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Old 08-05-2009, 02:50 AM   #29
Poetic Wun
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Daliffs grammar game was on point and came better with the flow. i really dug how he switched up hir rhyme scheme in the second round but Locusts seemed more personal with the sig hits even and he came harder in the second round even tho the gay jokes got old.
the lines
"you spit like you're reverting thirteen...
half of you don't understand what half of the shit in my verse means..."
kinda overhyped the verse... it was like sayin something without saying something. locusts had more relative substance despite its simplicity so im rollin wit Locust.
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