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Jabba Jaw 08-16-2005 10:24 AM

quick verse
 
im new here so ima juss drop a lil sumthin n see what yall think

fuck the pearly gates, im bein followed by a black cloud
since an early age, ive hung around wit a wack crowd
caught up in wirly ways, n packin gatts that clap loud
not the violent type im the silent type in the back ground
i wear my hat down n never back down from wack clowns
who think they hard cause they pack now, im in the street lights
my speech type i keep tight n never be seen with the weak type
ive seen some bleek nights, seen shoot outs and street fights
i paints a pretty picture wit a witty scripture wen i squeeze mics
you know my steez right, i aint no gangsta or a drug dealer
you gots no love for me, it dont matter i got no love either


juss a lil sumthin

ramel 08-16-2005 11:00 AM

Re: quick verse
 
Quote:

fuck the pearly gates, im bein followed by a black cloud
since an early age, ive hung around wit a wack crowd

YO YOU GOT MAD SKILLS
But........ummm.....
Why not say FUCK THE BLACK CLOUD you're in as OPPOSE TO SAYING F@%K the pearly gates.
God don't do bad things .
That black cloud is the devil trying to blind you from visualizing the beauty of the "pearly gates" within you.
Here's my response thou...........
Fuck the black cloud/ for confinding us to a wack crowd/
Let's find the pearly gates/ and bless our sons at a early age/
1love

Jabba Jaw 08-16-2005 11:29 AM

Re: quick verse
 
yeah i coulda worded it better
thanx for the feedback n help man preciate it

ramel 08-16-2005 12:11 PM

Re: quick verse
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by 83 raw
yeah i coulda worded it better
thanx for the feedback n help man preciate it

Man......It's all good.
PEACE OUT.
Hold ya head!!!


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