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HappyKillah 02-07-2011 07:28 PM

Battle?
 
No one too good lol. idk if im good or not

bad boy T 07-31-2011 08:20 AM

I'll battle

liquidswordchamber36 10-06-2011 09:55 PM

im also down to battle.

Mattlocka 11-01-2011 01:49 PM

set it up liquidswordchamber36

liquidswordchamber36 11-05-2011 11:24 PM

ill bust your fucking melon
whein im rappin i cant help but start yellin
i smoke poppers
while doing backflips over helicopters
i sip on disiel tea with green lobsters in flying saucers
i stay hidden like monsters
whther i be under ya bed
or beneath the stairs
i spit on ya forehead and rip out ya penial hairs
no one really cares
id one punch knockout bears
i take journeys on a magic carpet
why are the chicken wings growing inside my armpit?
my favourite brekfast meal is ham pancakes
you offered me a ciggarete i say no thanks!!
but i appreciate the offer
to be perfectley honest id rather not be a constant cougher
mattlocka rhymes so weaak
please dont ever try and speak
i personally reccomend you get your brain excamined
i rip out your spinnal cord barehanded

Mattlocka 11-06-2011 04:16 PM

Hi Yo
Battle me you'll never win
I spit parargraph hotter then flames of lava
Architect would'nt bring the drama
Because my mind rage telekniatic energy
Cut you down with lightsabers, for trying to battle me lyriclly
You couldn't handle this I throw bloody knives
Knocked him down knowledgeable rhymes
Watch this missle inject and explode
Deflect bullets witth a forcefiled green todd
Hiject helicopter blades and cut you with them
I see you peeping behind curtains
Because you scarred of this ass waping for sertain
Get punch with glasses on you is light as a feather
When I kick you off a escalator

liquidswordchamber36 11-06-2011 05:41 PM

i stomp on the skull of you innocent infant
with rugged hockey equipment
im a runaway juvenile delinquint
mouth foamin regergated lubricant
i remove the tissue from your ligament
and bang the fuck outta it like a drum instrument
inject your bloodstream with a horrifying stimulant
im considered the most annoying
hells open devils employing
step out the shade
slice you with my hattori hanzo blade
slippin grade
from skippin to smoke & blaze
its not a faze
my mind is locked in a mental maze
unholy wicked wayz
flaming rhymes leave your ears looking like a blunted ashtray

Mattlocka 11-06-2011 06:39 PM

Hi yo
Bust companion see the size of my fist
Smack ya teeth out based on concetrate list
Throw cloak on rewind never Averger
Fuck this boy get cut out like coconut
Ice strom freeze you habbiting bike nut
Dangerous instrument get stab with a fork
This gun divides sick fuck in half
Working swords mation picture rapes interior weather channel
Unseen paper telepation bars damn take a bath
I'm bigger brown art of war wesley snipes path
Statelites system light beam the Earth
Roation dirt you a deadman dick kisser
My hands colder because Im mundering you

liquidswordchamber36 11-06-2011 07:50 PM

haunted by death sleepers
fuck school and teachers
your blood prints lead back to my sneakers
smoked chronic below the bleechers
approached by cheeba creepers
kidnapped by cryptid creatures
raised by nocturnal grym reepers
avoding all goverment heat seekers
givein your old geziers
physcical seizures
mystical bleeders
at the sight of my freightful facial features
meat eaters
tyrasourous rex with meat cleavers
insert them into non belivers
toss they dead body into the neighbors freezers
repersent the w for wu & weezer
get your eyes poked out by my toothpick tweezer
they are 2 kinds of luck
how much you wanna bet yours is bad
you stupid fuck
all sentences end with periods
all my rhymes end mysterious
i leave your brains and horrible lyrical slangs
along with other remains
in the gravel
another victorius rap battle
vulcan death pinch ya adams apple
spit sulfuric acid on ya tunge
rip out and smoke your resido lung

Mattlocka 11-07-2011 12:43 PM

Hi Yo
Golden Barz better then commerical rapes
Whole forettess catch laser beam system capes
When I attack leave you flat on the suferes
In superspeed rip neck off in a distance
Catch darts to the mug,Smash you like a bug
Rain power shit, Bet him with wipes with pieces off glass glue to it
Select weapon matix menu,Get slit into two
Swing swords blade protool,Stop playing with like a fool
Do drive byes with machine gun,Hit you with Thor hammer into the sun
Burn you down to ashes,Cain saw your inter organes
Blast you with pyriamid,Advance thoughts then Profresser X
Marvel at puch lines,Cave your chest in slice ya ears off
You get puch in allys,For talk weak shit in battles

liquidswordchamber36 11-07-2011 09:32 PM

aight 3 rounds im good. Lets get some votes on the winner?

TeknicelStylez 11-07-2011 11:25 PM

liquidswordchamber36

Verse 1



Summary: I thought the shit was hysterical, the flow was on some laid back hyped shit like Craig Mack status, I was rolling with the imagery.

I didn't feel like the threat was serious though, you weren't personal with the opponent.


Quote:

i spit on ya forehead and rip out ya penial hairs
no one really cares

Quote:

you offered me a ciggarete i say no thanks!!
but i appreciate the offer

Maybe a little more vicious with the humor next time, try to use your creative imagery in a more violent matter, stab into the nigga.




Verse 2


Quote:

i stomp on the skull of you innocent infant
with rugged hockey equipment
im a runaway juvenile delinquint
mouth foamin regergated lubricant
i remove the tissue from your ligament
and bang the fuck outta it like a drum instrument

.That's what the fuck I'm talking about, you started this verse out tough. Good Imagery and decent multiple word play.

Quote:

from skippin to smoke & blaze
its not a faze
my mind is locked in a mental maze
unholy wicked wayz


Than you started to die out around here, and managed to pick up back to your target in the end. Still a complete solid verse, humorous and vivid.



Verse 3



I like the rhyme scheme


Quote:

repersent the w for wu & weezer
get your eyes poked out by my toothpick tweezer


Shit is dope, definitely felt the multi's in this verse.

Quote:

they are 2 kinds of luck
how much you wanna bet yours is bad
you stupid fuck
all sentences end with periods
all my rhymes end mysterious


These lines had me laughing.

Quote:

i leave your brains and horrible lyrical slangs
along with other remains
in the gravel
another victorius rap battle
vulcan death pinch ya adams apple
spit sulfuric acid on ya tunge
rip out and smoke your resido lung
Than you went to the throat for the finisher. The third verse was the stand out!



Matlock's summary, and my pick tomorrow.

Mattlocka 11-08-2011 10:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez (Post 2167589)

Matlock's summary, and my pick tomorrow.

My bad cool

liquidswordchamber36 11-10-2011 12:17 PM

Thanks for the feedback and im looking forward to Matlock's summary along with the winner!

Mattlocka 11-23-2011 09:20 PM

That it he taking long with the vote I won.


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