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War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:33 PM
THE HIGHLANDER

I'm a spiritual highlander
my lyrics hit intense listeners and innocent bystanders
the intent's to uplift His scripture and defy slander
it's a rhyme extravaganza this is not your average banter
stanza after stanza gives props to the Father and stops propaganda
finishing His business and living as a consistent witness sits atop the memoranda
an exercise in Christian fitness and my equipment is manna
when my mission's done I wanna sit with the Son and watch the sunrise from Heaven's veranda

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:34 PM
QUESTS WERE WED

squarely written, scarcely read
one with vision of this precision is rarely bred
his wisdom's been hidden
unfairly forbidden yet very carefully spread
I've shared Bread
my mental treks the breadth where lesser men have barely tread
some detested, some scarily fled
some voluntarily followed as I unwarily led
burdens once carried get shed
nary a word is unnecessarily said
let us then tarry instead
remembering Mary's blessed Son bled to let the dead bury their dead
quests were wed
yes, wherever there's fellowship, surely it is there that I will rest my head

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:35 PM
REMNANTS OF MEN

hymns overflowing with gems pass poetically thru my brain stem
enter the left hemisphere and get my 3 anatomical planes hemmed
nocturnal.. I daydream in widescreen HD REM
my genetic code is read then sent in strands that spin at infinite RPM
textured more complex than any temple erected by Christopher Wren
the gods catchin wreck in the sector and his grin is sinister again
a tenured penman who extends from the descendants of Shem
my index bends until a blend of scripture and Zen makes remnants of men

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:37 PM
PUCE

a peaceful theologian spoke metrical poems through PC modems
holy, though mostly deemed theoretical like the prose of medieval Trojans
devotional slogans slowly molded to produce the erosion of evil omens
he chose puce and broke wholly loose from the moral corrosion of Caesar's Romans
he opened more domes than Homer and rode home like a lordless shogun
order restored by the reddened-sword holder whose warrior code is 47 Ronin
emboldened soldier glows hot releasin' shocks like nova explosions
unique flow pops like street-copped glocks leavin' hoe's optical lobes frozen

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:38 PM
THE OFFERING

I'm a wiseman who grasps degrees that befuddle Master Masons
I decapitate emcees and capture sacrificial blood in alabaster basins
those who falter baste in atonement over bronze-grated altars
their remains scatter in the ocean as I narrate from John's sacred psalters
the covetous get crushed with one subtle utterance
they haven't advanced in substance to understand the sustenance of the covenants
in fine dress my deaconess prepares feasts and trods the winepress
for Zion's guests who seek peace knowing with God is where they'll dine best

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:39 PM
DON'T GO AGAINST THE GRAIN

I harvest raps then carve the caps of cats that go against the grain like a thresher
craft mathematically exact abstract graphs that slash dimensional planes like M.C. Escher
a wealth of clever legerdemain invades brains and maintains insane pressure
self-ordained to reign forever so there ain't no lane for no lame to be proclaimed successor
see, son rose on the third day and on the seventh I rested
a poet whose prose and wordplay is Heaven-sent and will never be bested
my skills still haven't crested yet my benevolence is ever requested
with His blessed presence I'm well invested hence my development will never be arrested

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:41 PM
SAW

ya gods juggular got gauzed but it didn't pause the spill at the sawmill
magicians in awe of the slaughter the kid'll flip visual raw like its Vaudeville
audible piff riddles ya dome like Swiss bricks my clip's long as a trombone
avid for bad acid trips.. spit sick.. I'll sic a rabid Pit to go gnaw on ya jawbone
particular with vics a soot-dipped sickle inflicted the death blow
picks with perpendicular sticks dig six-foot pits in which bitches'll rest low
dip quick and ditch the shits.. slip clean off.. a most wicked and sinister scene
hidden .5th at the hip'll lick clips at the pigs that play close and wish to intervene

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:43 PM
THE ILLEST IN MICHIGAN

