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Mindsword
08-17-2010, 10:08 AM
its a litte messed up cuz some of the lines are a little too long, so their hard to flow right.. but here goes

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you think its just a rap so you dont even hear me
but im a missionairy, show you the lies, so you can see them clearly
i control my feelings, youre controlled by your feelings
you mean a thousand things, dont even know why you have your meanings
your subconscious fears decide what happens
your brain causing chemical reactions to external actions
youre a fucking moron, and you dont know shit
like right now i make you feel bad, so you want to ignore it
thats what im talking bout, youre retarded
youre a fucking little coward, and your weak hearted
you should kill yourself, do the world a favour
without people like you, noone would vote Guliani for mayor
nine layers of hell, and now youre gonna burn
but you dont believe in that shit, cuz you dont wanna learn
you just wanna confirm you own fucking illusions
a revolution is brewing and your a fucking nuisance
i hope youre the first to die, cuz thats what war is
and id rather it be you than some innocent girl in jordan
i would kill you myself, if there wasnt cops
so i put a spell in this verse so youll get fucking shot
just fucking randomly, and without reason
i mean besides that the fact that you guilty of treason, towards your own people

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and then it just stopped..

J.T.S.
08-17-2010, 01:15 PM
nine layers of hell, and now youre gonna burn
but you dont believe in that shit, cuz you dont wanna learn
you just wanna confirm you own fucking illusions
a revolution is brewing and your a fucking nuisance


hot shit dude !!

Mindsword
08-17-2010, 01:33 PM
nine layers of hell, and now youre gonna burn
but you dont believe in that shit, cuz you dont wanna learn
you just wanna confirm you own fucking illusions
a revolution is brewing and your a fucking nuisance


hot shit dude !!

thanks :p i guess

J.T.S.
08-17-2010, 02:14 PM
thanks :p i guess

C'mon man have some confidence bro!!

Mindsword
08-17-2010, 02:28 PM
thanks :p i guess

C'mon man have some confidence bro!!

ok sorry

G.B.
08-19-2010, 05:05 PM
Lol this was funny and interesting. Overall not bad but you could better your rhymes and technique.