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Old 10-15-2005, 02:19 AM   #9
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Default Re: need critizicm

i didn't even try fuckin with your 2nd verse... cuz one.. ur first one was jus aight from what i gathered.. plus when i saw that 2nd verse.. no format.. and long as fuck... shit.. can u blame me for not readin it....

so.......... heres my feed......... number one... put some structure to your shit...

number two... jus keep on scriptin mayne... i liked this line

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listen, im a little yung for the wu but i still got love for the old school/
fuck these mainstream rappers who dont kno how to hold tool/

^that was tight..

peace
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