I'm the illest in Michigan, make Eminem look like Gilligan
where I'm from, niggas trick whips with spinners on winterized Michelins
crush green, pack iron and pimp links like Phil Mickelson
rush scenes, blast pistols and big-up queens like British militiamen
chicks birth illegitimate kids that be sickly and illiterate
quick evictions and long bids that consist of rigorous imprisonment
visits and kites diminish the plight but peaceful nights be limited
pitiful site, criminals released to streets repeat cycle and go right back in again
still, millions of Christians with religious conviction get it in and be missionin'
positioned as strictly fastidious and oblivious to negative stimulus and its conditionin'
War and Peace kickin the wickedest shit since Killah Priest spit heat on 'Elizabeth'
before your deceased best beat ya feet and kill the iniquitous beast that ya livin with

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:47 PM
THE CRUEL PROSPECTOR

I have an extensive history of offensive victories
a sudden switch to the defensive would be senseless and contradictory
thus once again I press ahead aggressively
reaching fresh tactical objectives manifests in enemy deaths addressed consecutively
casualties stack up as I casually pack up
I simply have an affinity for leaving everything in the vicinity infinitely jacked up
bitches best get with the Trinity and pick ya divinity back up
aerial drops blast burial plots: cadavers wrapped in shallow sandtraps clapped up
got a knack to re-enact graphic combat flash-backs with exact precision
traffic illicit writtens and amass vast provisions after I ransack any likkle class or division
the cruel prospector shootin dual-barrel shots at the pop sector
fools' peril in duels fuel the true-school reflector's resurrection of the top-notch God texture

War and Peace
09-14-2010, 01:50 PM
STRAIGHT NO CHASER

can't sit and wait, I'm destined to be greater
I bait fate's line then blank it like an eraser
its a waste of time to filtrate Grace, I take it straight no chaser
I blanket cyberspace with rhymes in the likeness of fiber-optic lasers
traitors try to calculate the bit-rate but equate to pixelated haters
blatantly vie to desecrate the high Estate and assimilate later
Satan's way is fake, he wades in hot lakes of fiery vapors
as they of divine faith congregate at Zion's gate to embrace and kiss the face of the Creator

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-14-2010, 03:57 PM
oh yeah nice work WaP

noel411
09-15-2010, 12:09 AM
Just had a quick read of the first couple of drops. I liked the rhyme patterns and overall structure and content, but couldn't quite catch the flow. Seemed uneven with some overly long lines especially. But it might well just be the way I'm reading it. You've probably got a structured flow I'm not catching.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-15-2010, 08:15 AM
i wished cha would have fleshed out "The Highlander" rap shit would have been dope

War and Peace
09-21-2010, 05:08 PM
ONE MAN REGIMENT

this is the testament of a one man regiment
devilish men get covered in dust and sediment for negative sentiments
sinners with a lust for mistrust and pestilence are left tentative and penitent
as a gust of wind, I usher in a fresh presence of unprecedented eminence
never've been hesitant to invest in betterment
confessed my sins, professed Him; then my life was blessed with much less detriment
accepted the pen and expressed messages that held special resonance
exercised my intelligence and developed a poetic ethic that blends witness and eloquence
never will I scribble written remnants that get rendered irrelevant
this is lyrical and grammatical excellence with an extra-exceptional sense of reverence
my position is evident in my preference for scriptural prevalence
my mission's to ascend yet remain humble like the biblical peasants in Egyptian settlements
hence, without listlessness or impediment I'll press ahead toward Heaven's residence
where an infinite and incomprehensible elegance is extended by the most Generous and Benevolent

J.T.S.
09-22-2010, 11:54 AM
this is the testament of a one man regiment
devilish men get covered in dust and sediment for negative sentiments
sinners with a lust for mistrust and pestilence are left tentative and penitent
as a gust of wind, I usher in a fresh presence of unprecedented eminence
never've been hesitant to invest in betterment

crazy rhyme schemes !

