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Valkis 05-11-2010 12:52 PM

VOTES NEEDED Valkis Vs Dusk
 
5 bars (10 lines)
Due 24 hrs.
G/L

Valkis 05-11-2010 01:15 PM

It's clear as he's typing and proving that he's taking a liking to losing,
And what your writting is stupid, so I remove disgrace, like a final solution, *
I render him gay and so he's like an unwanted package; I send 'um away,
Bitch whut? It's like time's mixed up, Dusk won't emerge at the end of the day,
Beneith me, the earth is burning, dude screams like we heard him cumming,
Prepares to fuck and aims his but, wouldnt make the cut like a nervious surgeon,
This man's harmless, like he's a soft paraplegic humantarian......and armless,
A killer? Get fucking real, this guy won't touch the steel, stays from black markets, *
He contests my anarchy? Nah Blood squirts as I wreck his arteries,
He couldnt make me dizzy, will never see double D aside breasts and batteries.

* Dusk Race
* Touch the Steal

Valkis 05-11-2010 01:18 PM

I changed it to 5bars. Origionally I ment 8 lines not 8bars, so I fucked up there dude. Make it hot man.

oDoUoSoKo 05-11-2010 08:25 PM

ok i got u

oDoUoSoKo 05-11-2010 10:03 PM

lyrical content causin cataclysms, the shit is big
criminal complex, 'course the vandalism up in ur sig's
the only crimes on record valkis, unknown in my necka
the woods, im muhammed welcome to the rhyme mecca
your good but im better, take shears to adams apple
make rears that have an asshole take fear when havin battles
aint queer, just have axl rose sort of swagger, guns n roses
bought a dagger, some explosives, slaughter battlers, valkis knows this
oughta battle online knowin ya talents hopeless
and no one would show up, since u suffer from halitosis

oDoUoSoKo 05-12-2010 11:47 PM

guess we can start with the votes

THE MASON 05-13-2010 01:17 PM

vote goes Dusk

Valkis had some dope lines, but some of the personals are tired, i get it yall think Dusk is gay.

Dusk just brought the lyricism and some more in depths attacks imo. the last two lines sealed the deal tho

peace, good battle

Valkis 05-13-2010 07:00 PM

Lyricism? I'm in confusion of your delusions, is this religion?

Ok, more votes

namoR 05-13-2010 07:04 PM

Vote goes to Valkis

Both brought nice lines, but Valkis got nice multi's and way better punches.

oDoUoSoKo 05-13-2010 10:09 PM

is this religion? uh, wuh? eloels.

MosHigh 05-18-2010 07:54 AM

my vote goes for Dusk...

oDoUoSoKo 05-18-2010 09:30 AM

thx, a little elaboration please?

MosHigh 05-18-2010 02:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusk (Post 1893715)
thx, a little elaboration please?

well word play was tight and felt like your flow was more steady...plus, i'm really not into a lot gay rhyme type battlin'. imo, if you are going to battle come with some facts or some real lyrical attack....it's only soo many times you can call someone a fag....you know?

oDoUoSoKo 05-18-2010 07:35 PM

thx bro..2-1

Valkis 05-19-2010 03:27 PM

MosHigh, gay jokes? I don;t believe I based a single line from it. I said "I render him gay" and that was all of it. I would like you to please explaiin the bars from my verse, because I think you were lost from the get go tbh.


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