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TeknicelStylez
10-10-2005, 09:10 PM
Here it is...


Them P.I.R emcee guys are pussys in rhyme//
Gee why are so many rookies trying to rhyme//
In shambles yall continue to Gamble with your life//
Get outta line I'll handle you like I handle my knife//
Quick to grab Pick a Fag than stick and stab//
I'll cut you and come back to pick the scab//
Can't reconsile But I'm wreckin childs//
Can be my next sons Next bodies on Tek's gun//
Expect one Hollow tips eject to inspect lungs//
And Scatter to fragments Shatter you faggots//
Batter you rabbits its a Matter of habits//

Spoken:

Let's start with spoken lifes worth less than a token//
At a 3 machine arcade best game being virtual charades//
Recent escapades include calling out Tek in serenades//
Your flow is more watered down than powdered lemonade//
You couldn't beat me in a fight if you had venom blades//
I'll rob you for your financial aid a substantial grade//
Come back to me when you been in an actual police raid//
If you met me in real life you would want peace made//
You couldn't hold heat if you had a hand held radiator//
You couldn't do the math if you had nine calculators//
Me greater than You like kids lessened sitting on escalators//
I'd murder King Shyt first but I'll save the best for later//
You've been dispersed first because your considered worse//
Your just a pussy waiting for Shyt's dick to insert//
It's always the lackey that gets murked instead of the jerk//
Joining a rap crew because because you enjoy the perks//
The difference between me and you is my guns don't squirt//
I'm herding you cattle nigguh hurry up ready my saddle//
Battles aint Impressive? Well at least I actually battle...//

Since you like stretched bars and multi's so much

If I'm Hungry I'll reach down your throat and take the food out ya stomache//
Shit aint funny while this clown got jokes I break the mood watch em plummet//
Nasty like tact Whites that get drunk and smack wifes on the low like black Lifes//
You the "bout to get Smacked Type", four fives make your face glow like black lights//
Get cracked like "BITCH LEARN HOW TO ACT RIGHT", make sure you remember That IIGHT!//
No joke the kids that nice flow smokes mics like Crack Pipes I give back Life//
Livin in critical local conditions acidical vocal emissions burn Spoken beyond recognition//
Bitch don't speak without my permission I run shit like the Tri-Lateral Commission//

King Shyt:

"King's" so full of "shit" it turned his feet brown//
"Introduce" you to my fist and let you "meet" ground//
You aint the "king" of "shit" unless it's geek town//
I heard you sing Legit got a real unique sound//
Reduce your amplification before you get a "beat down"//
Got bullets the size of balls so you can eat "rounds"//
"William Tell" this kid that I split "Apples" as well//
I might be compelled to miss if your heads swelled//
You got enough hot air to compete with baloons//
I put holes in Spitoons at your local saloons//
Space Baboon monkeys like you get sent to moons//
Buffoon animated character like you see in cartoons//
You couldn't be hot with no AC in the middle of june//
You couldn't blow if you were equipped to explode//
Full of yourself like deep water ships that implode//
You got a ritual to put yourself in battle mode//
You strip down and play a game of hide the toad//
High bass open rubbing your testicals on speakers//
You or Spoken I can't decide wich one is weaker//
Your mom or escorts? can't decide wich is cheaper//
Couldn't spit science if you had saliva in a beaker//
Funny how you remembered me I never acknowledged you//
Or any members of your fraternity like college crew//
I'm not "black" but I'll still make your eyes "blue"//
Focus on you and stop paying attention to what I do//

P.E.A.C.E

TeknicelStylez
10-10-2005, 09:27 PM
iight bet, told yall i would come back at yall, sorry I took so long, I was out all day I came back at like 8, it took me like an hour and a half to write.

jjh_38
10-10-2005, 09:37 PM
hahaa... yea

you came off pretty good on spoken with the multi part..

had some good lines in there, glad to see you aint afraid to bust back *cough...hollywood*

That spittin science with saliva in a beaker line was iLL..


peace

Ballad Ballistik
10-10-2005, 09:38 PM
that shit was ill

Grim Reapa
10-10-2005, 09:41 PM
hahaa... yea

you came off pretty good on spoken with the multi part..

had some good lines in there, glad to see you aint afraid to bust back *cough...hollywood*

That spittin science with saliva in a beaker line was iLL..


peace


hollywood doesn't battle

jjh_38
10-10-2005, 09:42 PM
here.. since this verse is directed at Tek.. ima post it here

