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Old 03-06-2010, 02:45 PM   #29
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Round 1
ill cut out your mothers throat 'n sever your granny's digets
then ill put this fuckin heat to your head like miami fitteds
im payin your family visits..states of graphic hypnosis
are now gripping you like the staff of moses, rapid nuerosis
dont make me stick youlike a package of post-its
i lick shots like it's the back of the postage, flows is strapped wit explosives
best to act like you know this, but you dont care to believe it?
fuck around and you'll get rolled in streets like parapaliegics
ill raid your barrack 'n sieze it, yall retreat as i take action
straight jackin 'n face smashin.. like im rampage jackson
i hope you fags ate aspirin...cuz it was hopeless to fued
his winning records in his avy.. gots it posted in blue
what the fuck is that in your signature.. a portrait of you?
if you read it he thinks he's seein King.. of course it aint true! ha
im droppin on your computer like paratrooper intuders
with iLL lynguistic manuevers that leave you in sutures

ill ruin futures endlessly..only smokin the most expensive trees
i ruin reps extensivly, tossin em out like stems 'n seeds
id kidnap you for ransom but who would pay the amount?
cuz no one would look for you if you were change in the couch!
peep da fangs in my mouth.. i do like polar bear unto caribou
you get to my level, son, .hope you wearin a parachute
jus kidding.. Ha! i fucking care if you do
you embarrass your crew.. they're happy im embarrassing you!

A whooping total of 11 uses of the word "like"
we all do this, some more than others

This line was hard...

i leave these motherfuckers paper mache, when skill is displayed
at the hater parade with millions of blades to give you a fade

take ur sig as a warning, cuz spittin absurdities
will get you turned to a skeleton, like flippin the bird at me
i was told to slaughter your oldest daughter, with a loaded revolver
your about as dope as snorting coke through a roll of quarters
fuckin dummy, my battle records immaculate, half of it
has enough wins to average the ass u get during abstinence
obviously uve mastered shit, thats y ur number 2 in here
eavesdropping fuckers, try to fuck with dusk an lose an ear
always confusin peers, im clotheslinin archer priests
jump to conclusions? im usin shears to tear apart ya feet

were this audio id tear apart the beat naturally
you wanted 3 rounds, guess u wanna be beat gradually
back in the days u used to win all day vato
now i call u donald, cuz puerto ricans call gays patos
not that theres anything wrong with that, but on a track
ur gettin tossed on some tacks with a cross on your back
Jesus! they thought i was lost, and forced in to wack
but this fucker is easy to break like porcelain with cracks
try to battle me? easy mistake, im breakin ya collar bone
ya not at home? im at ya job to light u up like toddler phones
ur loss section is about the length of ur signature
and how much u flow depends on the strength of the ligature

Flows good, I like this.
Not feeling these punchlines too much.
One ear and no feet <---good shit.

Round 2
lets get it kid, i spit it like a lip-stretched shit kicker
fuckin his kid sister with sissors... no shits sicker
sinister delivery.. its clear to see the conspiracy
cuz all that you fear is me, settin' your spirit free
why you testin me lyrically? let's peek in my crystal becon
it says your arrogant wishfull thinkin's the official reason
red beamin' pistol blingin' ..nickel plated like my sickle blade is
your flesh is pixilated every time i scribble pages
this aint a missle raid it's far beyond the halocaust
could be a golf announcer, still you couldn't call the shots
get rolled like balls of socks 'n sent to everlasting essense
you diss the king you best to take it back like crappy presents
no need for asking questions.. hit this bitch with vicous scripts
no one would sign you if you wrote rhymes on permission slips
heres a certificate, it says you lost but did your best
it's sad the way i put you down like badly injured pets
i leave no traces for the jakes investigating cases
the king has many faces but for now remaining faceless
ill paint the fuckin place with blood that covers lots of rows
i spit a flawless flow, your show aint worth the cost to go
it's like you lost your clothes the way the cold is pourin' in
this faggot outta know i lock 'n load like storage bins
ill hit you like the force of ten and claim my legacy
cuz you was doomed right from the start like aids in pregnancy

Very good way to kick off the second round TKO style.

Oh wait he's getting up kicking his teeth off the ground.

i snipe wu corpians and ripe fruits hording in this thread,
complaining saying that i write too Freudian
i could write a verse in much less than 40 minutes
tailor cut like suits and ties, and ill have ya crew sportin em
casket filler, you can die when the gat delivers
24 lines, im back with white like silverback gorillas
or gandolf, back to the woods, Tiger you cant golf
rhymes combine like medicine-and-coughs for mexican standoffs
so get your Banderas on like patriots, guitar cases
full of bars, Dusk is wild, get bullet scarred if u pull the card
im Gambit with the Deck display, Rebel INS in ways
bullshit bars gettin played, while im Manifestin praise
King Shyt is destined to be digested, sit in intestines,
shit is depressin, consider your Kinship rejected
i got the instant impression that your verse would be ruthless
but after the first was useless, it was clear ud been vertically suplexed

ya fuckin with Hulkamania, rippin off the tee
of course you see your style in mine, cuz u bit it off of me
ill make ya sox redder than the Boston team, or Boston beans
im hot peppers, experience a loss in teeth when crossin me
Breathe awesome, rappers bleed 'less they heed cautions
slap ya seed, gramatically catch a Steve Austin
throwin steel pentagrams, at ya satanist cult
you want the God to lend a hand? take it in bolts.

good come back for that
could be a golf announcer, still you couldn't call the shots" line.
Good 2nd round diss plus came back with body slams and shit.

I don't know well overall this one right here was a very good battle congrats to both contenders

first round I give it to Dusk

No doubt Kingshyt took this whole battle in the 2nd round

Vote: King
shyt peace to both.

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