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Old 10-05-2005, 10:17 AM   #11
Jabba Jaw
Join Date: Aug 2005
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Default Re: Deep thoughts

it was aight

some nice lines in there
some of the lines didnt make sense to me

ya style needs a little work but you got potential

keep at it homie

practice makes perfect
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