Ayo

So Tek's thinkin he's iLL... but he aint seein the truth
The only time he see's a mic is when he's cleanin the booth
This aint even a fued... Kid, im jus spittin it real
Cuz 'Two for Tuesday' is the only time you 'Gettin a Deal'
Dont post anotha response.. you gonna live to regret
No one would 'feel' your rhymes if they was naked 'Double D sets'
You couldn't trouble these vets.. Your done 'n nobody miss you
I bleed you out til there's no pigment left to color your tissue
Thats the end of the issue.. Ya 'Tech' 9 aint spittin
I drop a freestyle script that rips the shit out his writtens
You aint clever.. jus a fuckin pretender.. a half wit
I'll 'mushroom stamp' this bitch.. call the comedy 'slap stick'
I'll grab ya rhyme tablet... and use pages to wipe my ass with
Couldn't 'bag bodies' if you was a pornographic actress
Slapped this kid so bad that... im leavin he mother 'sonned'
Come and get it mufucka... ill type you another one

jjh_38
10-10-2005, 09:48 PM
hollywood doesn't battle
pfff... thats why his names on half these battle threads

Grim Reapa
10-10-2005, 09:51 PM
you guys killed hollywood off

were are the other members of
PIR step up make tek RIP 1

jjh_38
10-10-2005, 10:10 PM
Your style is nothing Teknickel, so your biting the crew's style with this
You'll just break down like bitches wondering just whose child it is

.........nice

I'm more original, your basic, and you aint a veteran, sorry
Cus your punches are played out, like 1 dildo in a lesbian party

.....lmao

So your not sick, so fuck all your disses, your never designed fatal
And the only multies you've ever owned was tests of times tables

dope.. nice rebutte to his verse

Ballad Ballistik
10-10-2005, 10:12 PM
o damn

TeknicelStylez
10-10-2005, 10:12 PM
Thats whats up, iight yo I'ma call it a night. lol



And the only multies you've ever owned was tests of times tables

You got that line.

Grim Reapa
10-10-2005, 10:18 PM
Tek cant handle the verbal beating, wounds bleeding, by responding its yourself your defeating, careless nigga think you can step to gods and walk away scott free, By setting up this thread you turned yourself to a marquee, now P.I.R. is going on a, 'gangsta', emcee killin spree, that I can garuantee, Dont even think your walkin away from this your a pestilence, a picture of your in a bandanna was enough evidence to prove that your skills were irrelevant.....

im tired 1

jjh_38
10-10-2005, 10:20 PM
oh.. so i dont get any feed for my verse?

*cries in corner*

Grim Reapa
10-10-2005, 10:21 PM
u posted it before i dropped feedback lol

TeknicelStylez
10-10-2005, 10:28 PM
Genious got more names than a dog thats quick to run//
I don't need to change my persona I just stick to one//
Don't need to write more disses one will getchya done//
Words to tek are the same thing as clips to guns//
This genious is wasting tuition money majoring in music//
You require a college education to learn how to do this//
This kids like a bad detective he's always clueless//
Doofus when dealing with "baby's" I'm "ruth"eless//
All I need is one punchline to leave you toothless//

There you go, so you don't feel left out ;)

b.a.R.n.
10-11-2005, 03:44 AM
dope shit yall, teks first diss was NICE, spokens response as well, shit had me laughing multiple times

Locust
10-11-2005, 09:27 AM
props to spoke and king for slaying these clowns lol..
by the way, what is PIR?

Idiom
10-11-2005, 11:45 AM
phoney's in rehab?

TeknicelStylez
10-11-2005, 11:51 AM
props to spoke and king for slaying these clowns lol..
by the way, what is PIR?Who the fuck you callin a clown.

The Last Poet
10-11-2005, 04:19 PM
P.I.R's burning your pussies up, like an arsonist with tourettes!

~Shadows' Back~!

Grim Reapa
10-11-2005, 04:57 PM
PROPS and sickas the official groupie yo....lol

jjh_38
10-11-2005, 07:51 PM
P.I.R's burning your pussies up, like an arsonist with tourettes!

~Shadows' Back~!
AWW SHIT.. its ova now

Grim Reapa
10-11-2005, 08:04 PM
yo king u do audio?

b.a.R.n.
10-12-2005, 02:17 AM
LMAO

P.I.R. is Partnaz In Rhyme...consisting of me, KingShyt, Shadow Of Death, Clavikalz, 7th, BigBen, Blak Furyan, Kell16, and Sicka.

BTW, nice battle Tek.
7th? isn't that intellekt...?

