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Old 06-15-2005, 06:17 AM   #6
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Nice verse keep it up, but ahh leave the "ding, ding , ding " and such expressions in your lyrics it weakens the impact. But nice verse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yah the font size also -keep it in check!!!!

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