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Old 02-06-2011, 07:45 AM   #2
Mumm Ra
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i dont spit or anything and rarely write but...
id try having more multiple syllable rhymes (rhyme on/ python was pretty good)
and rhymes thrown in the middle of the sentence (not just at the end)
for instance, i woulda tried to say "infinite rhymes eject from my dome/ catching wreck like when i clap on the chrome"

also avoid rhyming short words that the listener can see coming a mile away (dome/chrome, run/dun/gun)

also pythons are non-venomous snakes, im jussayin

peace & thanks for sharin
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