SHRAP
10-12-2005, 02:36 AM
7th? isn't that intellekt...?
yea

b.a.R.n.
10-12-2005, 06:43 AM
'all of a sudden' PIR's status went down for me....7th is a fucking idiot

Ironlungz
10-12-2005, 08:55 AM
You couldn't hold heat if you had a hand held radiator//
You couldn't do the math if you had nine calculators//

Joining a rap crew because because you enjoy the perks//
The difference between me and you is my guns don't squirt//

Livin in critical local conditions acidical vocal emissions burn Spoken beyond recognition//
Bitch don't speak without my permission I run shit like the Tri-Lateral Commission//

You got enough hot air to compete with baloons//
I put holes in Spitoons at your local saloons//

Funny how you remembered me I never acknowledged you//
Or any members of your fraternity like college crew//

Keyboard dopeness! These lines took it tek's way for me... but King and spoken came TIGHT no doubt....

Potent1
10-12-2005, 09:37 AM
I don't know, im not really impressed ....



how you gonna call out these cats with wack rhymes... this site is too humorous for me.

Locust
10-12-2005, 10:53 AM
'all of a sudden' PIR's status went down for me....7th is a fucking idiot yea, Intellekt doesn't belong there imo

TeknicelStylez
10-13-2005, 10:31 AM
I don't know, im not really impressed ....



how you gonna call out these cats with wack rhymes... this site is too humorous for me.Well instead of laughing why don't you drop something and show us how it's done.

And I didn't call anyone out I responded.

Potent1
10-13-2005, 11:46 AM
Then dearie - I really wasn't talking to you, was I?

TeknicelStylez
10-13-2005, 06:57 PM
Maybe you should be a little clearer on your approach than.

Potent1
10-13-2005, 08:56 PM
you were responding - you weren't calling anybody out - so the reference clearly wasn't to you. should I write it with a crayon?

racist randy
10-13-2005, 09:00 PM
here.. since this verse is directed at Tek.. ima post it here

Ayo

So Tek's thinkin he's iLL... but he aint seein the truth
The only time he see's a mic is when he's cleanin the booth
This aint even a fued... Kid, im jus spittin it real
Cuz 'Two for Tuesday' is the only time you 'Gettin a Deal'
Dont post anotha response.. you gonna live to regret
No one would 'feel' your rhymes if they was naked 'Double D sets'
You couldn't trouble these vets.. Your done 'n nobody miss you
I bleed you out til there's no pigment left to color your tissue
Thats the end of the issue.. Ya 'Tech' 9 aint spittin
I drop a freestyle script that rips the shit out his writtens
You aint clever.. jus a fuckin pretender.. a half wit
I'll 'mushroom stamp' this bitch.. call the comedy 'slap stick'
I'll grab ya rhyme tablet... and use pages to wipe my ass with
Couldn't 'bag bodies' if you was a pornographic actress
Slapped this kid so bad that... im leavin he mother 'sonned'
Come and get it mufucka... ill type you another one
this is really hot shit

TeknicelStylez
10-13-2005, 09:34 PM
you were responding - you weren't calling anybody out - so the reference clearly wasn't to you. should I write it with a crayon?I'll tell you what you can do with that crayon.

Take your pms elsewhere, you're more annoying than a metapausal housewife.

Potent1
10-13-2005, 09:37 PM
lmao !!

jjh_38
10-13-2005, 09:38 PM
you were responding - you weren't calling anybody out - so the reference clearly wasn't to you. should I write it with a crayon?
so its to me and spoken then?

Potent1
10-13-2005, 09:45 PM
Diache - its really amazing how swift people aren't.

jjh_38
10-13-2005, 09:51 PM
Diache - its really amazing how swift people aren't.
lil smart ass punk ... what u comin with then?

TeknicelStylez
10-14-2005, 12:19 AM
Absolutely nothing, I read her battle vs Unseen, no doubt she got skill at writing, but battling? .... eh.... One of those "Look at me I'm Intellectual" cats.

jjh_38
10-14-2005, 11:00 PM
hehe.. its a she

TeknicelStylez
10-14-2005, 11:30 PM
Yea one of those bitchy ones.

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 06:01 AM
this is really hot shit
thanks dog... glad someone aint sleepin on my shit... word... alotta my lines take a lil thought... n ppl jus read over em not gettin da shit ... lol;

Potent1
10-15-2005, 10:51 AM
Absolutely nothing, I read her battle vs Unseen, no doubt she got skill at writing, but battling? .... eh.... One of those "Look at me I'm Intellectual" cats.lmao@a bitchy one- too funny!!! - dude battlin isn't all punches - sometimes its the better rhyme especially when you battle someone just as good --- but anytime you'd like to see my many different faces, I'll gladly show you the way.


im saying though -opinions are likes assholes - everyone has one rye - 3rd verse lost its wind for me... ::shrugs:: sorry you caught feelins.

