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RADIOACTIVE MAN 02-02-2013 02:12 PM

Graveyard shifter-command of chain (produced by xluge)
 
enjoy

http://soundcloud.com/graveyardshift...ter-command-of

apreciate your time:thumbup:

THUGNIFICENT 02-02-2013 05:28 PM

im a give you my honest critique

you got a good voice (meaning it doesnt make me wanna cut the track off) but you gotta work on ennunciation. a lot of the words slur together and i cant really understand what you saying. this might be part of the flow too, i think you should slow it down a little, a lotta times it sounds forced.

hook is aight, mic presence is strait. bars are good enough. nothing quotable but nothing embarassing. hook had the best lyrics in all honesty.

ultimately i like the beat more than the rap. keep doing you, keep working. 1.

RADIOACTIVE MAN 02-02-2013 06:19 PM

Appreciate that...definitely work in progress..thanks for that

UNCLE RUCKUS 02-08-2013 04:37 PM

This is dope bro I hear u clearly I agree u have a unique voice but if dosent detract from listening if anything it's a plus that you don't sound like everyone else

RADIOACTIVE MAN 02-10-2013 11:26 AM

i knew i wasnt tripping..thanks a million bro. thanks for peeping

Uncle Steezo 02-11-2013 04:39 AM

i aint gonna lie, when i first heard you shifter, i thought you were from the UK hahahahahah. i think dude is confusing your minnesota/ghanian accent with slur. lol
i think it makes your sound unique. sometimes you need a second listen maybe a 3rd to catch all the lyrics, but thats a good thing if i WANT to come back and try to decipher the rhyme, as opposed to saying "fuck this jibbersh" and pressing pause. lol

RADIOACTIVE MAN 02-13-2013 07:36 PM

good point fam

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS 02-13-2013 08:39 PM

Dope stuff


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