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Old 11-08-2011, 12:25 AM   #12
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Verse 1



Summary: I thought the shit was hysterical, the flow was on some laid back hyped shit like Craig Mack status, I was rolling with the imagery.

I didn't feel like the threat was serious though, you weren't personal with the opponent.


Quote:
i spit on ya forehead and rip out ya penial hairs
no one really cares
Quote:
you offered me a ciggarete i say no thanks!!
but i appreciate the offer
Maybe a little more vicious with the humor next time, try to use your creative imagery in a more violent matter, stab into the nigga.




Verse 2


Quote:
i stomp on the skull of you innocent infant
with rugged hockey equipment
im a runaway juvenile delinquint
mouth foamin regergated lubricant
i remove the tissue from your ligament
and bang the fuck outta it like a drum instrument
.That's what the fuck I'm talking about, you started this verse out tough. Good Imagery and decent multiple word play.

Quote:
from skippin to smoke & blaze
its not a faze
my mind is locked in a mental maze
unholy wicked wayz


Than you started to die out around here, and managed to pick up back to your target in the end. Still a complete solid verse, humorous and vivid.



Verse 3



I like the rhyme scheme


Quote:
repersent the w for wu & weezer
get your eyes poked out by my toothpick tweezer


Shit is dope, definitely felt the multi's in this verse.

Quote:
they are 2 kinds of luck
how much you wanna bet yours is bad
you stupid fuck
all sentences end with periods
all my rhymes end mysterious


These lines had me laughing.

Quote:
i leave your brains and horrible lyrical slangs
along with other remains
in the gravel
another victorius rap battle
vulcan death pinch ya adams apple
spit sulfuric acid on ya tunge
rip out and smoke your resido lung
Than you went to the throat for the finisher. The third verse was the stand out!



Matlock's summary, and my pick tomorrow.
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