TeknicelStylez
10-15-2005, 11:32 AM
Exactly and your opinion smells worse than mines. I can destroy you at your own game too. It's just that me king and spoken are crowd pleasers. We prefer punches that will make a crowd go Ooooooooo and laugh rather than words that will take them all day to figure out while they stair in abrupt silence. The difference is we battle in real life, wich you probably don't do. If you battle like that in real life you probably lose alot don't you?

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 11:49 AM
plain and simple.. punches win battles..... especially personals.

Potent1
10-15-2005, 12:16 PM
lmao - yall are hilarious - i hope you don' catch feeling when your shit gets criticized in the streets... i've been verbally battlin since you was a gleam in ya daddys eye and textin deaths since you was in bath tubs with rubber mutha fluffing duckies.....


my bad if you're not intelligent enough to cath on - but peep it bruh - I learned your language and mastered it, like everything I do.

Dupreez
10-15-2005, 05:32 PM
To my understanding, battling consists of Punchlines, Delivery (Text is hard to follow), lyricism, and personals. It doesnt deal on the knowledge you drop, or how you can make the world better, or how your vocab matches every word in your sentence, its just getting the job done. If you feel like posting your rhymes and drop knowledge, theres a Temple Of Darts right above this section. You can go post up there.

Now, until now, i havent seen your name anywhere. Must be a newbie.

For some reason, you just came in here and called us wack. And worst thing is, you dont have anything to back up what you say. You only have 1 verse here. I respect Tek cause he came back with a diss, and he didnt cry like the others did. But see? He knows how its done, cause hes skilled with it. You werent even metnioned at all, and you just HAVE to drop your 2 cents on here. Think before you post, and have some respectable work if you wanna diss someone. Verbally battle? You dont even structure you r verse properly. And I doubt anyone will feel your battles if you rhyming on how "sediments form to a boulder and kill you". Show n prove. Thats all that matters.

If you have anything else you'd might like to say, come with skill before you judge anything. 1

^^ There he goes...................... bitching again.:nonono:

TeknicelStylez
10-15-2005, 10:00 PM
Damn whats the beef with spoken.

And I assure you he's not intellekt, intellekt couldn't write like that if his life depended on it. He on some potent tip too. Writing rhymes attempting to be complex when it's an obvious they are trying to hard to be witty. You right there in shaolin, anytime you wanna meet up to battle we can do it. I'm 20 times nastier off the top than writing.

Grim Reapa
10-15-2005, 10:04 PM
spok3ns right tho in some ways

Potent1
10-16-2005, 12:07 AM
lmao - how'd it become us? whos spoken?? I really don't remember even talking to you. Your name doesn't stand out - so that means you aren't even dropping audios... ::shrugs:: I was talking to one person - I don't have to prove nothing to any of you. I thought the verse was wack, thats it. Yall should be embarassed, acting like bitches and catching feelings.

Visionz
10-16-2005, 12:17 AM
this thread is filled w/ tension, yall should get a massage therapist up in here.lmao. peace yall

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 01:20 AM
Dawg ignore her, go read her verse she wrote against genious, it's pathetic.

Poorly crafted multi's and excessive "Look at my vocabulary" 's

Visionz
10-16-2005, 01:39 AM
^felt like there was some half-steppin goin on in that one, Potent1's verse against me was better, no tounament involved. Don't know why you'd go into it with the mindset of underestimatin someone and leavin' shit to chance and catch an early exit. I'm trying to spit to the level of makin votes one sided and competition crushed. I know Tek and King feel me on that one, and Spoken you should been in that shit turnin lights out. Fuck it though, I know you got ur reasons.peace yall

Potent1
10-16-2005, 03:25 AM
its all good eric - the elements are trying to break me down out here...didn't come as strong as I wanted too.. It seems tho, im hated - thats a start .. :W

Visionz
10-16-2005, 03:35 AM
^nah, no disrespect or anything intended, it's just that really I thought from our battle that GA wouldve gotten crushed but instead I had to sit there and really analyze it to cast a vote. Next time, if ya life outside of here is stressin you out, take ya time, you had until Weds to drop a verse nawmean.there really wasn't a rush for you to drop. peace

$inista
10-16-2005, 04:32 AM
IMO spoken & tek sounds like butt budies...............................but i dont know thats just my opinion

hollywoodrealty
10-16-2005, 07:30 AM
kingshyt sent me a private message asking me why didnt i respond to being dissed in here, but i dont see where anyone talked shit about me, anyone wanna help clear this up?

