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Old 02-15-2010, 01:20 PM   #13
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I felt like Metalfist took this one easy. Warpath did make me laugh with "this pussy couldn't come funky if he queefed" though. Overall Metalfist came in with strong wordplay and syllables.

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Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez View Post
only complaint I have with metal is I'm concerned the bars are a little stretched, how would it fit in a 4/4 you might be huffin and puffin by the 3rd line... you pushin 17 syllables on some of them... shrink em down and you'll be a beast for real
I agree with TeknicelStylez with that point also.
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