beautiful as it gets, phoenix sun crest in the chest,
Comets winked in spectacular arches of Chinese calligraphy, a glimpse worth to see. . .
Wish upon a star, diamond shard capable of summoning Greek monsters,
Old chimeras sleep in blizzard cold winters, while the old man wimpers
Crystal orbs that prophesize future wars, heavy wing span soars,
Motion sensors, mechanical doors, inner-core fire sword, mid-night survival a chore,
At a rundown corner store, unfinished time machine sits galore, neon blue lights
In japanese Tokyo nights, no beginning or no end and yet, still ageless,
Never ending story that was ever so pageless, dragon shield wielded named Aegis,
Spiked bed and light speed travel familiarization in another generation,
Heavy marvel swing cast you off orbit, demon lord ram horns, hellfire burning torment,
Ungodly medusa face morbid, ghastly creature with 10 eyes horrid,
Massive green pastures, hills filled with a zillion orchids,
chased by flying zombies and machine gun shots while yelling, “Floor it!!!”
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bloody valentine, being born became a crime

I don't know what genre of writing this would fit into. . . Creative thought doodles/poetry/freeflow/ryhme I guess. . . ?? Thoughts and criticism is welcome. . . Thanks for reading. . .

-JKLmantis

War and Peace
08-13-2010, 03:15 PM
great stuff, thanks for sharing mantis

peace-

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
08-13-2010, 05:38 PM
damn some strong bars dude

Meditating on stone pillars, imagine floating steps into a spiral,
Spirits flying wild, shiny black pyramid stacked in one pile,
Gatling gun guardian protector of a stronghold,
A fallen lullaby by a sweet flute makes the un-open chest unfold,
Face painted warrior who preys is tall and bold,
A dragon sleeps with treasures full of armor and gold,

keep it up