jjh_38
10-16-2005, 09:07 AM
kingshyt sent me a private message asking me why didnt i respond to being dissed in here, but i dont see where anyone talked shit about me, anyone wanna help clear this up?This thread is tek comin back at us.... the verses concerning you are in the thread titled "P.I.R. Diss track... Dominating you pussies" .... its pushed back... but heres the verse i dropped.. you can read the thread for spokens


Fuck da butcher.. he only frontin’ like he ‘slicin shit up’
But like fat kids at try-outs.. he aint ‘makin the cut’
His whole names a contradiction.. like Mullato’s that’s racist
Cuz ‘Hollywood’ aint ‘Reality’.. it’s faker than face lifts
Kid, fuck ya meat cleaver.. I’ll hit’choo with street sweepers
Then I dig thru your skull with my clete sneakers
Dismissal of head grissle.. leave ya splattered throughout the pits of battle
I pull pistols, but you ‘fakin the draw’… like a fixed raffle
Runnin with P.I.R.?... Shit, ya can’t even run errands
I’m so ahead of your time.. I conceived both of ya parents
And who the fuck is ‘TEKNICKEL’?.. kid I blind you like ultra violets
King splits apples…and you fruitier than male hair ‘STYLISTS’
Knocked ya raps off axis.. get back to ya lab and practice
Couldn’t match this, cuz yall cats get.. ‘written off’ like taxes
Leave this miracle witnessed.. P.I.R. lyrical gymnasts
Weak raps with your wack battles.. but now ima end this
And what the fuck Dupreez.. what you comin at Spoken for?
I leave you covered in open sores.. sunk to the ocean floor
We’re only hopin for more.. Bring tha beef cuz we stay hungry
Keep it grundgy.. while you all shook, shittin ya stained undies
What’s the dealy yo? You clowns come thinking you funny, what?
I aint ‘Cheerios’.. but still I been makin your ‘honey nut’
We come together and diss you.. the illest fusion of phrases
And power to move glaciers.. yall be losin ya wages
Getting stuck up.. in front of this entire network
When I blacken ya eye sockets and pocket ya net worth
None of yall is above us.. even piloting aircraft
I ‘lace’ tracks.. runnin thru you like ‘eyelets’ of Airmax
Rip you clowns at the seams.. leavin your whole shit ruptured
Applyin pressure to puncture thru your molecular structure

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 07:36 PM
IMO spoken & tek sounds like butt budies...............................but i dont know thats just my opinionIt's called mutual respect something you obviously dont know about.

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 08:36 PM
Straight haters, nigguhz out in full force on some other tip.

Potent1
10-16-2005, 10:14 PM
Well SPoken wasn't even addressed and he's coming to your rescue, fucking captain save a ho to the rescue... he needs to get off his knees and wipe his chin...



apparently - people notice. more estrogen in here than the women locker room at the us open...

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 10:26 PM
Well SPoken wasn't even addressed and he's coming to your rescue, fucking captain save a ho to the rescue... he needs to get off his knees and wipe his chin...



apparently - people notice. more estrogen in here than the women locker room at the us open...Stick a cock in it, you sexually frustrated bull dyke.

Potent1
10-16-2005, 10:37 PM
lmao!!





you hate me rye?

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 10:54 PM
Na I just like raggin on you.

How could I hate somebody from the internet, you're just text to me na mean. I respect your style and I think you got good lyrics I just don't think you all that cracked up as a battle rapper. But if you callin me garbage I gotta defend myself na mean.

Potent1
10-16-2005, 11:47 PM
see, I never said garbage - i just didn't feel the verse. I saw other stuff that didn't blow. ::shrugs::


I don't mind snapping tho. =)

TeknicelStylez
10-17-2005, 12:17 AM
see, I never said garbage - i just didn't feel the verse. I saw other stuff that didn't blow. ::shrugs::


I don't mind snapping tho. =)Funny all I hear when you talk is, "Nag nag nag, I'm a female rapper with no recognition, Nag Nag Nag".

Na I'm just fuckin with you LoL....

I think we gon battle in the tourny, I hope so because that shit will be ferocious. Best battles are always the ones with feelings mixed in em. I'ma get atcyu werd is bond.

Potent1
10-17-2005, 06:42 AM
lol - whomp whomp



i canno wait papa!

hollywoodrealty
10-17-2005, 11:14 AM
click the link mofo's
http://www.wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=10817