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Old 09-01-2005, 07:07 PM   #12
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Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread ( Please Sticky )

Originally Posted by SurreaL
When it's time for you to go, how would you feel?
Would you kneel down and pray to god?
or would you keep it real, and give the nod.
Paintin' the picture, I emphasis death in the scripture,
My soul is sold, Once secured like a fixture.
But since death is at the doorway, no need to keep him waiting,
open the door, felt a sudden chill, followed by my mind fading.
Dream's past, vision's so real, it distorted my reality,
then shortly followed by the ever dramatic fatality.
Is there a heaven or hell?, I don't really know where i'm going,
without guidance, I'll drift into limbo without even knowing.
Follow me on this journey, through the vision's to come,
I've seen death through my own eye's, and it's yet to even begun.
Seen heaven and hell, everyone has, but no need for praying,
just burn out my candle, and prepare my after life before the decaying.
Rather than comment, I thought I would just build on your post ...

I'm not sure where I stand, but I hope that life goes on
but I'm not foolish enough to believe that we are simply reborn,
I feel that we somehow pass on to an even greater existence
dwelling within a higher realm where the soul meets no resistance
devoid of self conflict, the purest state of elation
experiencing and unending reign of total exhilaration
a greater sense of understanding beyond the fathoming of natural man
like a unification of kindred spirits in a Zen state without demands
mingling amongst the stars in the form of raw energy
knowing real freedom for the first time, without constant threats from an enemy
reaching the pinnacle of perfection, if there really is such a thing
the completion of a full circle is what I hope the after life brings

Peace Surreal

I sew...
beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

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