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Old 10-14-2005, 10:34 PM   #8
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Default Re: need critizicm

You got creativity, but you need to work on originality. I would ease up on the "I got big gats and even bigger dick" shit" know what I mean? (unless you battle of course) otherwise it sounds just like the next guy's. Also tighten up your flow, did you try it with the beat? work on it bro, potential's there, practice is everything.
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