Guarded By Martyrs
09-27-2010, 04:45 PM
So glad you made you own thread at last.


ya gods juggular got gauzed but it didn't pause the spill at the sawmill
magicians in awe of the slaughter the kid'll flip visual raw like its Vaudeville


Assassin


can't sit and wait, I'm destined to be greater
I bait fate's line then blank it like an eraser
its a waste of time to filtrate Grace, I take it straight no chaser
I blanket cyberspace with rhymes in the likeness of fiber-optic lasers
traitors try to calculate the bit-rate but equate to pixelated haters


Setting high standards


this is the testament of a one man regiment
devilish men get covered in dust and sediment for negative sentiments
sinners with a lust for mistrust and pestilence are left tentative and penitent
as a gust of wind, I usher in a fresh presence of unprecedented eminence
8O

never've been hesitant to invest in betterment
confessed my sins, professed Him; then my life was blessed with much less detriment
accepted the pen and expressed messages that held special resonance
8O

exercised my intelligence and developed a poetic ethic that blends witness and eloquence
What !!!!

never will I scribble written remnants that get rendered irrelevant
this is lyrical and grammatical excellence with an extra-exceptional sense of reverence
Seriously ?!?!?!

my position is evident in my preference for scriptural prevalence
my mission's to ascend yet remain humble like the biblical peasants in Egyptian settlements
....

hence, without listlessness or impediment I'll press ahead toward Heaven's residence
where an infinite and incomprehensible elegance is extended by the most Generous and Benevolent

Pushing Picasso O.

Some masterpeices in here already
And it wont take long for this thread to reach a grand stature....
Good move.

THE MASON
10-02-2010, 12:35 PM
dope thread WnP

definitely enjoyed each piece, but that last joint is uncut dope into the veins

Prophet Picasso
10-03-2010, 01:45 PM
Are y'all readin these prophecies? OTB giving away eternal life for free, y'all better come drink from the cascade!

War and Peace
10-18-2010, 07:57 PM
THE MAVEN


arrows depart the archer's bow like martyred crows
the dark-hearted marcher artfully parsed his parchment to mark his foes
a chosen poet that prefers flowed verses as opposed to prose
slowly embarks on global searches whose start and purpose no one knows
he preys on evil pagans who wage aimless wars and blaspheme
praises of a blameless sage neatly conveyed on sacred pages more than passim
the rhyme jeweler, each line clean so even narrow-dome fools see the gleam
keeps appeasement cream then flees like agreements between Pharaoh the ruler and Ibrahim
a language maven, he evades vague statements and strays from faces graven
prays in patient cadence while plagues of raging ravens raid then raze their safe havens
he'll place dismay and anguish on enemies like David's slayed assailants
and stay in the Way of the Savior to prevail against deadly agents of Satan's surveillance

War and Peace
10-18-2010, 07:59 PM
THE SHINING

my pen creates phrases of praise that will never fade
I decorate pages like the ancient blades that patiently abraded Chinese jade
I'll take a clay spade and shape the frame of Satan's grave
for the Savior exclaimed that they who betray His sacred name forsake a great crusade
the war I fight inside is soulful and holy
I write to show hope and enlighten, though cold is the plight of the poor and lowly
I was blind before, but now my chorus of glorious noise soars boldly
with restored sight I recite poems of the victorious joy that pours from the Lord solely
He can erase sadness and fill lives with gladness
He gives me strength as my eyes span the length of this world of madness
some nights the stars hide in dark skies like Light in the lies of apartheid
but the Messiah's life was archived on the far side of time then reprised as my heart's guide

War and Peace
11-21-2010, 07:43 AM
CONSTANT ELEVATION

bitch ya shit is despicable, ya skills is a bit limited
when I spit its with an unpredictable wit and niggas sit riveted
ya little cliques prohibited in my district this is Nineveh revisited
I'll sickle and pick the image you depict then dig a ditch bigger than RZA did
kidnap cats and give 'em edited Hellenistic texts with encrypted messages
grid map ya cap then inject a biblical wisdom that resurrects rescinded vestiges
instill a literary and linguistic discipline that perfects your journal creations
then fulfill your spiritual itinerary as you accept the blessed position of eternal Salvation

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
11-22-2010, 07:23 AM
yo WaP get at me for something soon, and keep up the dope work