WINNER----->adedwutang Vs J-Man
 

YO the last one didnt go dat gr8 also lost da thread lol but dats cos i didnt rly have ne time but this is an open challenge just to one Emcee out dere to have a god wid me, im just starting up so probs wont b gr8 but plz i wanna battle

ASAP!

ey yo step back kid or u can catch a bid/
playin it off like u dont kno wat u did/
lemme get rid of this dude on his open challenge battle/
ima drive u off like i was herdin cattle/
leave ya ass in pain like u rode a horse wit no saddle/
lets play ur favorite game, i tell a tale and u tattle/
the caption for ya avatar is HE DID IT MAN DONT LOOK AT ME/
ima make u retire before u start just so u can c/
dont challenge the best when ur weak/
cuz u inevitably will b beat/
ill take on anything that u can bring/
like a broken bat held togther wit string/
homey ya shit just dont swing/
ima finish off real plain, simple, and sweet/
u just been raped, ur no longer fresh meat/

get at me-

u on bout rapping me yeh right,
fuck off ass rapest go fight for ur right,
to marry other men, n ill say it again,
your rhymes cuz they ain't that tight,
just like u press, i aint that fresh,
but i dont care i here to recompress; this rap industry
u sounding like John Cena and you can't see me,
u clam ur the best and i am weak,
step off bitch you bout to be beat,
down and cuz u aint coming bak,
im droping these lyrical bombs,
like babies from the new found moms,
im glad you took up da chance,
cos ill b bk cos i can hear the chants,
they're callin for J-Man not some wanna be Peter Pan

i think that adedwu took this one,because, his punches hit harder and his verse made a lot of sense

J-Man keep working at it your first battle is always the toughest

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yo chrz man i thought i was gettin weak towards the end but hey i gotta learn some how so 1-0 adedwutang

ey yo lets get some votes people
get at me-

ey yo step back kid or u can catch a bid/
playin it off like u dont kno wat u did/
(Half-decent opener.)
lemme get rid of this dude on his open challenge battle/
ima drive u off like i was herdin cattle/
(Decent punch here.)
leave ya ass in pain like u rode a horse wit no saddle/
lets play ur favorite game, i tell a tale and u tattle/
(Okay, first line could be mistaken for some homo line. Decent punch nontheless.)
the caption for ya avatar is HE DID IT MAN DONT LOOK AT ME/
ima make u retire before u start just so u can c/
(Decent punch, playin' the avatar, good.)
dont challenge the best when ur weak/
cuz u inevitably will b beat/
(Okay, not good punch. :frusty: Played concept.)
ill take on anything that u can bring/
like a broken bat held togther wit string/
homey ya shit just dont swing/
(Good punch here.)
ima finish off real plain, simple, and sweet/
u just been raped, ur no longer fresh meat/
(Decent closer.)


u on bout rapping me yeh right,
fuck off ass rapest go fight for ur right,
(Some multis, but end rhyming the same word sucks. Not too good of a opener here.)
to marry other men, n ill say it again,
(Maybe a bar in itself? Half-decent. Played concept. Should've been worded different for a better punch. :frusty: )
your rhymes cuz they ain't that tight,
just like u press, i aint that fresh,
(Really, this verse is lookin' kinda choppy to me. And you sort of dissed yourself here....)
but i dont care i here to recompress; this rap industry
u sounding like John Cena and you can't see me,
(Half-decent punch here.)
u claim ur the best and i am weak,
step off bitch you bout to be beat,
(.....Half-decent at best here.)
down and cuz u aint coming bak,
im droping these lyrical bombs,
like babies from the new found moms,
(First line = why is it here? Rhymes with nothing in this. You're bragging on yourself here. You BATTLE on the BATTLEFIELD. Bragging on yourself is like taking a knife to a gunfight and talkin' shit.)
im glad you took up da chance,
cos ill b bk cos i can hear the chants,
(....Half-decent.)
they're callin for J-Man not some wanna be Peter Pan
(Half-decent at best closer.)

Vote : Adedwutang
Verse was stronger then his opponent's. Harder punches, better flow, structure, etc.
J-Man you just need some pointers and some elevation. Keep battlin'. Experience is the best teacher. Don't brag on yourself in battles unless it's VERY BRIEF. Don't ever do a bar in a battle just about yourself. The point of battling is to DISS YOUR OPPONENT. GET AT THEM!
Make your battles "Classic".

fuck Nightwolf simple as that

I vote for adedwutang

3-0, call it a knockout, u did pretty good for ur first battle j-man, just remember to keep writin and youll get better since u still really yung
get at me-

well m8 yeh ill post dis on the stats 1 deafeat lol but im here just to have a good time rly maybe ill hit u bk l8r some time for rematch

no doubt man, battles to build, aint nothin betta
get at me-

yo vote ppl we need some votes

flow - J
vocab - adedwutang
w/p - adedwutang
creativity - tie
punches - adedwutang


good battle , adedwutang gets my vote here

just came lil stronger than J , peace