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    If you shortened a couple lines in the begining,...

    If you shortened a couple lines in the begining, this would be one kind of music i would listen to. You gotta a simple and upfront style of writing, and by the end of this verse i really got the...
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    lemme bless the stage wit a earth shatterin...

    lemme bless the stage wit a earth shatterin performance/
    bass blasts in ya eardrum, lookin for a worthiness opponent/
    ^^^
    (good opening bar, 8/10)

    my brain cells filled with chambers of 36,...
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    Yeah thats what a story verse is to me too. I'm...

    Yeah thats what a story verse is to me too. I'm just sayin thats whats my battle shit looks like, like two line storys mixed in wit the "i'm this and that" battle format shit. like

    These first two...
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    My battle format verses kinda got a little story...

    My battle format verses kinda got a little story in them like this:

    I fund a mental pateint through lyrics that come spiritual
    These are fundamental basics, foundations are critical
    Potential...
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    The white line is the only line in this verse...

    The white line is the only line in this verse that good IMO. ITs in battle format,which gets boring to me, unless its simply raw.

    By battle format i mean the rhymes are all like " i'm do this to...
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